Chosen of Sky and Twilight
MP: I have had 2009 hits to this story, which is the year I graduate in...But you didn't need to know that. Any who, This chapter is shorter so Forgive me and don't hurt me for hte inevitable cliffie I put in, there was no other way to break it off with it making sense.
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Chapter Ten: No Meddling allowed
Sora and Riku were looking out the windows of the gummi ship as they took off making Donald and Goofy laugh because they were awed by what they considered very mundane things. Jiminy wrote down their behavior and this made the dog and duck snicker even more. After a while said teens cooled off and began to chat.
"You think she's out there some where?" asked Sora.
"She has to be. A princess like her would have a heart strong enough to survive." Said Riku. He pulled out of his pocket a small wave charm.
"What's that?" asked Sora curiously.
"Something from a friend who moved away years ago. Her name was-,"
"Another world is in view!" yelled Donald.
The pair got up and saw a strange world with a garden maze running all over it and a gate on it with checked ground.
"We going in?" asked Sora.
"Of course. We need to see if the heartless or our friends are here." Said Goofy. They opened the door and Donald stepped out followed by Goofy, then Riku and Sora but neither fell very gracefully. Riku landed on his face and Sora on his butt. Both were being laughed at by their animal friends and Riku glared at them; his hair tingeing red.
"I think you should be Ryx now." Said Sora.
"Right." He said and became Ryx.
"Why can't you become Roxas any more there Sora?" asked Goofy.
"I'm not sure why, but I can't." he said.
"Well what can you do." Said Goofy. They pressed forward and a rabbit dashed past them saying,
"I'm late. I'm late! For a very important date! Not time to say Hello! Good-bye! I'm late! I'm late! I'm late!"
"Maybe we should follow him?" said Ryx and the other three nodded.
In a castle a girl with blond hair stirs; She's wearing a white sleeveless dress and had bright blue eyes once she opened them.
"Where am I? What happened?" she asked. A Duck-Human woman in a pruple dress walked down the steps and hovered over the girl worriedly.
"You alright?" she asked.
"I'm fine." She said standing up wobbling. "Where am I?"
"Disney castle." She said. "Who are you?"
"I'm- I can't remember." She said.
"Poor dear, I'll take you in side then." Said the duck-woman. "I'm Daisy." She said.
Sora, Ryx, Donald, and Goofy were faced with a perplexing situation. How had the rabbit fit through that lazy door that Sora found, much to his shock, was alive.
"What's this?" asked Ryx picking up a bottle. It said 'Drink me'
"You should try drinking it, you should." Said a strange voice. The Cheshire cat appeared and the quartet looked at it warily. "No need for nasty glares, I'm a good guy, be fair." He said.
"How can we trust you?" asked Donald but the cat had vanished. "Crazy cat…" he muttered. Sora and Ryx were both examining the bottle.
"Think it's poison?" asked Sora. Ryx sniffed it.
"Smells kinda like tropical fruit punch." He said.
"You think it's safe?" asked Sora.
"One way to find out." Said Ryx and he handed the bottle to Sora.
"Why me?"
"Because you actually like tropical fruit punch." Said Ryx, who hated that particular drink with a passion.
"Fine." He said and drank it and all 4 of them began to shrink.
"Whoa!" they all yelled as it happened.
"Now we can follow that rabbit." Said Goofy.
"What about that door, it's asleep!"
"Oh right maybe there's a hole in the floor or the wall we can crawl through?" said Goofy.
"Maybe." Said Donald. "What do you think Sor-AHHHHH!"
Sora had jumped off already followed by Ryx why Donald and Goody were talking
"Come on, we're going to try to find a way to follow that rabbit." Yelled Sora as 3 red sonata's showed up.
"Sora! Ryx! What ever you do, don't use fire magic on them; that heals them!" yelled Doanld.
"Magic? What do you mean?" asked Sora and he and Ryx chased the floating heartless and smashed them with their key blades. This resulted in a long battle and it ended when Donald cast blizzard at the Red sonatas. He smacked himself in the head for forgetting to teach them.
"Magic. You have it." Said Donald looking at both. He gave them the briefest magic lesson he could while they searched for a way in.
"How do we get big again?" asked Sora.
"Well I think I saw another bottle so I'm betting that's it." Said Ryx.
"I found a hole guys!" yelled Goofy and they ran to a mouse hole parallel to the sleeping door. Donald and Goofy entered first with the two humans lagging behind.
"A talking door?" asked Ryx.
"Don't ask me. This is a whole new world." He said. They walked through and saw mazes and a girl standing at a podium in front of a tall box. The rabbit ran up onto a pedestal and played a fan fare on a bugle.
"The court will now come to order!" he said in a nervous voice.
"How does the defendant plead?" asked a voice, and the most unpleasant, fattest woman either boys had ever seen was sitting in that box ringed by- playing cards?
"Innocent. I have done nothing!" said the girl.
"Silence! I will decide who is guilty and who is innocent!" yelled the very unpleasant queen.
"Just because you are queen, doesn't give you the right to, to be so mean!"
"Insolent brat! I charge you guilty! And for the crime of attempting to steal my heart.." The 4 wrold travelers' ears perked up.
"WE should help her." Said Ryx.
"That would be muddeling.
"Meddling!"
"Too late." Said Ryx as Sora strode forth angrily.
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