NOTE: 5/11/16
I am currently going back thru the earlier chapters to do some corrections to grammar and story flow. There might be some slight changes, so check the dates on the retooled date to see if has been retooled or not since this date. The story though will remain the same.
Chapter Six
-Calm Before the Clash-
-In special Dimension Flashback start-
"Now girls, strip naked for it is time I placed the seals on you." Mito stated as she unrolled her large scroll and pulled out a large bottle of ink and a set of brushes.
Rias and her peerage was standing there in their underwear. Mito smiled as she looked at Rias.
"Now you all going to get the same seals, After I ink you up, I have to allow the ink to dry before I activate them." Mito stated as she looked at each one of them and smiled.
"It is going to be painful at first during activation, but once done you will gain much benefits from them." She stated as she pulled out one small bottle of ink for each of them.
"I need you to add blood to the ink so they will be tuned in to you, for you will be able to activate them and increase them since you get much stronger." Mito stated as Setsuna nodded her head and the looked at the older Hinata.
"Before you do that, Hinata?" Setsuna stated as she looked at the one from her world.
"I want you to implant my brother's eyes. The eye that you gave me is great and all, but it throws me off some." Setsuna stated as her Hinata smiled and then nodded her head.
"Understand and will be happy to do it." Hinata stated as Setsuna smiled.
"I suggest that you do it now, for it will be a week before you can train. Me and the others can start the training of them while you heal. I will place the seals on last on you." Mito stated with a smile on her face.
After Mito got finished inking all their bodies with seals, she at once activated them when the ink dried. At once, they all were slammed down into the ground due do the increase weight as pain shot thru their bodies.
Over time during training, seals were added that send both mana and chakra into a storage seal that could be accessed during emergencies. They were able to still use them, but it was more restricted and they had to focus to use their chakra and mana until the seals were released. Now that was something else had taken place.
They all talked about this new world. Mito had come across an ideal about hiding their true strength in plain sight. The seals made it where someone could tell that they were in the area, but cannot sense their power good enough to look at them or know their real level and strengths. Only an expert sensory person could pinpoint them, but still cannot see their real levels. Rias found this tactic interesting.
So in order to allow them to change into combat cloths and release seals on a fly so they could be ready to fight, Mito and Setsuna along with Rias created something that did not exist before. It would be a system that only Rias' peerage could do. It would become their trademark.
Several months later, as predicted Hinata's body did develop more, for she was now a match to the older version of herself. They had changed their cloths to training uniforms at Mito's insistence. Their school outfits were packed neatly in a box. Due to being Devils' and the drink that Rias had them drink, no one but Hinata aged. But when she turned 16 years old, she drunk hers as well.
At the moment, all of them were sitting at a table that was in the clearing that was in front of the large house. Rias had summoned a exact copy of the school into her person dimension that existed just a few yards from the manor.
The training was brutal and painful to the girls, including Setsuna trained alone side them. They all could see the difference in their bodies, skills, and reflexes as well their senses. Rias, Koneko, Kuroka, and Akeno all learned the dangers of fighting a ninja and had managed to refine their old skills and then merged them Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and some kind of weapon fighting style. They were close to be ninjas.
Rias cast a spell on Hinata, Mito, both Hinata's and their mother so they could write and read both old and new Latin, English, Chinese, Japanese, and Taiwanese. After Hinata and Setsuna gathered all the scrolls that belonged to the Uzumaki, Uchiha, Namikaze, and any forbidden Jutsu's, Mito during their training used Shadow Clones to translate the other scrolls and books.
Rias casted a spell on herself to transfer the knowledge on how to speak and read their language and with Mito's blessing was allowed to look, study, and learn the Uzumaki Scrolls. She would gain her own copy, but she stated that only those that descended from her will learn them.
That was not all, for the Kevlar rolls that Rias had, it was stored in this dimension. Due to this, Setsuna urged the girls to create their own combat uniforms. Rias that suggested that they create four sets of them as well exact copies of the school uniforms to safe than sorry. They also created new belts, boots, gloves, as well pouches and bags for scrolls, shuriken, and Kunai.
It shocked them when Setsuna unsealed the scroll that had all the weapons that she managed to gather after the fall of Konohagakure. She had a large selected and told them to choose their weapon, but she directed them weapons that were made of Chakra metal. They had learned that they did not just channel chakra, they could also channel spells and mana as well.
At the moment standing before them was Setsuna for she had called them all forward for a meeting. She had a surprise for them.
"Now, from what I understand from Rias and you all, we cannot caring our weapons on the street. This is not acceptable, for as ninja we must be prepared for battle at all times." Setsuna stated as she looked at everyone in front of her as Mito stood off to the side.
"So me and Mito created a new Jutsu that will deal with this, and it would work on hiding our true abilities." Setsuna stated as Mito smiled and walked up.
"We had created a two scroll system that we call Ninja Art-Transformation. There is one weakness, you cannot do it without the scrolls, but lucky that is solved and only be brought out when you are ready to use them and we call these scrolls artifacts." Mito stated with a smile as she nodded to Setsuna to show them.
(Yes, I borrowed and modified the ideal from the anime Seran Kagura for I thought it could exist due to magic and Jutsu. I do not own Seran Kagura)
Setsuna focused some chakra into her hand and wiped it down her right arm. At that moment, a new set of seals that they noticed that were not there before nor did anyone of them have them appeared. There was a puff of white smoke as a red trim colored scroll appeared in her left hand.
"This is scroll A and is hidden in your right arm. This scroll is created last, for it will cause all restriction seals to be released and the chakra and mana seals to open up allowing access to the stored mana and chakra in them." Setsuna stated as she looked at them.
"That is not all, for you are in your battle gear as well. Then all is stored into this scroll so that this could happen." Setsuna stated as she did two hand signs and held the scroll up to her mouth with both hands and had her index finger up.
"Ninja Art-Transformation!" She exclaimed as white smoke appeared covering her up.
Then the air filled with her mana and chakra. They all could detect her and what her level was. As the smoke cleared, they saw that she was dressed for battle now and the other scroll was no longer around.
Setsuna was now wearing form fitting black pants that had several pockets on the legs. On both upper and lower areas of her legs were pouches that were filled with shuriken and kunai. That was just the start, for she also had form fitting black shirt and they both were made of Kevlar. The same was for the black U.S. military boots and gloves that was her hands.
She also had on a black ceramic mask that had a white skull painted on it. The mouth area had a breathing device that was used by rain ninja. After discovering that the cartridge-type respirators were like the ones that were being used in this world. She was also wearing a black Marine Core Tactical Flak vest as well. It was something that she created from schematics that she found in the manor and used with Rias' permission.
Strapped to her back was the sword that belong to her brother which was a chakra blade, for it had survived on her back during the time in the void. That was not all, for her kodachi was also on her back, but strapped to the nylon military utility belt with compartments and pouches that she added to it that was black that she made as well using materials that were stored in the manor.
"I was dressed in this when Scroll A was created for me. With this, you can see that I am ready for battle and the smoke of the transformation can also be used as a smoke screen." Setsuna stated in a distorted voice as they all sensed her chakra and mana levels being high which told them that the seals were deactivated.
