(AN): Hello ladies and gents! I'm back with the 10th chapter of this fan fiction! I really enjoyed this chapter, and I hope you will too. Thanks again to my reviewers from last chapter… I sound like a broken record but you guys are great!
Chapter 10: Jackhammer and Asylum Tour
We all got out of the car after we arrived in front of the amusement park. I gave the driver about a hundred bucks and told him to pick us up at approximately 5:00pm. He thanked me and drove off.
"It's everything I've always imagined it to be!" cried the excited blonde. "Gaara isn't this awesome?"
"Yeah… awesome..." Gaara replied while staring at the freefall coaster out in the distance. Oh, and what was that? Was that I sweat drop I just saw?
While walking to the ticket booth Naruto cried, "Ooo, ooo! Sasuke will be my riding partner okay? I really want to see his face when we go on the rides. It'll be priceless."
"I'm not riding anything." Sasuke stated.
Naruto made a baby face, "Oh is mister football captain scared of some little old roller coasters?"
"Shutup dobe! Ugh, whatever." Sasuke gave Naruto one of those Uchiha death glares.
"So that means Gaara is my riding partner then." I smirked at Gaara. The green eyed beauty blushed and tried to hide the smile that was forming on his face. I couldn't help but look at his shirt again. 'Skinny boys do it better'. I gulped and blushed myself. God, that is so hot!
Anyways, enough of me drooling, we waited in line for about ten minutes. Although it was a weekday, people still decided to go that day to Star Wonderland. I mean, it's not as packed as the weekend but I didn't expect it to have this many people.
"Crap! Forty five dollars for admission? Do they think I'm some rich bastard or something?" Naruto dug around his wallet. "Damn, there goes my fifty bucks!" He pulled out the bill and slammed it down the counter surprising the cashier.
"Oh, hehe, sorry about that lady." Naruto said scratching his head.
"Sure, here's your change… Next!"
Gaara went up and handed the lady two twenties. "Naruto let me borrow your five."
"Aww man!" Pouted the blonde as he gave his remaining allowance to Gaara.
Sasuke and I gave the cashier our forty five without really thinking about it. We got our tickets and headed for the gate where the pat you down to check if you have anything that might cause harm to other people.
"Gaara, make sure you hide that pocket knife really good." Joked Naruto.
The security guard heard and made sure to thoroughly check Gaara the most. He was the last one to get checked and Sasuke and I were wondering what the hell was taking so long.
Naruto started laughing as the red-head walked towards us, his face red with anger. "Remind me to kill Naruto later."
"Sorry!" Naruto said laughing, holding his stomach. "I had to do it; you should have seen your face."
"You really are an idiot." Sasuke told Naruto. "Here I got us all maps." He handed us each a copy.
"This place is beyond cool!" Naruto said surveying his surroundings. "Look at that fountain! It's so huge!"
"You think everything is cool Naruto." Gaara said rolling his eyes.
"Hello gentlemen! Would you like to take a picture in front of Star Wonderland's famous fountain?" said a man dressed as an old western cowboy. We all looked at each other. "Yes!" screamed Naruto.
"Alright, who gave the guy sugar this morning?" asked Gaara, who was obviously talking about Naruto and his hyperness.
We all agreed to take the picture. Not because we wanted to but because Naruto was already posing in front of the fountain. We walked towards Naruto and positioned ourselves next to him. The order went… Sasuke, Naruto, Gaara, and then me.
"Okay folks stand close together… yes, just like that… wait, just a little more to the right… right there… perfect." The man in the cowboy uniform said. "Okay, on the count of three everyone give me a big Star Wonderland smile! One… two…" before he said three I quickly put an arm around Gaara's waist. The red head looked at me pink as ever and all I could do was smile. "3…!" There was a flash. I took my arm off Gaara just as quick as when I put it around him.
I smiled to myself and pretended nothing had happened. The man walked over to us, "Here you go folks…" he handed us a piece of paper with numbers on it, "At the end of the day or whenever you choose, show this ticket to one of the photo booths at the future world section of the park. A personnel will bring up your photo on the computer and can all decide whether you want a copy of it." He smiled and walked off going towards a group of tourist who just came through the gates.
