Lies of the Mind
Hello people! This is my first fanfic! I hope all goes well! Enjoy!
Wow! Sorry for taking so long! I'm finally in the running stretch and I can update more now (In case you didn't notice, I uploaded a new story and a new chapter of Blessed Curse. check 'em out!)
Name: Lies of the mind
Summary: Syaoran has a beautiful wife, Raena, and a beautiful daughter, Sakura. But when sudden memories take over him, He won't treat Sakura as just a daughter. Slowly he realizes the lies of a mind. (S+S)
Ages: Sakura: 17
Syaoran:19
Raena: 34
Disclaimer: I do not own Cardcaptor Sakura (CLAMP)
Raena is mine
Reviews:
Everyone: yes I mean EVERYONE! Not people who are called everyone. Plz read the notes below kay? Arigatou!
Lynne102: Thanx! Put seriously, I took a LONG time this time and I'm so sorry!
The cherry tree: Lol! Of course you can join! Dagger it is!
Kimmygoldenangel: Thank you! And for sure she'll die!
Crystal-Magnolia: I suppose so, but under the circumstances of your best friend in horrible danger, I thought maybe they would've just gone to get it over with so they had time to save Sakura. (lol long sentence!) Thank you!
Secrets Of a Brokin Heart Emmie: XD I understand how you feel! Yeah you can join! Mini Daggers seem nice!
Pinaygrrl: …anonymous people? What do you mean? Lol sure you can join! But… what weapon do you want to use?
Thereviewergirl: nice name! lol yes, this time it was even longer! So sorry! Hm… you'll see about them teaming up…
Hikari Blaze: I hope not! Then Sakura would go ballistic on you and maybe even kill you! Lol!
Cheerysakura88: You'll see soon. That sounds like a great Idea!
CHOMP-YOO: LOL GRRREAT NAME! thank you!
Evanescence-luver: Hey! Nice! I'm a fan of Evanescence too! (Oct 3 new album! EEEE!) I remember that photoshoot! It was a pretty good picture! I liked it too!
NOTE 1: So far there is six members in the club! Join anytime! For any questions about the club just review! Below are the people who've joined:
Cherrysakura88: Sharp glass
Death is waiting: weapon not confirmed yet
Kimmygoldenangel: a trusty sword!
Lynne102: sharp ring
Pinaygrrl: weapon not confirmed yet
The Cherry Blossom Artist: Syaoran's sword
The cherry tree: Dagger
Secrets Of a Brokin Heart Emmie: Mini daggers
Walking Green Cucumber: SUUUUPER DUUUPER sharp knife!
(the guest appearances will happen alphabetically and will be two at a time if there's too many members)
NOTE 2: Yes, as I have mentioned in some reviews above, I will set up a club called Scissors-Bring-Death-to-Raena-Club. What the people who have decided to join get to do is stab Raena when I have guest space. Added bonus is that I will make a bonus chapter made for the members just to stab Raena with scissors or other pointy things. If you want to join plz tell me whenever okay? (oh and mention what item you want to stab her with.) Just review that you want to join!
NOTE 3: I have made a new FANFICTION! It's called "Blessed Curse" and is a fantasy genre. So go and check it out if you want!
NOTE 4: I am making a new fanfic! It's called house of broken dolls! A summary:
Because Yelan's empire has been destroyed, she gives Syaoran to an old man, and a life-size doll collector. Syaoran works at his house in exchange for money, but when he sees the man's most precious doll, Sakura, come to life, she gives him a warning, a chance to escape the man's twisted house of dolls.
NOTE 5: I have made a new One Shot! My first one shot called "A story to tell" Please read it and tell me what you think!
NOTE 6: Since Death is Waiting seems like she's no longer reading, KIMMYGOLDENANGEL IS NEXT! Tell me what you want to do!
Expect the Unexpected Right? Right…
Sakura wandered through the halls of Toemeda high school, wondering what happened to her friends. They were there for a moment, and then just disappeared!
Maybe she should worry, and look for them. The flower decided she had to look, but suddenly, Ame, a Taki follower, came up to her.