"Ara, ara, you look dangerous." Akeno stated with a smirk on her face as she looked at Setsuna.
"I can see the advantage we can have with this." Rias stated as she looked at the outfit.
"Yes, during the Rating Game we will fight without this stuff to let the opponent think that we are weaker then what we really are, then let us gain an advantage when we change. Nya." Kuroka stated with a grin on her face.
"Remember, you are no longer normal Devils, you guys are Devil Shinobi or Devil Ninja." Mito stated as she nodded to her Setsuna.
She then did the same before, but this time she did it on her left arm. This time, a black trimmed scroll appeared in her had.
"This is scroll B, it is created when all the seals were on and the collection storage seals were not open and collecting. It stored all the clothing that you were wearing at the time of transformation." Setsuna stated as she repeated the signs.
"Ninja Art: Transformation!" Setsuna exclaimed as she once again covered with white smoke.
When it cleared, it showed all her gear was gone along with the scroll. She was once again wearing the red training outfits that Mito had them wearing.
"Now, you must understand that damage and used weapons are in the same shape as they were when you change back into this sealed form. You much keep up maintenance and replenished what you used during battle or you will be in trouble." Setsuna stated as they all nodded their heads up and down.
"I like it." Rias stated as she recalled several animes and mangas that she had in her collection about people being able to transform.
"You can still use mana and chakra in this none combat uniform, but you will be only around 25 percent in levels. Control would be hard since you will always be training in it." Setsuna added as Mito nodded her head up and down.
"So, during everyday things we will be always training ourselves than." Rias stated with a wicked smirk on her face, for she had no problem with things that would give her and edge.
"That is right, for as ninja we will never stop training. This time we will work on the basics and get you all where you should be. Later on, we will bring you to another level and grant you something that is even rare among all ninja." Setsuna stated with a smirk on her face.
-Flashback end-
Rias sat there for a few moments. She had learned much, for both young Hinata, older Hinata, Setsuna, as well Hinata's mother and Mito explained to them about their lives of being ninja. Their way of life was not much more than hers; but the differences were that at times their actions were darker and bloodier. This brought out much thinking to them, there was so much death and destruction in their world and children of the villagers were this world's version of elite child soldiers.
"Akeno, go see if the president and tell him that if he wants to produce them, make weaker versions of them, for we cannot have anyone have the exact same gear as us." Rias stated as she looked up at Akeno and then at Setsuna as well Hinata with a smirk on her face.
"Your learning how to think like us Rias-sama." Setsuna stated with a smirk on her face.
"Why thank you." Rias stated as Akeno smiled as she vanished with a swirl of lighting as a teleportation seal had formed around her.
That was another change, for Rias learned of two main flaws in their teleportation magic that all Devils used. One was that they were acceptable to attacks if one forgot to place a barrier spell in place. Two was that they were not fast enough. With the Shunshin no Jutsu, it was faster, but did not cover the distance of the teleportation magic. But they managed to combine them together to create Shunshin No Teleportation Spell.
That was not all, for Akeno and Shion had hit off and came to an agreement. Akeno's old home will become the shrine of Kara, which will once again grant her presence in the world since not even the dragons have a shrine dedicated to her. That was not all, for the whole complex which is large will become a second base of operations for the peerage as well home to Fuu, Haku, Setsuna, Hinata, and Shion. It was also decided that Rias will move in as well.
As for Hinata and Setsuna? Well things changed between them since Hinata had learned that indeed Setsuna was not Sasuke. This was due to the Hinata of Setsuna's world. Older Hinata had taken younger Hinata aside during training and told her about her life. She even covered all the details and interaction with Setsuna. Due to that, Hinata had come to terms that she will share her Naruto with Setsuna.
That was not all that took place, for Hinata had learned something else as well, but Rias did not know of it. She had no ideal about the thoughts that were taking place in Hinata's mind.
"Yes, make sure Rias only recruit females, that would link all of us together as if we all married Naruto-kun." Hinata thought in her mind as a gleam of perversion appeared in her eyes.
-Flashback start-
Older Hinata and younger Hinata just sat there on the grass talking about the life that they both had. Hinata's mother was on break so her turn to train Hinata will not take place for another two hours.
"Hinata, have you and Naruto made love yet?" older Hinata asked as younger Hinata blushed at the thought and shook her head no.
"We….we were going to do it when the vertex came out and sucked up, why?" younger Hinata asked as older Hinata smirked.
"Are you going to let Naruto rebuild the clan the slow way, or the fast way?" older Hinata asked as she looked at her.
"If I find acceptable girls, the fast way, why?" younger Hinata asked as older Hinata blushed.
"Good, for it will take several girls for Naruto's stamina is so much we could not walk and needed medical Jutsus in order to do to missions and everyday stuff, it felt too good to stop though." older Hinata stated with massive lust in her voice.
"Even masturbation does not compare to Naruto." older Hinata stated as she looked at the younger and blushing Hinata with a smirk on her face.
"A harem for your sanity will be must, since you will make sure that he becomes a Devil for Rias told me about the changes that would take place during resurrection of someone into a Devil." Older Hinata stated as she looked at the younger one.
"I see." Younger Hinata began to think since she knew that she would be head wife, but if Rias joined, then she will share the rank with her.
"I think both Rias and the others would be perfect, for they are strong and I am sure they would fall for him." Younger Hinata stated as older Hinata smirked.
"Then I guess I say that we should make sure that Rias' peerage becomes his harem." Older Hinata stated as younger Hinata looked at her funny.
-Flashback end-
That was the plan, but she had to attempt to guide Rias down that way. That and assist in her getting rid of the fried chicken that is attempting to take her and the peerage. Rias had informed both her and Setsuna about him. He is a threat to her plans for Rias and Setsuna was brought into it and she agreed with older Hinata.
"Setsuna and Hinata, father accidentally used your full married name, I can cha…" Rias was saying when Hinata smirked and interrupted her.
"That is acceptable, for when we find Naruto she will return to being his wife Rias-sama, for we both cleared up things during training." Hinata stated as Rias smiled.
"Okay, well there are a few things that I need to take care of since we are back." Rias stated with a smile on her face as she did several hand signs.
"Shadow Clone Jutsu." Rias stated as two solid clones of her appeared on both sides of her.
"You, go to Sona and tell her we are back as well about our new operational standard, she will like it since she will be able to deal with request that are more suited for her and her peerage. Once she is done, walk out of the room and make sure no one sees you and then dispel." Rias stated as she pointed to the one that was to her right as that one nodded her head and then vanished as filled took out the filled forms that he filled out during training for Haku, Fuu, and Shion.
"You, go to father and tell him that these things need to done and that is Akeno's home address will be theirs as well." Rias stated as she began to write some things down.
"Also tell him that Hinata and Setsuna are members of the Forsaken race and that is all that I will state. Also inform him that Akeno's house will be headquarters as well when we are not in the club room for that is where we all are moving to and that includes me, Koneko, and Kuroka as well." Rias stated as she wrote down a list of things and then handed it to the shadow clone along with the forms.
