Thank you for all that feedback, now is the time for the campers to suffer! Oh and we have our winner. Thanks to all of you for your oc's.
Egridos: Fourth wall!
Get out of here you dead, mummy, coffin, thingy. Who even created you.
Egridos: Your mom!
Shut up!
Malicious Moltres' Girl's Cabin
"Get over here you little snob!" yelled Riley as she continued to chase after Malicia.
"Shut up you lesbo!" yelled Malicia as she turned around to face Riley.
"What did you call me" said Riley in anger.
"You heard me tomboy, all you do is be aggressive and fight with me. That's not what girls do" Malicia said as Sterling began to peek inside the window.
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Sterling: That was rough…
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"Say that again" said Riley as she started to close in on Malicia who was backed to the wall.
"You are a tomboy!" Malicia yelled as Riley then tackled her to the ground and started to claw at Malicia.
"Show that b**** how it's done!" yelled Raven as the rest of the girls stared at her in shock. "Sorry, I was caught in the moment." The next thing they knew was that Malicia was laying on the ground with cuts and scrapes while Riley was on her bed and licking her paw.
"Sorry Malicia for not helping you, I was just doing my claws" she said as she was painting her nails. "Oh my, do you like this color" she said as she raised her paw as Malicia threw up on the floor. "That is an amazing shade of green, I'll use it" she said with glee as the girls around her sweat-dropped. "And my plan to get Maxson for myself will be complete!" she yelled as she ran out the door.
"Chesire don't go Au-…" said Malicia but then stopped. "You know what, have a great time!" she yelled back.
In the Forrest
Aura, Maxson, and Luke were having a nice picnic outside. The Flethlings were chirping, the Deerling's were walking around, and a small cat was heading their way.
"Ohhh sweetie pie, where are you" she said as she continued to look for Maxson until she saw him next to Aura.
"He's mine you little snob!" she yelled as she tackled Aura to the ground and they both started fighting. When both of the girls were fighting, Maxson then pulled them away from each other.
"Sweetie pie let me at this ungrateful girl of yours" she said as she tried to claw at Aura.
"I ain't ungrateful, you are the one that doesn't understand him. He doesn't want to be with you. And remember I'm not with him anymore, I'm dating Luke" she said as she pointed to Luke who was watching the whole thing.
"Ya, we just wanted to have a little picnic to celebrate us dating. Maxson just wanted to congratulate her" he said as Chesire stopped trying to claw at Aura. Maxson then put both of the girls down as Aura went to Luke's side.
"Why don't you love me sugar pie, I thought we had a thing" she said as he shook his head.
"Why not?" she asked with pleading eyes.
"Well I just don't really like you, you are not my type. You keeping on liking to many people and go after them which could be pretty annoying if you are in a relationship" Maxson said.
"Ok then, I guess I will just chase after one guy" she said in a depressed voice which made everyone smile.
"Thanks for understanding" said Aura as Chesire nodded.
"I guess it's time for me to go after Jacob! Oh werewolf boy, where are you!" she yelled as she headed towards the cabins.
"Now that's over, how about some salad" said Luke as they were about to dive in until the megaphone pole cut them off.
"IDIOTS, HEAD TO THE MEGAPHONE FLAGPOLE IMMEDIATELY!" yelled Chuchu through the megaphone.
"I guess we will have to eat it another time" said Aura as everyone else nodded and headed toward the Megaphone pole.
At the Megaphone Pole
Both teams were waiting on their hosts until they saw Chuchu in a suit and Celebi in a bejeweled dress.
"Why do I have to wear a suit" complained Chuchu.
"All game show hosts have to wear a suit, I'm surprised you don't wear one for this game show" said Celebi.
"Wait, we're going on a game show!" yelled Kyle as he began to run around the pole until he was then hit by Chuchu with Thunder and knocked.
"Kyle!" yelled Cinder as she went to Kyle's side.
"He'll be alright" said Chuchu as some paramedics to Kyle into the medical tent. "Anyways he needs to stop being annoying for one day" she said which made Cinder glare at him.
Inside Paramedic's Tent
"You'll be alright Kyle we will just have to take off you necklace so it won't interfere with the X-ray as we see if you have broken bones" the Audino paramedic said as she reached for his mystic water, but then her hand was grabbed by Kyle.
"Don't you dare touch it" he said as he glared at her and then fell back unconscious.
"Ok then, we will have to do it the old fashioned way" she said as she brought out a hammer and started hitting every part of his body with it.
"OOOOOOWWWWW!"
Back at the Flagpole
"Ahh the sweet despair of teenagers" Celebi as she started thinking about a world without delinquents. "Anyways both teams will have to face each other in the Total Pokemon Chaotic Island Quiz. You will have to answer questions based off of campers here that are participating right now. If you buzz in and get it right you get a point for your team. The first one who gets five points first wins immunity for their team. So onwards my minions!" she yelled as she brought out her megaphone and held it out like a sword.
