Disclaimer: I don't [and never will...unless I find out im the heir to the dude who owns yugioh] own yugioh...just the plot.
Hey guys! Im BAAACK! You know what that means?!?!
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The Results: Of the 15 ppl that reviewed, 6 wanted me to update weekly, the others didn't say anything so IT WAS UNANIMOUS! WOW! I feel loved! =)
ANOTHER IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMNT:
I WILL ALWAYS UPDATE ON SATURDAYS OR FRIDAY NIGHTS! IM NOT PROMISING EVERY SATURDAY OR FRIDAY NIGHT BUT I'LL TRY.
And guess what? Since Yami is gonna be gone for a few days, I got Kaiba to help me...isn't that just awesome?
Kaiba: yeah, great...now you get to write about my life...not to mention shape it however you want
Me: ah yes...the power to be an author!
Kaiba: aite, lets just get this over with
Me: you're new...we have to do the reviews first!
Kaiba: oookay...
Mangafreak2273: oooh, tempura sounds GOOD! I know, how dumb of Yugi! I hate when guys do that, but you know, its just a phase...I think...they just need to grow up a bit more to get to know who they REALLY love. That's just my opinion. Wadda think? Ooo..lucky! sep. 8?!?! Mine started on aug. 11! Damn it its like a months difference! Lucky lucky! Well, review again plz! And thankx for the last one!
Oni Neko: Oh, you won't have to since I've decided to update every week, or if that doesn't work out then prolly once every 2 weeks, whatev, im still gonna update asap! Hope that made you happy, and hey! Ur a new reviewer! Welcome to the kewl world of DENIAL! Heh, that just sounded gay, anywho, hope you review again! Thankx for the last one!
Kathaleen: im not really sure what you mean by the quizzes. Like the thing I asked if I should update every week or the next summer? But yeah, im gonna update them weekly if possible. That just made your day didn't it? Lol! I know im crazy and weird. Well, hope you like this chappie and review! Thankx for the last one!
Kevin: I really would like to make more couples but I don't want many made-up characters like nina. I wanted to pair everyone up but it turns out there aren't enough gals to go around. Look at the bottom of the chapter to see what ive done about it. And about the cussing, I'll try to keep it to a minimum but when uve got to cuss...you've gotta cuss. Lol! I'll put a warning in the beginning of the chapter.
Kaiba'sAngle: Well, here you go, I am typing it weekly! Thankx for reviewing! And plz do click that review button again cuz im gonna be waiting for yours! Review this time toooooooooooo!
Random man: thankx! I liked your 6-word review...he he. Im just kidding around, thankx for reviewing! And do it this time!
Freak09: Aug 23? WOW! That one of my really good guy friend's bday! That was really random, anywho, thankx! Im glad u like my story! =) im gonna write it weekly now. But that better also mean that you're gonna review every week! Jk! Im not forcing you to, but I would really be nice to have one from you! Thankx for reviewing!
Black-Lighting: you're another new reviewer! Kewl! Im glad you like how I made her in this...I tried to make her like how she is in the series, but she isn't all that cool, a little but I guess I made her cooler, he he. Well, yeah! Cool a Texan! Awesome! I live in Katy, its near Houston. Since the beginning of the story ive been like preventing myself from saying ya'll but its SO hard! Lol! Oh, yeah, the ENZO! I would drool if I would see it! Thankx for reviewing!
Chii-chan: thankx! And I updated as soon as I possibly could! Im glad u like it! Review this time too plz!
Nkitty29: nope, seto doesn't know yet...he might FIND OUT or she might TELL HIM or he might NEVER get TO KNOW! You never know! He he, thankx! I updated as soon as I could. And im gonna update weekly now! =)
Anya06: yeah, seto isn't like really cold, I guess he just doesn't know emotions and that just makes him APPEAR mean cuz hez so confused! Im glad u got that! You must be really good in English! Well, review again plz!
Tinyflyer02: hey, I've been wondering why your name is tinyflyer02...why is it? Im just really curious. Ooo...an aid, that's perty kewl! I've wanted to be one, then you get to go in all the different classes and look at hot guys...its just me though. He he. Im glad u liked my song...I made it all by meself! So proud of me! Review again and thanx!
Jasmine: since you wanted me to call you Jasmine, Jasmine it is. Hey fairy youkai onna! Haha. Well, I hope you like this chapter as much as my last one! Review again!
Chinxy: im gonna update it weekly as you said, thankx for the compliment! I hope you'll like this one too and WILL WRITE ME A REIVEW! He he. Thankx for the last one!