"After you do this, just dispel right in front of him after tell him what you are so he knows that things are not the same with me anymore." Rias stated as the shadow clone nodded her head up and down walked out of the room.
"Hinata and Setuna, on that list, I have asked father to set up an order of contacts for you so you will not have to rely on the henge anymore, but the doctor who knows about our true form want to see you to make sure they will not hurt your eyes or interfere with your powers." Rias stated as Hinata nodded her head up and down to show that she understood.
-Back at Kuoh Academy week later-
Rias changed how things her peerage worked. They still did request, but they accepted those that went more into security, bodyguard services, espionage, intelligence, recovery, escorting, and investigations. That was not all, if real information was given and she saw the need for it, then exterminations and assassinations request were also accepted by her. She had gone as far to set up dummy companies and stuff so they could not be tracked.
This had several advantages. One it made them harder to track since their power is hidden to the point that you know that they were around, but not enough to pinpoint them.
It has been a week since the day Hinata and Setsuna was found. They gained in popularity among the male students. But both Hinata and Setsuna earned the name Taken Princess for they informed each and every male that confessed to them that they were married, so they could not accept their confessions. Both girls were ranked among the top five sometimes rivaling Rias and Akeno.
At the moment, Hinata was standing over three boys that were beating black and blue by her. They were attempting to watch her undress in the girl's locker room and she had caught them. She went ballistic on them, for one male had the right to see her in her glory and none of them were him.
They were none other than The Perverted Trio of Kuoh Academy. She smirked as she thought about the man that became Naruto's Sensei during the month between the second and third round of the Chunin exams.
That was not all, it turned out that the man was his Godfather and the self-proclaimed world's biggest pervert as well. She knew that he would had loved these three for they were like they could be the sons that he never had. But still, she had a lesson to teach these three.
This lesson though was already started, for when she heard their perverted giggles in the locker room when she was about to start changing, she used her speed and surprised them after finding them in the locker. She had shut down all of their Ki points which she learned about during their training over the break so they could not move at all and it hurts like hell.
She drug each one of them out one by one out into the hallway outside of the locker room as the other girls continued to change. They did not want to interfere, for Hinata had proven to be scary after beating several girls that attempted to bully her three days since they felt threaten by her presence.
That was not the only thing, for they were an all-girl gang that formed the martial arts club and were excellent fighters. They attacked her, Shion, Fuu and Setsuna only to be beaten so fast that they did not break a sweet nor did they get hit. Since then, no one dared to fight the new girls, nor did the attempt to fight anyone that was with them.
The whole time, Issei was screaming in pain which she looked down at him. Here was someone that had so much potential if guided right, but that was not her problem to deal with at the moment.
"Issei, why not take that energy that you have and change yourself. I do not hate the ideal of a harem since I am the first of current wives of my husband and understand that sometimes love is meant to be shared which happens often from where I come from, but the way you are now it is not possible. If you get stronger and stop being an open pervert, than someone might give you chance." Hinata stated as Issei looked at her interest while in pain on the floor.
"But the members of the Occult Research Club are taken, so keep away from us." Hinata stated to make sure that he did not attempt to fulfil his dreams with them.
The other one that was also screaming in pain next to him on the right was none other than Masuda, who is one of Issei's best friends. She was told about his past and wonder what happened to him to be this way now.
"You were a sports star at one time, look how far you have fallen. I do not know what happened to you, but change back and maybe some girl or girls might fulfill your dreams as well." Hinata stated in a firm tone.
She then turned to the last member of the Perverted Trio who was none other than Motohama. This boy could be Jiraiya's son the most, for he had the ability to calculate a bodies measurements just by looking at them. She shuttered at that thought, but she smiled, for there was a girl that was interested in him, but he was too dumb to see it.
That girl was Aika Kiryuu, for she is a second year student who is in the same class as all the Perverted Trio. She wears spectacles and like Motohama, she has the ability to calculate a male's manhood size just by looking. She was perfect for Motohama.
"You want a girl, there is one that has been attempting to get your attention some time. She is Aika Kiryuu, for I have it on good authority that she might want to make your dreams comes true." Hinata stated as she recalled the conversation that she had with the girl yesterday.
Before word about her being married to someone already gotten out, Aika noticed Hinata was looking at the Trio during the times that Rias asked her to watch Issei. Aika at the time thought that Hinata was a closet pervert, (She did not know how right she was) and was going after Motohama and wanted to make sure that she knew he was off limits. Admittedly Hinata does have a perverted side, but that side involves only one man and that was the one that she was looking for, the one that she married in her world.
"Now, I am going to undo what I had done, but do not every attempt to peek on any member of the Occult Research Club or I will let Setsuna have a go at you by telling her that you two were picking on her again, and trust me SHE WILL CASTRATE YOU." Hinata stated darkly as she hit the spots that she had hit.
In the matter of seconds, all three got up and looked at her. She then smiled a wicked smile and all three took off running far from her and the changing room that she was in. She watched and smirked and then walked back into the changing room.
"Hinata, thank you for telling him that, will he act?" Asked a female voice that belonged to a girl that was in the room with her.
"Kiryuu, it is up to him. But let me tell you something. Men could be dumb when it comes to us women. Take my husband as an example, it took me to slap him to get his attention long enough to tell him that I loved him for he doubted himself. You might want to tell him yourself." Hinata stated as she walked into the back area while closing the locker where she found them hiding in.
-In Italy-
The moment, the sounds of metal clashing with metal filled the air. The sound echoed off the walls as well the sounds of footsteps running. This was the sound of a battle using ancient melee weapons instead of guns.
Then down one of the streets was none other than Setsuna who was here for a client that had summoned her. She was sent here to investigate the Fallen Angels that were in the city, for they had not reported to her client in a while and they only do that when they are up to no good.
Her client was none other than the Governor General of Grigori. He had figured that Kokabiel was up to something with those that were loyal to wanting to start a war.
'Shit, I would run into two of churches exorcist at this time.' Setsuna thought as she breathed deeply.
They both were sword wielders and both were good, but lucky for her she was better. The problem was that she did not want to kill them both just to get away, for that might start a war between the Devil Faction and the Angel Faction. That is something that was not acceptable, but impossible to avoid unless you were former ANBU of the Leaf like she was.
At the moment, she was running at full speed that was not human possible, but the same was for them for they were not that far behind her. She was going to get away, for they were strong and fast, but she was a ninja and they were not.
"I told you two bitches, I am here to investigate some Fallen Angels not to start a fight with you." Setsuna called out as she gripped her Kodachi with her right hand and her sword with her left as she looked around the corner as she leaned up against the wall of the alley in the darkness.
"Do not give us that, for you were too close to our grounds and you did not ask permission from the church to be here in the city you foul Devil." Yelled one of them as Setsuna continued to run.
'It was good thing I got the details and completed part of my mission, now time to escape without killing those two.' Setsuna thought as she began to think for the first time. This was the first time she had been able to since those attacked her very quickly and almost caught her off guard.
'They would make good ninja.' Setsuna added to her thought as she began to go thru her options.
"Why would a Devil care about that?" Asked one of the female exorcist which Setsuna had been running from.
