Author's note: Hello everyone! Long time no see, indeed. Someone even left a review that he wouldn't expect to hear from me until the end of the month.
Well, what he said wasn't totally wrong. You can expect not to see next update from my story until 9th February past because I have a national exam at 8-9th February and I have to start my study for it. So to make up for that, this Chapter will be longer than usual.
And I also have another reason for the delay; recently, I read a few of interesting stories from this site in hope that their writing style will help me improve mine. One of them is "Commandments of capturing", it's the crossover between World only god knows (The world god only knows) and Date a live. It's very interesting; with the idea of Katsuragi Keima also known as Capturing God became a teacher for Itsuka shido, in order to teach Shido how to make girls fall in love with him and complete his missions, after Ratatoskr had contacted Keima in the real world because of his reputation as Capturing god. If any of you are interested in it, please go ahead and try to read it yourselves (It's very popular, consider even if it is just a crossover, It have gotten almost 200 people to favorite it).
Well, let's stop the talk about another person story.
Here, Chapter 10. Hope you enjoy it!
Qwqs
Edit1: This chapter was edit once on 27/12/2014 in grammars and some parts of the conversation.
Chapter 10: First mistake 2
Yuzuru P.O.V.
"So… care to explain yourself, Yuzuru?"
It was lunchtime, one minute ago; the orange haired boy invited her to go to the rooftop for a talk. But unsurprisingly, even though the boy was the one who invited, the one who was starting the talk was the girl. After all, Kanade was the one who wanted to talk; the orange haired boy just knew it and invited her.
"W-well, you should know that by now, Kanade..."
Yuzuru said, looking at Kanade awkwardly before continue.
"I transferred to this school to be with you."
"Then, why didn't you tell me first?"
Kanade continued her face still emotionless. The only times her face display emotion today were when she talked to Sayoko about her boyfriend and when Yuzuru suddenly was introduced to her class as a transfer student.
"W-Well, I-I want it to be a surprise."
Yuzuru answered nervously. If it was another person, he or she wouldn't be nervous because of the tone of Kanade's voice was normal and didn't show any sign of anger. However, when it came to Yuzuru, he knew full well that he couldn't trust his girlfriend facial expression so easily since she was so good at hiding her own emotions like her nature as a "Kuudere" suggest. It was the knowledge he got from their time in the afterlife, when she was happy or showing affection she will smile as beautiful as that of an angel but when it the other ways around like, she was sad, angry or simple didn't feel anything, she will remain emotionless (Shock was the only exception, though).
So that said, it meant that he couldn't tell her feeling and had to be careful.
"Is it just that, Yuzuru?"
Kanade said, frowned a little. But that frown didn't escape from Yuzuru eyes and it meant that she was upset.
"Sorry!"
Yuzuru bowed instantly, begging for forgiveness. But instead of that, he was responded by a giggle.
"Hehehe…hehe…hehe, I'm not upset, Yuzuru. I'm just kidding."
She said and then she continued to giggle cutely that made Yuzuru thought for an instant 'Ah, she is so cute, indeed.'
"Why you made that face then!" Yuzuru said, tried to sound angry but it wasn't seem to work as he was still smiling from witness Kanade's cute giggle.
"It's just a little payback from me, Yuzuru. You're the one who made me so surprise this morning."
Kanade said, smiling mischievously. Ah, so cute.
"But still, why you still stay expressionless and not show it out."
"Yuzuru, do you really think I don't know that when you talk to me, you're always searching for my expression to know whether I'm in good mood or not."
'Ugh! So she can read me too, huh?' Yuzuru flinched; he didn't expect Kanade to be so smart. Well, he should expect this much; after all, she was the one who had won him in that duel with such a brilliant plan and made him remembering her.
When she had seen Yuzuru silence because of her remark, she pouted.
"… So you're really thought so, huh?"
"S-Sorry."
He said and then laughed awkwardly.
