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Longer chapter hopefully:
Chapter 10
Max POV
Max your life is anything but predictable
Great, just when I thought Han Solo was going solo he returned to tell me some pile of mumbo jumbo.
Maximum this is really important
The sudden use of my full name startled me, voice had not used that in a while. But before I could do much as snarl 'oh yeah' I heard a thump and 2 small-ish lumps hit my middle. So I looked down, and let me tell you voice I knew who it would be... Angel and Nudge and oh funny, how predictable of me.
'Maxxxxxxxx' No way they were not going to start as well!
'Yes Honey?'
'We missed you, but like you were sleeping and sleeping and just sleeping and it got so boring. I mean yeah we can wait but not like for 5 hours, cause we were all getting hungry but Fang did not want to leave, so we decided to not go near that house thing and see if we could find another but we couldn't and then Iggy had this idea about bombs or something and then Gazzy saw you walking along with Fang and thought it would be funny to make you angry and then.....'
Right gold star to anyone who can guess who that was!?
'Nudge, shush'
Personally I was surprised that Iggy hadn't put his hand over her mouth by now, cause normally that is his job. Last time Fang and I did that she licked us both and then bit us pretty hard, she only seems to put up with Ig for some reason.......
Speaking of Iggy, where was he?!
BOOOM BA BA BOOOOOOOOOM
What in the name of holy birds was that?
I looked at Fang, who looked at me, who looked at Gazzy, who looked at Nudge who looked at Angel and simultaneously all shouted 'IGGY!'
Except I did not just leave it there
'Iggy you pig, what are you doing? How many times have I told you no bombs? Where do you keep them anyway? Stashed in your underpants!? Iggy get here now!' and yeah I know what you are thinking Yes Mother, but seriously that boy had some issues, how can he even see what he is blowing up when he is blind?!
'Max, I am right here no need to shout' I wheeled round to find Iggy sitting comfortably on a rock, laying on his back and well not looking exactly, more like staring blindly at the sky.
'Ig? Was that not you?'
'Nope'
'Then who was it?'
'Well it's more of a something you see, it was a bomb Max, and bombs don't generally have people names or do people things so they are not really a someone. If you were to ask who was behind it then it would have made more sense but you didn't'
How is it that someone who is blind and younger than me by a little bit can be so sneaky? I guess I taught him well. But I sighed and played along anyway.
'Ok Ig, were you behind the explosion?'
'Well no Max I was sat right here!' he replied smugly, why the little..
'Iggy it was you who made the bomb was it not?' Fang cut in and was holding me back as I had my hands stretched out before me just about to strangle Iggy.
'Why yes Fang, yes it was'
'And you made the bomb explode? Or put a timer on it?'
'Yes I made the bomb explode by using a timing device'
'Well then all sorted' Fang looked at me as if to say that's all you had to do and I whacked him upside the head, stupid cool logic.
'Not all sorted guys, Iggy why did you want to blow something up?'
'Max' Angel looked at me with her bambi eyes, oh great
'Yes Sweetie?'
'I told Iggy to blow it up, because it is going to be important to us for the next couple of days, before we find out where we are and who is living here and stuff'
Well Ok, uhm is it not funny how a seven year old can know all these things before you do? Even when you are supposed to be a good leader and well...... lead?
'What was it exactly that you wanted blown up?'
'Oh well that's easy I can show you'
With that Angel started marching forward and Gazzy, Nudge and Iggy all stepped into line behind her, I just stared at Fang confused and feeling a little dejected as leader, but Fang grabbed my hand, held it tight and whispered
'don't worry Max'. I gave him a small smile, before we joined the back of the queue, so to speak, hand in hand.
Right then a little fluffy head stuck his head out of Iggy's backpack and bellowed
'I sure am hungry guys, what's for lunch?'
I can tell you that what came next no one could have predicted.
Oh was that longer? Next chapter will be even longer, I think I need to add some more action into the story it has been lacking some so far. But this mystery will soon be solved and Max and Flock will be safe in no time, ahem, yeah right!
Oh for anyone who has not read this other fanfic, there was a message that the new Maximum Ride book is out March 10th Next year and if you want to look it up on Wiki then look up:
Fang a Maximum Ride novel
It's going to be a good one.
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