I can't wait to get a hold of a copy. I wonder how it'll turn out. It'll be interesting.
"Guys! I want to go to western world!" said the blonde examining the map. "Let's go to underworld after that." Suggested the red head who was also examining the map.
"Sounds good." I told them.
"But Gaara! I heard it was scary there." Pouted the blonde.
"Don't be such a pussy Naruto." Sasuke smirked, trying to get back at Naruto for teasing him earlier.
Naruto rose up a fist, "Shutup teme, I'm not scared! I said I heard it was scary! Anyways, I wouldn't be talking mister I'm scared of roller coasters." Naruto stuck a tongue out at the fuming Uchiha.
"Hn." Sasuke grunted as he crossed his arms.
You know those old western black and whites you see on late night TV? Well, this is how western world looked exactly. Although I've been here dozens of times, I still can't help but smile whenever I see it. The path is dirt and there are a few cowboys on horses riding around. They have the old buildings where you have your saloon, jail cell, town hall, etc.
Plus, they always add something new and exciting to every worlds in the park. This year in western world, the new attraction they have is called Jackhammer. Its basically a water ride where five people sit on a log one behind another and go on this windy path where at the end you plummet down to your death. Just kidding. At the end you plummet down this hundred feet drop. I myself haven't been on it since it just opened a month and a half ago and I doubt Sasuke ever went on it.
But anyways, it was our first stop. "Uh, were going on that thing?" asked the nervous Sasuke. The drop, from where we were standing, looked so fucking high. We watched for a couple of minutes as the log passengers dropped plummeted down the almost vertical drop. Their screams piercing my ears.
"Holy shit…" I heard Gaara whisper to himself. I almost forgot that it'll be Gaara's first time riding an amusement park ride.
"C'mon guys! What are you all just standing there for? Let's go!" Naruto yelled while running to the line while we ran after him.
"Yosh! The line isn't long! I'm getting excited already." He said. Naruto was right; the line wasn't long at all. As a matter of fact we waited approximately five minutes versus the hour wait during the weekends.
Our group was next. "How many please?"
"Four." I told the girl who was in her early twenties.
"Okay, log number two right over there." She said pointing at a line which had a number two painted on the floor. We went to the spot where she told us to go where a family was waiting before us. They were next to go. A minute later of waiting, empty logs where previous riders already stepped out of were coming slowly down the track. Log number two stopped in front of our line and the small family carefully went in. The family consisted of a mom and a dad and their three kids, probably all around ten years old.
The kids waved at us as the log started to move. To tell you the truth, I was getting pretty nervous. By the looks of it, it seems like everyone else was too.
"I can't believe were next." I told them.
"I know." Sasuke said, voice trembling.
"I can't believe I'm doing this." Said the redhead, who was holding on to the rails on either side of us.
"Oh shit here it comes!" Naruto pointed at the empty logs that were making its way to the lines.
A brunette who worked the lines gestured for us to get in. "Next in line! C'mon people." She yelled while chewing on a gum. She winked at me while I passed by her. I didn't see but Gaara, who was walking behind me, gave the girl the finger and whispered. "He's mine" to her.
The order went, Gaara in the very front, followed by me, then Naruto, and Sasuke in the very back. It kind of felt awkward how I was sitting between Naruto's legs. But it sure felt awesome how Gaara was sitting between mine.
"Where the fuck are the seatbelts?" Demanded Gaara.
"There are non." I told him.
"What kind of a sick ride is this?" he said while frantically looking around for a safety belt.
"You just have to hold on the bars on either side of you, see like this." Naruto said showing Gaara where the bars were. "Oh and maybe tell the person behind you to hold on to you and don't let go."
Both Gaara and I blushed. Meanwhile, the boy in the back was very quiet and looked pale as a ghost. Naruto noticed and told him, "You can hold on to me Sasuke if you want."
That quickly snapped Sasuke back to reality. "I don't need to hold on to you dobe." He said while holding on to the sidebars like his life depended on it.
"Suit yourself." Naruto laughed.
