Yay chapter 9 is out and thank you all for the reviews so far is short I know but it's leading up to the major events that are about to take place so bear with me. Now again positive and negative feedback is wanted! Enjoy!

Chapter 9: Luffy's Defeat

Luffy was sent flying backwards and landed in a pile of rubble. He lied there unaware of what just happened all her knew was his head was hurting and there was a strange burning sensation on his chest. As he came to his senses and he regained his vision he looked down to see what this strange burning feeling was only to see his vest had caught on fire due to Akainu's previous attack. " Ahhhh I'm on fire!" screamed Luffy as he hopped up and down trying to extinguish the fire with his hands that were quickly spreading through his vest. Luffy then tore his vest off and threw it to the ground and then slowly turned to Akainu who was staring at Luffy with a smile. His smile made Luffy's blood boil even more. Luffy clenched his fists and glared towards Akainu.

"Heh so it seems like during these two years you haven't grown at all. you're still the weak Monkey D. Luffy I fought at Marine Ford. The same weak boy who could even help his own brother" said Akainu with a malicious smile

These word caused Luffy to just snap as his mind went blank and all his instincts told him to kill Akainu. Luffy Launched forward towards Akainu and threw a punch at Akainu but was easily dodged. Luffy followed with a leg sweep but Akainu caught his leg and held him upside down

"Do you really think attacking me wildly will be enough to defeat me!" Akainu bellowed as he knocked Luffy single handedly to the ground and then kicked Luffy sending him flying to a wall near to where Kaidou and Kizaru were.

xxxxx

"My my my agressive as always" said Kizaru as he watched Akainu kick Luffy

"Hey Kizaru didn't you learn to never turn your back on your opponent" said Kaidou as he threw a punch to Kizaru but only failed as the punch went right through Kizaru thanks to Kizaru's Pika Pika no Mi devil fruit ability which allows his to be able to let objects pass through him and reconstruct his body from energy particles.

"Impatient aren't we..well I guess we should start seeing as Akainu and Straw Hat Luffy has begun." said Kizaru with a calm smile

"Che I was only planning on taking Luffy's head, his navigator and your blueprints but adding your head to the mix won't be too bad after all" said Kaidou with a smile

"Blueprints..interesting exactly what blueprints are you talking about?" asked Kizaru

"Don't play dumb with me you know exactly what blueprints I'm talking about! the blueprints to create the deadliest weapon, Pluton!" screamed Kaidou " it was said to be destroyed at Water 7 but I got word that the government had a copy and now I have it with in my grasps! all I need it to get off this island and I will be the most feared man in the Grand Line and New World! screamed Kaidou triumphantly

"Ohh you managed to get your hands on some dangerous stuff...hmm seems like I won't be playing around this fight now that I know you have that" said Kizaru as he removed his jacket

"Che Bring it on your death shall just increase the popularity of my name" said Kaidou with a smile

"Ohh confident aren't we "Kizaru said with a smile as he flashed towards Kaidou

"Damn right! screamed Kaidou as he charged the admiral

xxxxx

""Bleh!" Luffy began to couch up blood and fell to his knees he then glanced over behind Akainu and then smiled and regained focus on Akainu. "Sh..shit I completely lost it there!...thanks... there is no way I can beat him if I lose my cool" Luffy said as he took in a deep breath "Gomu Gomu no Jet rifle!" screamed Luffy as he sent a powerful punch towards Akainu

"You pitiful fool" said Akainu as he caught Luffy's punch " Now you die! Inugami Guren!" growled Akainu as he created a wave of magma, shaped like a dog's head, and launched it straight to Luffy chest

Luffy's Pont Of View:

As the blazing hound came towards Luffy he instantly knew he made a mistake as he began to brace himself for the attack a single voice rang threw his head and he glanced at his normally fiery navigator standing up with a pained expression on her face and she was screaming something. Luffy couldn't help but wonder what she was screaming and why her face looked so scared and sad. Even in his current situation he couldn't tear his eyes off of his navigator. Luffy kept a focused stare on her lips as she frantically screamed the same words over and over. "Lu..ffy..do..nt..d..i..e" said Luffy as he was able to make out what his navigator was trying to say and this made him happy for some strange reason. Even though a flaming fist was about to run right through his heart the fact that Nami was not only safe and in front of him but she was also worried for him. Luffy then mouthed eight simple words and then flashed his signature wide grin at her but the grin was immediately torn away as the pain of Akainu's attack connected. His chest felt like it had erupted into flames and was quickly spreading throughout his whole body. "Ahhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhh" screamed Luffy but this wasn't an ordinary scream it was a bone chilling scream. It was a scream that you knew came from someone in a unimaginable amount of pain. Luffy's body began to go limp and his eyes were starting to roll back but right before he passed out his gave another smile to his navigator who was on her knees and her eyes were full of tears and then passed out

