NOTICE!:
So, a LOT of people are commenting on the grammar, and parts of sentences being messed up or missing. Here's the situation, it's not my fault. It's a mishap with my computer and my file
editor. Whenever I click the save button,parts of sentences get cut off. I'm currently working on trying to fix the problem. The story is perfectly when I type it on Notepad. It gets messed up when I upload it. As for my grammar,i'll work on that. I just recently noticed the errors in some sentences, so please bear with me while I fix the problem. Thanks :)
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On with the story:
Hinatas POV:
"This is only the first part to the date, you know that right?"I looked at him,surprised. I shook my head.
"Theres a few things that I have planned for tomorrow" He smirked as he closed his eyes. I wonder what he has in store for tomorrow. I just closed my eyes and slept for the moment.
Sasukes POV:
I awoke to a blinding ray of light shooting into my eyes and the light scent of a familiar smelling flower. I looked down to find Hinata nuzzled up against me. She was a cute sleeper.I wanted to start the day of by making her breakfast, but since she was sleeping so peacefully, I had to wait until she woke up. As soon as I laid back down,I heard my stomach growl. What the hell? The noise was so low and guttural, I couldnt believe it came from me. I was gonna have to get up and cook now,or risk waking Hinata up with the sound of my noisy stomach. Sitting up and grabbing my jacket, I stood up and tucked the jacket jacket beneath her head. As I was climbing out of the little tree house,the wind blew strands of hair onto her face. I climbed back in, tucked the hair behind her ear and kissed her forehead; making my way out again. I walked to the front of the house and went inside. I gt an instant wave of nostalgia as I stepped in. A lot of happy memories happened in this house.
FLASHBACK:
Normal POV:
5 year old Sasuke sat on the floor crying and pouting. His older brother Itachi, 10 years old, squatted in front of his younger brother at looked at him. Itachi couldnt resist teasing his little brother. He smiled and poked young Sasuke,momentarily stopping his crying. Sasuke looked up and his big brother and wiped his tears. He had been crying because Itachi wouldnt let him cook breakfast,saying that he would burn it because he didnt know what he was doing. It was his mothers birthday and Sasuke wanted nothing more than to surprise his mother with breakfast made by him and his brother. Since Itachi refused to let him help ,Sasuke didnt get to take part in cooking. Itachi looked at his brother and shook his head.
"I'll tell you what." He spoke calmly. He watched as Sasuke looked at him with eager continued to speak,
"Since I cooked it,you can go bring it to her. Sound good?" Sasuke nodded excitedly. He and Itachi made their way into the kitchen and began organizing the food on a white tray with silver handles. Just as Itachi was about to hand Sasuke the tray,his younger sibling stopped him.
"Wait." Young Sasuke said. He ran out of the back door and dashed into the garden. I stood in the center,rubbing his chin as he tried to pick the perfect flower to complement the breakfast set up. His eyes lit up as he spotted a bushel of tulips. There were several bushels,so his mother wouldnt mind if two measly flowers went missing. He plucked the two white tulip and headed inside. Itachi stood there,awaiting the arrival of his eager little brother. Sasuke smiled a toothy smile and held the flowers up for Itachi to see. Once Itachi aproved the flowers,Sasuke placed the flowers into a small vase and placed it in the center of the tray. Itachi picked up the tray and waited for his little brother to extend his he did, Itachi hesitantly placed the tray into Sasukes arms,slowly letting go'making sure Sasuke didnt drop it. His little brother smiled and they made their way to their mothers room.
It took a bit longer than it should have ,due to the fact that Sasuke was taking baby steps; making sure he didnt drop or spill anything. As they reached their parents bedroom,Sasuke turned to quickly and slipped,sending the tray into the air. Itachi caught it as he watched his baby brother hit the floor. He tried to hold in his laughter and Sasuke got up off the floor, attempting to make it look like nothing had happened. Despite all that had happened, he still handed the tray back to Sasuke. He just wanted his brother to be happy. Sasuke stood there looking at his brother with a big smile on his face.