He felt relief as it meant that Kanade was enjoying herself and happy. She was able to display so many facial expressions in such a short time and that made him happy. So his surprising attacked by suddenly transfer to her class did work.
"So how about I treated you to the Mápó dòufu as an apology then"
He said, smiling.
"Yes, thank you."
She said, her face was so cute, as she showed her affection to Yuzuru. Though, it was not as much as the other girls were able to show to their love ones. It was cute in its own way, in the "Kuudere" way.
So cute, indeed.
"Then, shall we go?"
She nodded and then followed Yuzuru to the cafeteria. They had time to spend together after all.
Kanade P.O.V.
The only word to be able to describe what Kanade's feeling was fulfilling.
She had a lot of wonderful time with Yuzuru while she was having lunch with him.
It was funny the way he was trying hard to consume all of the Mápó dòufu. After every bite he had to drink a whole glass of water and make a comment at how she was eating it with ease.
How he sometimes took a glance at her face in gentle was so pleasant.
Even though, sometimes they heard some people around them gossiped about how they were so lovey-dovey and how Yuzuru transferred school just for her. It was a wonderful time nonetheless.
Unfortunately, that time was interrupted when her cellphone rang.
"What's wrong, Kanade?"
Yuzuru questioned as he saw Kanade showed a concerned look.
"I have to go soon, Sayoko have something important to discuss with me."
Yuzuru showed her a disappoint look before reply to her.
"I see… Well then, see you later, Kanade."
"…Later."
She said and then hurried to finish her Mápó dòufu. At first she had planned to enjoy her Mápó dòufu more slowly with Yuzuru. And after she had finished, she would have had a fun and enjoyable chat with him.
'Oh, damn! I seemed to forget that I also have the test this afternoon; guess I also have to hurry things up with Sayoko too.'
-o-O-o-
"…What's the meaning of this, Sayoko?"
Kanade asked; she was almost speechless.
"Sorry, Kanade-chan; I was forced to do this."
Sayoko put the palms of her hands together in apology.
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY TESTING MY BOYFRIEND BY FLIRTING WITH HIM, SAYOKO!"
30 minutes ago
"So we make a deal, right?"
"Yes, we are, Takamura-san."
Thus conclude the conversation between all the boys in the class and Haruka, Mie and some other girls.
They made a deal about something after some discussion. And what was that discussion about? It was about Kanade's boyfriend, of course.
"So we agreed about give the transfer student a test whether he is good enough to be Kanade's boyfriend or not, right?"
Haruka said to Takamura who seemed to be 'Leader' of the boys group.
"That's absolutely right, Haruka-san. We can't afford to lose our Hime-sama to someone who is unworthy."
Takamura, who wore glasses, pushed his glasses up the bridge of his nose as he said.
"So what kind of test we'll give to him then, Takamura-san"
Haruka continued as the other girls nodded.
That was right they couldn't afford to lose to other girls so easily. Their only hope now was, the transfer student was a playboy and thus was not suitable for Kanade to go out with. That meant there weren't anyone who had a perfect guy as a boyfriend. It didn't seem logical for anyone to think like that, we all knew that. But for girls who didn't popular and never have a boyfriend, it was logical for them to feel envious and uneasy. And the only way for them to be at ease, was to think that there weren't such a guy exist. So they had to prove that they were right, no such guy exist.
"It's easy, Haruka-san. We have to send some girl to try to flirt with him. And if he go along with it, that mean he's a playboy and thus unworthy for our Hime-sama."
"So you guys are serious, huh?"
Mie, who stood next to Haruka, sighed
"That's right! But the problem is who should we send?"
Takamura said, before shook his head.
"You don't have to worry about that, Takamura-san. We have a perfect person for the job."
Haruka said with an evil grin before took out her cellphone and called someone.
"Ah, Sayoko, right? Have you done with your lunch yet? I want to talk to you about something. Can you please come to our classroom immediately? I will be waiting, see you."
"W-Wait a minute, Haruka, what was that about?
They heard Sayoko voice before Haruka cut the line.
