Haruka/Miyuki's POV
All I see is darkness. Everything, pure black. I took a step forward, hoping to find something. There was only silence, I was alone. Then suddenly spotlights were on seven persons. They all had sad looks on their faces. I recognized them as STARISH.
"Nanami, do you really don't want to remember us?" one them said with a sad look on his face. He's the one who has red hair.
"Haru-chan, we've waited or you!" another one complained. Then slowly, they walked closer to me. I wanted to run away but I can't. It's as if I was frozen right there.
"Little Lamb, are you sure you don't want to remember us?" the guy, who I remembered was called Jinguji Ren, said. He lifted my face up and I stare at him. I felt a tear run down my cheek. No, I shouldn't be crying! I already decided before, I will never become Nanami Haruka again.
"Are you really sure?" he asked me, as if he read my mind. Those cool blue eyes staring at me directly. It had a sincere and sad look, making me unsure if what I decided on was right. Do I really not want to be Nanami Haruka again?
I bolted up, sweat running down my face. Was I dreaming? I guess I was. I took a look at my surroundings. This doesn't look like my room. So where am I? I thought about it and finally remembered.
"That's right! I fainted! So am I still in the dormitory?" I asked. Then I sighed, of course no one will answer! I took a look at what I'm wearing and I saw the clothes I wore last time. I stood up from the bed and opened the closet in the room, hoping there'll be clothes stored in there. To my joy, there is. Probably because Tori-chan put them in here. I picked out a lilac-blue colored dress. It was very simple. It stopped at my knees and it had a white ribbon below my chest. It had puff-sleeves too. I just let my hair down, too lazy to tie it up. I wore white sandals and I got out of my room.
Narrator's POV (Before Haruka woke up)
"Miyuki!" Kaoru said, as he opened the doors. He was really worried for Miyuki. When he read Victoria's message to him this morning, he immediately went to the dormitory. He then sweatdropped at the sight before him.
"Good morning, Ruru-chan!" Reiji greeted while drinking his coffee.
"Where is Miyuki?!" Kaoru yelled. He's really been worried.
"Miyu-chan? She's in one of the extra rooms, sleeping." Reiji replied with a smile.
"How is she?!" Kaoru asked, with a bit more relief.
"Now, now, how about you sit down? Miyu-chan is alright. She'll be waking up sooner or later." Reiji assured him. Kaoru then sighed and sat down the chair across Reiji.
"What happened to her yesterday?" Kaoru asked Reiji.
"Yesterday? She got an attack again. This time, because of seeing STARISH." Reiji answered, still with his goofy aura around him.
"She saw them?! You do know what will eventually happen if this continues..." Kaoru seriously told him, with a sad look on his face. He would do anything to prevent Miyuki from getting into a coma. Anything.
"No need to be so serious, Ruru-chan! We're all worried for her too~!" Reiji
They then heard footsteps getting closer to them
"Kaoru!?" Syo said, pointing a finger to Kaoru.
"Ah, Onii-chan!" Kaoru replied as he turned his head. Syo then ran to him and placed his hand on Kaoru's shoulders.
"Why are you here!?" Syo accused, shaking his brother.
"Is it bad to visit my older brother?" Kaoru asked, grinning.
"Spill it out. We last saw each other a week ago." Syo replied. He knew his brother too well to know when he is lying.
"You got me! I came here to see Miyuki." Kaoru told him. Slowly, Syo put his hands down from Kaoru's shoulder.
"You know her?" Syo asked solemnly, hair over his eyes.
"Yup, I do. More than a year, actually." Kaoru replied, knowing what will happen next. Then as he predicted, Syo punched him in the face.
"You know we've been looking for her all this time! Yet, why didn't you tell me!?" Syo yelled angrily.
"I can't, onii-chan. I can't and I shouldn't. I came here because I heard Miyuki passed out. By now, I'm sure someone already told you why she passed out." Kaoru told him, shrugging off the pain that came from Syo's punch.
"Still! You should have told me!" Syo replied.
"Now,now, you two shouldn't fight! Rei-chan will get sad!" Reiji said, interrupting the both of them.
"I'm sorry for not telling you, onii-chan. Yet, please understand! It will be bad for her if she met you guys!" Kaoru told his brother, ignoring Reiji. Since before, he knew that Nanami Haruka and Hoshino Miyuki are the same person but he also knows that he can't tell his brother about that. Miyuki's health will only worsen.