End Of Flashback:
Sasuke POV:
I smiled inwardly and shook my head at the memory. 'I'm gonna do this all by myself this time' I thought to myself. Making my way into the kitchen,I looked out the window to see if Hinata had come out hadnt,so I still had time to cook. I was glad that I had stocked the fridge before bringing her here. I pulled out some eggs and bacon. As I walked over to the pantry,items in hand,I slipped on a piece of paper laying carelessly on the floor. Damnit,not again! The eggs flew into the air. I looked up as a few of the eggs fell from the container,landing on my upward looking face.
One egg landed in my hair. Just great. I sat there for a minute. Why does this have to happen to me again? I scooped the egg yolk off of my face and out of my hair and threw the shells in the trash. After egg mishap, I went to go get a pan. As I removed the pan from bottom cabinets, other pots and pans came out along with it. Could this morning get any worse? I left them on the floor to get after I finished making breakfast. I put a few pieces of bread in the toaster while I got started cooking the eggs. Moments later,as I was cooking the eggs,I started to smell something burning.
"Shit!, The toast!" I dropped the spatula on the counter and rushed over to the that moment, 4 burnt pieces of toast popped out of the toaster and fell on the counter. I noiced the
toaster setting was set on high. Who in the hell would set it that high? I tried to salvage the toast by taking in to the sink and scraping off the burnt of good that did me,seeing as
every part of the bread was black. I set the toast on a few napkins on the counter as I went back to check the eggs. Atleast those didnt get burnt.
Hinata POV:
A bright light poured in through the opening in the tree houses ceiling. I sniffed the air and smelled flowers,with a hint of something burnt. I shot up and looked around the tree house. Sasuke was nowhere to be found. I frantically looked around,trying to find out wat was burning. Was the tree house on fire? Had he left me in here? I looked through the door of the tree house. It wasnt on fire. I climbed down and noticed smoke coming from the windows of the house? Was Sasuke in here?! I almost had a panic attack. Jumping from the tree house I ran towards the back door of the house. As I busted through the door,I watched a food covered Sasuke scramble to set a table that was in the dining room. The burning,I guessed,had come from the toaster. I looked at 4 black pieces of toast sitting on a plate in the center of the table. I couldnt help but laugh at Sasuke as I stood in the doorway,leaning on the door frame. He turned around,surprised to see me.
The expression on his faced looked like that of a child who had done something wrong. I couldnt help but walk up to him and pinch his cheeks. He pouted. That had to have been the cutest thing I had ever seen him do.
"Did you make breakfast?" I said, rinsing an eyebrow at the burnt food sitting on the table. He looked away as a small blush spread across his face. I reached up and picked several pieces of eggshell out of his hair. What the hell happened in here? I thought as I noticed pots and pans scattered on the kitchen floor.
"I tried to make breakfast,but...It didnt turn out too well." Sasuke muttered,scratching the back of his head. He looked nervous. I reached up and swept egg soaked locks of hair out of his face. He really tried his best to make breakfast. I smiled and stood on my tip toes to kiss him. His food covered hand rested on my waist as I placed my hands on his cheek,smearing the egg yolk that was underneath my hands. He was hopeless when it came to being in the kitchen; That much, I could tell from the scorched food and messy kitchen. As I pulled away from the kiss and looked over his shoulder,I looked back at him
"I dont have to eat that,do I?" I raised and eyebrow. A small smirk played on his lips.
"Yes,yes you do." He joked. I couldnt help but laugh at him.
"How about this,if you let me get away with not eating...um that so called "breakfast". We can do whatever you want today. Sound good?" I looked at him. He had this creepy looking smile on his face.
"Anything I want? He asked. My face started to get hot. I knewwhat he was thinking.
"Anything that wont get you in trouble with my father." I spoke. He pretened to be sad.
