The Heir to the Kitsune Clan
Intro: Okay so here is chapter 10 'dances around with Eiki' I really like this chapter I think it turned out well oh and yeah warning mild language…and some spoilers I guess if you aren't through the chuunin exams. Read on my beloved readers and know that I love all of you.
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Disclaimer: I own my original jutsu…no others sadly
"Speaking" Thinking "Naruto talking to Kyuubi in his head/or inner Hinata talking to Hinata" "Demon speaking in mind" Jutsu
Battle on the Rooftop –chapter 10
Recap:
As the smoke cleared a very busty blond haired women smirked at Orochimaru's shock even as the first and second Hokage's walked out of the coffins. "Damn it snake-face." The women said. The Hokage chuckled and said "A bet's a bet isn't it then?"
Chapter start:
The blonde women cracked her knuckles as, on the vee of skin revealed by her shirt, a shimmering seven tailed blonde fox appeared its tails (tipped in soft blue-green) were wrapped around the clan rose, and clutched in its mouth is a scalpel.
Orochimaru scowled at her and said with a hiss "What are you doing here Tsunade?" The busty blonde now revealed to be the legendary sucker Tsunade frowned at Sai before saying "The kid here found me about a month ago and made me a proposal I couldn't refuse."
"Such as?" asked Orochimaru. Tsunade smirked and said in an exaggerated voice "It's a secret!" The third Hokage laughed and said "It took quit a bit to get her to agree to come back."
With a sigh Tsunade said "Enough already I'm here, everyone's all cheerfully reunited, lets get this fight over with." The first Hokage raised his brow at his granddaughter and said "A lot has changed."
The second Hokage nodded his agreement as Orochimaru finished Kyuchiyose-Edo tensei by placing controlling seals inside the two newly resurrected Hokage's. Tsunade scowled as her grandfathers eyes glazed over and he and the second Hokage became mere puppets for Orochimaru.
"Never the less, today Konoha will fall," said Orochimaru with an evil chuckle. Sarutobi scowled and said "As long as the will of fire still burns you will never defeat Konoha." Orochimaru frowned and said "I will kill you and put the flame out permanently."
Tsunade rolled her eyes and said "You never did get it did you snake-face?" Orochimaru scowled and raising his arms sent the first and second Hokage on the attack. "I must correct my mistake, Tsunade, Sai please take care of the resurrected Hokage." said the third Hokage.
Tsunade sighed and said "Okay, but you owe me a drink after all this old man." Sarutobi smirked and said "All right then." as he dogged the Suiton Suijinheki the Nidaime sent at him. As the Nidaime moved to follow Sarutobi, Tsunade interrupted him throwing a chakra laced punch at her great uncle.
As Sarutobi made his way to Orochimaru he (Sarutobi) began going through some hand signs finishing it he said "Kyuchiyose-Enkonou Enma" summoning Enma to him. Enma looked at the elder Sarutobi before saying "It's about time you cleaned up your mess."
The Sandaime sighed and said "I had hoped it wouldn't have come to this." Hardening his eyes Sarutobi opened his hand and said with new resolve "Let's show him the true will of fire!" Enma grinned and nodded as he transformed into the Thunderbolt Staff.
Grasping the staff the Sandaime looked at Orochimaru who had just…well threw up his sword Kusanagi. Sarutobi shook his head and said "How many times must I tell you not to swallow everything you come in contact with?"
Orochimaru scowled and leveled Kusanagi at his old sensei. "I have no time for your foolishness." the snake sennin said as he quickly went through some one handed seals. Finishing he said in a sinister voice "Katon Housenka!" as he inhaled and sent a shower of fire blasts toward his old teacher.
The Sandaime responded by quickly going threw his own set of one handed seals and saying "Doton Doryuuheki!" as he spewed mud from his mouth to form his defense.
… With Tsunade and the Nidaime…
Tsunade shook her head making some of the water she was covered in fly. She sighed as she watched her great uncle begin some hand signs only to stop as all around them the roof rumbled.
Looking over at were Sai and the Shodai Hokage were doing battle. Tsunade said "Ah Shit!" as the Shodai finished using Mokudon Hijutsu Jukai Koudan resulting in first sprouts rising from the roof.
After a pause the sprouts jumped to life and before long the roof top battlefield had turned into a forest battle field. Tsunade glanced around and with a sigh thought I hope you know what your doing old man, before the time for thought was over and she was forced to dodge the Nidaime's Suiton Suiryuudan no Jutsu.
Landing on the side of a tree she raised her hands and said "Shosen Jutsu." as her palms began to glow a soft green. Cracking her neck she looked at her great uncle and thought, Since he seems to be able to regenerate from whatever damage I do to him, it seems my only option is to destroy that controlling seal.
Crouching down she jumped just as the Nidaime fired another Suiton Suiryuudan no Jutsu at her previous position. As she weaved her way threw various water jutsu that the Nidaime threw at her she focused on his head.
