If you haven't already checked my biography for this, here it is.

I reread the story and I gotta say, I really don't like it haha. I cringed at how unbelievably cheesy it was and I made parts too descriptive to the point where it was boring. I fluffed up paragraphs to where it was intimidating to read all that useless stuff plus the story got confusing. So, yeah. I'm redoing it haaa. Let me know if I should publish a whole completely new story or just delete chapters and rewrite it from there. I would go along the original idea but improve it.
The story is basically my take after the game. I want to focus it more on Dark Pit and the idea of Viridi continuing her plans of wiping out the humans. For some goshdarn reason, Pandora is my favorite to write because of the character I developed throughout my stories; prankster-like, bad but good, etc. Anyways because of that I want to enforce her role in my second Kid Icarus. In the Kid Icarus realm Pandora is basically what Palutena is to Pit, a mother-like figure and goddess of whatnot. I didn't want to put Dark Pit under Viridi's even though it's what's hinted at in Smash Bros WHATEVER XD, mainly because I think Viridi already has Phosphora and Arlon and that Viridi is a baby goddess - not really being a mother-figure to Dark Pit at all. I still want that similarity between Dark Pit and Pit, and because I developed Pandora as one of my favorites as I mentioned before; again why and how? I have no idea.
Anyways since I have Kid Icarus 2 mainly about Dark Pit, I somehow wanted him to have a love interest? Why? Don't ask XD I think it came from the fact that I have Piridi getting it on. The forbidden love aspect is basically Pit can't be with Viridi because they're suppose to be enemies, I also didn't really portray it well so another thing to improve in the redo. Forbidden love for Dark Pit is how angels can't be with humans, sounds like some twisted twilight thing but don't worry. Aside from the romance drama and Viridi taking over, I'm having Hades awaken again because Medusa did so why the heck not amiright? Sounds like some basic cake BUT THINK AGAIN, I'm having three Pits. What? Three? Yes, Hero Pit, Dark Pit and Hades's creation Pit 3, named Sun- probs gonna change that. I'm basically telling the whole story of Forbidden Love, parts I haven't even gotten to. And yes this was all suppose to be in Forbidden Love, I had the whole idea laid out in front of me- I just put the pieces together wrong, basically the story got too confusing.
People got confused on Pandora's army of shadows and how there was two Pandoras. I was suppose to make her seem like she can't be trusted but in the end she just wants the best for her angel. What happened was... because Hades was waking up again, he called for the people of the dark. That includes Thanatos and Pandora. He thought they were on his side but really Thanatos is off doing his own things after the war and Pandora accepted her defeat. So while Hades is still weak, Pandora decides to inform Palutena and acts like a secret spy for the people of the light. Thus Pandora makes her own army but goes horribly wrong because she couldn't control them. Pandora's shadow links are basically from the Mirror thingy that made Dark Pit. She made a shadow of herself but it starting getting out of hand because of the fact that Pandora really cares for Dark Pit as a mother. Her army actually backfires because the shadows help Hades attain Viridi.
When Viridi's allies Arlon and Phosphora are taken, Hades goes for Viridi herself. And instead of locking her away he manipulates her to create what is, the Forces of Dark Nature. With that Hades begins to develop a new reset bomb with the goddess's powers. So yeah, everything is going terribly wrong right? It gets worse because Hades also takes advantage of the Shadow Army. Lady Palutena is locked up with Pit in her own palace because Pandora had no control of her army. But Dark Pit's humans come and save the day and finally the people of the light have an opportunity to strike back. They plan to have someone confront Hades, another to save Viridi, another to stop the reset bomb, and another to protect the palace and the humans.
Viridi is saved but then Hades captures Dark Pit's human love interest, Emma (probably going to change her name too) so the twin angels team up to fight against Hades. While they weaken him up, Emma's brother Day tried to unlock the cage while everyone is busy but then Hades's Pit 3 stops him. Pit 3 looks exactly like Pit and Dark Pit but with blond hair and purple eyes. Yeah I know, so original XD. Anyways Day tries his best to fight off Pit 3 with his flight shoes but ends up losing and falls through the sky. By this point Dark Pit and Emma are like flipping out, Pandora ends up going down to save the kid. Hades then introduces his secret creation and concludes that everyone is actually in the energy orb that Pit 3 is slowly gaining more power. Stuff happen and everyone is frozen (I am explaining this so good right now XD) in that floating island.
The story follows Daymein now and how he wakes up in the forest ten years later. Yes ten years. The human world is still destroyed because of the reset bomb and Bluebelle finds him (as you can tell I'm getting towards the end of the story and my ideas are running thin for right now. Really I'm throwing out the whole story from the top of my head) ANYWAYS Day and Bluebelle head back to their destroyed home city and they meet up with all of the humans introduced in the chapter - The Surface. Day tries to help the town but can't do it alone so Day's friends work together to fight off the remaining crazy shadow links and dark nature. Pandora then makes her appearance as Day's shadow, Day doesn't really remember the time with Emma and Dark Pit and the humans been telling the wrong history just rumors that developed over the years. So Pandora tells Day that she is a friend and that the war is not over until the Sun has set (ah see the pun there XD). Anyways Day with the help of Pandora and the other humans go back to the energy orb where they unfreeze the time and fight with the people of the light and ultimately end Hades and Sun. OH THAT WAS A LOT MORE THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE... ALSO I SHOULD JUST RENAME THIS BOOK OF PLOT TWISTS.

Anyways again, message me or review either you want to see this story play out or don't mind the redo or whatever. Or just review so I know who reads my stories, maaaan it's been forever XD