This obviously isn't a chapter update, but rather some much-needed feedback. After establishing my original character, I'm not sure if it's just me or that I haven't established her enough for the OC to even have this much development with Connor... Like I feel like I rushed their adventure and now it's just a jumble of emotions, conversations, and not enough of a story pyramid following to be even considered a story.
Personally, after a while, it felt like the OC was only called into the past for one specific reason rather than just her being pulled into another time, which is one of the most crucial times of America's development as an independent country, so as much as the main goal here is a romantic development, is it just me or am I really veering off the portion where they're in dangerous times and the part where everything's adventurous? If that's the case, then I might have to do a redo on these chapters.
In any case, I need some critiques. Does this need a bit of a do-over? And be specific where and why.
Thank you!