"Welcome to the Jackhammer Ladies and Gentlemen. Please enjoy your ride! And remember, keep all hands and feet inside the log." said a booming voice from the speakers. That's when the ride began.
"Weeee!" shrieked Naruto.
In the beginning the ride was slow, just basically twists and turns. We went into a fake mountain where there was robotic western figures having a gun fight. Balls of air would be coming from the left and right as if we were in a middle of the fight. There was also a scene where we passed through a saloon where robots were having a party. It looked awesome. The robots looked so lifelike but they their face kind of freaked me out. Everyone was in oo's and ahh's as we passed each scenery. Little did we know, we were going higher and higher.
Finally we were let out of the mountain. Our eyes adjusting to the bright sunlight.
"Fuck…" Sasuke said wide-eyed as he noticed we were a few stories up.
"Look at how small the people are." I pointed out.
Suddenly we came to a halt and heard cranking.
"Why the hell are they still cranking us up a stupid ramp when were already so high up?" Gaara said angrily. I knew the ride was this high, but I wouldn't blame Gaara, this was very high.
The ride to the very top of the ramp seemed to take hours. We were getting cranked up so slowly that we had no choice but to look down. My stomach started acting funny. This time, Gaara wasn't the reason.
"Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god." The blonde said as we neared the top. "I think I'm going to crap my pants."
"Tell me, why the hell am I in the front again?" Gaara turned to us each giving us a glare, evil enough to literally melt a human being.
The cranking stopped. We were at the top now. "Everybody hold on!"
"Get me off this ride!" screamed the blonde. Too late. We were dropping.
No one heard, but everyone had their own yells as we plummeted to our deaths.
"Help meeeeeeeeeeeeee…..!" Shrieked Sasuke.
"Fuck me Sasuuuuuuuu…..!" Screamed Naruto.
"I hate you alllllll…...!" Yelled Gaara.
"Oh shittttttttttt….!" I screamed as I raised my hands up in the air.
It literally felt like my intestines were going to come out of my mouth as we went down. For a few seconds I felt free. Like I was flying. We were going so fast and we were so high up. That feeling everyone had when they freefall stayed within me longer than expected.
Then boom. A splashing sound could be heard. A high wall of water surrounded us and went down on us all. Drenching us so much that my freaking boxers felt wet.
"Woohoo! That was amazing!" yelled Naruto as he raised a fist in the air. "Yosh! I conquered the Jackhammer!"
"Oh really? I thought I heard you say that you wanted to get off the ride?" said Sasuke still shaken up.
"What did you think of it Gaara?" I asked him.
"Umm, it was okay." He said. I had to smile. I knew for a fact he was scared but he won't admit it.
"Damnit, my clothes are soaking wet." Sasuke said looking disgustingly at his clothes. "It smells like bathroom water."
The voice in the speakers began to talk again as we neared the exit. "Please carefully make your way out and exit to your left." It said.
As we got out I just noticed how wet everyone was. Naruto was drenched from head to toe and so was Sasuke. I looked at Gaara who was trying to brush water off his shirt. My eyes bulged as I saw flesh beneath his white shirt. The water caused his shirt to look see through since he was wearing white. I almost exploded when I noticed a nipple ring on his left nipple. I never noticed it before. Although his now see through tee shirt was showing every delicious part of him, it also showed me the faint purple he had on his lower back. I wanted to say something, but I couldn't. Was it any of my business?
By the looks of it, Gaara didn't really know it was there either since he wasn't trying to hide it at all. I mean a bruise that big, you would have to know right?
"What the hell, I didn't notice they took pictures on the ride." Sasuke said interrupting my thoughts. He was starting at a booth where you can view the picture they took while you were on the ride.
Naruto went up to him and started cracking up. "Haha! Dobe look at you!" he said while pointing at our picture on the screen. Gaara and I joined them.
Sasuke looked pale like he did when we were on the ride. Up on the screen, there was Sasuke clinching on to Naruto like he was the last piece of male meat on the planet. His arms wrapped tightly around Naruto's waist. I couldn't help but laugh too. Naruto had his hands raised in the picture while he did peace signs with both hands.
"I look horrible." Gaara said as he looked at himself on the screen.
