Thank you all for reviewing. I am going to address a couple of things at the end that were brought to my attention.
Chapter 10
Thalia
Shay was at the arena, like he said he would be. He was laying on the floor for some reason but sat up when we entered.
"Okay Shay," Ella started, "Why are we in the arena?"
"We are taking a break."
"There are other places to hang out at."
"But I like it here." Ella just sighed and probably thought it would be best to just sit down next to Shay. Ray sat next to her, than Jaycee, me, Dylan, Nathan, Talia, and Cayden. We all sat in a giant circle.
"So," Nathan said breaking the silence, "How old are you exactly Thalia?"
"Well I am pretty sure I am about 186 years old, give or take a few years," I admitted. When Nathan looked at me strangely, I quickly asked how long they knew each other. But then I realized how stupid that sounded.
"About six years," Jaycee answered. "I sometimes will go home during the school year to see my dad and my half brother from my dad's previous marriage."
"I never really go home," Nathan admitted. "I don't really like my step mom and my one step brother. He calls me a girl."
"Well sometimes you do act like one," Shay told him.
"That's because I have my mom's genes in me! At least I don't always obsess about my clothes or my hair or what my face looks like. Speaking of my face, I need more facial wash…"
"Okay, too much information," Talia interrupted. "Maybe I will practice my archery while I am here." With that she ran to the edge of the arena, where a couple of bows and cases of arrows were, and grabbed a gold bow with a matching set of gold arrows. She nocks three arrows and let them fly at a nearby target. All three hit the bull's eye. She must have not been happy with that because she gave a heavy sigh.
Cayden shook his head at her. "Talia is obsessed with archery and thinks everything she shoots at misses by ten miles."
"Which is pretty stupid if you ask me," Ray said. "I mean, she already knows she is good so she should stop obsessing already."
"Like you never obsess over anything," Shay told him. "Remember the time you were obsessed over a certain daughter of Demeter last year."
Ray started to blush a deep shade of red muttering, "Why do I tell you anything?"
"Before you say anything else, let's read one more chapter before dinner," Ella suggested, who was blushing the same shade of red as Ray. We all nodded. Talia came back over and we all headed back to her cabin. She grabbed the book from behind one of the pillows and tossed the book to Ella, who quickly opened the book to the right page and started to read.
There were some reviews that caught my attention. Now there are some reviews I want to comment on. One reviewer (Percabeth Trumps Jasper) suggested bring the ghost of Percy and his friends in the story as ghost and read the books with them. That thought had crossed my mine before but I will be putting up a poll later today about what you think about that. Now second, I do relize that Percy can easily put the flames out and save him and Annabeth. I know that but Thalia didn't have much detail when she told the other campers. When they read who Percy is the son of, while you can guess they will question Thalia. That is all I will tell you because you will find out more about that in the next chapter. If you read this, please put Who Dat Girl in your review.
~sciencelover.
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