The woman that came into the light of the street light asked that question was none other than a woman with chin length blue hair that had green fringe on the right side and dark yellow eyes. She could tell even with the white cloak that had gold and blue accents. Around her neck was a crucifix that was made of gold. Under the cloak she was wearing over her battle attire which consists of a back, sin tight short sleeved unitard with pauldrons. Matching fingerless gloves that extend to her biceps and high heel boots were all were adorned with straps.
She could see that girl's body measurements were 34 inches in the bust, 23 inches in the waist, and 35 inches in the hips. She was standing at the height of five feet and five inches and had a slender body build that contained a good muscular frame.
"Do not know, do you see the devil Xenovia?" Asked another female voice as the second female as she game into the light.
She was wearing the same thing as Xenovia. She had long chestnut hair and violet eyes. Her hair was tied into twin tails, each held with a blue scrunchy. Setsuna could say that she also had a slender body build with a decent muscular structure as well. Her body build was the same as Xenovia's but she stood inch shorter than her.
"I heard her voice from here Irina, but I do not sense her killing intent." Xenovia stated as Setsuna smiled under her mask.
'I can give them a warning about their plan and hope that they take me seriously and used a flash tag to escape. Azazel does not want them to succeed, so that might work. After all, from what I understand the client would like them to fail since their actions could spark another Great War.' Setsuna thought as she slowly and silently sheathed both her swords.
She than reached into her utility belt and pulled out a flash tag and walked around the corner where they could see her. She had slowed down her breathing and relaxed her body, but at the same time she kept her guard up.
"Giving up since you know that you lost Devil?" Irina asked as Setsuna laughed for a second while placing the tag against the wall and channel some chakra into it.
"No, as I told you I was sent to check on some rouge Fallen Angels. They have not reported in like they should have to my client and that usually mean that they up to no good." Setsuna stated as noticed that she had their attention.
"They were planning something that is not sanctioned by Azazel at all. I found out what it was, they are gunning for fragments of Excalibur or as you guys say the Excaliburs that the church currently have under their control. They have traitors in your church to assist them in the mission." Setsuna state as the flash tag went off blinding them.
When both Irina and Xenovia were able to see, they noticed that they were alone. They both looked each other. They were not sure what to think, but the thought that she could have attacked them while blinded, but instead she took the chance to leave. There was only them two there and that was all, it was taken her little effort due to the skill that they have seen.
"Should we believe her?" Xenovia asked as she looked at her partner and friend.
"She could have attacked, but instead left." Irina stated as Xenovia nodded her head up and down.
"I think we should report this to Michael-sama at once, for she might be telling the truth." Xenovia stated as the both took off running.
-Back in the city where Kuoh Academy is located, at an cross walk the next day-
Issei was walking from school for it was a long day for him. Once again he was and his friends were busted by the Kendo Club. Normally they would avoid the club since from time to time Setsuna goes there to spare with its members, but today she was absent so they took the chance.
Well they were chased and beaten black and blue by the. No mercy for his passion to see the female flesh or body. He recalled what Hinata said the other day, but he doubted that she was telling the truth. But then again, he was starting to think that she might have a point and was thinking about changing his ways. How could it hurt, after all she was a woman and she actually done something that no one had done, gave him on advice.
He was walking across the catwalk and made the decision that he was going to attempt stop being a pervert. At that moment, he did not see a young girl walking behind him. Form the roof of the building not far was Hinata watching him, for she was watching him from afar as Koneko was shadowing from afar as well but from behind. He was heading home at the moment.
"Excuse me." The girl stated as Issei stopped in his tracks and turned to see who it was speaking to him.
What he saw was an attractive woman that had nice black hair that went down to her hips and violet eyes. She was wearing the same school uniform, but she had on a dark red jacket with the letter "P" embroidered in gold and a white undershirt. She also had a red bow and a green skirt with a thin white strip around the lower end of it. This told him that this girl was from another school in the city.
'Do not gawk at her huge rack, keep looking into her eyes and you might be able to gain a girl' Issei thought as she looked at the scene that was before him.
"Now he start to act decent, good but wrong girl for that is a Fallen Angel." Hinata muttered under her breath feeling sorry for the poor fool, but Rias order her just to watch and not act until ordered otherwise.
"Wi..wi…wi…will YOU GO OUT WITH ME?" The girl asked as Hinata had to mentally stop herself from attacking and beating the shit out of that bitch, for seeing that made her angry, for that girl was getting close to him to kill him, but she did it because she was shy back before she finally been able to tell Naruto that she loved him.
"Huh?" Issei asked back as his brain temporarily shut down for a second and began to reboot.
"My name is Yuuma Amano, and I been watching for some time as you walked thru the area. I wanted to know if will go out with me?" She stated again as Issei still not believing his luck decided that he was not dreaming.
'Namikaze was right, she was right but I did not expect results this soon.' Issei stated as he gulped.
"Are you sure?" He asked wanted to give her the chance to back out.
"Yes, please be my boyfriend." Yuuma stated as she Issei nodded his head up and down.
"Good." She replied as she ran up to him and placed his arm in between her breast and he began to blush as they walked onward.
'Those two laughed at me when I told them that I was thinking about taking her advice. They were going to the park to eye the females working out there, so I guess I brag about my girl to them.' Issei thought as he smiled.
"Yuuma, would you like to go to the park with me and prove something to my friends. If you do, I take out on big date tomorrow." Issei stated as Yuuma thought for a few seconds.
"Sure why not Issei-kun." Yuuma replied back.
As they walked down the stairs from the overhead crosswalk, Koneko walked up eating an Ice cream cone as Hinata landed right beside her. Unlike Hinata, she had a face that did not show or displayed any emotion what so ever.
"That girl, she is the one that Rias told me to keep an eye on while you keep an eye on Issei." Hinata stated as Koneko just looked.
"She smells like a Fallen Angel." Koneko stated in a monotone sounding voice.
"Issei, something powerful in him that is for sure for my Byakugan showed what looked like a dragon in him." Hinata stated as Koneko nodded her up and down.
"He smell like one as well, we need to report to Rias-sama about both of her finds." Koneko stated as Hinata nodded her head up and down and both vanished in a swirl of leaves.
-Occult Research Club Room-
Sona Sitri was in the club room with her own queen Tsubaki Shinra, the third year student of Kuoh Academy. She was standing right behind Sona as she was siting and playing chess against Rias who had Akeno standing behind here.
Normally two Devils from two great houses that were building their peerage could not survive in the same area like this, but due to them being child hood friends, they were able to do what many consider impossible. They had created ground rules and turned it into a competition. That was not all, after the shift of kinds of request that Rias peerage was taking, those that were not that kind was sent to Sona's peerage.
"So did you find anyone worthy of your peerage Sona?" Rias asked as she moved a chess piece on the board.
"No not yet, but I heard you are looking into one of the Perverted Trio." Sona stated as Rias nodded her head up and down.
"Yes, it's Issei Hyoudou, for I have detected a Sacred Gear in him even though I am not sure which one yet." Rias stated not worried for the rules of their competition is that once spotted but the other, hands off unless an agreement of trade is done.
