Yeah well, I'VE FINNALY UPDATED. If you didn't know (Which I doubt) I wanna make it clear that the reason why I haven't updated in a while is because my stupid Dell computer crashed. We got a new one, and we've had some issues wit' the thing.

Sorry, but I haven't been able to figure out how to find a spell check on this dumbass computer. I don't think I even have a spell check! It was on the other computer! Grrr .

Anywayz here it is: (AJMS I bet ur happy, lol)

The two racers sped off with a close race. Jak had to degree that Derrick was an experienced driver. He was very much head on, and loved the smell of burnt rubber on the track. In the end, the race came to a tie. Jak only got 3 orbs, since he didn't exactly beat him. Daxter lost his complete likeness for Kliever, whatever what was left of it at least.

Jak stared at the ocean standing below the trail and in the dry sand, smelling the salt water that hung in the air, just pondering to himself. Daxter found some mud, and for some reason enjoyed how it cooled his fur. So he just jumped into it, having a good time.

"I've been told that the biggest mysteries lay at the bottom of the seas of every ocean." Someone said, standing above behind Jak. He turned to find Derrick, smiling innocently looking at the waves coming ashore. Jak sat down on a large rock near by. "Yeah?" He sighed, scratching his head. Derrick looked down at him, and put his hands on his hips. He looked down at the golden watch on his wrist, and shook his head.

"This.. May be an awkward question but..." He started asking, getting Jak's attention. Jak looked up at the boy boredly.

"What year is this?"

Jak blinked, and thought to himself.

"Quite frankly, I don't keep track of time, kid. Did you ever hear of my story, and my experience with 'time'?"

Derrick blinked dumbly, and shook his head.

"Come here. I'll tell you."

He did what he was told, and jumped down heavily, kneeling down with some of his weight on his arm. He stood up, then sat back down next to Jak, listening intently. The mud from Daxter's coat started to dry and get crusty, causing him to start to get stuck in his own shell. He started to panic, and squirmed weakly until he fell flat on his face in the mud. Jak stared blankly into the ocean.

"When I was 17, I had escaped from prison. In Baron Praxis's rule, I was his prisoner and guinipig. He pumped me up with dark eco until I exploded. That woman, Laona that you saw with me, is my girlfriend. She helped me out of there."

Derrick's eyebrow rose, frowning.

"This time situation all started when I saw this kid that didn't look a day past 3 years old. That child was my younger self. After Kor was defeated, we had to take my younger self back into the past into Sandover Village. When I was 15, I got landed into Haven, and that's what started that odd circle. So technicly, I grew up in a whole entire different time period."

Derrick looked at his golden watch, letting it reflect the shine from the sun. Jak noticed how he was just staring at it, and asked, "What is that thing anyway? That's the most ugliest looking watch I've ever seen." Derrick gave him a descusted look, and rubbed his finger on it. "It's something my father gave me not too long ago. It's..." He hesitated to explain what it actually was. "It's a portable time portal. I can travel in time with this thing. I think I was ment to start or stop something from happening." He said, still looking at it. With one hand he held it. Jak raised his eyebrow, looking at him. "Which time period are you exactly from?"

Daxter rolled over to his backside, squirming. A tide rolled in, and he was dragged out into sea. The mud became soft again, and he cheered in grace. Derrick looked back at Jak. "Not too long from here. 17 years, give or take. I don't really exist yet." He shrugged. Jak took Derrick's wrist, to study the watch a little more closely.

"That's a-"

Suddenly, a large explosion hit the streets, making citazins from a far fallback, and others dead. Debris and dust fell in the sky. Fully alert, both Jak and Derrick jumped up, and looked to see what was going on. Someone screamed, "Dark Precursors! Run!" Daxter jumped out of the water.

"Dark precursors! NOT AGAIN."

He ranted, running up to Jak. He rejected his companion.

"Woh! Not when you're all wet and muddy Dax! You'll ruin my tunic."

"WTF, Jak! You care about your clothes more than your own best friend!"

Derrick didn't want to stall, and grabbed Daxter.

"Just hang on to me!"

All three of them ran up into the scene. Dark precursors were shielding themselves with a barrior, while on occasion attacking some of the brave people that were trying to stop them. To my guess, there were about 10 of them. They stopped, seeing what was around them. "You know how to use a gun?" Jak asked.

"Of course. I shoot dozens of metal heads before I even start the say sometimes."

Jak took out his Beam Reflexor, and quickly gives it to Derrick. "Use it." He spat. They continued running towards them, and Jak transformed into his Dark Form. He had learned to control himself mentally, able to know not to attack his comrads. Derrick had a good aim, but had trouble getting through their shields. The dark precursor he was attacking threw dark beams at him, and he barely dodged.

"Dammit, kid! Use the Peace Maker! If it could defeat Erol it could beat this son of a-" The blast of the Peace Maker drowned him out as it killed the creature, along with 2 others beside him. They killed them like flies. Once they were done, Derrick handed back Jak his weapon. "Keep it." Jak sighed. "I can get a new one from Torn." Derrick looked at him funny.

"Torn?"

"Tattoed Wonder. He likes givin' me and Jak here dumb missions when we're at war... Usually." Daxter explained, leaping from Derrick's shoulder to Jak's. "Hey! Laona's waking up, Jak." Ashlin said on his communicator. He took it, and spoke. "Great. I'll be there in 10 minutes." Jak looked at the dirty green headed kid. "Laona got hurt from a mission and she's in the hospital." Derrick nodded. "Oh. I godda go anyway. Nice to talk to you, Jak." He walked off.

"What'd I miss while I was out of it?" I asked, yawning. "Nothin'." Torn stated. "When is Jak supposed to be here? I want my Daxter." Tess complained. "I'm right here, baby." Daxter grinned, leaping off of Jak's shoulder and hugging Tess. "Hey Jak." I smiled. I was still sleepy, but atleast awake. He smirked, and walked over giving me a quick kiss, sitting down next to me.

Oh not in public! You're embarrasing me.

"When are you getting discharged?" Ashlin asked, taking a sip from her soda pop. "I dunno. Once they're sure I'm fine." "They better make sure you're out fine soon. Your birthday is coming up." Torn smirked, closing his book. From the look in his eye, I could tell that something was up. I had a feeling they were plotting something. I smirked and reached over and gently grabbed Jak's jaw so he could face me. "You're going to the movies with me on my birthday, aren't you?" He grinned, and nodded. Everybody was planning a suprise party, so they couldn't tell me.

Yeah it's kinda short. Well I'm thinkin.. O.O : ghasp: I just got an idea!

Hey, AJMS can I add ur Dak charactor in here? If you want you can add in Laona somehow or another in YOURS. Lol a little OC charactor fun! What do you think? Kinda interesting to think about it, lol

If you do, and want to describe what she looks like, you can go to fanart-central and Search "Laona" I think you can find some decent pics of her that I drew. I've re-made her tattoos and her clothing so don't be suprised if you get confused, lol

Lemme know what you think. :-D