"Well, she already met us! Which would've had happened sooner if you told me!" Syo said, he too ignored Reiji. Which made Reiji sweatdrop. The twins were continuing their fight when a familiar voice greeted.
"Kaoru! I'm glad you're here!" Miyuki said happily,as she walk to the twins. When she reached Kaoru, she gave him a friendly hug, which made Kaoru blush a bit and made Syo growl in response. Then another yell was heard.
"Mi-chan, don't go running off! I'm still not done lecturing you!" yelled, Victoria. She ran to Miyuki and smacked her head.
"Tori-chan, I already know! I said I'm sorry!" Miyuki complained.
"This was not the first time you did this and you still haven't learned!" Victoria scolded her.
"I promise I'll never do it again!" Miyuki apologized. She remembered the last time Victoria got mad at her, and it wasn't a pleasant memory. She shuddered as she recalled what happened.
"That's what you said last time!" Victoria told her with a very scary look on her face.
"T-This time, I swear!" Miyuki replied nervously.
"Well, I don't believe you!" Victoria said. A growl was then heard.
"It's so early in the morning, Sparks. What's with the screaming?" Ranmaru asked, walking in with an annoyed look. Ai and Camus were right behind him. They too, had annoyed faces.
"I heard from Ayumi that this girl didn't intake her pills yesterday!" Victoria yelled.
"Then?" Ai asked without care.
"What do you mean, 'Then?'!? She got an attack yesterday because she didn't intake her pills!" Victoria angrily shouted to Ai.
"She does it everytime." Ai replied with a stoic face.
"That's my point! She DOESN'T LEARN!" Victoria yelled, she was getting pissed off at Ai.
"Shut up you peasant. How dare you wake me up for such a simple matter." Camus annoyingly told her.
"Simple matter?! How is that a 'simple' matter?!" Victoria shouted, emphasizing the word simple.
"Now, I don't want my morning to be filled with fighting. You all shut up." Ranmaru told them, with a dark aura surrounding him. The others then nodded quickly, knowing how Ranmaru is when it's morning.
"Good morning, minna!" Miyuki greeted, hoping that she'll lighten up the mood. Ranmaru then walked to her and smacked her head.
"That's for not intaking your pills." Ranmaru reasoned, and once again smacked her head." That's for unnecessarily waking me up." Ranmaru continued.
"Hai...: Miyuki replied, with a face that looks like a child that just got scolded. She was then surprised by Ranmaru messing her hair.
"That's good. Now have you already intaken your pills for today?" Ranmaru asked with a smile.
"Yup, Victoria gave me some. She had a few extras in her room." Miyuki answered with a smile similar to Ranmaru's.
"Very good." Ranmaru said patting her like a child. Miyuki just smile even bigger in response. Unknown to them, tho others were murmuring.
"Sigh, there he goes again." Ai silently murmured, hoping the both of them will not hear. To his relief, they didn't.
"Yup, their daddy-and-child aura is showing." Kaoru commented and the others nodded in agreement.
"Daddy and child?" Syo asked them.
"Can't you see? Just look at them. They give off a feeling of a dad with a child." Victoria answered him, annoyed.
"I still don't know why Ran-Ran thinks that what he's doing will make her fall for him." Reiji mumbled, sweatdropping.
"In the end, I'm sure Mi-chan will just think of him as a real dad. Not someone who'll she fall in love with." Victoria commented, agreeing with Reiji.
"Then that means there is one less opponent." Camus told them, grinning.
"We still don't know about that. Besides, by the looks of it, we got seven more." Kaoru told him, sweatdropping at the thought.
"Seven?" Syo asked, not knowing what he meant. The others just shook their head, disappointed that he didn't get what they meant. Once again, they were interrupted.
"Good morning!" Otoya greeted. oblivious that Miyuki was there. The others were behind and they too, didn't notice that Miyuki was there.
"Any plans for today?" Ren asked them, obviously in a good mood.
"None, it's a day-off." Ai answered.
"A day-off? That's good, I can spend my day with my ladies." Ren said seductively. On the other hand, Ranmaru and Miyuki are still going at it.
"Since it a day-off, how about we get some ice-cream?" Ranmaru asked Miyuki. They were still oblivious that the others arrived.
"Alright!" Miyuki replied with a grin. Syo soon got annoyed.