Landing behind him she placed her hands on the back of his head. Her eyes narrowed as she extracted the controlling seal using her Shosen Jutsu covered hands. Once the seal was removed the spell holding the Nidaime soul in place shattered as his form melted away leaving behind the corpse of Kin.
Tsunade crushed the seal and the kunai it was attached to in her fist as she looked down at Kin's form. With an almost audible growl she turned and began to try and find her old sensei Fur ball can look after himself she thought as she began making her way to were her old teammate and her old sensei fought.
…Sai and the Shodai Hokage…
The battle had started off mundane enough. With both participants using Taijutsu strictly. The controlled Shodai had quickly gotten bored and thus used his Mokudon Hijutsu Jukai Koudan.
Now Sai sat crouched on a branch having dodged everything the Shodai had as of yet thrown at him. As the Shodai landed across from him Sai decided to go on the offensive. Unraveling a scroll, he put his brush to use and said Choju Giga as his painting came to life.
The lion like creature came to Sai's waist in size. As Sai and the creature moved in on the Shodai Sai chose to be the bait and attacked head on. Ducking and weaving the Shodai and Sai once again engaged in Taijutsu combat.
The Shodai scowled before finding himself rendered in two by Sai's jutsu. Sai jumped back and watched with slight shock as the Shodai regenerated. Once fully reformed the Shodai began going threw a set of hand signs.
Finishing the Shodai said in a dead voice "Kokuangyo no Jutsu" Sai's eyes widened as darkness descended around him completely blocking his sight. As a hand slammed into his back out of the darkness surprising him and sending him flying.
As Sai came to a stopped an evil smirk crossed his face as he dismissed his jutsu and his seal pulsed a soft black. His normally black eyes darkened into seemingly endless depths as his feature became more feral with his normally tidy hair looking like he had blow dried it and it had stuck like that.
He looked around and smirked as he caught the foot aimed at his head. "Now Now Shodai-sama, you should know better then to try and out fox a fox demon." Sai's form seemed to shift and shimmer before he blended into the darkness as he whispered "Kitsune: Yoru Shouyou."
The Shodai froze as his senses reached out and found much to his surprise nothing. His silent enemy was no longer within the range of his Kokuangyo once caught. "Missing something?" an eerie voice suddenly echoed from the empty darkness.
The Shodai's dead eyes widened as the voice continued "Funny thing about you Shodai-sama." The Shodai's brow furrowed as he said in a dead voice "What's that?" "If you had one of your crystals I wouldn't stand a chance against you." said Sai as a wind scythe split the Shodai's skull in two.
"Kitsune: Kasai!" Sai said quickly firing off a blast of blue fire at the exposed controlling seal. As the seal burned up and the Shodai was returned to his resting place his Kokuangyo dispelled leaving behind a pitch black five tailed demon fox.
He is solid black from nose to tail, with no noticeable color change at the tip of his tails. Slowly shifting Sai looked down on the corpse of Zaku. Narrowing his still fox-like eyes Sai turned his attention to the battle between master and student.
…current time Orochimaru verses Sarutobi…
Mud littered the battle field from were each combatant had used Dolton Bushin to dodge the deadly jutsu the other had directed at them. The older Hokage had long since revealed the fruit of Orochimaru's experiments (his immortality jutsu), and the Sandaime was deeply saddened.
As Sarutobi panted and looked across at his one time student the knowledge of what he was about to do set in. Looking at his one time student he held the Thunderbolt staff in one hand and began a rapid set of seals with the other finishing he inhaled before saying as he exhaled "Katon Karyuu Endan"
As the dragon made of flames began racing toward Orochimaru who had began some seals of his own, the famed professor quickly completed a second set of hand seals causing Orochimaru's slit eyes to widen.
"Impossible!" The snake sennin said as his former sensei said "Katon: Kage Bushin no Jutsu." causing the single fire dragon to become seven. Quickly finishing his jutsu Orochimaru said "Doton Doryuuheki."
As he cowered behind his wall the dragons hit each one causing the wall to shake and, much to Orochimaru's horror, crack. As the snake sennin looked on in horror the fifth dragon broke threw. Using his blade Kusanagi Orochimaru was able to fend off the fifth and sixth dragon.
As the seventh approved the now badly injured Orochimaru he said "Pull down the barrier! We're retreating!" "Hai!" the sound four said grabbing their leader. As they raced away the seventh dragon took is prize by grabbing the only one he could get "AHHHHHHHHHHHhh!" screamed the female member of the sound four as she was impaled with the force of it.
Sarutobi sighed as Enma returned to normal. "Not bad old timer." the monkey king said before disappearing with a puff. As the old Hokage staggered Tsunade braced himself against her shoulder. "What's the matter sensei?" she asked her voice laced with concern.
Sarutobi smiled and said "That jutsu combination takes a hell of a lot of chakra!" Tsunade blinked before laughing and saying "You should really look into a replacement old man."
