Hello everyone,

As you can see, I've finally updated this story! My main reason for being this inactive is that I just wasn't that motivated to write. I also felt like my English was way too poor to be writing lol. I've read this story all over again and have never cringed this much in my entire life. The spelling mistakes bruh, I can't believe I ever uploaded this shit, lol. And the worst thing about all of this is that I later realized that this isn't the ONLY cringey story I've written.

Anyway, I feel like my writing skills have improved! (I mean, it still sucks but not as bad as first) And I hope that the feeling is mutual. I can't promise you guys that you won't come across any grammer/spelling mistakes because English is still a language that I've got to practice to become even better since it isn't my native language. So please don't except too much from me because it isn't perfect! But I hope it's at least readdable for y'all now.

I've also been thinking about rewriting the other chapters of this story, because... I literally wanted to puke and throw the whole story away. If this was a story written on pages; I would've burned it. So yes, I definitely got to rewrite this and I'll eventually rewrite the other stories too since they're an embarrassment as well!

Feel free to share your tips to improve my writing skills or if you've found any mistakes which I should watch out for when I write next time. It's highly appreciated!

Enjoy!


"Your boyfriend is out of his damn mind," was the first thing Bumi said after a brief silence. He leaned his head backwards, resting it on top of the square back cushions of the couch and exhaled deeply. It was about 9 PM and the commander decided to pay Lin a visit. He told Aang and Katara that he'd visit a friend of his who he hadn't seen in a while. Which he did, so he technically wasn't lying to them.

Lin's facial expression became questioning, turning her neck to glance at her lover. "What?" she asked before folding the newspaper, which she was reading, into a smaller piece and placed it on the wooden coffee table. She placed her elbow on the back cushions, supporting her head with the palm of her hand, pressing it against her cheek and crossed her legs while looking at Bumi once again.

"What did he do this time?" She asked curiously but not with much astonishment since it's not the first time that Tenzin jabbered nonsense. She's the one who had listened to all of his rubbish for years. Mostly about him having to shoot his sperm up Lin's vagina because he had to carry on a damn legacy. Creating tiny, annoying airbending babies and of course, it would've been a tragedy if an earthbender would've been born. It wasn't even her legacy to carry on and yet he distressed her with it. But she was glad, relieved that she doesn't have to help him carrying that legacy on anymore. If she were to have children, she'd do it out of love, wanting to share something special with her beloved partner and not because she had to.

"Maybe not entirely out of his mind," Bumi continued, resting the side of his face on the back cushion to look at his brother's girlfriend who is (secretly) his now, which he's proud of. "He confronted me last night about my strange behavior around you. The two of us have gotten closer, closer than we should be. Apparently we've been doing stuff behind his back," he said, his mouth slowly turning into a wide grin. Lin's eyes went wide, knowing that Bumi wouldn't have said a word about their affair but worried that Tenzin has gotten suspicious about her and Bumi. "What?" she said once again, panic written all over her face.

"Is that the only thing you're going to say, baby?" he said while raising an eyebrow, a chuckle followed after. "Bumi!" Lin stood on her knees on the couch seat in a reflex, almost suprised that Bumi isn't as panicked as her. "What do you mean? What did Tenzin say? What did you say?" Lin asked, bombing him with questions. "First of all," Bumi placed his hand on his chest where his heart belonged. "I haven't said a word about our... hot, sexy affair. I've denied it whenever he brought it up. Eventhough I had the urge to rub it in his face," he said with a smirk. The fact that Tenzin couldn't keep his girlfriend happy and Bumi managed to do so otherwise made him want to brag about it. Lin rolled her eyes eventhough she found their affair exciting as well.

"He thought of the worst thing possible to excist though. Me trying to drown you in alcohol just to fuck with you afterwards" Lin looked at him, disgusted that Tenzin could ever think so low about his own brother. "Are you telling me that Tenzin thought you were trying to use me? Just for sex?" She waited for him to answer, her face stuck in an suprised expression. All Bumi did was nod before she raged about her foolish boyfriend. "You're his brother! How could he ever think of you in such a disgraceful manner! You would never..." She crossed her arms.

Bumi had rather not brought up this topic after seeing how much this affected and upset her. He wrapped one of his muscled arms around her waist, his hand gripping her side. "It's alright, Linny," he said and smiled, knowing how much she hated that nickname. It reminded him of the time that they were younger and that he used to tease her with it all the damn time.

He snorted, the grin appearing on his face once again. "He told me to stay away from you, not get in between you two and that I had to remind myself that you're his girlfriend and not mine." His hand moved past the curve of her back, resting his palm under her ass and playfully gave it a squeeze. "If only he knew" he wiggled his eyebrows up and down a few times and Lin laughed at him. "Like I said, he wasn't entirely out of his mind. He was right about one thing."

He lowered his hand, digging his fingers in the flesh of the back of her thigh and lifted her leg a bit, moving her from her spot on the couch to make her sit on his lap. "Which is us, playing around behind his back," he smirked and made Lin smile. Adultery is something you should feel guilty about but Lin's guilt got washed away because Bumi is the man she'd truly want to spend the rest of her life with. Of course Bumi felt quilty as well initially. He felt like he was betraying his brother in one of the worst ways possible, stabbing his own brother in his back. But then he'd remind himself once again, Tenzin didn't deserve Lin at all.

"You're a sinner, Bumi," she said with a playful smirk, placing her hands on each of his broad shoulders. "You're the one who is cheating," he said, copying her smirk, both of his hands resting in the curve of her lower back, using his fingertips to massage her in that spot. "You're the one taking part into this as well, so we're both the devil," she giggled, moving her tumbs in a circular motion to massage his collarbone. He slid one of his hands higher, placing it flatly on the middle of her back to move her body even closer to his. "That's what's making this so exciting."


I've read this chaper about a thousand times to make sure there weren't any mistakes. I hope there aren't any lol.