Author's Note
I am very sorry that this isn't an update, but I wanted to respond to one writer's review.
no offence if my statement offends you but i am very straightforward in life
and ussually misunderstood
Mr. D says he thinks that Peter, Anniebell, Nate, and Taylor are doing quite
well getting Carlisle, Gred, and Tammy out of Seattle to camp.
"Um… Did you read that last line?" Thalia said, her face bright red. "He
called me Tammy!" She said, her cheeks getting bright red.
one little example of a case of your poor wording either thalia is meant to
say taylor or tammy and talyor are switched i copied and pasted the line just
so you know or you meant to say it like that either way i think the wording is
off and ur making readers go the extra mile
Edvice get a better beta (this edvice includes get a beta as well)
You did not leave a username, so I can't respond to your comment in any other way but this.
First of all, I apologize to all of my readers if my wording is a bit confusing. Usually, I'm in a rush to produce these chapters for you, and I don't have time to read everything over. I do use spell check, though.
Your statement does not offend me in any way at all; I'd actually like to congratulate you for being the first reviewer with constructive criticism. You told me what you wanted in a nice way, and I will take that into consideration and not take it as a flame or anything.
I don't have a beta as of now, but if someone would like to be my beta, you can just leave a review. I wasn't planning to have a beta at all, because I don't want the chapters to come out too late or anything like that. For potential beta-ers: I use Canadian spelling, not American. So favourite not favorite, colour not color, honour not honor. Unfortunately, my Microsoft Word is set on American English.
I'd like to give you, as the reviewer some advice, if the reviewer doesn't mind; use spell check or look at what you wrote again!
For the rest of the readers: I'm really sorry this is not an actual chapter, one will come out soon though. Don't be afraid to leave a review, I won't bite.
And to end this chapter, a short poem.
It just goes to show
That you just have to know
To check if your wording is right
Or a mad reviewer might come after you for a fight!
Spell check is your friend
I use it again and again and again
So don't forget to edit
It (usually) gives you extra credit