"I see, I find that interesting since I thought beside his perversion that he would not be worth anything." Sona stated as Setsuna appeared out of nowhere in a swirl of leaves into the room wearing her academy uniform and contacts that made her eyes looked human with the Iris being amber color.
"Even without the gear, Hinata stated that if he was trained like they were, he could be a excellent addition to an peerage." Rias replied back.
"That was interesting method of transporting, a new type of spell?" Sona asked as she looked at Setsuna.
'I heard rumors that Setsuna and Hinata were former people in the shadows and after training Rias and them, the entire peerage shifted to that kind of request.' Sona thought as she got a feeling that Setsuna was no stranger to killing.
"No, it is Jutsu known as the Shunshin no Jutsu or Body Flicker Technique which is a high speed movement technique, but after she became a Devil, magic was added to turn into a true teleportation Jutsu." Rias asked as Setsuna crashed on the couch.
"Long mission?" Rias asked as Setsuna sighed.
"That bastard had me go to the city of Rome in Italy and check on a possible rouge faction of his group. I ended up crossing paths with two exorcist that were wielding holy swords. It took all my skills to not harm them as well kill them. It is all in my report which is with the payment from him." Setsuna stated as she tossed a scroll to Rias which she caught and opened it.
She channeled some of her energy into it and smoke puffed out. Out came a suitcase of money and a folder with it. That was not all, for there was a form that was filled out from Azazel as well stating how she did on fulfilling her quest.
"What was that?" Sona asked as Rias smirked.
"A storage scroll, it has a seal that allow items in different sizes from an ant up to the size of a car to be sealed and carried with ease while keeping it in stasis for a week before the seal allows food to go bad. We been playing around with and testing them, something that Setsuna and Hinata introduced us to.
"If you are interested, I will sell them to you for 609 Yen each instead of 1,218 yen that I be selling to anyone else that might be interested, please note that at the moment only you been offered this since we are close friends and all." Rias stated as she looked over the report and then sighed as Sona was in deep thought.
'With something like that, moving things around will be a lot easier I believe.' Sona thought.
"Good job Setsuna, you can go and get some rest for the rest of the day. You will get your cut tomorrow during club hours." Rias stated as Setsuna nodded her head up and down and stood up and Shunshined into a swirl of leaves.
"What type of magic are they?" Sona asked with interest while looking at the scrolls.
"Nothing that you have heard of, for it is Fuinjutsu from their world, you see in their world magic is known as Jutsu and they are either samurai or ninja if they used it." Rias stated as handed Akeno the case and file along with paper work to place on the desk.
'Sorry Sona, but I can not tell you that they are members of the forsaken race for I have to keep some secrets.' Rias thought as she looked her friend.
"I see, how do they work?" Sona asked as Rias took the scroll and a pawn that she had captured in their game.
"First you take an item or items that you want to seal and place it on the array that you see on the paper are hold it onto the item." Rias stated as she placed a pawn on it.
"Then you send some of your mana or what they call chakra into it." She stated as the pawn vanished and the array changed some.
"To retrieve the item, you just send some mana into it." Rias stated as a puff of white smoke appeared and then cleared to reveal the pawn.
"I have 6,090. I want ten of them." Sona stated as she pulled out the money for them.
"Now note that they will become useless after three thousand usage which is sealing thing for three thousand times and then unsealing them. So each usage is sealing than unsealing. This is only good for items that are not perishables, they can keep thing sealed forever even if burned. However if that happens then that items is lost forever." Rias stated as Akeno appeared holding ten scrolls.
"I understand and still want them." Sona stated as Rias smirked.
"Here is a used eleventh scroll which I will use to show you something. It only had been, used only twice now." Rias stated as she placed the ten scrolls on it and then sealed and handed it over to her.
"You can do that with scrolls that contain items as well." Rias stated as Sona looked at it wide eyed.
"When you place them on the market, you are going to make a fortune." Sona stated as Rias just sighed.
"They have to be made by hand and only Setsuna, Fuu, Hinata, and Shion can make them." Rias lied since they came up with a way to print them, but that was a clan and peerage secret as Sona nodded her head up and down understanding what she was saying.
Rias was going to keep it a secret that she could make them as well. For that was her secret and only those of her peerage knows about it.
"I think that is check mate." Rias stated as Sona moved her queen into position on the board.
"That was good game and thanks for the deal." Sona stated as Rias got up and nodded.
"No problem, but there is something else I want to talk to you about tonight okay?" Rias stated as Sona looked at her and nodded her head up and down.
-Inside of Naruto-
Kara smiled as Kuruma's chakra and soul was sealed into the final plate. She placed it on the gloves and then smiled. The Fist of Jubi had the souls and chakra of two people and all nine buju from Naruto's world. If the world was not destroyed, he was fated to have them anyway, but since he was not strong enough she decided to have each one show up in different stages. She even created the gear so the first two souls will act as governors and regulators of the gear.
She smiled as she placed it and made sure that it will be merged with Naruto. She also altered the system of the world wear only those that descendant from him will get the Fist of Jubi if he dies, but she does not see that happening. She than vanishes.
-In the void outside of Naruto's body-
"Naruto, you are given a chance to change the world that I am sending you to. I can sense that he hear me and understand." Kara stated as she looked at the boy and placed her hand on his head and spoke to his mind.
After several minutes, she smiled. She informed him about all that was going on and transplanted the needed knowledge that he would need about the world. Naruto had agreed as long as there was his Hinata and raman. She smiled at that as she snapped her fingers and made sure that the gear was sealed inside of him along with granting him access to it.
"Now child of prophecy, go and make a new future for yourself as well save the world from my enemy and those that are there." Kara stated as she vanished and a vortex appeared and sucked Naruto thru it.
-Back in Kuoh City-
The night sky was clear as the moon was full and shining brightly on the buildings and the streets that were under it. At that moment, Setsuna in full combat mode which meant that she was currently wearing her weapons and combat gear with all seals released under the night sky looking over the edge of the building roof.
Setsuna did not have to worry about being spotted, for this entire city was under the control of both the Gremory family and Sitri family. Besides, her targets tonight were nothing more humans since she checked them out the night before. These humans were bad humans, for the committed acts and crimes that even the law would not accept.
She thought about her mission as she kept an eye on the boy that was no older than the gage of thirteen years old that was standing by a truck. She was not sure about this boy, for he was a new factor in this matter, but he was indeed a human and nothing more. As she thought about it, she detected that someone was behind her, but she did not look for she could sense who that person was and they were not a threat to her.
"What are you doing here Hinata?" Setsuna asked as that person walked up to her left side.
Hinata was wearing the same thing that she was wearing, but her mask was the modified version of the mask that the one from Setsuna's world had. Like Setsuna's mask, her also had a breathing apparatus added to it.
She was wearing a belt that was very much like the one that Setsuna had on. Hinata was also wearing a flak jacket that was the same as Setsuna's and outfit, but on her back attached to her belt were two kodachi blades. Strapped to the lower portion of her legs were another pair of kodachi blades.
The two that were attached to her belt were her mother's with the ones that were wrapped in white leather. The one that was on top had its hilt sticking out on the right side of her as the one that was on bottom had its hilt sticking out on the left side.