"She is a perfect person, don't you think?"
"But what could you do to make Sayoko-san go along with our plan?"
Takamura questioned, while showing that he didn't believe she would be able to do it, the same goal for everyone else in the group. That question made Haruka giggled before answered.
"That's easy. Leave it to me."
-o-O-o-
"YOU WANT ME TO DO WHAT, HARUKA!"
Sayoko shouted at Haruka angrily.
"You heard the first time, Sayoko. We want you to try to flirt with Kanade's boyfriend. You've already broken up with your boyfriend, right?"
"B-But, t-that doesn't mean I need to break my best friend and her boyfriend apart, does it?"
"You doesn't break them apart, Sayoko. You just have to try to flirt with him and see whether he is good enough for Kanade to go out with or not."
Haruka said, no doubt she tried to persuading Sayoko to go along with her plan and she was doing good, too.
"B-But still, why it has to be me?"
Sayoko said, hesitantly.
Haruka sighed, before she replied.
"Like it or not, you are the most attractive girl of all of us, second only to Kanade-chan."
"B-but still, I just broke up with my boyfriend! I don't want to be involved with another guy yet!"
Sayoko protested.
"Oh, so you said..." Haruka licked her lips, as she knew for sure that this negotiation was already her win. If only boys were this easy to persuade, she would have boyfriends ages ago. (Although it was not really true that she never had admirers before, it was just that those boys didn't reach her standard. And as sad as it might be for her, every boy she had her eyes on until now were all either already had a girlfriend or gay. And why she could understand cases of the former, she couldn't put her mind on the latter cases, why the hell didn't those boys fall for someone as pretty and clever as her, instead chose to be with their very own kind who have the same type of genital as them? Maybe she was born with a curse to always head over heels to that two extreme type of guys that she had no hope to win over.)
"...even though you broke up with your boyfriend, you still love him and can't flirt with another guy because you're afraid he'll see you, right?"
Haruka hit the nail on the head.
"W-What are you saying! A-Afraid what! O-Of course, I can flirt with another guy!"
"Ah, so you accept our plan, right?"
"W-What!"
She froze.
"See, Takamura-san? I said so that she would accept the role."
Haruka turned to Takamura and then smiled at him. The only thing everyone in the class thought was 'Scary'.
HARUKA WAS WAY TOO SCARY!
Kanade P.O.V.
After that, they explained to Kanade why they wanted to do what they said.
"I see, that's acceptable, I guess…"
Kanade sighed before continued.
"But that doesn't mean I will approve of it, to have my boyfriend flirting with another girl."
Kanade said, glared at Sayoko.
"And why it has to be Sayoko?"
Sayoko felt a chill run down her spine while Kanade glared at her. Of course, she would. Kanade showed a hostile expression to her. It had never happened before.
For Kanade, she had to admit that Sayoko was a very attractive girl and had one thing that she didn't have, that was "Cheerfulness", and thus she was hesitation to let her try to flirting with Yuzuru.
"Why not, Kanade-chan? She was a suitable girl to test your boyfriend. Or are you don't trust your boyfriend that he wouldn't betray you?"
Haruka said, persuading Kanade to go along with it, too. It seemed like she wasn't lying when she said she would be a politician.
That made Kanade thought hard, did she not trust Yuzuru? No, that was not the case. She absolutely trusted him; they had a bond for so long after all. Then why did she afraid? If they wanted to test Yuzuru, then why not?
"Alright, I approve of it. To test Yuzuru, you all can use Sayoko to try and flirt with him."
Kanade finally conceded.
-o-O-o-
Kanade sighed at herself when she thought back about what happened at lunch. And to think that in the end she would never get the chance to study for her exam. Luckily, the exam wasn't too difficult and she was able to pass it but she was also sure that she didn't ace it. Now she waited and saw Yuzuru was exiting the school gate with Sayoko. Her accompanies were group of boys and girls that had proposed her that idea in the first place. Now they were hiding behind the poles in front of the school gate with her and took a sneak at Yuzuru.