Nami's Point of View:

Nami stared as his expression turned dark. This was a face she wished she would never see on Luffy for it was a face of a person who lost all reasoning and only had murder on their mind. "Luffy...snap out of it" Nami said to herself as she watched helplessly as her captain launched himself at the admiral. She cringed at the blow Luffy received as he was sent flying backwards into a wall. "Come on Luffy use your brain! you can't win like that!"screamed Nami but then immediately covered her mouth and ducked hoping the vicious admiral didn't hear her. She slowly got back up only to see Luffy smiling her way, this caused her to blush "...why is he smiling" but then she notice Luffy beginning to regain his normal self and prepared another attack. As he released his attack she smiled "there we go Luffy let him have it" Nami said with a smile but her face immediately turned grim as Luffy's fist was caught. She then stared in horror as the admiral fist took the shape of a flaming hound. " Luffy watch out!" she screamed as the admiral launched his attack towards Luffy's chest. "Luffy don't die!" she screamed as she noticed Luffy looking her way. She couldn't seem to think of anything else to say so she kept repeating the same words over and over "Luffy don't die! Luffy don't die! Luffy don't die! Luffy don't die! Luffy don't die! Luffy don't die! Luffy don't die! Luffy don't die!" she screamed until she notice Luffy finally caught what she was screaming but was shocked by what he did next. Luffy broke out into a large grin which for the life of her she couldn't find a reason why he would be smiling in a time like this and then she stared at the movement on his lips. With each word he mouthed she repeated out loud "Do..nt...wo...rr..y...i...wo...ul...d...ne...ver...lea...ve...yo...ur...sid...e" she repeated an placed her hand over her mouth in shock of the words and instantly repeated it to herself to make sure it was true "don't worry I would never leave you side" repeating it caused her to smile a little but the smile quickly faded as she heard a deafening scream. This scream sent chills straight through her body. Her legs grew weak and couldn't support her anymore as she fell to the ground. She stared at her captain...her normally strong captain's body growing weaker by the second. his body was going limp and at the sight of this tears just began to fall "Luffy! Luffy! Luffy!" she began screaming trying her best to keep her voice from cracking from behind the sobs. As she watched her captain body begin to go limp she again saw her captain glance towards her and flashed one last smile before he passed out. The smile he gave was not one of his usual large grins but a weak and helpless smile. She stared at Luffy body as it was sent crashing to the ground by Akainu

"Pitiful human you were a worthless being and now the world rejoices in one less dirty pirate to cause trouble" said Akainu as he slowly turned to look at the sobbing red head "hey I know you" said Akainu as he stared at Nami

Nami's eyes immediately shot up and looked at the admiral approach her

"Your part of Monkey D. Luffy's crew...yes you're the Cat burglar Nami...hmmm well I guess today really is our lucky day. three huge bounties all in one place" said Akainu as he began to walk towards Nami

Nami was frozen, her body wouldn't not listen to her and remained completely still. As much as she wanted to run she was terrified of this man. The man who was able to kill Luffy in cold blood was now walking up to her. Step by step he got closer to her and Nami's heart began to race, she could only fear that he was going to kill her the same way he killed her precious captain. He then arrived right in front of her causing her to look up to meet his eyes

"How about you come with me little girl and your trial will be short and painless" Akainu said with a grin as his hand slowly began the reach for her arm

Nami stared in horror as the admiral hand inched closer to her. She closed her eyes as tight as she could and awaited to man the grab hold of her...but he didn't and suddenly she heard the admiral scream

"What the...impossible" Akainu bellowed

Nami's eyes slowly opened and then widened "it can't be...you're..."

Lol sorry Cliff hangers make the next chapter all the more fun =]