PeanutExpert - Hello! I just wanted to inform you that you have created a lovely story so far and am greatly anticipating the direction you'll take with it. Also, gale force is a skill awarded to level 15 dark fliers (a class upgrade from a Pegasus knight) that allows them, once per turn, to move and/or attack again.
Also, sorry if this is a little late, but I recommend that you potentially reclass Charles later into a thief which would allow you access to lock touch and lethality f you were to persue becoming an a seperate note, I believe you should maybe pursue a relationship with Miriel perhaps due to her magic proficiency? However, I respect if you don't choose her, the other readers have good input I'm sure! Keep on being awesome.

Kuromaster - Looking at your account, I can easily tell that you either just created this account, or you never really found a good story to favorite. Or maybe you created it then completely forgot about it. Either way, I was the FIRST story you favorited AND the first author you favorited. I don't know if you're following other awesome stories, or other authors, but I was still the first you actually FAVORITED. This really makes me feel good! Thank you a lot for what you said about how this is a lovely story and all that. Thank you for telling me what gale force was and the level and class to get it. Thank you for your recommendation for who to pair Charles up with and what class to go to. Unfortunately, I really like Gaius, so I might leave all the thievery to him, but I might just make him a thief to get lethality. I'll flip a coin later. Anyway, you can be sure that this story will be getting awesome, or atleast kinda better than the actual awakening story. Thank you one more time for answering my question and your opinion about this story.

Anyway, I said thank you so many times now, that I think the word lost some of its meaning XD. At the end of each chapter, I will leave something that is the same with my character and myself. I will also be leaving my friend code so you can friend me. I just really want to see what kind of characters other people have created XD. Anyway, I'm not really that big on multiplayer stuff, so I'm not sure if giving my friend code and adding any of you will actually do anything, but it's worth a try. Anyway, let us just start the chapter!

Sorry that I haven't uploaded in some time. I meant to upload this yesterday, but I couldn't for reasons I'll never say.

Okay, seriously. Just actually finished watching an anime, and then I get a review, so now I must add ANOTHER one right here! Damn. Seriously people, let me finish writing this!

Guest - I enjoy the fact that you've added to the stroy, anyway, to my opinions, of what you should do class-wise or partner-wise for Charles. (Note that I'm not saying the best things for being powerful, just what I think is fun.) For Charles, I'd say go sorcerer then dark night (Dark night has sword and magic, so Charles doesn't have to suddenly forget how to use one or the other) also with the whole 'will he go evil' or not thing, you could make it fit in plotwise, perhaps? Also, NEVER SAY 'NO' TO NOWI.

P.S. Please make Gaius endlessly awesome

Kuromaster - AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...HAHAHAHAHAHA...HAHAHA...HAHA...HA...Man I like you. XD. Okay, lets go over what you've said. Thanks to enjoying what i've added to the story so far. As for class, in my main game, my character is a dark knight, so I know what they can do. It would go with the 'will he go evil' thing, but I first have to get to level 10, like, 2 times to be a dark knight, i think... I can't remember, and besides you said to go sorcerer first, so whatever. And, also, NEVER SAY NO TO NOWI. I love you for that. Nowi is my favorite XD. But anyway, my friend threatened to call the police for me marrying a 1000 year old dragon girl that looks like she's 10 on my main game, so, I probably won't marry her again... in this fanfic. I'll probably make a new game just to marry her again XD. Anyway... As for Gaius... Let me tell you something. Gaius. Lon'qu. Donnel. They are my favorite males in the game. THEY ARE MY BOYS! Anyway, so yeah, Gais, lon'qu, and Donnel will always be awesome. Forever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever.

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CHAPTER 10 - To Take A Fortress, Part Two

P.S. I will now include what the chapter is called in the actual chapter.

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"Halt! Who goes there?!" Yelled out the enemy comander, when we finished getting into place.

"In the name of House Ylisse, I seek audience with the khans!" Yelled back Chrom.

"Not another step, my bold lad! I've lancers at the ready!"

"Hold, milady! We are not your enemy!" Yelled Frederick. "Exalt Emmeryn herself sent us to discuss matters of mutual interest."

"My only interest is keeping you out of Regna Ferox, brigand!"

"B-brigand? Now see here-"

"You think you are the first "Ylisseans" to try and cross our border? I have the authority to fell such impostors where they stand."

"How dare you! You are in the presence of Prince Chrom, the exalt's own blood!"

"Ha! Yes, indeed- and I'm the queen of Valm! (A/N Oh, the irony in that!) "You do realize impersonating royalty is a capital offense, yes? Mmm... Then perhaps we should settle this the Feroxi way. You claim to be the prince of Ylisse? Then prove it on the battlefield!"

