Okay so I've been behind, I know. I was going to update on Friday, but I had school work to do that is going to be due when we go back to school, which is tomorrow. The reason I've been a bit behind was because I had to miss two days of school before winter break for a showing and funeral. Anyway Thanks to Hanstrandtdgw, ImmortalMortal511, Guest, and Kat. Hanstrantdgw- I told you this time and I can't wait to read your story tomorrow. ImmortalMortal511- Thanks for the review, you are nice. Guest- I guess I like making Comet mad because she's the kind of person who will 'shoot first, ask questions second' which makes dating the Human Torch tough with his flirting. Kat- Thanks, I like making her mad too.
Disclaimer: I don't own the Fantastic Four or The Avengers, they belong to MARVEL along with Frankie Raye, Doom, and Loki. Jessica, Anthony, Maven, and Jennifer belong to Hanstrantdgw. I only own Comet and Lavina.
here is the next chapter
Ch. 10
"What do you mean they broke the spell" Doom shouted.
"Johnny, Natasha, and Anthony broke my spell...on the good side, Comet has her nose broken" Lavina reported.
"Let's go" Doom ordered as the teams appeared.
"Doom you've tortured us for long enough. You're going down" Johnny shouted, flaming on and attacking him.
"Loki listen well." Thor commanded, "You shall rot in Asgardian Prison for you vile deeds" before running at him. The rest of the groups dispelled to either get civilians out of the way, or to battle someone.
"I guess we're stuck with broken-nose-girl" Nova sneered.
"Frankie you should know by now. I'm not going down without a fight" Comet replied, taking a fighting stance.
"This'll be easy" Madison said.
"not with both of us" Jessica replied, coming to the aid of Comet.
"Let's do this" Comet muttered. Jessica grinned as Lavina, Frankie Raye, and Madison ran at them. Jessica fired fireballs at them while Comet either fought hand to hand against Raye, or fired ice at Lavina.
"Heads up" Comet called as Madison pulled out a gun. Jessica looked up and froze. Comet cursed and moved to get the gun, she was so concentrated on helping Jessica, she never saw the fist until it connected. Comet stumbled back and all of a sudden Frankie was on top of her, pounding her face in.
"That's for Bradley" she shouted, punching more and more.
"Now who's the loser" Frankie sneered.
"You" A voice said from behind Frankie. She whirled around as Sue appeared and fired her force-field.
"You okay?" Sue asked, rushing to Comet and helping her up.
"uh...kinda" Comet said, her broken nose making her sound nasally.
"Comet!" Johnny cried, landing next to his girlfriend and peering at her nose.
"I'm fine" she said.
"Are you you sure...there is something wrong..." Johnny said.
"I'm fine" she repeated, "is Jessica okay?".
"Uh..." Johnny said. Anthony landed and said, "What happened to Jess?".
"Uh Madison shot cinnamon at her. I tried to stop it but got attacked by Frankie" Comet said, trying not to move her nose much.
"No problem" Anthony said, searching Jessica and finding the epi-pen she always had on her and injecting it into her side. Jessica breathed and opened her eyes.
"I hate cinnamon" she said, getting up slowly.
"I'm so sorry Jess. I would've tried to stop it but ended with an even worse broken nose" Comet apologized.
"Not your fault but let's beat them" Jessica said. Doom and his minions regrouped, as did Loki, Maven, and their minion. The good guys and bad guys faced each other before running at each other.
"Watch out" Anthony cried. Jess looked up and ducked, dodging an attack from Madison, before doing a quick uppercut and knocking out the girl.
"that teaches you" Jess said, before running off to find Maven. While this was going on Johnny and Comet were tag-teaming Lavina and Frankie Raye. A few minutes later, both Lavina and Frankie were defeated and all that was left were Doom, Loki, and Maven. The Hulk quickly grabbed Loki and pounded him into the ground, knocking him out.
"One down two to go" Comet muttered. Johnny grinned and fired a few fireballs as Doom. As more and more fireballs were fired at Doom, his metal skin heated up, not as much as the first time but enough that when Jessica and Comet hit it with water/ice he was rendered immobile.
"Now Maven, give up or do we have to take you in" Jessica threatened.
"Never" Maven said, before getting hit with a tranquilizer and going to sleep.
"That's the end of our fun adventure. Time to go home" Anthony said, grabbing Jessica.
"Agreed" Johnny agreed, pulling Comet to him.
There is the final chapter. This will have a short epilogue and then the sequel will be up, the sequel takes place two years after this.