"Fine." He said finally. I smiled and walked over to the table. He really expected me to eat this? He must have been out of his mind. We started to clear the table off and pick up the pots when Sasuke began to speak.
"How about we go out to get something to eat? Unless you still want me to cook for you" I shook my head. He laughed.
"Alright,well the bathrooms justt down the hall. Go get ready and we'll leave when you're done" I nodded my head,kissing his cheek before leaving. My thing were already in the bathroom. It was sweet of him to put my things in the bathroom for me. Unless he went through my stuff,then it was just creepy. I took a quick shower,trying not to make him wait to long. When I got out of the shower I dried my hair, put on a blue tank top and a small white jacket with brown colored didnt look right.I dug around in my bag and pulled out a tan hat with a blue bow on it. I put it on. Perfect. I left my hair down and walked out of the bathroom. When I walked into the living room, and saw Sasuke sitting on the couch, fully dressed. Was there more than one bathroom in his house? I was pretty big, so I wouldnt be surprised if there was.
"Ready to go?" He asked,looking me up and down. I nodded. He stood up and walked over to me,holding his hand out. I took it as he led me to his car. It was a nice day. I looked back at the house and noticed something on the front door that I hadnt noticed before. On the door,just above the peephole,was the same crest from the necklace that Sasuke had given me when we first
started dating. I looked down and held the pendent in my hand. Was this his necklace? I looked over at him and he looked back.
"Something wrong?" He asked and he opened the passenger side door. I felt compelled to ask him about the necklace. Instead,I shook my head.
"No. I just wanted to drive is all." I lied. He looked at me with a smile on his face.
"You can drive." I smiled. "If." He held up a finger. "If you sit in my lap." He smirked. He's such a pervert! I looked at him,knowing full well that I was blushing. I did say that we could do whatever he wanted. I sighed.
"Fine." He smirked, closing the passenger door. We walked to the other side of the car and he opened the door. When he sat down,he looked at me with a smirk on his face as he patted the space between his legs. I cant believe him! I sighed and got in, closing the door as I did.
"Comfy?" He asked. I looked at him and nodded. It really was comfortable sitting like this. He wrapped his hands around my waist and nuzzled against my neck. His face was warm against my skin. I smiled and started the car. On the way to breakfast,he gave directions to where we were going. He would sneak small kisses on my neck and shoulders while I drove. It was cute. When we arrived,he looked at me and smiled as I got out of the car. The restaurant was outside, on a little cobblestone area. I held out my hand as he got out of the car. We walked over to the little cafe and he pulled my chair out for me. I looked up at him and smiled.
The waitress came over to us and took our orders. I noticed that she was staring at Sasuke. I tried to keep calm as she blatantly flirted with him. Who did she think she was? I looked at Sasuke,he had a bored expression on his face as the waitress was talking to him. I was happy. He rolled his eyes at the waitress as she finally stopped talking and left. We sat and talked about the band and how they were going to play at some party sometime during next week. The way he talked about the
band let me know that he really was passionate about playing music. We barely noticed the waitress as she came over with our food. The food was good. When we got up and left,the waitress had written her name and number on the receipt. What the hell? I laughed as Sasuke crumbled it up and threw it at the waitress as she walked away.
"That was strange." Sasuke said as we walked to the car. I shook my head.
"Well you are okay looking." I joked. He pouted.
"Just okay?" He said in a child like voice.
"Okay,fine. You're cute okay?" He smiled and pinned me up against the car.
"Don't lie." He whispered into my ear. Why did his voice have to be so deep and seductive sounding? I shuddered as his hot breath tickled my ear.
"Okay, you're sexy. Big deal." I said biting my lip. He smirked and leaned down to kiss me.
Sasukes POV:
I loved when she bit her lip. It made her look she wanted more than a kiss. I really couldnt help myself. I leaned down to kiss her as I slid my hand up her shirt. She grabbed my hand When I pulled away,she looked flustered as she got in the car. I smirked.
"You don't wanna sit in my lap again?" Her face turned red as she shook her head.