With cold eyes, Sakura questioned, "What have you done with my friends and what do you want?"
Ame made a tsking noise, "My dear Cherry Blossom! Why would I ever hurt you? Your friends are safe, and I'm here to say…"
Ame gripped Sakura by her hair and pulled HARD. It took all of Sakura's strength not to scream out loud.
"Like I was saying…" Ame grinned happily, "I just wanted to say, you're a bitchy whore who doesn't deserve Syaoran…"
Rage fueled Sakura, ready to burst out and burn Ame to nothing, but she wasn't finished.
"He's better off with Taki, since you have that insane Pycho Raena after you…." Ame's voice drifted off, as if she was bored.
Sakura's eye's widened as she screamed, "WHAT DID YOU SAY!"
SLAP
Half the students turned around surprised. There Sakura was, towering over Ame on the ground filled with so much rage, you could nearly see it. On the ground, Ame started crying. In hiccupping sobs, she stuttered out, "Why…? What did I do to you? Why did you steal my beloved Syaoran!"
"Huh…?" was the only thing Sakura could utter out.
Ame looked at her once again, "You… you stole MY Syaoran! You deceived me! I was your best friend!"
That was true. Once, long time ago, Ame was friends with Sakura. And she visited her at the orphanage with Tomoyo and rest. But when Syaoran started coming, Ame set her sights on him, eventually is was obvious he only loved Sakura.
The students became even more shocked at this revelation.
Sakura stole Syaoran from Ame?
I thought Sakura was such a nice girl
I always suspected something was wrong with Sakura and Syaoran…
Ame told me this before! I didn't believe her, but maybe she's right!
Sakura was horrified. THIS was Taki's real trap! The teenagers began to crowd around Sakura and Ame. Sakura frantically looked around, not spotting any help.
"No! no!" Sakura quickly tried to say as they crowded around her, "That's not true! I never did anything to hurt Ame!"
Taki emerged from the crowd with a pained look on her face as she soothed and coaxed the crying Ame. She took her hand and began to lead Ame away, but she turned suddenly and cried out, "Look at Ame! If you had ANY doubts about Sakura! Now you know! The liar.." Taki spat out, "The BOYFRIEND-stealer!"
The girls around Sakura began jabbing fingers at her yelling out things
Is this why Hiroshima always says he's busy?
My boyfriend ignores my calls because of you!
You're sooo nice Sakura-chan! I never thought this is why Soushi never looks at me anymore!
Bitch!
Slut!
Whore!
You're disgusting!
The boys began muttering among themselves too
Ame's hurt because of you?
You led me on! I thought you were such a nice girl!
I can never believe I liked you, Sakura!
You tricked all of us!
Sakura was cornered, how could she worm out of this? Like the saying goes.
If you see a wounded goat and a lion next to it, you would assume the lion hurt the goat.
If you see a crying Ame and an angry Sakura next to her, you would assume Sakura hurt Ame.
The falling blossom didn't dare to cry out, because she knew she would be shot down. She couldn't cry, because she knew they'd mock her.
She couldn't do anything
As anger and rage grew in the group that was encircling Sakura, someone shouted out
Take her into a room! Let's rip that pretty so-called innocent face of hers!
The group roared in agreement and began to grab at Sakura. With tears in her eyes, she screamed, "SYAAAAAAOOOOORANNNNN!"
The group spat her, "BITCH! Syaoran won't help you! You're all alone!"
…………art room………….
Eriol struggled awake and saw his fallen friends. The welt on Mei Lin's forehead was growing by seconds, and Tomoyo's eyes were swollen from crying. It took him a few seconds to realize she was awake.
"Tomoyo….." His voice was cracking because he just woke up.
The ebony haired girl's eyes opened wide, "Eriol-kun? You're awake! Oh thank God! I called Syaoran, but… I don't know if he can do anything…."
"It's okay. I'm sure my dear cousin will come soon," Eriol paused and tried to move. He was bound tightly, "Do you have anything that can cut through?"
Tomoyo thought for a moment, and then remembered, "Oh! I have a pair of sewing scissors just incase I left the other pair at home. Eriol, if you can just squirm over here, I can untie you."
