A/N: Hey guys, I know this is not Friday, sorry :'(
I've noticed that the reviews have been dropping. I don't mean to complain I just want to know what I need to do to make this story better. I thought of quitting but Willowdream said keep going so here I am. Thank you too the reviewer.
Willowdream of ForestClan- I owe you everything and I can't thank you enough. As I'm your biggest fan, you seem to be mine. Thank you :'D.
This chapter has some 'bombshells' so here we go.
*This is the latest version of the chapter with some changes. 16/04/14*
Stormfeather padded over to Rainstar. "What did you need?" she asked the leader.
"Ivytail received an omen and we need your help."
XxX
"An omen! Of what?" Stormfeather exclaimed.
""I saw an aspen tree fall and take down a birch tree with it."" Ivytail explained.
"Well what could it- Aspentail!" Stormfeather growled.
"Aspenstar now, but what do you mean." asked Rainstar.
"What if Aspenstar killed Birchstar? If he couldn't wait until he was leader… It was the perfect time too do it." Stormfeather meowed.
""I can't believe that a cat would do something like that but it might be true! We will continue this in the morning." Rainstar narrowed her eyes.
XxX
The sun warmed the fur on Stormfeather's back and tempted her to lay back down and close her eyes. Instead, she stood alert, scenting the air. Wasn't she just sleeping? Then where was she? Suddenly it dawned on her. StarClan!
"Why am I here?" she asked.
"Many reasons young one." Pebblesong replied.
"Pebblesong! Could you please tell me though? I'm not a medicine cat, if you hadn't noticed."
"You have a destiny but you must follow your own path. It will be hard but rewarding, this is why I must give you a power, to complete your destiny." She turned and waved her tail. Two tabby cats joined her, one dark, one light. They sat down at her sides and swept their tails around their paws. The light brown tabby gave her a small smile.
"Before the dawn of the clans, you were destined."
"Before the first sunrise over the mountains, you were chosen."
"Before you were born, you were selected.". Pebblesong now stepped forward, "I will give you your power now, you will be able too sense danger before it happens."
"Thank you." Stormfeather dipped her head.
"Now go, young one." the three cats said in unison.
Stormfeather awoke in her normal position, she didn't feel any different but she was scared none the less. She got up and tried to run to Rainstar but Oakfur caught her, blocking her way with his tail.
"Where are you going?" he asked.
"Somewhere." she replied shrugging off his tail before running off.
XxX
Oakfur's P.O.V
Why did she have too leave? I wanted to talk to her. Was she mad at me? I guess I could follow her. I get up and follow her scent; it leads to Rainstar's den. I find her shouting Rainstar's name, with no luck. "What's wrong?" I ask her.
"Nothing, I just need Rainstar." she replies quietly.
"What about?"
"I can't tell you."
"But I'm your best friend!" 'And I love you! -I hate my mind.' I exclaim.
"I know, I just can't tell you."
Maybe "Her emotions rolled off of her pelt. Fear. Excitement. But she was clearly keeping something from me. But we are best friends! Why wouldn't she tell me?
Rainstar comes out; I guess that means I've got to go. I just look at her and walk away.
Normal P.O.V
"Why are you yelling my name before sunrise?" Rainstar asked, a big yawn spreading wide on her muzzle.
"I may have gone to StarClan last night." Stormfeather replied, shuffling her paws nervously. "I'm sorry to wake you, but I think it's important."
"Come inside, no-one can hear this conversation."
The two she-cats walked inside and sat down.
"You said you were in StarClan last night." said Rainstar, her fur ruffled from sleep.
"Yes, your mother Pebblesong greeted me and she said I have a destiny but I must follow my own path. She said it would be hard but rewarding. She gave me a power to complete my destiny." Stormfeather explained.
Rainstar sat there before speaking.
"We were right… what is your power?"
"I can see danger before it happens." Stormfeather meowed.
"I see how that could help but we just can't sit here, more of the prophecy must be uncovered."
