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Two more moons go past, Ashpaw had thought about becoming Medicine cat every day. It was one of the only things she could do for her clan.
At the next half moon, Cloverspirit goes with Ashpaw to the moonpool, where the Ashpaw will fully become a medicine cat apprentice.
"Is it your wish to enter the mysteries of StarClan as a medicine cat?" Cloverspirit asks Ashpaw in a formal tone.
"It is." Ashpaw mewed excitedly.
"Then come forward."
"Warriors of StarClan, I present you with this apprentice. Ashpaw has chosen the path of a medicine cat. Grant her your wisdom and insight so that she may understand your ways and heal her Clan in accordance with your will." Cloverspirit looked down at the moonpool.
Ashpaw touches her nose to the she and Cloverspirit lay down and almost immediately fall asleep.
Ashpaw woke to a movement beside her. She turned to see herself in a grassy field with a gray tabby pelt that she immediately recognized, Shellflower.
"Young one, you have chosen your path as a medicine cat." Shellflower almost whispers.
"Three of four will die, one of four will rise, the clans will turn to ash."Shellflower fades.
Ashpaw feels the cold air of the cave on her pelt. She lifts her head, she sees Cloverspirit waking beside her.
They walk home silent, both having something on their minds.
Ashpaw replays the words in her head, over and over,
'Three of four will die, one of four will rise, the clans will turn to ash.'
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