Sarutobi winked at her and said "Tsunade who do you suppose I could make a bet with that would not only aid the village in this time of war, but also let me retire afterwards?" Tsunade laughed as Sai joined them.
"You'd have to find a pretty big sucker for that one." The slug princess said playfully. Sai who now looked like he normally did said "I wonder how the others are doing?" Tsunade looked at him and said "If that blonde brat is anything like the bun girl said then they should be fine."
Sai smiled and said "Hai, Naruto-san is more than capable of taking care of that end of the fight." Looking down and the still smoldering form on the building he said "What of that one?" Sarutobi sighed and said "For now we keep her alive, she may have valuable information about were Orochimaru is hiding."
Tsunade nodded and as Sai took Sarutobi so that she could see to Konoha's newest prisoner of war. Placing her hands over the girl Tsunade frowned and said in a discussed voice "What the hell has Orochimaru been experimenting with, there's a curse here that is eating her away alive.
End:
Okay you should know that yes I did take some liberties by giving Orochimaru some attacks he didn't use (I think) in the original battle with Sarutobi, my reasoning behind this is that his goal is to learn every jutsu so him having some of these not so advanced ones (for example Sasuke uses Katon Housenka) seems like a reasonable thing.
I liked the plot twist with the member of the Sound four but what do you think? Below are a heck of a lot of jutsu, man fights are gona be killer from here on out if I keep this up…on the up side I think my fight scenes are improving.
Definitions:
Shodai –basically is the title of the first Hokage
Nidaime –basically is the title of the second Hokage
Sandaime –basically the title of the third Hokage
Kusanagi – known as the grass long sword in English, is a famous sword from Japanese legend
Jutsu corner:
Kyuchiyose-Edo tensei – means Impure World Resurrection or Summoning Jutsu: Reanimation -used to resurrect dead Hokage by Orochimaru
Suiton Suijinheki – means Water Type, Water Barrier Wall -creates a blast of water from the mouth
Kyuchiyose-Enkonou Enma –means Demon Monkey King Summoning- summons King Enma, who is able to turn into the Thunderbolt Staff
Katon Housenka –means Fire Type: Mythical Fire Flower –send multiple blasts of fire from the mouth
Doton Doryuuheki –means Earth Rising Wall (Mudslide Barrier) –user spews mud from their mouth which grows into a large wall of hard earthen material
Mokudon Hijutsu Jukai Koudan –means Wood Type: Tree-World Construction, Secret Skill –uses chakra to control plant life and create large plants that can be used as a barrier, or in this case to acquire the terrain advantage
Suiton Suiryuudan no Jutsu –means Water Type: Water Dragon Blast Skill –creates a large dragon shape formed from a large amount of spinning water
Shosen Jutsu –means Mystical Palm Technique –it is a basic medical jutsu that can be used to hurt or heal
Choju Giga –means Super Beasts Imitation Picture –brings to life drawings
Kokuangyo no Jutsu –means Bringer of Darkness –Creates an illusion of complete darkness over the battlefield, causes confusion.
Dolton Bushin –means mud clone may be wrong couldn't find it even though I know they use it
Katon Karyuu Endan –means Fire Type: Fire Dragon Flame Blast –sends a stream of fire towards the opponent in the shape of a large dragon
Original jutsu corner (this is were I will list all jutsu I have created, I'm going back and giving all of my jutsu original names so I will list them here so you know what you may have missed):
Kitsune: Meimu –means Kitsune illusion - low level genjutsu that allows user to seemingly vanish by blending into their surroundings (used in chapter 6)
Kitsune: Kasai –means fox fire - surrounds hand with bluish flame that is thrown at enemy, and can also be used for close combat (used in chapter 6)
Kitsune: Yoru Shouyou –means Kitsune (which is Japanese for fox…most of you already know this I'm sure) : Night Walk - advanced level Kitsune genjutsu that allows the user to disperse their conciseness into a certain range of darkness effectively becoming apart of the night, they can attack at will and predicting their attack is almost impossible
Kitsune: Kasai –means fox fire –surrounds hand in bluish flame that is thrown at the enemy, can also be used for close combat
Kaiten: Kage Bushin no Jutsu –basically my take on Shuriken Kage Bushin no Jutsu, if you can multiply shuriken you can multiply a Kaiton…at least that's what I think anyway, I limited the number because the original Kaiton Jutsu uses a lot of chakra
'wipes brow' this chap took for ever to type because I listed the jutsu as I wrote them so I wouldn't leave any out…took forever but it was worth it -, please leave me a review and tell me what you think.
From my beat Ataraninja: I'm alive, I swear HNN. This is the third chap that I've read today, I'm doing pretty good if I do say so myself. Liked the chap, and I'll read the others once I'm finished w/ this review.
HNN: I see alive…thought you were the undead there for a minuet