Authors Note: Sorry for this isn't a real chapter, just a sneak peek as to what I have planned for one of the future chapters, and so this isn't Beta Read so there WELL be spelling and grammar mistakes in this, please keep this in mind. The reason for doing this now and instead of putting it at the end of a chapter as I planned is to let you all know what is going on with this story:
I have two new Beta Readers, SuperNova64 who has been with me for three months now, and I AM ZE BETA who I have been working with for a week. The three of us been talking about the future of this story and where we should go with it, as they say how I have written it so far as been off track and confusing and so I AM ZE BETA thought it best to rework this story - which I don't mind doing.
At this moment SuperNova64 is thinking about this, and should he agree with this idea too we'll be rewriting this story to make it smother and the way I had planned in the start of this all. However, if he does not agree, we will be carrying on how things are. I want all three of us to agree upon this before I start anything.
So until SuperNova64 has thought this over, I thought I give this sneak peek now instead of waiting for him to decide what to do. I'm doing this for another reason, I need your help and advice, whilst this is what I want, I don't know who Harry'll be asking, one of his Sekirei or one of Ashikabi, thinking of using Seo Kaoru or the Lightning Twins to explain this. However, whomever I use, I'll be altering the scene to match this. At the moment, this is as if Harry is talking to a Sekirei.
So with any delay, onto the sneak peek:
Sneak Peek:
"I have a few questions I would like to ask you about your race and me being an Ashikabi," Harry said to ?, "let's start with Ashikabi. From what Musubi told me, and Ashikabi is a special person that a Sekirei meant to find meant to find. And although your race never meet them, Sekirei are born to serve their Ashikabi, to follow and love them for all time, to do whatever they ask and require of us to their best ability, no matter what it could be. It's the Sekireis job to guide them to the higher sky above. And that they were limited in what they could do power wise without one. Did she miss anything?"
"No that's the basic of it all," replied ?, who couldn't think of anything that Musubi could have missed about what an Ashikabi was, "I can't think of anything to add as to what an Ashikabi is. Apart for that we can do certain skills when an Ashikabi gives a Sekirei a kiss."
"So can anyone become an Ashikabi?" asked Harry, he wanted to know as if anyone could become one, he was worried what kind of person a Sekirei could end up with, even if there was only a certain type, they still could be asses, but the chances would be less.
"No they cannot," explained ?, "to become an Ashikabi, a human would need a certain gene to become one. We're not sure how the gene came to be or how they got it, just that they were born with it."
Harry let out a sigh of relief as he heard this, the chances of a Sekirei finding an asshole whilst still there, was cut down big time, so Harry could only hope that they wouldn't find one. "Next question is what is a Sekirei? From what Musubi told me, you're from outer space and that your ship crash. So I would like to know where you came from and why your ship crash to Earth for. As Musubi said she couldn't remember anyone saying anything."
? looked thoughtful as she thought about this, trying to remember what she was told before shook her head and said sadly, "And she would be right, we don't know what happened or where we came from. The only Sekirei who would have any idea be Sekirei Number 1, as she was the only one awake at the time. As the other single numbers were babies held in cryogenic stasis, and the other 97 were embryos when we were found. Only Number 1 would know the reason behind the crash, and where we came from, and no one but top M.B.I Officials know who she is or where."
'So this Sekirei Number 1 is a female,' Harry thought to himself, at least that was one less question he needed to worry about. "So how is M.B.I and Professor Minaka involved? From what Musubi could remember, they keep an eye on you, and make sure that no one knows about you."
"That's about sums it up," ? explained thoughtfully, as she thought about it, "Professor Minaka found our ship, and with it he created the M.B.I, and used our technology for their own gain and make this world more advanced as it already is. Although from I heard from others, Professor Minaka seems to be using Sekirei technology to his personal gain, as in how I don't know."
'This isn't good,' Harry thought darkly, 'and from what I know of Minaka, and knowing nothing what the Sekirei technology is like, I can suspect nothing good coming from Minaka using it from his own gain.' Deciding not to think on it too much for now he asked, "What do you know about the MBI Bank Card?"
"Not much to be honest," replied ?, "All I know is that we are given them to support ourselves and our Ashikabi."
Harry just nodded, it was as Musubi told him, but he had there was something more to them, but Harry wasn't sure what. He had kept Musubi's card in a safe and highly warded as he could, and only used it for the basic things. If he was going to be forced into this stupid game, he would have Minaka pay for their basic needs, at least until Harry could figure out what his next steps should be, be it escaping the damn city or set up base here.
