Second Avatar chapter nine-
Danny-Cool
Me-Now it's time for an epic battle scene!
Sokka-Aw man!
Me- Okay. I'm kind of mad right now because some of you have put in OC's that I think are Mary- Sue's. That's really annoying. I'm sorry if this is your OC but this was in a review and I'm using it as an example. Eye's change according to her mood, wavy dark brown hair that has highlights that change every few seconds. Is a witch. I'm sorry whoever you are but that is totally a Mary- Sue I apologize for using her but just don't give me a Mary Sue! I specifically said no Sues.-
okay. Off that topic. Here is finally what Thorn Raven is suppost to look like.
And Jet is on Azula's side because I support them as a couple and think they work good together.
Form: ghostName: Thorn RavenSide: villaineye color: bluehair color: black with red streaksSpecial powers: Controls and creates roses, can shoot thorns at you, controls and creates ravens(can make them attack people) and regular ghost powers that all ghosts have.
Chapter nine-
(picks off from chapter eight part two.)
(with Gaang and Team Phantom)
"Cool! I'm a waterbender!" Danni said jumping in the air. Suddenly, blue fire surrounded them. Danny quickly turned invisible.
"Azula!" Katara yelled
"Everyone! On Appa!" Aang shouted. Appa moaned. But thorn's made a barrier around him. Danny who was still invisible, tried to blast the thorn's off of him. His hand started to bleed they were so sharp. He actually cried out in pain and turned visible again.
"What!" Azula screamed.
"I'll handle him." Ember said, she blast a note at Danny who fell backwards on the thorns. He screamed in agony and turned human.
"No!" Sam yelled.
"What are these?" Ember asked looking closer at the thorns.
"Some power I put on them to make them hurt anything." Thorn Raven said.
"Well done. Move and regret it." Azula spat at the opposing team. "Who are you?" She asked Danny. Sam supposed he was in too much pain and heard
"Phantom." He had breathed out.
"Well, Phantom. Do you know the name of Danny Agni?" She said, Danni gasped. Danny's eye twitched.
"No." He said.
"Lies!" Azula growled.
"Leave him Alone!" Sam yelled throwing her Kyoshi warrior fan at Azula. It cut Azula's forehead. She hissed and turned around facing Sam.
"No. Leave her alone!" Danny let out a ghostly wail. Azula flew backwards and Jet caught her. Ember quickly blew a note off her guitar and it blasted off the wail.
"Hey!" Aang blew a gust of wind at her. She fell and got back up looking mad with her make-up blown half off her face. Ember glanced at Toph in the corner- who as much as she could with her sightless eyes- was looking worried.
"Wanna play for love? How bout a love song!" She blast a note of hearts at Aang while Thorn laughed.
"Ahh!" Aang fell.
"No! Aang!" Katara yelled.
"Even if I can't see you I can hear you! Come on the ground!" Toph yelled throwing a random rock.
"Watch it Toph!" Tucker yelled shaking a fist in the air.
"Well, I'm sorry for being blind!" Toph yelled sarcastic.
"Nice competition!" Jet mocked.
"I thought you could do better than a little blind girl!" Thorn Raven said as Azula laughed. A rock hit Thorn.
"My specialty." Tucker said dusting his hands off.
Me- Whew! Nice job Tuck!
Tucker- Thanks.
Me- Don't worry. There's a part two to this epic battle.
Zuko- I might actually get in.
Me- Peace. Avatar. Review!