A/N I know I always put the A/N at the end of a chapter, but this absolutely something you need to read before this chapter. I NEED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM! And the cure for writer's block. XD Anyway hope you enjoy this chapter. XD No really, if there's anything wrong with my writing I need to know. And I will try to make the chapters longer. Sorry, the first five chapters were stupid! /Shot/
P.S. There won't be much romance showing in this, but I will put the romance in my one-shots FanFiction. /Shot again/ LAME ATTEMPT AT ADVERTISEING! /shot/ shot/ shot/ XD Long Author's note is LONG!
He walked on and on until he reached the town where they were staying. He checked into his room, but before he went in, he checked on Maka. She was asleep in her bed. Soul was watching her, clearly worried.
Stein must have brought her here. "Hey Soul. How's Maka doing? Is she O.K?" Kidd asked. Soul seemed surprised he was there. Maybe Soul didn't notice him till he spoke?
"Where the hell did you come from, Kidd! ?" Soul asked surprised. Kidd said nothing, just laughed. After a few seconds Soul calmed down and said "Maka's just fine. Why are you concerned anyway?"
"Why shouldn't I be worried about my friend?" Kidd said with a smile. He walked to his room. Liz and Patty transformed into their human selves.
"Dang, Kidd. Is it just me, or are you faster than you used to be?" Liz asked, absolutely amazed. Kidd just looked at her a little confused. He wasn't faster…was he?
I guess I should take that as a compliment. Kidd thought.
The sun was now sinking behind the trees. They had an exhausting day, and everyone was feeling tired. Kidd just fell on his bed, not saying a word, and went to sleep.
The next day
Kidd woke up. He felt like he was only a sleep for a few minutes. He was tired as hell! He looked out the window. The sun was high in the mid-day sky. Kid checked his watch.
12:30! ? Damn! I can't believe they let me sleep so late! Kidd thought to himself. He walked downstairs. BlackStar was waiting on the couch.
"What took you so long?" He yelled toward Kidd.
"Well, why did you let me sleep in?" Kidd retorted.
"I'm GOD! You should wake when I tell you too! Anyway, I heard you checked on Maka. Why did you pass me by? !" He asked, almost a yell. To make him shut up, Kidd decided to appeal to his ego.
"Surely a God, such as yourself, doesn't need me looking after him." BlackStar looked at Kidd quizzically then straightened up and said:
"Well, of course! I'm a God, I don't need people looking after me!"
You keep thinking that… Kidd thought. Then Maka walked in. Soul was behind her, carefully watching. She had a large bruise on her neck where Wendigo punched her. Kidd winced when he saw it. He definitely did not want that to happen to him.
"Hey Maka." He said. "Are you OK?"
"Yeah, Kidd. I'm fine. Thanks for the concern." Maka smiled.
"Hey! What about me? !" BlackStar asked. Kidd almost forgot that BlackStar was there.
"I could care less about you." Kidd said.
"Offensive much?"
Changed from Mystery/Tragedy to Horror/Tragedy.