After a few moment of shuffling, Tomoyo managed to cut his binds off. They helped Mei Lin unto a chair and cut her ties too. After inspecting the bruise on her head, Eriol and Tomoyo began to think of ways to get out of the locked room.
"We could break through the window…" Tomoyo suggested
"No. The glass is reinforced with that metal netting in between the glasses remember?" Eriol reminded her.
"Oh yeah…. Maybe we cou-" Tomoyo started, but was suddenly cut off by loud crashing.
The glass on every window in the art room shattered, and in came Syaoran, cutting off the metal netting with a knife.
Tomoyo nearly fainted with relief when she saw him.
Sakura's going to be okay…Syaoran will never stop... never stop until she is safe…
Never stop…
"Where is Sakura!" Syaoran panted.
Eriol smiled, "In the hallway of building B."
………Hallway…….
Sakura whimpered. A million hands, a million hands were grabbing at her.. ripping her clothes, her hair out. Punching her, scrapping her. It wasn't the cuts that hurt, but her heart. A whole tide of people could turn on anyone in a second. It only took planning, little planning, and they became the minions of Taki.
Syaoran…
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BAM
"DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH HER!"
A…a voice..? is there more…? More coming?
"Who the hell are you talking about? This bitch? We're teaching her a lesson!"
Thousands of cries followed that sentence
"HOW DARE YOU CALL HER A BITCH!"
Who is that, coming to save me? Are my ears lying to me? Nobody is coming to save me…
Sakura blacked out
The hallway was a mess of students, wondering who could this defender possibly be. Syaoran stood erect, his eyes blazing with anger.
"I'M TAKING HER BACK HOME!" He cried
"She HAS no home, stupid! She's a bitchy little whore in the orphanage!" a girl answered.
"Who are ya anyway? Why would someone save this bitch?" Soushi laughed.
"My name is Syaoran…" Syaoran answered, his voice was dangerously calm, "Sakura has a home… WITH ME!"
Soushi was surprised, "Huh? Didn't she steal you from Ame?"
"…Who's Ame? I never heard about her in my whole entire life!" Syaoran answered, puzzled
"What? We've been double crossed!" Nami, a girl in Sakura's class asked, her voice shaking.
"Yes, you most certainly have…" a voice said, at the end of the hallway
At the end, there stood Eriol, his black eye swelling, and Tomoyo, who had a bleeding cheek. Mei Lin came limping in, rubbing her head and cursing to herself.
"Man! What happened to you guys? Do you get beat up by a gang or something?" someone asked loudly.
Tomoyo laughed sourly, "More like Taki's gang…"
"So she had tricked us! Oh my god! What have we done to Sakura!" Nami began to cry.
Students began to freak out. They had just hurt a fellow classmate. An innocent victim. Will they be expelled? Will they get into trouble? Panic followed them. Girls began to cry, and boys began to run for the nearest exit.
Soushi gently picked up Sakura, and gave her to Syaoran. With his head bent, he whispered, "Take good care of Sakura…"
Eriol smiled, "Syaoran, dear cousin. Well done."
Tomoyo patted Sakura's honey brown hair and laughed, "She'll always be safe with you, Syaoran."
Syaoran turned to the exit and smiled lightly.
I will explain this all to Sakura as soon as I-
Taki appeared at the doorway. No one needed to read her grimacing smile, "You won this time, again, Syaoran."
Syaoran's anger was refilled, "Why the hell did you do this to Sakura! Having me, that will NEVER happen, no matter what you do!"
She laughed, laughed so hard tears came from her eyes, "No no no.. You're not because of this… actually…"
Tomoyo ran to Taki screaming, "WHAT! WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY THAT! HOW THE HELL WOULD YOU DO SOMETHING TO SOMEONE FOR NO REASON!"
Taki walked nearer to Syaoran, ignoring Tomoyo completely and whispered into his ear, "You did kill my father, and hurt my dear mother… Raena… recognize that name?"
Liked that ending? stay tuned!
Bai bai!
'maya-chan