"Ya there's only one problem with that, we are missing Glen" said Croath as some of the other campers looked around for him.
"Ya he's been missing since his dare" said Thorn as he began to smile for a bit.
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Thorn: As if I don't know. First I will eliminate the worthless and undesirable in this competition, then I will make Aurora suffer as long as she is on this island with me.
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Amber: Typical Thorn, thinks we don't know what's happening. He's so easy to read. Once we get to the merge, he gone.*Pauses for a bit then frowns* The plant life here is suffering from this confessional, I'm sorry my friends but this is from my control.
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In the Forrest
Glen was tied to a rope dangling from a tree and was surrounded by Ursarings and Pinsir that were trying to get him. One second later all of the Pokemon were unconscious while Glen took an Ursaring on his shoulder.
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Glen:*Wearing fur coat and is holding a cue card that says "Not cool"*
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Back at Camp
"Hey Kyle and Glen are back" said Cinder as she went over to Kyle who was covered in bandages.
"So your alright Glen" said Jacob as Glen nodded and went towards Leafeon and used X-Scissor to knock him down.
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Thorn:*covered in scrapes and bruises* I guess he's not as undesirable as we thought…
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"Thanks" said Shadow as he patted Glen on the back and went to sit beside his sister.
"Are we not to have our letters and gifts delivered today" asked Jasper as Chuchu nodded.
"Later in the day, I still don't have the supplies to laun- I mean deliver it by plane" said Chuchu with a fake smile.
"HEAD TO THE CAFETIRIA!" yelled Celebi through her microphone which caused everyone to get ticked off.
"Umm… Celebi I think we need to take that away from you" said Chuchu as she began to reach for the megaphone, but was then slapped back by Celebi.
"She's my precious" she said as she began to pet the microphone.
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Celebi: DON'T TOUCH MY PRECIOUS!
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Shadow:*on phone* Hey Spike I need you to kidnap Celebi this time… ok I'll let you hug my sister for one second… isn't that enough I already bailed you out of jail… ok I'll get you a piece of Chuchu's hair… ok get the job done*hangs up the phone and looks at camera* They never said I couldn't call the other Spike.
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Bug Intern:*crawling out of toilet* I'M ALIVE!
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At the Cafeteria
In the cafeteria were two tables that had buzzers on them. All the campers went to their team's side and sat down as Celebi and Chuchu went in front of the tables.
"I your host will be asking you questions based off of facts about us and this completion" said Chuchu with glee.
"Didn't you already explain the rules?" asked Armordo as Chuchu glared at him.
"We always have to explain the rules during the game show also. As I was saying, if you guys get it right you earn a point for your team, but if you get it wrong, you have to face the consequences" Chuchu said as she brought out a box where you could hear this annoying voice.
"AHHHH!" yelled Cece as she got out of the box covering her ear holes. "First getting eaten, then flushed into the toilet, now this! I better get paid for doing this."
"You're an intern, you don't get paid and go back to your office" Celebi said as she threw Cece into a trash can. "So let the Quizzing Games begin and may the odds be in your favor" said Celebi with a devious smile.
"Please don't reference the Hunger Games" said Raven as a little murmur was heard from the box.
"What was that?" asked Nathan as everyone just shrugged.
"Alrighty then, time for the first question to Maxson. Who was the first one to reach the island" said Chuchu as Maxson pointed to Amber. "Correct the first point goes to the Articuno's!"
AA: 1
MM:0
"The next question goes to Jasper, who is the fan favorite of this island right now" said Chuchu as Jasper just shrugged.
"Is it Shadow?" replied Jasper as both Chuchu and Celebi smiled.
"Wrong" the hosts said as the teleported Jasper into the box. A very familiar song can be heard faintly inside.
"THIS IS KILLING MY SPIRIT AND SOUL!" yelled Jasper as he was trapped in the box.
"It was Croath, it said so on our poll. Next question" said Chuchu as he went to his next cue card. "Amber, who were the Pokemon that Mew cheated on Celebi" said Chuchu with a devious smile as Celebi just glared at her.
"Well first Mew was with Celebi when he first dated, then after they broke up again Mew became a little bicurious and was with Darkrai's and Cressila's son. After they got together and broke up again, Zuzu was his next option which they did make a cute couple" Amber said which made Celebi glare at her now.
"And then Mew had an affair with Chuchu and then broke up and went back with Celebi and then they broke up many times after that every time Mew checked out a girl. And then after they went back together he started dating Cece the sister of Celebi, not the intern. And finally they are back together again" she said with a smile.