"Oi, we're still here." Syo told them. Thankfully, both off them heard and apologized. Miyuki soon noticed STARISH, they were dumbfounded to find that she was still there.
"I-I'm sorry for what happened yesterday. My name is Hoshino Miyuki, by the way." Miyuki told them with a smile.
"What happe-" Otoya was about to say something when he was cut off by Victoria.
"Anyway! I'm still not done with you, Mi-chan!" Victoria interrupted. She knew the atmosphere will tense up if Otoya continued.
"Eh!" Miyuki whined as she started to run, hoping she'll get away.
"Oh no you don't!" Victoria said, as she ran after Miyuki. Soon, both of them are running around the living room.
"I'm sorry, Tori-chan! I really am!" Miyuki yelled as she continued running.
"As I said, I don't believe you!" Victoria replied, still chasing after her. They continued running until Camus caught them.
"I don't want my morning being filled by your nonsense!" Camus scolded.
"Yes..." Miyuki and Victoria answered in unison. The others chuckled at the scene before them. They then heard a loud growl.
"Rei-chan is hungry!" Reiji said, blushing a bit. Miyuki giggled at the sight.
"How about I'll cook?" Miyuki suggested with a smile.
"Miyu-chan will cook? Yes please!" Reiji replied, eyes sparkling.
"That's actually a good idea. It's been a while since I last ate your cooking." Ranmaru said, agreeing with Reiji.
"Then it's decided! I'll cook!" Miyuki told them happily.
"I'll help. I mean, we are a lot you know." Kaoru said knowingly.
"Boys, you help too." Victoria commanded STARISH. When the boys heard her, they gave her questioning looks. She then gave them a glance and they instantly knew what she meant. She's giving them a chance to spend time with Miyuki.
"Hai, Victoria-sama." the boys chorused dully and bowed. Though in their heart, they were really grateful.
"Sama?" Miyuki asked them, tilting her head in question.
"T-They insisted on calling m-me that." Victoria answered her, stuttering. Victoria knew that Miyuki will scold her if she told her the truth.
"Insisted? Tori-chan, you're lying again." Miyuki told Victoria and gave her a stern look.
"Ehehehe..." Victoria said nervously. She forgot that Miyuki can see eight through her.
"Tori-chan, what did I tell you about that attitude?" Miyuki asked, a slightly dark aura surrounding her. She really didn't like it when Victoria treats other people like that.
"Sorry, Mi-chan!" Victoria apologized and Miyuki sighed.
"Don't say sorry to me. Say sorry to them." Miyuki said as she pointed the boys.
"S-Sorry boys. Just c-call me V-Victoria, too." Victoria told the boys, though if Miyuki just wasn't here, she would've yelled at them.
"H-Hai, Victoria." the boys nervously said, they knew that once Miyuki is gone, Victoria will scold them later. As they were about to bow, Miyuki halted them.
"Umm, it would be better if there are no more bows too." Miyuki told them with a smile. The boys were surprised but they followed. 'She's still the same...' the boys thought in their heads. They were happy that their Haruka never really changed. She's still the same old Haruka. Though some things have changed in her attitude but her kindness still remain. Their thoughts were cut off by another stomach growl. They all turned their heads to the culprit, Reiji.
"Rei-chan told you he's hungry!" Reiji excalaimed, cheeks flushed from embarrassment. The others laughed.
"Alright, got any requests?" Miyuki asked them .
"How about your dessert specialties?" Reiji asked drooling a bit.
"Dessert? Reiji, it's breakfast." Camus told him.
"It's alright. I'll cook for our breakfast and some desserts." Miyuki replied with a smile.
"Yay! Rei-chan is happy!" Reiji cried as he jumped up and down. Miyuki giggled and was about to go to the kitchen when she noticed something.
"Aren't you guys coming?" Miyuki asked she turned around, noticing that STARISH and Kaoru weren't behind her. The boys then snapped out of their trance and followed her.
Tokiya's POV
I am joyful that Nanami-san is still herself. She may have changed a bit, though. She became mature and a bit more straightforward. I hate to admit it, but I'm nervous. We still don't know what we'll do.
*Flashback*
Reiji left us dumbfounded, here at the living room. We were all surprised on what we just heard. Nanami-san doesn't remember us?
"T-That's not possible..." Syo said, eyes wide in shock.