"Rgh... Emmeryn won't like this at all..." Said Chrom, distraught. "Please. good lady! If you'd just listen-"

"I've heard quite enough! Attack!"

Suddeny, four knights threw four javelins down upon Chrom, who threw his arm infront of him, trying to shield himself from the deadly attack. Before the javelins impaled Chrom, a blur sped past him, making him disappear and the javelins to safely hit the ground. Up into the sky, Chrom went, riding on the back of a pegasus! And not only that, it was the same pegasus that Sumia calmed down!

Without turning around, Sumia spoke to Chrom. "Better hold on tight! Could get bumpy."

"Uh... right." Chrom said, a bit nervous to be so high up into the air.

Turning around, Sumia flashed him a smile. "You'll be fine." She promised.

Seeing the knights prepare to throw another volley of javelins, Chrom went on alert, pulling out his sword, Falchion. "Sumia!"

"Right!" She then turned the pegasus around and landed back down where we were, avoiding the range of the javelins. When the pegasus landed on the ground, Sumia turned back to Chrom. "Oh, Captain, I'm so relieved I made it in time."

"That goes double for me, Sumia! And this- is this the same ornery pegasus we met on the road?!" Chrom asked her.

"Oh, she's a sweetheart, isn't she?... Once you really get to know her..."

"Well, many thanks to you both."

"Hehe!" Lissa giggled. "I think the pegasus is blushing!"

"And I think we had all best focus on the situation at hand!" Reminded Frederick.

"Chrom, they're coming!" I warned him.

"All right. The Feroxi way it is!" Said Chrom, jumping off of Sumia's pegasus.

"Okay, we have another unit, so let me quickly change our strategy." I called out to everyone. "Really, everything will be the same, but this time, Sumia will be going with Chrom, as well as Frederick. I wish you three luck. Stahl, Sully, Virion! You're coming with me. Lissa, remember: stay in the middle, where you can reach both sides in case of emergency!" Me, Stahl, Virion, Miriel and Sully took off to the right, while Chrom, Frederick, and Sumia went left.

(A/N To simplify things, I will only tell you what happens on Charles's side. Besides, I have to finish quickly, so I don't want to drag things too on for too long!)

"Virion, with Sully. I want you two to get the soldier farthest away from us! Stahl, Attack the archer right next to him! Me and Miriel will get the other soldier! Let's go!" I said, calling out to them.

I ran forward with Miriel and opening my tome, I blasted the soldier with thunder. Miriel joined in on the attack and blasted the same soldier with flames, which ended his life. Sully rode forward, wielding her iron lance, with Virion right behind her, trying his best to keep up with a cavelier. Sully, stabbed the soldier through the shoulder with her lance, but it didn't kill him. Virion shot an arrow at him, but he easily ducked out of the way of the arrow. He then, slashed his lance through the air, and cut through the front of Sully's horse, wounding her quite a bit, but she remained standing. Stahl rode towards the archer and slashed at him with his sword as he rode past. The sword cut through his shoulder, but didn't finish him. Feroxi soldiers were kinda tough. The soldier that Sully attacked, changed his course and ran towards Stahl from behind. The soldier crept closer to him quietly, but I saw him first.

"Stahl, behind you!" I called out to him. I would've attacked him, but I wasn't in range. Being caught off guard, Stahl was stabbed by the enemy's lance, but he reacted instantly, swinging his sword down at the soldier. But the soldier merely danced away from his sword. Then the mercenary attacked Stahl. Swinging his sword from one side to the other, the mercenary dropped close to the ground, in a crouch. The stored energy in the crouch gave the soldier the strength to jump at Stahl with tremendous speed, plus Stahl was caught off guard by the multiple enemies attacking him from every direction. The soldier, slashed Stahl in the midcalf, sending him falling off his horse. The soldier approached him to finish the job, but Stahl quickly got up and swung his sword with all his might at the soldier, cutting through his shoulder armor. The soldier fell down from the sudden attack, and Stahl advanced on him, albeit, a lot slower. Suddenly, the archer that Stahl attacked launched an arrow into Stahl's shoulder, making him drop his sword in surprise. Suddenly without a weapon and wounded quite badly, Stahl turned around and jumped back onto his horse, ready to retreat. The mercenary got back up and ran at Stahl, who was trying to turn his horse around to get out of danger.

Coming out of nowhere, I cut off the mercenary's attack by slashing at his throat with my bronze sword. The mercenary was able to dodge my blow, but I continued attacking to buy Stahl time to retreat back to where Lissa was.