"No you don't, you look cute." I said. Gaara pretended to cough and look somewhere else.
If he looked horrible then I must look horrendous. I had the most ugliest grin ever and my eyes almost looked like they were bulging out. One of my arm was raised while the other one was on Gaara's shoulder. Gaara had this angry frightened look on him and he was holding onto the hand that was on his shoulder. It really was a cute picture and I was going to get my hands on some copies.
"Damn I want a copy but I'm broke." Said a disappointed Naruto.
"If you want a copy you can ask me. I guess I can get some for you." Sasuke said coolly.
"Really? You would get some for me? Oh thank you!" Naruto ran up to Sasuke and gave him a hug. To my surprise Sasuke didn't push him away.
"Sasuke I'll come with you. I'm going to get a few copies to myself. Haha, I still can't stop looking at you." I told my friend.
We went to the booth and Sasuke bought two 8" x 6 ½" copies. While I bought three 8" x 6 ½" copies.
"Here dobe" Sasuke said giving Naruto the extra copy.
"Gaara, I also got you a copy. I know your broke and all." I said handing him the plastic bag.
"Neji, you didn't have to." He said surprised.
"No don't worry about it. I want you to have a copy anyways"
"How come you bought three? What are you going to do with your two other copies." Asked Sasuke.
"I'm going to put one in my room and one in my locker."
"What the hell, how come you never bought pictures when you and I went on rides huh?" he said. "Is there someone here who changed your mind?" he teased.
A sweat dropped down my forehead. "Shutup Sasuke, unless you want to get killed." I warned him.
The rest of western world was fun. We played a few games here and there. Went on a few smaller rides. One game in particular that we went to was where you shoot a water pistol into a target causing your horse to move. So basically it was kind of like a horse race. I won of course. For some reason Naruto was dead last. He was fifteenth place. Even the little seven year old sitting next to me whooped his ass. Naruto claimed his piston malfunctioned. We just laughed at him.
Sasuke came in third place and won himself a cowboy hat, which he willingly gave to Naruto. Of course Naruto wore it the second Sasuke gave it to him. I got to choose from various stuffed animals since I was the winner. I chose a doll that resembled Gaara. It had red hair and black rings around his eyes. It was suppose to be an anime character from TV. But I got it because it reminded me of him.
"I guess its Underworld next." I told everyone. Gaara smiled.
Underworld was totally different from Western World. This world had dead trees lining the streets and sidewalks. There was zombie's walking around instead of cowboys. In the background they had some creepy music playing with an occasional howling of a ghost as a sound effect. It was kind of cheesy. Naruto on the other hand was holding on the Sasuke's arm and kept darting his eyes left to right. There were fake hills filled with tombstone and the buildings all looked like old Victorian houses.
"What the fuck, its daylight. How can you be so scared?" asked Sasuke.
"Me? Scared? Ha." Naruto said as he stared down the zombie passing out fliers.
"Let's go there." Gaara said pointing at the huge almost torn down building.
"Oh, good choice. That's what they call the 'The Asylum Tour'. You go in there and take a ride around the hospital asylum filled with crazy doctors and dead stuff chasing after you. I've been on it twice and it was awesome." I told him.
"Then I've picked the right choice." Gaara smirked.
"I hate you Gaara." Naruto glared at him.
We got in line and waited about fifteen minutes. This ride seemed to be popular since the like was a little bit longer than Jackhammers.
"This way please." Said a guy dressed in a bloody doctor's uniform. He gave us a look like he was going to kill us.
"Stop looking at me like that creepy old guy!" Naruto told the guy. The bloody doctor gave out a sinister laugh which caused Naruto to hang on to Sasuke more tightly.
"Dobe, the guy's been working here since forever. He won't kill you." Sasuke rolled his eyes.
He let in about twenty people into the lobby of the asylum. The bloody doctor closed the door and we were engulfed into darkness. Then suddenly a huge TV turned on right above us. I've done this routine already, basically they are telling you the 'history' of the asylum and that taking the tour might result in you never making it back. It was of course a bunch of bull but at least Naruto believed every word of it.
