Elven Hero

by Angel of spring

harry must deal with the tri-wizard tournament all well trying to make his bond with Draco stronger. DracoxHarry; SeamusxColinxDean; OliverxPercy, and many others. Dumbledore, Molly, Ron, and Hermione bashing. Good Snape and Malfoy's. WARNING mention of abuse and suicidal thoughs and suicide attempt. Some mild Dark theme's present read at own risk. higher rating for later.

10. HIATUS

So in response to this review:

(Help: you desperately need a beta to proof read this for you. I love the concept and the ideas going through it but it needs editing. Spelling is off as well as grammar. Also you need to pick a point of view. Jumping from person to person like that will make someone dizzy. Either pick the point of view of one person or use third person. Again I like this sorry but it needs a lot of work.)

So first of, may I say that I have in fact had a beta before who stole my work from me. I self-edit due to not wanting this situation to happen again and if I miss somethings I apologize; I am actually scared to the point of almost panicking when other people edit my work because I am scared it will get stolen again. I write in the style that I wish to write in and if that involves multiple points of view then that is how it is. If you truly do not like my style I am not forcing you to read it. Saying sorry does not help me feel better that you have basically told me that my work is a piece of garbage. Due to this I am going on somewhat of a Hiatus for an undetermined amount of time until I feel comfortable enough to post another chapter of the elven hero.