Yuzuru seemed to be having a fun conversation with Sayoko, as he smiled while Sayako was talking to him awkwardly, seemed to be in an awkward position.
That was enough to make Kanade felt uneasy. How could Yuzuru smiled that happy when he was with another girl that was not her? Normally, she would dismiss this as nothing but when it had already struck to her that now Sayoko was trying to seduce him, she just couldn't help but felt that way. She started to regret her decision. Maybe, it would have been better if she had ignored what they said and still refused to allow Sayoko to flirt around with Yuzuru.
After all, she was not too sure that he still loved her as much as he did in the afterlife. Maybe she would have been able to ensure that if she had spent a little more time with Yuzuru in this life. But since she didn't, she felt uncertain now. It was true when she said to them that she trusted Yuzuru. But what she trusted was the love that Yuzuru giving for her back in the afterlife, not the love he gave her in this life that was still vague. Though, they had bond together. She was not too sure about it, about Yuzuru in this life…
Maybe, this was her first mistake ever. She had never admitted that she made any mistakes before.
Not the time when she thanked him for giving her his heart and made the two separated.
She would never think it as a mistake. Even if she had to separate from him, she had to do it, to thank him for what he had done for her. She had lost count of what he had done for her over their short time in afterlife. But she could remember it all and had thanked him at that time 'Thank you for giving your love to me,' she recalled. It was almost as important as the last thank she gave him at the time 'Thank you, for this beautiful life you gave me'
Compare to that, this was her first mistake, indeed. She admitted it.
She shook her head as she continued to watch Yuzuru and Sayoko talking together.
Omake 2
Yuzuru P.O.V.
"Nee, Yuzuru, you will never cheat on me, right?" It was the lunchtime. Kanade looked down at school ground from the rooftop while questioned him, hiding her face from him, not willing to let him saw her face.
"Of course, I won't. Never will!" Yuzuru answered confidently just to be drop when he saw Kanade started to sob.
"H-Hey, w-what's wrong, Kanade?"
"B-But Key-Sama will release us or at least me in visual novel in 2014! It's more likely that you have to clear others' route to unlock mine. Y-You… Y-You have to fall in love with other girls to see me, Yuzuru."
"N-No way..."
"A-And if you doesn't get selected as protagonist, I would have to fall in love with other guys." Kanade said, continued to sob.
"W-we will… be… together… Kanade… WE WILL FOREVER BE TOGETHER!" Yuzuru hugged Kanade, tried to comfort her as she continued to this time he started to cry too.
Sadly, the wish will never come true. There was no way Key would only create Kanade as the only heroine of the game after all.
-o-O-o-
And so when the time come, Kanade will disappear from Yuzuru arms and go to the cover of new visual novel of Key and inside the game.
And then we will hear the voice.
"N-NO, KANADE. KANADE!"
Disclaimer: I'm not involved in any ways with KEY!
Thank you and answer space
I'mNotYourAverageItalianChick Thank you ^^I just hope I could write my whole story like in Omakes. It's just too difficult for me to write such humor stuffs in the story itself without ruining the story line. I guess I have to study English a lot more to be able to do it. Anyway, thank for your support and I hope that you will continue doing it. Oh, and I can read what you write in your profile too. :-) I think people would be able to do it easier if you aren't used to that language and have been trying to understand every English word for a long time.
BuonoSC I will try to end this story before making the new one, but I will not spoil the fun of that for now. With my tight schedule as well as my lack of mastery in English, I cannot afford to write so many stories at once without abandon it later on and it's the thing I don't want to do as well.
Supercooladi900 Is it unexpected for you to see the update before February? Hehe, anyway thank for your support.
Melodyloveheart I'm not too sure myself whether this story was good enough. I will try to make it even better! Anyway thank for your encouragement.
So here it is Chapter 10 and also my second Omake ^^
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And also my Omake, please do know that I might not wrote it on every chapter. I will just write in the chapter that I feel like it.
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