After the five minutes of watching, a door opened from behind the crowd revealing another bloody doctor. "Come in ladies and gentlemen to the famous asylum tour." He cackled. He led us through a dimmed narrow hallway and through a huge double door entrance where the ride began. I forgot to tell the rest that the coasters were two seaters. As in, there is no one attached to you in the front, nor the back. So basically, the other two people closest to you would be about twelve feet away.
"What the heck." Naruto whispered to Sasuke. "Why are we so seated apart from the others?"
"So the crazy killer patients would have enough room to chase you."
"Eek!" cried Naruto.
Sasuke and Naruto went in the coaster before us while Gaara and I took the next one. The place was almost pitch black, with the sounds of people screaming in the background. It was probably people who rode before us who were already doing the ride.
So the coaster made its way around the 'hospital' slowly, stopping once in a while to tell a short story about that certain area. Although the ride wasn't that scary, Gaara and I heard Naruto's screams in front of us. Gaara started laughing which caused me to laugh as well.
During a certain part of the ride, we stopped at a wide hallway with numerous doors where they supposedly kept their most craziest patients locked up. I already knew what was coming.
The 'crazy patients' started coming out of their rooms and chasing after the people on the coasters. Gaara just merely laughed at the whole ordeal.
"Sasuke help!" we heard Naruto yell. This caused me and Gaara to crack up.
"He shouldn't of said that." I told Gaara.
"Why is that?" he asked still trying to stop his laugh.
"Watch…" I told him. And just on queue, the 'crazy patients' went after the most frightened rider on the ride, which was of course Naruto.
That's when we heard the most ear piercing scream ever. "Eeeeek! Sasuke you bastard! Help me! Why is this ride so damn slow? Eeeeek! Get off of me!"
We heard faint laughs which we were guessing were Sasuke's. A few seconds later, the ride began to pick up speed again.
I looked over at Gaara who was still laughing a little bit. He looked so hot. I just had to do it. So, deciding that I should, I put a hand on Gaara's leg which caused him to face me. I reached over with my other hand and tilted his chin up. That's when I was staring into his eyes. He had a looked of surprise on his face. I licked my lips wetting them a little just in case they were chapped. That's when I kissed him. My lips against his soft silky ones. Even though his lips were small, they were a perfect fit on my lips.
I was waiting for Gaara to push me away but he didn't. Surprisingly, he kissed me right back. This time he wrapped his arms around my waist as our kiss deepened. We ignored the noise in the background where Naruto's screams could be heard and sounds of chainsaws cutting up some object. It was just me and him right now.
Who would have thought, me and Gaara's first kiss would be at an asylum.
We broke apart from our kiss. We just looked at each other and had the 'did that just happen' look on our face. My lips began to tingle, signaling me that it wanted more of that sweet taste. So I slowly leaned over kissing him again. During our kiss, his mouth broke apart for just a second, enough time for me to snake my tongue in between them. I heard Gaara moan as my tongue began to explore every crevice inside his damp mouth.
That's when Gaara slipped his own tongue in between my lips. I felt his wet, warm tongue tickling the roof of my mouth and soon enough, our slippery tongues were battling for dominance. Gaara was moaning louder, which turned me on so much. His sweet taste engulfing my mouth. Both of my hands were now were on either side of Gaara's face, tilting it up so I can get a better taste. While he now had his arms wrapped around my neck.
I stopped with our tongue wresting and began to suckle on his lower lip. Licking up the saliva that was trickling down from it. He stuck his tongue in my mouth and I gently sucked on that as well before we continued with our french-kissing. I took one hand away from Gaara's face and placed it on his chest. My hands snaking its way to the pierced nipple which I now knew he had.
He breathed in heavily as my fingers met with the metal object. I began to gently squeeze and twist the pierced nipple and felt it getting more erect every second. Gaara stopped kissing me and placed his wet mouth on my neck, gently licking it with his wet tongue like he was preparing to do something with it later. I was right, once he stopped licking he roughly started sucking on my neck. It hurt and felt good at the same time that it caused me to moan pretty loud.
"Thank you for riding the Asylum Tour ladies and gentlemen! Please come again muhahaha!" said a loud eerie voice in the background causing Gaara and I to stop.
