Hey guys, it's me and um I've come address that there's a few people who dislike my story, now I'm not gonna go "He's a hater" or go hate on him, no...sometimes people live to like and people live to hate, it's words like these that has me think i have to do better in these chapters, that's why critics exist, some of these reviews simply say I have grammar issues and yes you are correct, i stated it in a chapter and even when i go to fix it, there's still a little grammar problem that i didn't see,so thanks for telling me that, that righ there is telling me that i gotta be careful with my words but sometimes if it happens it happens, some writers that are very detailed and well written have a grammar error here and there, and i know that doesn't compare to me but hey it's my first fan fic what else could you expect? this person also said that my story isn't well written and some things don't go together and he said he watched endgame 5 times and O should know every line from the movie, Alright so let me say this,I only saw endgame twice and I'm planning on buying the DVD and when the DVD comes out I might do a remastered version of the story "might" but I also stated in my notes that some lines and scenes from the movie sometimes i wont know the lines and try to come up with my own, that's what I'm trying to do, I'm trying to do my best of making it as accurate as possible,as for the story the reason some things are out of place is because I'm trying to open my creativity a bit more and try out certain things to make them work as for the story, I'm making the story exactly how I think of it in my head i don't just rewrite the movie, I want to add a few things and see if people like it or not, like with the writer of No Hero Acadmeia that guy knew how to do a MHA x Venom crossover and he did it brilliantly and he was creative, I mean in his story he made Toru the reason of why the villains attack which goes to my next claim, YES i know its not fully confirmed dabi is todoroki's brother but if thats what the fanbase wants to conclude then I'll likely do so, I'm not trying to make a canon version of MHA, I'm trying to make a fun story for all of you and by the looks of favorites and follows i got this whole week that's how i know that what I'm doing is entertaining at least alot of you and that's why I wanna keep going, so like i said no hate to the reviewer you're gonna inspire me to do better in the story and I'll do so, but the thing about being horrible with the lines grammar and story, it's my first fan fic man at least give me a slight chance, I'm not saying to change your opinion, I think that you should keep watching and see what happens and if the story doesn't satisfy you then you can go on ahead and go search for better stories but if you atleast have interest in it or wanna help me with a few things in the story my DMs are open, so with that being said do not and i repeat do not hate on this guy, he's a reviewer but i just wanted to point out a few things that he didn't understand of what I'm trying to do, and with that being sad, thank you so much for read and see you in the next chapter after I wake up Update: to tell you the truth I'm gonna look over the story and try to fix it with the help of a friend of mine...also I've been thinking whether or not i should take a break but I'll give you another update if anything goes well or doesn't go well, hopefully my friend will teach me how to learn the ropes and make this story better for you guys and if not...I don't know maybe this'll be the only story I'll make...anyways Follow the story to check on any updates and thanks for reading...
Update: So I was thinking for a while and slept,and I'm just gonna try and continue the story,thank you so much for the support and the whole Midoriya thing it may seem like a harem yes but I just wanna see if people can be more open with the suggestions, Hell I would even ship somebody with Todoroki overtime but for now I think Midoriya needs someone so it can work for the story,The Symbotic Villain Alliance is still on hold for I do not know for how long but I'll give a update there if I have anything to say about the future of the story,Anyways once again thank you so much for the support and the story will continue soon...very soon