"Nanami knows us right? Kotobuki-senpai was just lying right?" Ittoki asked trying to convince himself.
"I don't know what to believe anymore!" Hijirikawa snapped, which made me surprised. He's always calm and composed.
"Calm down, Masato." Ren told him.
"Calm down?! How can I calm down!?" Hijirikawa yelled.
"We shouldn't act like this. Our problem is, what'll we do?" Ren asked us all.
"We can't make her remember." I decided. I want Nanami-san back but I wouldn't want her to get hurt either.
"Haru-chan..." Natsuki mumbled sadly.
"What about us?" Cecil asked. We all turned our head to him not knowing what he meant.
"What do you mean?" Syo told him. Cecil then sighed.
"I mean, we waited for Haruka too. All this time we all waited for her. Yet now that we met her, are we just going to give her up so easily?" Cecil replied as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.
"You have a point but she'll only get hurt." I said.
"Hurt? Who said we'll make her remember?" Cecil asked us. Then realization hit me, and I'm sure the others did too.
"You're so smart Cecil!" Otoya complimented him.
"Well, I am a prince you know." Cecil told him proudly, crossing his arms. The others then started to cheer up agreeing with Cecil's plan. That was until once again, Ren spoke.
"Stupid. Didn't you see? She only saw us a while ago and she got an attack. Do you think spending time with her will make it any better?" Ren scolded us. I sweatdropped at his seriousness as he once again made the others gloomy. I can't think of another plan. Cecil was right, we waited for Nanami-san all this time but what if she gets hurt? I mean, as Kotobuki-senpai said, once she regains her memories, she'll fall into a coma.
"How about let's just go with the flow? I mean, since we met and all, I don't think we can fully avoid her to the extent that we'll never see her again. So whatever happens, just go with it." I told them all and they gave me surprised looks.
"I guess that's the best thing we can do." Ren said, giving a small smile. The others nodded in agreement.
"The irony, though. I mean, can you believe it? She's best friends with our composer, and if I'm right our senpais are close to her too." Syo told all of us with a frown. He was right. She's been so close to us all this time and I can't believe we only met her today.
"Yeah..." I mumbled to myself.
*Flashback End*
Now, we're actually spending time with her. Well, cooking with her that is. We soon reached the huge kitchen and Nanami-san halted.
"Now, since we're going to cook and Tori-chan is not here, may I know your names?" Nanami-san asked us. Should I introduce myself? I turned to look at the others and saw that they too, didn't know what to do.
"That's Ittoki Otoya, Hijirikawa Masato, Jinguji Ren, Shinomiya Natsuki, Aijima Cecil, Ichinose Tokiya, and lastly my onii-chan, Kurusu Syo." Kaoru said as he pointed us according to our names. He probably knew that we didn't know what to do.
"Nice to meet you! Now, do you guys know how to cook?" she asked us. We all nodded.
"That great! Now, you boys handle the breakfast meal and I'll do the desserts!" Nanami-san she happily. Looks like she really loves cooking. She turned her head to Kaoru and called. " Kaoru, you'll help me alright?" she continued. I felt a slight pang in my heart but I just shrugged it off. Kaoru nodded and they went to the other side of the kitchen to bake. Leaving us dumbfounded.
"That Kaoru..." Syo mumbled angrily. Then we all growled in jelousy.
"Now, let's just proceed cooking." Hijirikawa told all of us and we followed.
Narrator's POV
While STARISH was cooking the breakfast meals, Kaoru and Miyuki were very busy.
"What should we bake?" Miyuki asked.
"How about your Apple Pie Roses? It's been a while since you made that." Kaoru answered her, happily. He really loved Miyuki's Apple Pie Roses.
"Alright, let's make some strawberry shortcakes too. Oh and some cream puffs!" Miyuki told him excitedly. She just loved baking, especially when she's with Kaoru.
"Hey guys, any requests? So far we got apple pie roses, strawberry shortcakes, and cream puffs." Kaoru asked as he turned around to the boys.
"Sweets?! How about a lemon pie?" Natsuki answered excitedly. Kaoru nodded and turned back to Miyuki. They then proceed to bake. First they started with apple pie roses. Kaoru thinly sliced some apples and simmered it in water. While they were waiting, they then started with the other desserts. They proceeded making the desserts, silently. No one really uttered a word between the both of them. Well, that was until bags of flour unexepectedly fell from the top cabinet that was above of Miyuki.