The pair that was strapped to her legs were the one that the Hinata that married Naruto along with Setsuna had given her after training her how to use them.
"Like you sister, I am on a job that just happens to tie into yours." Hinata replied with a hint of a smirk under her mask in her voice as Setsuna smirked in her mind.
That was one thing that was clear. After coming to terms that both Setsuna and Sasuke was two different people in both actions and thinking, Hinata started to warm up to her more. Besides deciding to share Naruto with her, Hinata decided to adopt her as a sister since they will become sister wives.
"Okay, we will cover my mission first." Setsuna stated as she looked at the boy that was starting to pace back and forth alone side of the truck that he had driven up to this spot.
"My target is a gang known as the Street Demons. This is a group of thirty punks that has this section of the city under their control. They rape, kill, and deal drugs. They had killed cops and even wiped out the police station that was in this area. Rumors stated that they also deal with human trafficking and kidnapping, but that is after the rapped the poor females until they are completely broken.
"Currently, they are wanted for 300 counts of rape and 100 deaths. They are also wanted for racketeering as well, for they force everyone in this section to pay them monthly for protection in either cash or other means.
"Due to this, no police presence exist here in this section. The mayor is sick and tired of it, and the government would not assist, something about not having the resources. So thru a friend, he made contract with Rias.
"My mission is wipe this gang out, and gather intel. All members and perps are to be killed since this is an unauthorized operation." Setsuna stated as Hinata nodded her head up and down.
"I already have a shadow clone interrogating the head of the smuggling operation that brought the drugs into the city in a hotel room with silence seals so no one would know what is going on. I am ready to wipe this street out. All people in buildings are asleep, seals to protect them as well keep the sound of operation out from inside of the buildings are in place along with the street.
"I have shuriken release seals on both sides of the street and explosive tags laying all around. My plan was to take the leader and kill everyone else." Setsuna stated in a plain and emotionless tone since this was not a time for emotions.
"Well, that boy there is my request. Actually a second request that was made after I fulfilled the first one." Hinata stated as sounds of dirt bike engines filled the air far off.
"Really, then tell me about it." Setsuna stated as she began to wonder about the boy that looked like he had no business dealing with this gang.
"First one, his mother realized that something was not right, so she requested that I follow him and get to the bottom of it. I found out that the gang threatened to rape his mother, sister, and kill his father if he said anything about a killing that he witnessed they did outside of this section of the city." Hinata stated as she sighed, for this was a mess.
"It would seem that this was going on for months. Well, two days ago, I followed him one more time to see all the information about the gang so I could tell his mother about them, and that was when I overheard it." Hinata stated as Setsuna listened.
"They told him that if he drove the truck tonight, they would let him go, but he still had to keep his word with them to keep his mouth shut. Soon after he left, I learned that they are planning to kill him anyway tonight, so that kid down there is doing this against his will." Hinata added as Setsuna sighed as she looked at the kid that has been standing by the dark green ex-military cargo truck that he had driven there.
"I told her about it and that tonight they will act, so she made another request to me last night. She wants me to save him and I got it cleared with Buchou already and she stated that I needed to speak to you since the gang were part of your request." Hinata stated as Setsuna went straight as memories of the shadow clone came to her.
"It would seem your right, for my clone just got finished interrogating the smuggler and he stated that it was never the same person that picks up the stuff for that person would end up dead or part of the gang." Setsuna stated as the sounds of motorcycle engines filled the air.
"Pull him out now and I Henge into him. After I hear his voice and stuff, you are to take the back entrance I will us his position. Once I do a chakra flare, make sure no one escapes." Setsuna stated as Hinata nodded her head up and down as she walked over the edge of the roof.
Hinata had used chakra as she silently ran down the wall of the room heading towards the boy. Once she was there, she did a blow to the back of his back. Whatever she had done, he could not move, but he could talk. The one that attacked him walked from behind him as another one appeared out of thin air right in front of him.
"Listen, you mother sent me to assist and save you, my partner is here to eliminate the gang, so tell her you name so she can pretend to be you." Hinata stated as the boy looked at her funny as Setsuna did several hand signs.
On the last hand sign, he noticed that other one just changed into him. He was not sure what to think, but the first thing that appeared in his mind was 'O shit these two hot chicks are ninja, real ninja just like my favorite manga.' Which seem to show on his face as Hinata giggled as the look of shock on his face.
"The name is Seina Yamada." He stated while trying not to be scare of the deadly real ninja that was before him.
"Thank you, take him home while I clean out the garbage." Setsuna stated in his voice as he was shocked as Hinata touched his shoulder and the vanished.
-Far from the location where the battle will take place-
Both Hinata and Seina appeared right in front of a house. She had removed the pin that was in the back of his neck so he was able to moved. He looked around and noticed that he was in front of his home.
"Seina, do not worry for after tonight the gang will no longer bother you." Hinata stated as she looked at him and handed him a flyer that had a pentagram inside of a summoning cycle.
"If you have a request, just think of it and someone will come. Now, you must know that sex and murdering innocent people are not acceptable." Hinata stated a cycle appeared around as she vanished as water appeared out of nowhere and splashed onto the ground where she was at.
"Real ninja, man I wonder what she meant by request though?" He thought as he turned and walked back to the house.
-Back with Setsuna-
Setsuna just stood there getting ready. She knew that Hinata had returned for she could sense her chakra in the shadows of the other end of the street. Setsuna thought clearly on her plan. For this was going to be simple. At the moment, the gang of ten people on dirt bikes appeared and stopped right over the area that the tags were planted. The leader got up and walked up to 'Seina' and smirked at him.
He had black spikey hair and stood at the height of five feet tall. He had muscles on his legs and arms which was shown off by the sleeveless leather vest that he had on. He was wearing what looked like military boots and blue jean pants with a silver chain belt around his waist.
"Okay Seina, as agreed for doing this task for us, we will rape both your sister and mother while forcing your father to watch." The gang leader said as he changed at 'Seina'.
The gang members were laughing when he was just a few feet from 'Seina' that was standing there like a deer caught in headlights. But just as he was about to close line him, 'Seina' did a quick and power round house kick that connected right to the side of his face.
There was a echo as the sound of his face as the force of impact causes his head to turn in the opposite direction. As the gang members began to move, his body turns along with his head as he sailed right into the passenger door of the truck. There was a loud thud as the leader fell to the ground being knocked out cold.
"Why you…." A member was saying as 'Seina' transformed back into a fully geared Setsuna that did a hand sign.
"My mercy be on the souls of your victims, for yours is too tainted." Setsuna stated as she sent chakra right into the tags that surrounded then and under them.
Shuriken and kunai shot out of nowhere and cut thru their bodies as their screams echoed into the night air. The fuel lines, tires, and even the gas tanks of the motor bikes were cut into as fuel leaked out of them as it mixed with their blood as they fell to the ground in pain. Their cuts and injuries were burning as they continue to scream in pain.
"The souls of your victims will rest in peace as you burn in fire of damnation." Hinata stated in a dark voice as she walked thru the fuel and blood on her way to Setsuna.
"Who are you?" A gang members asked while the pain that was in her voice could be heard.