"Correct" said Celebi as she wept and went to a corner.
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Celebi:*Looking at megaphone* I should have dated you my munchkins.
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Chesire: Wow that fairy has been through more breakups than me.
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AA: 2
MM: 0
"The next one goes to Chesire, who has Jake dated before this competition" said Chuchu as she looked confused.
"How should I know!" yelled Chesire.
"Wrong! The actual answer is Joey, the Treeko" said Chuchu as she teleported
"HELP ME! OH MY GOD IM GOING TO DIE!"
"Who's in there?" asked Sterling as the hosts began to grin.
"Just a little someone" said Celebi.
Flash Back
Celebi was in her trailer and talking on her cell phone. "Hey I need a little job from you… yes I will let you be a contestant on the show… ok I will see you tomorrow… bye" Celebi said as she sighed. "The contestants will have the time of their life."
End of Flashback
"The next question goes to Star, who made a hot guy list" said Chuchu as some of the guys started to look angry.
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Thorn: I better be number one on this list.
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Croath: If I'm last that person is going to pay.
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"It was Chesire, she could never stop talking about it" as all the guys began to glare at the box where Chesire was.
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Thorn: Well look who's the second-first person off our alliance.
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Flashback
All the girls were in Malicous Moltres' cabin as Chesire was scribbling some names on a list.
"Why did you put Croath first, you need to put him first!" yelled Malicia as everyone started demanding names to be put on the list.
"Well why not Inferno first" said Chesire as she continued to write the names.
"No I think Luke should be first" said Aura.
"No no no you guys, I think Kyle should be first" said Cinder as everyone stopped fighting.
"This is the hot guys list Cinder, there is a difference between hot and cute. If there was a cute list Kyle would definitely would first on the list" assured Star as a few others nodded.
"You know what, I'll make the decisions for the list" said Chesire as she finished the hot guy list. "Here, read who I think is the hottest of all" said Chesire as she gave the girls the list.
Hot Guy List
Maxson
Jacob
Luke
Inferno
Shadow
Thorn
Jake
Nathan
Flint
Sterling
Nayan
Jasper
Mark
Jordan
Kyle
Armordo
Glen
Smugleaf
Thefty
Croath
Brayn
Carson
"Hey I never really noticed there are only about twelve of us girls" said Aurora as the other girls nodded in agreement.
"Hey you put Kyle in fifteen" said as she tackled Chesire to the ground and used Flamethower to burn her. "And don't think about crossing that line again."
"Why did you put Jake as seventh, shouldn't he be with Luke since they are technically the same species" asked Amber as Chesire shook her head in disagreement.
"He's gay which lowers his hotness status" said Chesire.
"Well the rest of the list makes sense" said Aura.
"Ya let's just hope that none of the boys ever find out about it" said Chesire as some of the other girls went back to their cabin.
End of Flashback
"Well there goes a point to the Amazing Articuno's!" yelled Celebi as all the guys continued to glare at the box where Chesire was.
AA: 3
MM:0
"Well it looks like the Moltres' are having a hard time today, let's see if they can turn it around" said Celebi as she went on to her next cue card.
"Ok then, the next one goes to Phlara, who on this island has been in all sports and was team captain in all of them back in their high school?" asked Phlara as she began to think.
"I think maybe Maxson" said Phlara as Riley faced paw herself.
"It was me!" Riley yelled as Celebi then teleported Phlara into the box.
"GET ME OUT OF HERE!" Phlara yelled as she began to escape the wall.
"Sorry Phalra, but the cage is fire-proofed and so is the box our little guest is in their" said Celebi with a chuckle. The next question goes to Inferno, who is one of Zuzu's relatives" asked Celebi.
"Isn't it Chuchu" said Inferno as Chuchu nodded.
"Correct, anyways how did you know?" asked Chuchu.
"Zuzu and Chuchu sounded about the same so I figured you two were brothers or cousins" said Inferno.
AA: 4
MM: 0
"Ok then on to the next question" said Chuchu. "Glen, name at least one person that is on a guild" said Celebi as Glen just shrugged. "Sorry, that was not the answer we were looking for, they are Cinder, Raven, and Star" Celebi said as she teleported Glen to the box.
"Well at least he's not complaining in their" said Jacob as a few others nodded.
"Since I feel in a good mood today we are going to give the Malicious Moltres' a chance. I will ask a question to all of you and whoever uses their buzzers on their first and answers correctly, will win immunity for their team" said Celebi as the contestants were in a stance to buzz in.
"Ok then, who has Spike kidnapped and who has he been targeting" said Chuchu as Cinder immediately buzzed in.
