Thanks for the reviews everybody. I did notice I got a new reader – Rainbow-Monster and ClarkR - but I am not sure if he/she posted a review, I know ClarkR did.
As you may notice, I left it a cliffhanger in last chapter, and probably all of you know what Maddie and Zack will do.
Just a little info. In order for London not to kill Cody, Maddie has to go with Zack and Cody as well, for London can not afford a witness of what happened going around telling the truth to everybody. Like duh!
Well, on to chapter ten.
PS. Please tell me if you think my chapter tittles are too cheesy. It would help my writing a lot.
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Chapter 10
Do you Know how to Play Catch?
Cody's POV
I stared from Maddie to Zack and looked up the gun in my forehead. I pressed my eyes together, letting the tears escape my eyes. I looked back to Zack and I knew he wanted to cry, to seem strong in the situation but he still did not do an awesome job at it. It wasn't great, but it was something to make London feel a little weaker but not much.
"So?" London asked. "What do you pick?"
Maddie shifted nervously around Zack, waiting fro him to answer and hoping he didn't do anything stupid.
Zack went against a near wall, slowly. He reached behind him with an unsteady hand and I could see he grasped something. He took a deep breath and stared at London, who was looking off to something shiny in the corner of the bedroom.
Zack blew some of his blonde hair off his eyes and glimpsed at Maddie.
She nodded.
I was missing something and I knew what was going to happen.
"London?" Zack began.
She looked from the shiny lamp on the corner of the room to Zack.
"Do you know how to play catch?" Zack asked.
"Huh?" London retorted.
"Zack, No!" I screamed.
But it was too late.
Zack suddenly retrieved what he had in his hand behind his back.
It was a letter opener.
Zack yelled as he threw the letter opener in London's and my direction. London was suddenly jumping through the air throwing me in the direction of the dagger.
It was then when I saw my whole life dash before my eyes. Every single memory flashed and even though they were fast I, could make out every little detail of every memory, no matter how small it was.
I then came up to memory, and I was lying on the floor, staring at the ceiling.
Zack's POV
I saw London as she stood up and brush her Arturo Vitally dress. She looked to the floor and laughed hysterically; with such an evil expression it made me ponder whether she was the devil himself.
She then yelled, "Guys, come out here!"
It was then when Lucas and Jake walked out behind me and Maddie. They grabbed both of our arms and held them painfully behind our backs. Then a big guy that looked more like a cook than a bully came out from the hallway behind London. He kneeled down and picked up something.
That something was my twin.
He had the dagger I had thrown right above his chest, where the heart should be.
"Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!" I screamed loudly, falling to my knees.
London then looked at me and Maddie.
"I guess you just completed half of what I was going to do, Zack. Thank you for that!" London laughed.
I was then pulled to my feet and dragged along with Maddie to the front yard, where a white van and tainted windows waited with doors open.
Maddie, Cody, and I were thrown to the back of the van, our hands tied up behind our backs and our ankles tied with thick rope. Lucas then closed the door and walked to the front where London was sitting in the co-pilot seat.
The van turned on and I could hear it steering away from the house, but I couldn't care less. I only cared about Cody, knocked out, probably dead, some five feet away from me.
I stood moved as close as I could to Cody. I nudged him and began to cry. There was this only thought in my mind and every time I recalled it, it hurt even more.
I did not have a twin anymore. I was an only child.
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PLEASE READ THIS!!
Usually this place is concerning my stories, polls and reviews, but this time it is about something I just found out right as I was finishing this chapter.
An abuser is going around fan fiction, spamming people.
My cousin and I have already been a victim of this author-inspiration killer.
This girl is named Gema227. she spammed the story known as I Hate You, by hmmcandjbfanatics. It is actually written by my cousin and me a long time ago. The spammer is supposed to be a beta reader but instead of suggesting stuff, she insulted me and her.
This is the review, this "beta reader" posted.
Okay, let's get one thing out of the way- this piece, frankly, sucks. Badly. Really badly.
-Your dialogue needs tons of work. You need more description and your repeated rape of the English language is making Grammar snobs all over the world cry. Do you really want to make grammar snobs cry? Good, than fix your spelling and grammar.
-You made typos a turkey sandwich would be able to notice. Always run your stories through a spell checker before you post.
-The chat speaks made my eyes bleed. Seriously, did you miss spelling day in kindergarten or something?
Please, for the love of all that is good and holy, get a beta. You'll be doing the seeing world a favor. Thanks.
Gema
It would really help if you pressed abuse. It would really help fan fiction get rid of spammers like this girl. It does not take even two minutes of your time to press that button.