"I am Raven of Death." Setsuna stated as she got ready another handsign.
"I am the Indigo Death Angel, for we came…." Hinata stated as she stood by Setsuna.
"….to collect your souls." Setsuna stated as she flared up her chakra which triggered the explosive tags.
As they went off, the fuel that was on the ground caught on fire as the gang members scream while their bodies burned. There was a explosion from the fuel being ignited along with the tags going off.
Setsuna looked at the turn and got into it as Hinata slapped a tag onto the knocked out gang leader and carried him into the back. As she did that, Setsuna pulled out a disposable cell phone and dialed a number.
"It is done, I have the leader and will interrogate him soon. I have the truck, but the rest of the gang is dead. Send a fire truck to the location under police guard and send units to the other locations that I told you about already." Setsuna stated on the cell phone.
"Thank you, payment will be in the location agreed upon." A male voice stated on the phone as Setsuna looked and saw Hinata standing there by the driver door.
"Okay, I will come to you when I am done with interrogation. This number is no longer any good." Setsuna stated as she closed the phone and shattered it in her hands after using Chakra to enhance her strength.
"He is sealed and tied up. I will head back for my task is done and there is another one to baby sit some children tomorrow for me." Hinata stated as a teleportation seal appeared along with razor sharp leaves surrounding her as she vanished.
"Yes, time to go." Setsuna stated as she reversed summoned her, the truck, and it cargo from the scene as the sirens echoed thru the night air as the sound barrier tags vanished as well.
Out of the shadows stepped out a athletic teenager that has short, purple hair and striking red eyes. She has a mature and feminine body that was very voluptuous.
Her attire is violet in color for she is wearing a whole body jump suit in silver and violet with flower decorations along with several pieces of armor and a garb. She has a Fuma Kodachi on the side of her thighs with a pair of butterfly wings on her back. On her head was a violet bandanna which kept her hair from her eyes.
"What is it Ayane." A male voice on the phone asked.
"Ryu, it would seem that my, yours, Shattered Hand, Spider clan, as well that organization that we been hearing about are not the only ninja in the lands, for I just witnessed another group and they use a strange NIPO like that organization that attacked us." The girl looked as a glimmer of light appeared in her red eyes.
"And they are very brutal while controlling the collateral damage to a zero, I think we found our allies against the Akatsuki and Shattered Hand." Ayane stated with a smile as Hinata appeared right behind her.
"I see, can you make contact with them?" Ryu's voice asked as Ayane turned around and smiled as she looked at Hinata.
"Yea, one of them is right before me at the moment. Give a few and I will contact you back." Ayane stated as she looked at Hinata.
"I am Ayane of the Mugen Tenshin Clan, we could use your assistance." Ayane stated as Hinata nodded her head.
"Give me a number and I will let my Master know and we see what we come to terms with." Hinata stated as Ayane nodded her head.
-Kuoh Academy Occult Research Club Room-
Rias was sitting there at her desk. She was waiting for someone to appear.
'It is a good that thing that Sona agreed since she along with agreed that this school alone with the humans that attend here need to be protected.' Rias thought as she sigh.
"Hello Rias Gremory." Kara's voice stated as Rias looked up and then smiled.
-End-
Rias Peerage
Note: (Those that have only ? are undecided while more than one means elected. Hint, each letter of name plus space between the given name and family name is replaced with a ?. try to guess.)
Rias Gremory = Mutated King worth 20 Pawns
Akeno Himejima = Mutated Queen worth 18 Pawns
Hinata Hyuga = Mutated Bishop 1 worth 10 Pawns
Shion Mirai = Mutated Bishop 2 worth 10 Pawns
Haku Momochi = Mutated Dragon 2 worth 8 Pawns
Fuu Hiromizu = Mutated Dragon 2 worth 8 Pawns
? = Mutated Paladin 1 worth 8 Pawns
? = Mutated Paladin 1 worth 8 Pawns
Yukiko Vladi = Mutated Knight 1 worth 6 Pawns
? = Mutated Knight 2 worth 6 Pawns
(Shirone) Koneko Toujou = Mutated Rook 1 worth 8 Pawns
Kuroka Toujou = Mutated Rook 2 worth 8 Pawns
Setsuna Uchiha = 4 mutated Pawns value of 8 Pawns
? = 2 Mutated Pawns and 2 Legendary Mutated Pawns worth total 20 Pawns
-Author Notes and Reviews-
Now, as stated at the start of the chapter, I decided to retool all chapters before this one. IF you are worrying about major story changes, do not for I decided to only work on grammar and add where all the characters that I bring have been giving a choice since someone brought up possible slavery issue to me.
At first I thought I covered this, but it would seem that I was not clear enough in the story where they were giving a choice with Kara explaining the plan with them, but I guess I did not. Well that will be only changes that I will add to the story.
Current States when this chapter was first posted was:
Reviews = 54, Followers = 132, Favorites = 125, Communities = 3, and views = 21,077
I love to see the stats of this story going off like this. I hope that my future projects will be the same as this will one will continue to grow.
-POLL-
It is now closed, but here is the poll results.
Final Vote total =
Choices:
1. Is beaten by Setsuna for the extra injury that she caused on Naruto then killed by Rias. Total of 1 vote
2. Be killed by Moka for her attempt murder of Issei. Total of 2 votes
3. Be beaten by Issei and Setsuna only to turned by Moka after she gets on hands and knees to beg forgiveness from Issei. Total of 1 vote
4. Be beaten by Issei but turned by Rias after she begs forgiveness. (If not chosen then a poll will take place for last position on Rias' peerage) Total of 1 Vote
5. She survives and return latter to serve as a representative for the Fallen Angels along with Azazel. (She will be Naruto's Love) Total 32 and winner
6. She survives and return latter to serve as a representative for the Fallen Angels along with Azazel. (She will be Issei's Love after begging for forgiveness) Total of 2 votes.
This means that Rayner will survive and latter return as a representative of the fall angels. She will also fall for Naruto.
R & Q (Note: this is all reviews that I found since the last chapter)
Reviewer: dnck
Review: I understand that this is your story and vision but why would you op rais that much she is a spoiled child now all of a sudden you have given her the keys to the universe so to speak. just because someone wants to fight a threat you go and make slaves out of all the people who are going to do the actual fighting
Response: I see where you are coming from, but you must understand something. One, Rias due to certain reasons are the only one that could resurrect the characters that I am bringing into the story. Kara, cannot act unless she has a reason to due to the laws and rules that her creator, God had placed on her before he died. She is part of the system and is not above it, so she must act. As for you last point, I thought I covered it but after checking I noticed that I did not do a good job of it, so I will be correcting it, but please note.
One Rias is being targeted by this new threat so she has no choice. Two, Kara cannot save anyone unless she has a reason, they had either die in the void or hope that they get sucked in thru a vortex and end up in a world where they could survive or accept the mission she has given them. The retooled chapters will cover this choice, thank you for pointing that out though.
Rias is not a spoiled child in this story as a matter of fact and she not OP for her enemies will also gather more strength.