Le Petit Chaperon Rouge: WOW!............WOW!..............WOW!...........you can not understand how wonderful your review made me feel! It was the longest review I have ever gotten and a really really really cool one! Well then, LPCR, this review reply is gonna be long as well! Yeah, I take Spanish 3, I was in pre-ap but I switched out cuz its SO HARD! Now I have regular Spanish 3, but yeah, oooh, manga books! See what I do is that I go to some book store like books-a-milllion or barnes&nobles and then just read them there, ofcourse ive only done that for one issue, but that's what I plan on doing to save MONI! I just had to go to a tournament today and I came back at 12, (it started at 3!) so that's like 9 hrs! omg! Exhausted? YES! But you know, I just felt like not updating would be a really mean thing to do, so look, here I am...im so nice!...he he, you probably know by now that I love me...egotistical it may sound, hey, I love myself! Now, I do live in the US, but I don't really like it here, I mean, I moved like 2-3 years ago, and I guess I just haven't lived here long enough to like it...people here are REALLY sluty, so yeah, that's where I got my character nina from...kindda funny. Well, WOW! I have to say that is MY longest response, feel special...cuz u are! Well, review! Review! Review!
Me: NOW we can continue...enjoy!
DENIAL
By yamizmine and the Seto Kaiba
Chapter 10: Seto's date and Joey's clothes
Serenity woke on a Friday and found herself doing the usual routine. She woke Joey up and made oatmeal for him. She pulled out a granola bar for herself and started on her homework once she was done dressing and putting on makeup.
She was wearing her pink skirt and blue blouse. She had tied her hair up but it still flowed down to her mid back. She put on white flip-flops and was ready for Joey.
He cam out sluggishly as usual, "Ah, finally FRIDAY!"
"Yeah, it took forever for it to come."
"Seren, do you wanna go with us to the mall...just to eat or something?"
"Joey, you know I would love to...but I have to do a job," she replied a little hesitantly and sadly.
"I...alright...if you don't want to hang out with-"
"Oh come on! I said I wanted to."
"Alright...now lemme see my sista smile."
Serenity smiled sarcastically. "hows this?"
"Naah, not good enough," and with that he started to tickle her which made her burst out laughing and tears started to flow out of her eyes. (((AWWW! ISN'T HE THE PERFECT BROTHER?)))
She hated the fact that she could never hang out with Joey and Yugi and Mai and Tristan and Duke or even Tea. If felt like a horrid sensation at the bottom of her stomach but she could do nothing about it. Her debts were being paid quickly now and they would be able to afford to go to college if she saved her money and the government kept giving her financial aid. That and scholarships with the help of college financial aid would get her and Joey into a good one.
"Its all for the future," she told herself.
"Lets go already!" Joey yelled when Serenity was done fixing her hair.
They got to school alright and when it was out, Serenity had the pleasure of spending a moment with the gang.
Serenity had found out about Tea's interfering with Yugi's request and about his rejection and also about Tea's insults. "So, is Yugi still upset?" Serenity asked Tea that day.
"No, he's alright, I think my words are sinking in," she said, sighing.
"Well, that's good...I mean...Nina isn't the nicest person."
"And Yugi loves her."
"You know Tea, sometimes...it just seems like you like someone...but it just turns out that its just like a "spur of the moment" kindda thing...like a phase in life."
"Like you and Tristan?" she said very quietly.
"What?"
"I'm not that dense...Mai thought that you had someone else in mind."
"Tea...this is Mai...the girl that spends hours trying to hook up people..."
Tea giggled, "true."
As it happens, the conversation didn't go on about her relationship with Tristan. He was a very sweet guy, that much was true. Everyday he would have roses in her locker counting down the days till the dance. ((((AWWW!!!!))))
Today she had found 14 pink roses. The dance was in 2 weeks, she had yet to buy her dress.
At that moment, everyone began to part, including herself as she said goodbye to everyone. Tristan came up to her and gave her a quick kiss on the cheek before Joey could run him down with his car.
She was soon waiting for Kaiba's limo to pick her up.
She actually had to wait long.
"Kaiba is usually on time...I mean, he's a business guy...and he's Kaiba! What could be taking so long?" She asked herself.
What could? Hmm..well, lets see exactly what was taking so long.
====Seto====
Kaiba walked out of the school with his necessary books, binders and folders to do the days work. He also had his laptop in its case and he carried it in his hand. When he came out, he saw the familiar site of a certain girl trying to entrance him with her "beauty". It was Nina.
"Hey Kaiba," she said in a seductive voice.
"What do you want?"
"I want you."
Kaiba smirked and remarked, "I don't want you."
"Kaiba, the dance is in 2 weeks, and I want to go out with you."
"What if I don't?"
"Then I have an alternative offer for you."
"You're wasting my time," he said and tried to get past her but she grabbed his collar and pulled his face near.
"Oh, its quite important because if you don't go out with me, I'll tell the whole world about how you asked me when we were little and I refused and you wept for me."
Kaiba gulped, this was the truth and both of them knew it. Nina had a wicked smile on her face which resembled some what a witch.
"What is it with people blackmailing me?" he asked himself and really quickly went over her "alternative offer".
I would be embarrassed as hell
nobody will respect me
People will know about my past emotions and they'll feel sympathy for me
It'll seem like I'm weak
My company is the best because they fear me...that fear will disappear
Then he looked over the outcome if he went.
He would get out of it...perfectly fine
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The decision was clear. He would have to go.
"You are a bitch," he started out, "and I hate you but I will go if you will NEVER mention this."
"I swear...darling."