"It's not that I dont want 's just that you dont know how yo keep your hands to yourself." She smiled.
"I know how to,I just choose not to" I retorted. She rolled her eyes as I drove off.
"So where to next?" She asked.
"It's a surprise." I said driving down the road. She must have figured out where we were going,because she shifted in her seat and gave me a child like smile.
"We're going to the fair?!" She squealed. I nodded my head. I started to wonder if she had done anything like this when she was younger. She practically jumped out of the car when I pulled into the parking lot. I got out of the car slowly as I watched her gawk at all of the rides. She looked back at me and smiled before giving me a big hug.
"Thank you." She kissed my cheek and grabbed my head. I smiled as she led me towards the entrance. Once I paid the entry fees. She ran up ahead me. I didnt know what I had gotten
myself into. I walked up to her.
"So,what do you wanna do first?" I asked my giddy girlfriend. Hm...For some reason,I didnt mind calling her that. It was difficult to say whenever I was dating Karin. Hinata looked at me with
an expression that looked like she didnt know what to do.
"I-I dunno." She said finally. I grabbed her hand.
"Take your time." I answered. She took a moment to look around. Her face lit up as she spotted a photobooth.
"Would it be okay if we took a few pictures?" She asked. I nodded as she pulled me towards the little photobooth. What was with this girl? She really was a kid at heart. The seat inside the
photobooth was small. She looked at me. She already know that she was gonna have to sit in my lap again. I silently thanked the people who built this little machine. I got in and she sat in my lap. I selected the options for the pictures and we looked into the camera. Hinata was smiling so hard that I was afraid her face was gonna get stuck like that. Not that I would have minded. Her smile was cute. After a few bright flashes, Hinata got out of my lap and went to get the pictures. She looked at them as I stepped behind her. I looked over her shoulder to get a peek at the photos. It was strange to see myself smile once. It was even more strange to see myself making faces into a camera.
"You look silly." Hinata said turning around,putting the pictures in her bag. I nodded. She was right. For a while, we walked around playing little games. She was so excited when I won her a giant stuffed giraffe at a ring toss game. She looked like a big child holding that thing. We couldnt get on any roller coasters,due to her stuffed animal. I didnt mind. I was fine just being around her. Before it started to get dark,she noticed a man taking pictures for a few couples. She looked up at me. I knew that she wanted him to take our picture. Apparently she had a thing for taking
pictures. I nodded as she walked over to the man with the camera. She said something to him and she pointed to me.
He nodded and she ran over to me,jumping on my back. What was she up to? Whatever the case was,I didnt mind. I wrapped my hand around her thighs. The man took the picture and it came out the front of the quick as she was on my back,she was gone;walking up to the man and taking the picture.
"We look cute." She said. I nodded and she picked up her giraffe. It started to get dark. There was a big Ferris wheel with a bunch of lights on it.
"Come on." I said,pulling her towards it. She nodded and walked along side me. When we got on, she looked at me and smiled.
"This was so fun." She scooted next to me. "I don't want it to end." she mumbled.
"It doesnt have to end just yet." I said leaning towards her and stealing a kiss.
Hinata's POV:
His lips were soft. I dropped my stuffed animal and put my hands on his shoulders as I sat in his lap. When I pulled away,he looked me in my eyes. I felt like I was going to melt as I stared into
these shiny bead of onyx that he called eyes.
"Sasuke."I spoke
"Hm?" I looked at him for a little longer before speaking again.
"Thank you for this. I havent been to a fair since my mother passed away." I smiled. He was silent for a bit. He reached up and wiped something from my ? I didnt even notice that I was crying.
"You're welcome." He whispered. I laid my head on his shoulder and he softly rubbed my back. I wanted to stay like this for the rest of my life.
How was this one? Cute,wasnt it? Anyway, I was trying to make this one longer since the other ones were so theres any mistakes in the sentences,let me know.
Until next time!
Next Chapter!:Brother troubles.