Reviewer: animecollecter
Review: Sweet ass you brought fu in the harem pairing! You got one of the two fav naruto characters. Somehow I have the feeling that there is going to be a lot of echi comedy for naruto in dealing with the ladies. Lol. Anyways I look forward to the next chapter.
I made the first vote!
Response: I am glad that you are happy about Fuu. As for the echi, well Naruto will be living under the same roof as the girls, so there should be some funny events. Vote, congrats.
Reviewer: Teon
Review: Give her to Moka and Issei Naruto already has a fallen in Akeno and she doesn't seem to like other fallen
Response: Good point, but the vote has been cast and she will be not a devil. But trust me, her and Akeno will clash over Naruto since the vote has her going after him.
Reviewer: YinYang1902
Review: 5th opition
Response: I hoped you casted your vote to be counted on that. As you can see, the poll is now closed.
Reviewer: NinjaFang1331
Review: Awesome chapter
Great additions!
Response: Glad that you approve and hope you like what it to come.
Reviewer: TykkiMikk
Review: I Quite the update marathon going on in such a short time...and darn was hoping for Itachi being put into this as a male as a fallen angel lol because of his crows (devil and angel would never suit him)
Response: You might have been right about Itachi, but as you can see the vote as been cast, so he will not be in the story at all now. As for the updates, there are time that I might be able to do it and times that I may not.
Reviewer: Bob
Review: Me again
Would it be possible for you to add Ryuzetsu to Naruto's harem as well as a fem kiba from the dxd light novels?
Response: I have not read the light novels so I am not sure, for I am basing off the Manga that I read which left off at the excaliber part and the anime. As for fem Kiba, no sorry to say, not in this story. As for Ryuzetsu, hmm I have to look into her.
Reviewer: Guest00000000000
Review: I have one question who is Moka is she from Rosario-vampire or what what is her last name is she even a devil.
but seriously chaos is taking after the masked man by making his own versing od rising red dawn, black cloaks with red clouds and straw hats with bobbles.
what is with this saying that he/she is interfering with things thing should not happen and causing trouble at every turn even taking kara's palace has chief god of creation in this story that is not his/hers.
Response: Chaos wants to destroy all creation, for he feels that if he does he will regain his body or end the suffering of his sealed soul. Kara is neutral and does not interfere, but if existence is destroyed, then she dies as well since God tied her existence to it. Yes, he borrowed what he had seen from the Naruto worlds that he had destroyed, how hmm that might be in another story or another chapter.
As for Moka, yes but Tuskune will killed during the fall of the school which you will learn in the upcoming chapter.
Reviewer: Guest00000000000
Review: I think Rayner should be a representive for the fallen angel but also be taught a lesson for trying to kill Issei or Hurt Naruto and get on her knees and beg for forgiveness from the group.
Response: Naruto will be hurt by her in the upcoming chapter, but only due to the heat of the moment. It would seem that 31 others agree with you about her being a representative of the fallen angles as well.
Reviewer: Neko
Review: Bro please don't over exaggerated the cup Size of the female's characters like B or C cup and my sick to does over size breast and can give Naruto RinneSharigan dojustsus and have a mutation in to his right eye have a Golden crimsons flame like in anime black Rock shooter and make Shion a anbu level kunoichi and a bishop class like Hinata to the poll is # 5
Keep up the good work.
-neko-
Response: Okay, if you are talking about the High School DXD characters, then check out the site where I get the information from. For at the bottom of the pages is the sizes that were taken from a data book. As for the other characters, well I might be guilty, but not sure. Besides, their breast is large in the series and I used what I know to base the models from. Thanks and I hope you like what it to come.
Reviewer: me
Review: I think you might have made things a little to over complicated with these alternate realities.
Response: Really, not sure about that. I just had to come up with reason some characters are different from their norm. The multiverse theory though is not my creation for I seen DC and Marvel use it. Hell, if you go and look it up, that is how they explain the existence of several different reboots of their products and stuff. Let's not forget the game Injustice: Gods Among Us, where Lex Luther never did any illegal activity.
All I did was take data from the show Sliders and combined them with what DC and Marvel used. Trust me, for I will not bringing in new universes into this story. Also I had to give a reason why my OC Kara is allowed to interfere, since the balance was destroyed and she did not like the ideal of leaving people to die in the void, but at the sametime deal with threats that are in a world that should not be there.
Reviewer: d Have a Little Feith chapter 9 . Apr 6
I personally want it to be a mix of 2 options, The first option I would want to mix is that she be a part of Rias' peerage, and the second is that she's Naruto's love. If I can't have both, the one where she becomes Naruto's lover is preferred.
Review: I personally want it to be a mix of 2 options, The first option I would want to mix is that she be a part of Rias' peerage, and the second is that she's Naruto's love. If I can't have both, the one where she becomes Naruto's lover is preferred.
Response: Well, as you can see the vote has passed and she will not be a devil, but she will fall for Naruto much to Akeno's dislike.
Reviewer: CreedRazerReaper
Review: i go for rias and akrno, and neko sisters to join naruto harem, for she survives and becomes a representative anf falls for naruto
Response: We will see, but let me state this. Rias Peerage will be Naruto's Harem. You got your wish about Rayner being representative of fallen Angels.
Reviewer: Icewolf799
Review: I would like to see
-Be beaten by Issei but turned by Rias after she begs forgiveness. (If not chosen then a poll will take place for last position on Rias' peerage)-
Because I won't to see the way Akeno deals with her.
Great chapter 8 by the way, nice way to tie the Gremory and Uzumaki family's! Can't wait for next chapter!
Response: Well, how see gets beaten I am not sure, but she will not be turned due to vote. As for the Gremory and Uzukami tie, I am not the first to do it, but this was my own twist to it.
Reviewer: neko
Review: Bro. Can you add Senju von illyasviel or illya no Mokuton,Soryu Asuka no Shoton and Ryuzetsu
to the Naruto's harems please and another chapter update please
Response: I think about , I have to look at the characters. Send me a PM where you know they are at and look into and think on it. But please note that I am looking into and may or may not add them. As for Ryzetsu, you are the first to ask.
Reviewer: Guest
Review: Bro can you change the surname of Shion Mirai to Onihime Shion to Fuu Hiromizu to Katagiri Fuu and can you add the animal path use by pein to the harem and female version of Kimimaro as Kaguya Tohka or toka no Shikotsumyaku to the harem
Response: Name change, no for I had reason doing what I did. But I do have a future project where I might do those names. As for female Kimimaro, I think on it.
Reviewer: Guest
Review: Can you added this to you're story. From some Strategy Reason Rias managed to regain 4 new Mutated Paladin and Mutated Dragon class Evil Pieces after he's Resurrect Naruto and add this to the harem Senju von illya no Mukuton, Soryu Asuka no Shoton, Kaguya Tohka no Shikotsumyaku, Ryuzetsu and Nyotengu and please updates
Response: Good points on the strategy view, but you have to recall. The unbounded version of the peerage pieces that Rias and the four satans have create pieces based on the amount of power the king have. The bounded versions have a cap. I think about the new members of the peerage, but there is a cap on how much loving Naruto gets. As for Nyotengu, how in the hell did you know that I am adding DOA/Ninja Gaiden into the story?