"First Spike kidnapped Chuchu then he attempted to kidnap him again. After that he went to Total Pokemon Psycho Island and kidnapped one of the hosts there. And now he is planning to kidnap Mew on Total Pokemon World Tour and he also has been stalking Kavi for a while which is kinda creeping me out" answered Cinder which everyone looked at her in shock.
"Correct!" yelled Chuchu as everyone on the Amazing Articuno's started cheering.
"How did you know?" asked Star as Cinder just shrugged.
"It just kinda makes sense, what else would Spike do" Cinder said with a smile.
"Malicous Moltres', I will be seeing you at the campfire tonight. But first, meet your new teammate" said Chuchu as everyone saw an Emolga coming out singing.
"And I was like baby baby oh, like baby baby oh!"
"Shut up!" yelled Riley as she used Shadow Claw to shut up the Emolga.
"Hey watch it, I was just singing one of my favorite songs" he said as the other campers in the box began to crawl out.
"That was tourture" said Chesire as she got up.
"Well well well, if it isn't the one who created the hot guy list" said Thorn as he closed in on her.
"Oops…" she said as she ran to her cabin.
"Ahem, you forgot to introduce me!" yelled the Emolga.
"Fine… this is the amazing singer Lyles!" said Chuchu as Lyle cheered.
"He's not going to last a single day with me" said Riley as she began to chase after Lyles.
"Anyways I will be seeing the Malicous Moltres' at the campfire" said Chuchu as everyone went back to their cabins.
At Malicious Moltres' Cabin
Chesire was looking over her hot guys list in sadness. "Why did I have to create you, you just bought me a ticket home" said Chesire to herself, but then came with a plan. "Wait a minute, I could just turn the votes on someone else, how about Riley, that mutt will never know what hit her" she said, and to her convince no one was there, or so she though. Thorn was outside hearing the whole thing.
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Thorn: Sorry Chesire, but your just useless. So bye bye for now.
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Bonfire Ceremony
"Today's item is a brick we painted gold" said Chuchu as she held it up in pride.
"I'll give you points for honesty" said Malicia as she snickered.
"Ok then, go into the confessional and vote before I kill Malicia. Oh and you can't vote for Lyles since he's new.
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Croath: All the guys went into the Malicous Moltres' Girl's room today and guess what we found, the hot guys list. I'm not even in the top ten, forget the alliance your going Chesire.
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Malicia: I agree with Croath, sorry Chesire you gotta go.
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Flint: Sorry Chesire, but you have to go.
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Lyles: And I was like Riley Riley you've gotta go!
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Glen: *Holds up cue card that says Chesire*
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Jacob: I feel really bad for Chesire, but we've gotta vote her out before she ruins any relationships in the future. Look what she was trying to do with Maxson's relationship.
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Armordo: Chesire, next time she won't be let easy by Phlara trust me. She is pretty mad right now.
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Phlara: I've gotta stay calm*inhales then exhales and holds onto soothe bell* ok I will vote of Chesire. I really like Armordo, and I think he deserves better than where he stands on the list.
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Raven: Malicia, I got really happy yesterday when Phlara and Riley started beating her up.
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Nayan: I'm glad with my score, but I still have to say Chesire, she really needs to leave.
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Nathan: YES I GOT IN THE TOP TEN! Anyways I still have to say Chesire, that's what everyone has decided on.
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Riley: Malicia, she just irritates me!
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Jasper: I would have to say Chesire. Making a list on how handsome a man is can sometimes be hurtful to others.
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Chesire:*Changing the votes* As if I'm not leaving without a fight!
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Thorn:*Changing the votes* Did you forget about me Chesire?
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"Okay to make this quick, Celebi please throw the gold painted bricks to everyone except Riley and Chesire" said Chuchu as Celebi threw the gold bricks one hitting Nayan on the head.
"What did you do that for!" yelled Nayan as Celebi just shrugged.
"You need more attention" said Chuchu. "Anyways Chesire you are here because you made a hot guys list while Riley you are here because you wanted to murder Lyles and Malicia."
"Who wouldn't?" asked Riley as she began to lick her paws.
"That's true, anyways the camper that is going to stay on this treacherous island for another day is…
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"What!" yelled Chesire as she was teleported into the wailord's mouth.
"We also have a new way of sending the campers home" Chuchu said with a devious smile as Chesire gulped.
"LAUNCH HER!" yelled Chuchu as the Wailord shot her out of her blow hole.
"Who will get voted off next, when will Armordo admit his feelings to Phlara, and when will Riley stop chasing Lyles, find out next time on Total Pokemon Chaotic Island!"
Sorry for not updating in a while, but here it is. I had to choose between Lyles and Egridos, so I chose the one that hasn't been used in a story I believe. Also thanks for being awesome readers and I will see you next chapter.
Chesire: Rate and Review about my good looks!