This isn't an update but instead a message to tell you that I am rewriting the story; I don't like it. I've already posted a chapter of it so people can go look at it on my profile.
I'm not going to delete the story, I will keep it there to remind me of how much of a crappy writer I can be.
Review with your thoughts. I accept constructive critisism, but any flamers will be ignored. (As stated on the first chapter of the rewrite)
I'm sorry for keeping yous waiting, I know some of you like the story, and I thought I'd be kind enough to rewrite it for your benefit.
Thanks to people who have reviewed and added my story to their favorites, I hope I don't dissapoint.
Please feel free to comment on my style of writing and maybe help with making it better.
Arigatou :)