"Thank you!" Stahl called out to me as he retreated. I nodded towards him and he rode away from the battle. I swung my sword at the mercenary, but the mercenary's experience made him able to dodge each of my blows effortlessly. However, I was able to dodge his as well. Thanks to Miriel, who had her tome opened, the mercenary didn't try any attack that could leave himself open, but he still had his hands full trying to make sure that I was between him and Miriel. Sensing what he was doing, I slashed at his left side, but then stepped over to my right, leaving him exposed to Miriel's attack, if it came. Sensing the danger, he stepped to his left and got back infront of me, but I foresaw that move and my sword bit through his left arm. In a fit of rage, the mercenary spun around and slashed at my face, but I was able to move back enough so that the sword only cut my cheek a little bit.

Stahl got far enough away from most of the enemy units, but one was still able to chase after him. Seeing what could happen, Sally turned her horse around, and rode infront of the soldier that could reach him, to block the path. The soldier was running after Stahl, but stopped when Sully jumped infront of him with her horse and Virion, though Virion was a bit worn out from trying to keep up with a horse. The soldier hesitated a little bit, and that was all that Sully needed. She then made her horse speed up and she stabbed right through the soldier's chest, ending his life. Back to where Stahl was, Lissa was healing his wounds, but he won't be able to join the battle right away. I turned towards the mercenary and striked out with him with my sword. He managed to dodge the first swing, but when I used the weight and momentum of my sword to spin me around, he couldn't dodge the kick that came with the spin. He was knocked to the ground in Miriel's range. When he shook his head and opened his eyes, he instantly remembered about Miriel and he looked towards where he last saw her. But instead saw a big red fire ball heading his way. Eyes widening, he tried to get out of the way, but he was too late and he was burnt to a crisp.

The archer shot an arrow towards Sully and Virion, but they managed to dodge out of the way. Virion shot an arrow back at him, and the archer was hit in the head. A perfect headshot. With that, we then headed back to where Lissa was healing Stahl.

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"Is everybody alright?" Asked Chrom.

"Yeah." I said. "Thanks to Lissa. Stahl was the most injured and Sully was also hurting, but now they're in perfect shape."

"Okay then. What is our next strategy, tactician?"

"Hm. Was there a key that you picked up over on your side?" I asked Chrom, thinking hard about our next strategy.

"Now that you mention it, I think Frederick picked one up."

"That I did, milord." Said Frederick, confirming what Chrom said.

"Okay. We picked up a key over on our side aswell. So, we'll split into two groups, let's see, who to go with who..." Looking over everybody, I had a sudden feeling that somebody was standing right next to me. Looking over to my left, I saw a big guy wearing big armor. "Woah!" I shouted out, taking a few steps back. "Is that an enemy?!"

Chrom looked over to what I saw, and after a few seconds, he stopped me from taking out my tome. "No, no! That is just Kellam; he's a member of the shepherds aswell."

"O-oh, really? W-well, nice to meet you Kellam."

"You too." Said Kellam.

"Well, anyway, I want Chrom, Frederick, Sumia, Miriel, and Kellam to go to the left entrance. Frederick will open the door, and Miriel will hit the knight that is beyond the door. Thanks to Sumia, I know that there is a knight on both sides, so Lissa, Virion, Sully, Stahl, and me will go to the door on the right. Sully will open the door, and I'll use thunder on the knight. Then after that, use your best judgement to get through the top level, okay?"

"Okay. Let's go!" Said Chrom, psyched to end this battle.

(A/N At this point, I got bored so I went and ate sphagetti. :P )

After we reached our positions behind the door, I had Stahl be by Sully, me behind them, Lissa with me, and Virion in the back. On my signal, Sully unlocked the door and I ran through with Lissa, with my thunder tome open in my hands. When I saw the knight, I activated the tome and yellow magic circles appeared around me, generating electricity (A/N It is actually raining outside, with the few flashes of lightning, so it kinda fits in what I am writing right now). "Thunder!" I shouted and a ball of lightning striked the knight, killing him thanks to his low resistance. With that, Virion ran to the front, covering me with his bow, incase there was more enemies next to the door. Since there wasn't, Virion moved out of the way and we all streamed past the door. On the other side of the fortress, I could barely see Chrom and his team pour out of that door aswell.

A mercenary appeared out from the snow and charged at me. He must've heard my magic, or the sound of people moving across the fortress. Either way, he attacked me with his iron sword and I pulled out my bronze one, prepared to fight. He swung his sword to the side and got into stance. He jumped towards me and spun around, slashing the air infront of me. If I had gone forward, then I might've been blinded! The blade slashed right in front of my eyes. With his back turned to me, mid-spin, I stabbed forward, but he used the slippery ground to "accidently" slip past my sword. He then grabbed the ground with one arm and spun his body around, kicking my feet out from under me. I fell down and he easily got up and pointed his sword down at me. Was this the end?