Shaking his head from these thoughts, he had few more questions to ask, one that he hoped well let him decide what to do next. Therefore, he asked, "Musubi mentioned that the M.B.I had made some adjustments to your race what adjustments are these?"
? thought a few moments before answering, "Slight genetic modifications done to us over time to allow us to control our powers as well as other changes."
"What other changes?" Harry asked himself in a whisper, as he closed his eyes and rubbed the bridge of his nose again, fighting a sinking feeling. He was building himself a very dark and grim picture of what was going on with the Sekirei, but he kept his thoughts to himself for now. He really doubt they would know what other changes were made to them.
"I've got two more question to ask, about why you exist." Harry explained to ?, "Musubi explained that you lot and your Ashikabi need to take part in some kind of battle royale where until there is only one Sekirei and Ashikabi left where they are lead to as Musubi calls it the higher sky above, where they are granted a wish, I believe one for each, but wish can be anything and it would be granted. Is that true or is there more to it?"
"No that's the basic of it all." admitted ?.
"Okay last question," said Harry, "What if a Sekirei and their Ashikabi don't want to fight or have this grand prize, and just want to escape it all?"
End of the Sneak Peek!
Authors Note: Now I end the Sneak Peek here, as I'm not sure if Harry will be talking to Seo Kaoru or another Ashikabi, or talking to a Sekirei. Therefore, I would like to ask you who should Harry be talking to, and how he or she should reply to this question.
I would also would like to request some ideas for this part, not only to ask who Harry should be talking to, but also what other questions he should be asking about the Sekirei Plan, depending who he is talking to, and what the answer that should be given. If you got any ideas please leave a review or send me a PM or an email to dark_harry_fan hotmail dot com
Now before I let you go, I would like your thoughts about something: SuperNova64 and I AM ZE BETA are trying and failing to change my mind about a few things about this story and Harry Potter and the New World!
Sekirei Plan: They do not like it that I have Hermione and Luna are together as lovers and going to have Sekirei of their own and be friends with benefits with Harry. However, SuperNova64 and I AM ZE BETA are trying andfailing to make me change my mind about this and make Hermione and Luna Harry's lovers, and don't want them to have their own Sekirei.
Whilst this is what they are trying to do, I'm not going to change my mind about this, there are too many with them as lovers in stories. I don't mind them as friends with benefits from now and then, but I don't want them as lovers and I want them to have their own Sekirei. But I would like to hear your thoughts about this.
New World: Now, SuperNova64 and I AM ZE BETA have a few problems with the ideas I have for the Veela and the Goblins, haven't talked about the idea for the Werewolves yet as I just thought that up. You see at the end of the chapter called History Rewritten - Part 1, within the alternate dimension that I'm setting up, I had a magical shockwave that would change the world around them apart for monster that would appear around the world. Here are the changes that I have thought up with so far:
Goblins: The first thing that I wanted and something SuperNova64 isn't too bother about, not sure about I AM ZE BETA, is their looks, was thinking that they would look like some like this: www dot creativeuncut dot com
But they are bothered about this idea: I was thinking that the magical shockwave could not only make them bigger, but as I AM ZE BETA calls it break the Chains of Servitude and make them into the warrior race that they used to be instead of bankers that they are now. I was thinking that they would be having their own island and so don't need to bend down to people any more, as they would have their own land that they would always wanted. Some would still bankers, for those who don't want to fight or enjoys the job, but they would be mainly warriors. I just don't see them much of bankers once they have their own land, but warriors.
Veela: Now the two don't like the idea that I want to change them to look like this: th00 dot deviantart dot net /fs21/PRE/i/2007/298/c/0/Bird_Woman_from_Flash_Gordon_by_
What I was thinking was that with the magical shockwave, it would break what I would call the curses that were upon the Veela race, to make them into ugly looking harpy-like creatures. Whilst they still have their powers, they have better control of them, and they would permanent wings. I was thinking that they would be like the amazons in the Greek Mythology, warriors and would only interact with men to gain children, to regrow their race.
Werewolves: Now I haven't talked to them about this so I don't know what they think, but I was thinking thanks to the magical shockwave, they become Lycans were they have control over their transformation. As I said I haven't told them this yet, but I would say that they would be against this as it would make it less of a Harry Potter story.
But the way I see it, with the magical shockwave and changes I said would happen, I was thinking it would differences in the story, making it different to the Harry Potter world we know, but I would like your thoughts about this.
I know that a lot of you don't normally review, but I would like to ask that for this one time only you do, as I would like your thoughts about all this. As it would help me greatly with my plans and with what I should do, so I hope you'll help me out on this. So I'll be awaiting for your help, and hope you can help me out.