I quickly began to fix my hair which was now all in tangles and Gaara began to straighten up his shirt where it was now wrinkled at the nipple area.
"That was nice." I whispered to myself.
I guess I whispered too loudly because Gaara replied with a "Yeah it was."
We looked at each other and laughed a bit as we got out of the coaster.
"Holy shit guys, that was the most freakiest ride I've been to!" Naruto said running towards us.
"Yeah I think everyone in the whole building knows Naruto." Sasuke said right behind him. "You scream like a little girl who just got her dolls beheaded by their older brothers."
"Hey what the hell is that?" Naruto said pointing at me.
Sasuke looked at where Naruto was pointing and began to laugh.
I was a bit confused. Gaara on the other hand looked shocked and his face turned fiery red. He turned around not facing any of us.
"Oh hell no, is that a hickey?" Naruto said wide eyed. "Oh my god it is! Haha!"
I quickly put a hand over the area they were pointing at and remembered about Gaara sucking on my neck. Oh crap. It still felt wet.
"This thing? Hehe, umm, its nothing." I said, trying to play it off.
Sasuke laughed louder. "Yeah right. Its nothing huh? Don't tell me it was the asylum patients that sucked on you. Haha!" Naruto laughed with Sauske as soon as he heard that.
The rest of the day went by pretty fast after that with Naruto and Sasuke making fun of Gaara and I the whole time. We ate at this really awesome restaurants where the building is actually underwater. So the surroundings looked like you were in huge dinning hall in a sunken pirate ship.
We visited the rest of the worlds which were Water World, Miniature World, Cartoon World, and lastly, Future World where we were now picking up our photo that we took when we first arrived.
"Thanks for the presents Neji." Gaara said to me while holding the little skull key chain with our picture on it that I bought for him after the Asylum Tour. Little did we know, they took pictures on that ride and it took a picture of us making out. Of course I had to buy it, so I bought Gaara one as well.
We finally got to the photo booth to retrieve our photo. We gave the lady our ticket and she put it in the computer for us to see.
"I don't like it." Said Sasuke. "I had my eyes closed."
"Haha, you did, didn't you? Well, I think you look cute in it." Naruto smiled at him.
"Really?" he paused. "Can I get two copies then?" he said quickly to the lady giving a hint of pink on his cheeks.
"I'll get two as well." I told her.
"Neji, don't tell me your going to give me the other one." Gaara said. "You paid for me this whole time kind of."
"Don't worry, I don't mind at all." I told him. "Plus, its your first time coming here so I want you to have a lot of memories of it."
I looked at my watch, it was 4:50pm. "My driver should be picking us up in the front in ten minutes so lets make our way there now." During our walk to the front, everyone kept telling each other how much fun today was. I was glad. I had fun too.
Just in time, once we arrived, my driver parked right in the front of us. "Very good Sebastian" I told him as we got in. He tipped his hat me as he drove off back to Kanoha.
The ride back was the same. It consisted of Naruto talking and the rest of us just ignoring him. This time though, Gaara was sitting particularly close to me. This of course, made me happy. "Gaara can I ask you something?" I asked.
"Sure, what is it?" he said.
This has to be the cheesiest thing I've ever said, "Can I get your number?"
He smirked, "Sure, only if I can get yours." Hell yes!
We exchanged our numbers and I told him I'll be calling him sometime. We parted ways as Sebastian and I dropped them off home one by one. Luckily for me, I made it home just in time. A few minutes after I got in my room, uncle arrived from work. Phew, close one.
Meanwhile, back at the Star Wonderland parking lot…
"Did you spot them uncle?"
"Yes I did dear nephew of mine." The man grinned as he stepped in the car.
"Good, I want you to remember their faces." Said the boy. "Especially the raven haired bastard." He spat out.
"Anything for my nephew." Hissed the man, almost snake like.
(AN): Hey guys I hoped you enjoyed that. I would of written a story about every single 'world' but that will take too long hehe. And yes, my grammar sucks, I was really in a rush to upload the chapter. Anyways, read and review please… I love reading reviews! Thanks all!