'Whahahaha! I can't really have you dying yet, boy!' Said a malicious voice from out of nowhere. Suddenly, everything around me started to slow down. It was as if... time was no longer moving. What was this? ''This'' Said the voice, which was Haze. 'Is part of my magic. I've just sped you up, is all. Now, go whack him a few times! Hahahaha!' The voice soon faded away. I quickly got up from the ground and stabbed the mercenary through the throat, killing him. Then everything started moving at the same speed as before and I felt something different. My head. It was banging against my skull! Grabbing my head, I went to the ground, in pain. After a few moments, the pain went away. Getting back up, I noticed Sully, Stahl, and Viron finishing up with the other enemy units that came to meet us.

"Now, let's get the enemy commander!" I yelled out, earning a few roars and cheers. We all started moving forward, and soon enough, my group and Chrom's group surrounded the enemy commander.

"Hey, Charles!" He called out to me. "A nice plan you put together; there wasn't much resistance when we came up here with these members."

"Heh, thanks." I said, laughing a little. "But the battle isn't over yet." We turned towards the enemy commader. Chrom drew his rapier and stepped forward. (A/N SHIT I accidenly pressed B so, when I selected Chrom to attack Ramia, I accidenly attacked with the falchion XD I'm such a newb) Chrom ran forward and slashed at the enemy commander's tough armor, but his rapier cut threw it fairly easy. I followed his attack by casting a thunder attack on the enemy, stunning her for a few moments as the lightning coursed through her body. Kellam went forward and stabbed with his iron lance, and the enemy commader was pushed back a few steps. Sully then drove in with her iron lance and stabbed it through the armor, and out the other side. The enemy commander fell down to a knee and fell to the ground.

"Then your claims were... true..." She said before she fell unconcious.

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An hour later and the enemy commander woke up. Lissa had healed most of her wounds, so she was pretty okay. "A thousand apologies, Prince Chrom. I truly took you for brigand impostors. But no frauds could ever wage a battle as you just have! I will send word of your arrival to the capital and escort you there personally."

"That would be most appreciated, thank you." Said Chrom, nodding his head. Raimi, the enemy commander, then walked away.

"Amazing." I said after she had gone. "Her whole demeanor changed."

"Right. In Ferox, strength speaks louder than words. I should have known better than to overestimate the value of diplomacy here..." Said Frederick, shaking his head a bit.

"So can we get going, Chrom?" Lissa asked her brother.

"Yes, it's not getting any warmer." Replied Chrom as he started to walk after Raimi.

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Welcome to the find out more about the character Charles show! Staring... CHARLES!

Charles: Hey guys. First time we're doing this, so let's keep it simple.

Kuro: Yeah, if its not simple, nobody will understand. There are some slow people out there in the world...

Charles: Right. So let's start with the most simple one. Okay. Kuro's name is acutually Charles. And he used it for the name of his first Awakening character, and this one!

Kuro: No, my name is Lawrence.

Charles: Ignore Kuro, uh, I mean Charles. His "middle" name is Lawrence.

Kuro: Lol baka. You just said to ignore Charles, and your name is Charles.

Charles: Uh, well. Um... That's all for now folks! See you next time!

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And now back to your regular scheduled program.

What did you think of that short segment? Well, anyway, thank you for reading and all that. Please have a wonderful day, just like me. Please favorite, follow, and review, if you enjoyed and PEACE!

Looking at this right now, apparently fire emblem awakening does NOT use friend codes for this! I was gonna give out my friend code, but apparently it wouldn't work anyway!

*Sigh* Well, whatever. I don't receive any street pass teams anyway because I don't bring my 3ds out where ever I go. So maybe I should start bringing it... Oh, and I do have wifi, but since I don't get any teams with that, I definetly DO have to bring my 3ds everywhere for now on! This is just so stupid... if I could get teams from spotpass, or wifi, or whatever, then my life would be a whole lot easier. Now I have to bring my 3ds EVERYWHERE. Which is alright :D but then again, I dont really go anywhere... DAMMIT! :(

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The making of this chapter has gone through quite a lot actually. I accidenly kept going to my main save, three times in a row, because I messed up the order of my troops in the battle. Then, what's more, an enemy had a crit on Chrom and killed him. Then I lost Miriel because I put her in a wrong spot, then Charles kept dying because of my stupidity, and UGH! I'm just so unlucky :( Nothing ever goes my way... Anyway, I was also interrupted a LOT, so the amount of time I spent writing this went down and down and down. This was supposed to be out yesterday! Or the day before... either way, It's here now.

Pleae review, follow, and favorite if you enjoyed. PEACE!