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2 moons later
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath Highrocks for a clan meeting." Yowled Mallowstar. When all cats had gathered she began. "Ravenpaw your mentor Emberspark thinks you have learnt the warrior ways and are ready to become a warrior, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and protect the clan even at the cost of your life?"
"I do." Mewed Ravenpaw.
"Then by the powers of Starclan, I give you your warrior name. Ravenpaw, from this moment you will be known as Ravenclaw." Mewed Mallowstar.
"Ravenclaw, Ravenclaw, Ravenclaw!" Chanted the rest of the clan. Ravenclaw grinned; he had finally become a warrior.
"Well done. I knew you would become a warrior soon." Mintleaf mewed.
"Thanks. Do you want to go hunting? I don't have to ask Emberspark anymore." Ravenclaw mewed.
"Ok let's see what your first prey you catch as a warrior is." Mintleaf mewed as they padded out of camp. Ravenclaw scented a rabbit and followed the scent until he could see the rabbit. He suddenly pounced on it. He bit it and killed it quickly.
"Well done. My first prey as a warrior was a rabbit as well." Mintleaf mewed.
"It was my first ever prey as well." Ravenclaw mewed. They started to follow the scent of a mouse, when Ravenclaw stopped suddenly.
"What?" Mintleaf mewed.
"I think I can scent Meadowclan." Ravenclaw replied.
"But this is our territory." Mintleaf mewed.
"Exactly. Let's follow the scent then." Ravenclaw mewed padding back through the forest. Mintleaf followed Ravenclaw and they soon came back to camp.
"Mintleaf, Ravenclaw. I didn't expect you bac so soon." Mallowstar mewed.
"Meadowclan are in our camp." Ravenclaw mewed. He quickly padded off into the nursery: still following the scent.
"What is he going on about?" Mallowstar mewed.
"We were hunting and Ravenclaw scented Meadowclan on our territory. We followed it into camp. They must be somewhere about." Mintleaf mewed.
"Come on let's follow the scent." Mallowstar mewed. They followed it, like Ravenclaw, into the nursery.
"So what if we're taking you're kits. What are you going to do about it." Blackfang mewed.
"Give the kits back." Spat Mallowstar.
"No! Our kits all died. Seeing how Driftclan boasted about having so many at the last gathering, we thought we'd take some of Driftclan's." Blackfang mewed.
"If you leave now without the kits we won't harm you." Mallowstar mewed.
"Never." It was Snakenose that spoke this time.
"Attack." Mallowstar instructed, but the Meadowclan cats were already at the nursery entrance. Blackfang, Snakenose and Pinkpaw were all carrying a squealing kit. They ran out of camp towards their border.
"No! I swore I'd look after Oceantail's kits. They've taken both of them as well as Lionkit." Wailed Shadowrunner. "There was nothing I could do."
"We'll get them back." Mallowstar mewed. She ran out of the den and saw Emberspark and Goldenbreeze dropping some fresh kill onto the pile.
"You two. Run to the Meadowclan border. If you see Blackfang, Snakenose and Pinkpaw stop them." Mallowstar mewed urgently. They gave her an odd look.
"Don't ask I'll tell you later." Mallowstar mewed. "Just try and cut them off from their territory."
"You two come with me and we'll follow the scent." She mewed. Emberspark and Goldenbreeze dashed off and Mallowstar, Ravenclaw and Mintleaf followed the scent quickly.
"There they are. Goldenbreeze and Emberspark are fighting them off." Mallowstar mewed. "Let's join them." Ravenclaw launched himself towards Pinkpaw. He clawed her back. She dropped Blazekit and turned round to face him. She lunged at him and he dodged. Meanwhile Mintleaf and Goldenbreeze were fighting Snakenose. Mallowstar and Emberspark were fighting Blackfang. Pinkpaw clawed Ravenclaw who stumbled and fell onto his back. Pinkpaw jumped onto him before he could get back up. He put his legs out and unsheathed his claws. Pinkpaw didn't notice until too late. Ravenclaw's claws dug into her shoulders and Ravenclaw pushing Pinkpaw up so he was on top of her. He gave her quick bite on the neck but saw that they had one so he let her go and she followed Snakenose and Blackfang onto Meadowclan territory.
"Well done. All of you" Mallowstar mewed.
Later on Ravenclaw noticed Snowypaw sneaking out of camp. He followed her making sure that she couldn't smell him. He followed her through the route Driftclan takes to go to the gathering. Snowypaw reached fourtrees; Ravenclaw not far behind. Snowypaw looked around and Ravenclaw dived into the bushes. Snowypaw didn't see him and he went over to a bush a mewed softly.
"Ocean, ocean, there's no one about you can come out." The grey rogue with a ripped ear came out of the bush.
"Have you decided when?" She hissed.
"No it's difficult. I think he's suspicious." Snowypaw mewed.
"Oh because it's not suspicious if you – a medicine cat apprentice – starts attacking a warrior." Ocean mewed. "Lead him into a trap."
"I don't know if I can kill him. I mean he- he is my brother after all." Snowypaw mewed.
"Are you saying after all this you're not going to go ahead with it?" Ocean hissed. "It's his fault you're going to become a medicine cat. His fault. He pushed you off the rocks."
"It was an accident though." Snowypaw mewed.
"If you don't kill him I will. You don't want all your training to go to waste now do you? All those lie; you don't won't them to be worthless, do you?" Ocean spat.
"I- of course not. I just need some more time, that's all." Snowypaw mewed.
"Good because if you weren't going to I would and then I'd kill you." Ocean hissed.
"Sorry. I know I shouldn't get attached to him. Can we practise fighting again? I want to be really good before I try and kill Ravenclaw." Snowypaw mewed.
"You will kill Ravenclaw. You won't try." Ocean mewed. She leapt onto Snowypaw and they started to fight. Ravenclaw crept out of the bush. He slowly wandered back to camp.
"So that was what Snowypaw was up to. Plotting to kill me." Ravenclaw thought. He realized he would have to catch some prey quickly as an excuse for how long he had been. He swiftly caught a rabbit and a vole.
"Ravenclaw have you been out hunting?" Mallowstar mewed.
"Yes." He replied.
"That's good. The elders and queens have just eaten so you can eat something now if you want." Mallowstar mewed.
"Thanks. Do you want this rabbit?" He mewed.
"Yes please." Mallowstar mewed. Ravenclaw dropped the rabbit and then gulped down the vole.
"It's almost dusk you had better go and start standing vigil." Mallowstar mewed. Ravenclaw nodded and padded off. He would have a lot to think about, he now knew Snowypaw's secret.