"Miyuki!" Kaoru cried as he pushed Miyuki out of the way. They both fell to the floor with a 'tud'. To their relief, the flour only fell on the floor, but the flour exploded around the kitchen. Making everything and everyone covered in flour. The boys on the other side of the room got covered in flour too.
"Eh!" Kaoru exclaimed as his cheeks were flushed and his ears fumed. He realized the current position him and Miyuki were in. He was on top of Miyuki on the floor, hugging her. Then Miyuki slowly opened her eyes and coughed slightly. She didn't really mind what current position both of them were in. She thinks that it's alright since Kaoru and her always hug each other. Well, always 'friendly hug' that is. So she thought that right now was just the same and since Kaoru was hugging her, she saw Kaoru's face flushed.
Without thinking twice, she pressed her forhead against his, much to Kaoru's surprise and he turned redder. "Kaoru? You're red. Are you alright? You don't seem to be sick, though." Miyuki wondered as she checked Kaoru's temperature with her forehead. Kaoru couldn't reply, he was just too speechless to speak, so they were there in silence. That was until a clearing of a throat was heard.
"Ehem." Syo said, interrupting them. Kaoru gulped, if only Miyuki wasn't here, he would've been dead by his brother's jealousy. He then quickly stood up in embarrassment and once he stood up he was greeted by death glares. He flinched at the sight and he didn't notice that Miyuki already stood up.
"Ne, your his twin right? Do you think he's sick?"Miyuki asked worried as she held both of Syo's hands, pleading. Syo, who was surprised, turned red.
"Eh! You're red too!" Miyuki exclaimed. She heard a sudden hiss, though.
"Tch. Acting all sweet and innocent aren't you Little Lamb?" Ren told her with with a scowl. He's still not emotionally stable with Miyuki.
"L-Littlle Lamb?" Miyuki questioned, stuttering. She's not very good at handling playboys, and by the looks of it, Ren is one of them.
"Got a problem with me calling you that?" Ren told her, obviously annoyed. Miyuki flinched.
"Ren! She's doing nothing wrong!" Masato scolded him. The air around the kitchen seemed tense already.
"Nothing wrong you say?" Ren questioned Masato with a stern look.
"L-Let's just continue cooking." Masato unteadily answered. Miyuki hasn't exactly done anything wrong, but she somehow has. That's why Masato just dodged answering Ren, for he knows that Ren has a point.
"N-Now let's just c-continue making breakfast, shall we?" Otoya suggested nervously, hoping it'll break the tension. To his relief, it did and the others nodded and followed.
They then proceeded making breakfast. Some we're made again and thankfully, some are flour-less. Unlike a while ago, this time, they all worked together. The boys also helped making the desserts once they were finished with the breakfast meal.
"Ah, you got some whip cream on your nose." Otoya said as he wiped cream off Miyuki's nose.
"T-Thanks!" Miyuki replied with a tint of pink in her cheeks.
"No problem, Hoshino." Otoya told her with a grin.
"Hoshino? Please just call me Miyuki." Miyuki said with a small smile on her face. She's really glad that she's already friends with STARISH, except Ren that is. At first she thought that it would be awkward because they are people from her past. They know Nanami Haruka, her former self. Yet now she relieved that it didn't turn out that way.
"A-Alright, Miyuki." Otoya replied, stuttering. He too, was relieved that him and Miyuki are already friends. He's happy mood was then cut off by a sudden question from Miyuki. Well, everyone else was surprised at what she asked too.
"Say... what was my attitude before? Well, I mean, as Nanami Haruka that is." Miyuki asked silently, hesitating a bit. She would like to know more about her former self. She was surprised that everyone heard her though.
"W-What's with the sudden question?" Kaoru asked her, nervously.
"Well, it just occured to me that's all." Miyuki answered as she averted her gaze to somethinge else, avoiding eye contact. No one answered her, and no one uttered a word. That was until someone came into the kitchen.
"I smell sweets!" Reiji greeted them as he inhaled the aroma of the desserts. The others were relieved by his sudden appearance. They didn't know how to answer Miyuki's question. They then proceeded to the dining room, the food with them and Quartet Night and Victoria were patiently waiting for them. Once they let the food one the table, it became a riot. Everyone was hungry. Well, not exactly everyone, though.
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