Comedic Love
Drabble #10
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Here is Marbles' drabble. It features Mush another great Newsie! I don't know how I typed this one up because I really had no clue what I could do because I don't write things with Mush a whole lot. I think that made this one a HUGE challenge for me. I hope it turned out at least a little funny. I never want to put someone's OC at the bad end of it because it's more fun putting a Newsie at the bad end of it just to give those clever OC's the upper hand. So I hope youse likes!


Marbles' Newsies Short

The Newsies had just been woken up by Kloppman and we're making their way to the wash area. Marbles need to use the bathroom but Mush wouldn't let her go.

"Move!" She screamed at him.

"Ask nicely," he teased.

"Mush, if youse don't move, I'll move ya meself!" She warned.

"Oh yeah?" He put his hands on his hips.

"Yeah," she stomped on his foot and moved passed him into the stall.

"Youse better hurry Marbles or youse gonna lose dem!" He yelled through the door.

"Lose what?" She yelled while sitting on the toilet.

"Dem marbles," he yelled.

"What marbles?" She smiled.

"In dat head o' yours!" He screamed.

She flushed the toilet and swung the door open almost hitting Mush in the face. He moved back a little bit and looked at her with fury in his eyes and she returned the look.

"Youse did dat on poipose!" He accused.

"So what if I'se did?" She shrugged.

She walked passed Mush again and he allowed her to. He caught a glimpse of white on Marbles and he looked slightly down and burst out laughing.

"What?" She snapped around.

Mush couldn't help but point and laugh. She looked in the direction he was pointing and gave a little blush and fixed her skirt. Then she turned back to Mush.

"I s'pose you ain't gonna fix yours, are ya?" She asked pointing at his shorts.

Mush looked down and blushed hard. His shorts were down around his ankles, exposing his undershorts. He bent over and pulled them up so fast he flew backwards and got stuck in the toilet.

"Serves ya righ' for laughin' at a goil like me," she blew him a kiss and bounded off.

The End