"I agree."
Perchpelt came bursting through the entrance and Stormfeather shot him a glance. "Silverbreeze is gone but her scent heads too the ForestClan border." he panted.
"Gather some warriors, we leave now. Stormfeather, you will come as well, as you are her mentor."
XxX
LakeClan warriors ran to the boarder before pausing.
"We should wait." suggested Rainstar.
"No we must do this now." said Perchpelt.
The LakeClan warriors stormed straight into ForestClan's camp.
"Where is our warrior?" yowled Rainstar.
"Who? Silverbreeze?" asked Aspenstar, smiling.
"Yes! Where is she?" Stormfeather yowled even louder.
"She's one of us now. Silverbreeze come here." Aspenstar called.
The silver warrior padded over and gazed at her mentor.
"I am in love with a ForestClan warrior so I joined his clan." Silverbreeze choked out.
"What! My own apprentice! You were raised and mentored in LakeClan, I taught you everything! For what? I may be your mentor but if we ever meet in battle, I won't hesitate to shred you!" Stormfeather spat.
"Stormfeather you loyal, don't worry. LakeClan we are leaving, say goodbye to the warrior." Rainstar yowled.
A single tear rolled down Stormfeather's face. She also mouthed 'Unlike you' to Perchpelt, who looked confused, then angry.
XxX
The warriors got back to camp and Rainstar announced the news. Stormfeather just ran from the camp but before long she found Perchpelt scent heading to ForestClan. She got in her normal spot and watched the forbidden couple. Unlike most meetings, Stormfeather heard something interesting.
"Come join ShadowClan, you could be a blood follower. They would let you in and now that Aspenstar is the next blood cat we can take over the forest!" yowled Perchpelt.
'This is what it meant by shadow and blood!' thought Stormfeather. Then she felt weird. 'My power!'
"I just-"
"Someone's here!" meowed Perchpelt.
Stormfeather tried to run but Perchpelt knocked her down.
"Well if it isn't the loyal she-cat. How much did you hear?" he questioned.
"Nothing! Let me go!" Stormfeather screamed.
"I'm afraid I can't do that." he sneered.
He unsheathed his claws and raked them down Stormfeather's flank.
"You'll pay!" she yowled.
"Really?" he smirked and clawed her again.
"Perchpelt someone's coming." Amberleaf told him.
"You got lucky this time but tell Rainstar and you get your throat ripped out!"
The cats fled and Oakfur rushed too Stormfeather.
"Are you ok? You're bleeding!" he panicked.
"I'm fine, just panicked." Stormfeather replied.
"Let's get you back to camp. What happened?"
"Yes, I need too see Rainstar."
"Why do you see her so often?" Oakfur asked.
"I can't tell you." she replied.
"You can't hide it forever you know so just tell me."
"I can't! It's a secret."
"I've known you since you were a kit, you can tell me anything." he begged.
"No I can't." she stressed.
"Be that way."
"Oakfur! Don't walk away, I'll tell you." she sighed.
XxX
"You're crazy." Oakfur mewed.
"I'm not! That's the truth." Stormfeather pleaded.
"I can't stay mad at you. Is it really?" 'Idiot!' he thought.
"Yes it is I'm part of a prophecy. Even though I don't want to be."
"Stormfeather, I've been meaning too tell you something."
"What Oakfur?" she asked looking puzzled.
"I-I…like perch." he finished quickly.
"So do I, but was that really what you wanted to tell me?"
"No, I wanted to say… I love you Stormfeather." he blurted out.
A/N: So yeah… Did you like it? Oakfur finally told Stormfeather! What will her response? Trivia: I've thought of suicide before (completely random but I feel like I can tell you guys anything).
Question of the Chapter:
Should I:
Add more action
Add more romance (there will be more anyway)
Slow it down
Not multiple choice (tell me what it needs)
Note: I did not take this from Willow; we just feel the same way. See you guys next chapter :D
-Stormfeather