At that Kaiba gave her one of his icy cold glares and she quickly melted, "Seto."
His glare was still there, "Kaiba," he stated.
"Kaiba," she repeated his words.
At that moment he left her to go to his limo. Leaving her smiling. "I finally got him!" she remarked.
"God he's such a bastard! But he's the most popular kid who no girl has dated! I'm gonna be the first..." she said to herself and walked to her car.
====Serenity====
She was about to leave and really walk to his house when she saw a black limo come up and stop at her feet.
Serenity got inside and before she could ask him he said out plainly, "I was delayed."
It had been a week since she had first started to work, yet she still hadn't penetrated the steel shield he held up and find the real Kaiba. But she wanted to talk to him, it seemed like that would release some of his stress.
"So, do you have a lot of work to do?"
"Yes."
"Oh...well, what classes are you taking?" It seemed a pretty dumb question to be asking in the end of the year.
((((Remember ppl, they are: Serenity-15 and Kaiba-16))))
"Journalism 4, English 4 AP, Calculus AP, Chemistry AP, World History AP, Speech, and Spanish 4 AP," he said without much interest.
((((Now I explain AP, again, I live in texas (USA) and we also have AP courses, which are college courses in high school, that way, you don't have to take it in college and they are HARD!))))
"Wow, I'm just taking Pre-Ap's...but I didn't know you were in Journalism...I mean, I haven't read any of your articles."
"I...write under a different name."
"You mean the unknown writer? Anonymous?"
"Yes...this is confidential information-"
"You can trust me Kaiba and you write great editorials!" she said and smiled then looked at the approaching mansion.
When she was inside, she was greeted by the hyper Mokuba and she set out to work with him. She first, played hide and go seek, then she played the virtual game, and then she made him do his homework. They had lunch alone since Kaiba wasn't in the kitchen, he was, to her disappointment, working...as always.
After that, she took him out to the park until sunset and when she came back, it was 8:40. They watched TV for the 20 minuets and she sent Mokuba off to bed.
Then she made her way to Kaiba, this time nervous because she wanted to ask him something...important.
She got to his room and opened it and saw the room was empty. Her check was not there, so she decided to wait. She stood and looked at Kaiba's desk. It was worse than Joeys!
"He really needs a girl in his life," she said to herself.
'You could be his girl,' by now Serenity had gotten use to her second voice.
"I'm just going to pretend I didn't hear that cuz no matter what I say, you'll always be against me!"
'Not if you say the truth...that you love him.'
"Fine-I love him...now poof, be gone!"
'You didn't say that with your heart...but don't worry you will...one day.'
With that the second voice disappeared as Serenity picked up a picture of Mokuba and admired the little boy. A sharp pain stunned her in her side. Kaiba had just poked her.
"OW!"
"Sorry, I had to do that."
She rubbed her sides while saying, "No you didn't!"
"Yes I did, and I have to write your check..." he did in a second and tore it out to hand it to her.
She took it and asked the question she wanted to, "Well, Kaiba, you know the dance is coming up and all," to this Kaiba looked up, "well, its for Mai," to this he gave her an uplifted eyebrow, "not that I want you two together...its just that Joey has a very bad sense of style and I was...hoping that you could help me shop for his clothes."
Kaiba finally relaxed, "Why should I help her?"
"Well...she's really nice...well, can you at least do it for me?"
"Why me? Don't you have other people you can pester?"
"Well, you seem toknowwhattowear...and well, if I'm pestering you, I'll just as Tristan."
"Fine," he said suddenly, although he said it without really contemplating it. It seemed like he didn't like the idea of her being with Tristan...he just couldn't put a finger on why he agreed. But he was happy to see her reaction.
"REALLY? WOW! Cool...how about tomorrow?"
"What about Mokuba?"
"Didn't he tell you that he had a sleepover?"
"Ugh, he tells me when I can't refuse."
"Smart guy."
"Yeah...well...when?"
"How about at 3?"
"Afterschool?"
"Yeah, don't tell me you can't make time for a poor soul," she said and gave him a puppy dog look, in which she clasped her hands together.
This on Kaiba's side had a BAD effect, this clasping of hands made her squeeze her boobs which created a cleavage...dying with shame, he automatically uttered out, "ALRIGHT!"
"Thanks!" she said and started out the door.
"Bye Kaiba," she said and left.
I was about to stop when she asked him but I figured the waiting would be uncool...so I just ended it...so anywho, tell me what you thought!
Kaiba: phew, that was one chapter down and...how many to go?
Me: about 100
Kaiba: faints
Me: CPR!
Serenity comes in and does CPR on him...Kaiba VERY happy. He he.
I was kidding about the 100 chapter
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This is your chance to be in a yugioh fanfic! Mine to be precise! Isn't that cool? Well, if you want to be in here, then please give me the following info about you in your review! Thanks!
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THE MOST IMPORTANT: Who you would wanna go to the dance with in yugioh (remember seto is taken!):
The reason im putting a reader in here is because I thought it would be fun...and I don't think another writer has done this before...so it makes me feel special! =)
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See ya next time! Toodles!