Gale is Jack's so called sister, needed her in the chapter but I'm pretty sure she's not real! Just so your not confused, Jesse is the name of the sensei of the Black Dragons. I don't know his name, so this is what I called him.

Jack's Mom's POV

Where are you Jack? I really miss you. Come home, please come home. Please come home safe.

"Mommy?" said a voice from outside my bedroom.

"Yes Gale?" I called she walked inside and gave me a hug.

"When's Jack going to be home?" she asked. I sighed.

"Soon, sweetie. Soon."

Kim POV

Milton and I were walking down the railroad tracks. We didn't expect to find Jack here, but we were hoping to find an idea of where they went. Footprints, sign of a struggle, anything to help us find him.

"See anything?" I asked.

"No, hey, wait, is that a hole?" he asked pointing. I looked and it was a hole. I got a spark of faith. I ran over to the hole.

"Wait, Kim!" he whispered grabbing my arm.

"What?" I asked.

"Keep it down. If Jack is down there, Jesse will be there too. And maybe this is what he wants us do. Both go in the same way so he can escape another way." She said. I hate to say it, but it made sense.

"Okay, you go in here; I'll find another way in." I said. Milton nodded and jumped into the hole. I started looking around for another possible entrance. I was walking for what seemed like ever, and then I saw another hole.

I jumped in. The cave was long. But I did see a hint of light very far back, probably from the hole Milton went in.

I should hurry up. If he has Jesse cornered but needs help, he might get away.

I walked a little faster. I was excited, I'm gonna find Jack. I'm going to get reunited with my hero.

And I didn't even care that I called him my hero. He truly was and I didn't really care who said otherwise, because he was MY, hero.

It was almost like a song. Jack is my hero, Jack is my hero, hi-ho- the hero-oh, Jack is my hero. I would have felt like a complete idiot for saying that, but at that point, I didn't care.

Then I heard footsteps. I smiled and started running. I ran into someone, and we started fighting.

'When did Jesse get so skinny?'

"Milton?" I said.

"Kim?" he said.

"Awwww, I thought you were Jesse!" we both screamed.

"Come on, let's get out of this cave. It reminds me too much of Jesse and how I HATE him, and don't you forget that." I laughed. We starting going back toward where I came in because it was closer.

"So where do you want to…"

"Milton, look!" I screamed, pointing down at the ground. There were footsteps. Two pairs. So that meant that Jack walked. Maybe Jesse isn't torturing him after all.

"Let's follow them!" I screamed, and ran ahead. We followed the footsteps back into town. Where the path cut off to the sidewalk there was a candy wrapper. A Twix, candy wrapper.

"EDDDDDIIIIEEEE!" I screamed at the top of my lungs.

Jerry POV

On my way to Jack's house. Ready for step three of my master plan. Step one, practice pressure Two, pressure point Rudy. Step Three, pressure point Jack's family.

"Hello, Jerry, have you heard?" Jack's mom asked. I could see her eyes were red and puffy, so she must have been crying. Her tone of voice was sad and worried.

"Yes, and I just wanted to know if you heard anything." I asked trying to keep a straight face.

"No, I'm really worried. Could it have been anything we would have done?" She asked.

"Oh no, Jack loves you both. Plus, he would have told me. Can I go up to his room? You know, see if there's any clues of where he might be?" I asked.

"Oh, sure, do your best." Jack's mom stepped aside and I walked in.

I went half way up the stairs and planned it perfectly. Jack's mom was doing dishes and Gale was asleep. Jack's mom first. I carefully walked downstairs, making sure not to make any noise. I pressure pointed Jack's mom and she fell backwards. I caught her and dragged her up the stairs to her room. I put her on the bed and walked into Gale's room. She was fast asleep so it was hard to make sure I wouldn't step on anything, and make noise to wake her up. I got over to her bed without a sound. I pressure pointed her and walked out of the room, less carefully, making much noise. I was walking down the stairs when there was a loud crash in Jack's bedroom. I ran back up the stairs, and slammed through the door.

Who I saw inside, was a total shock.

If anyone has any suggestions, on how to make my story more understandable, please tell me nicely, and add a smiley face or two, so I know you're trying to be nice. :) And if you have any comments, concerns, or questions, tell me too, and I know I slipped up and accidently said Sarah and Ethan once or twice, I'm writing a mbav Fanfic and its stuck in my mind, so are the names, so I'm sorry, and yeah, I based this story off of the mbav Fanfic, but the chapter that occurs right before the park scene in chapter one, is going to be totally different from the mbav, promise, :)