Just responding to the guest reviews from the last chapter. The actual chapter 10 is pissing me off, so I deleted it and am starting over. In the meantime:
Serena1864 - fixed it, hope it is better.
Sam - I'm glad you like this story.
Anna-Maria - Thanks for your really long review. I'm glad you gave me some constructive criticism, and I will respond to nearly everything you wrote. I also figured by oc you meant ooc.
"For example the Kol resurrection thing, like that should have been at least in like 3-4 chapters before it happend to evolve the thing and so on but in your story it was like 'hey klausy give me kats blood and we can bring kol back' 'ok done lets do it'" Kol was resurrected easily, because 1: it is not the main point of this story. 2: Davina has actually spent a lot of time on this, that's why it was easily done. 3: Davina is a very powerful witch, so she finished it pretty quickly. I didn't show it all because this story is going to have a lot of chapters with a lot of stuff going on, and I can't dedicate too much time on part of the plot that is actually important. I wasn't even going to resurrect Kol, but I wanted him in the story. Sorry if it didn't make sense. Also, nobody said anything like hey klausy give me kats blood. Katherine's blood wasn't even used in the spell.
"And also if you are doing a fic where your characters are OC then thats another thing but if u are not then ive got bad news for you.. Kat doesent resemble the person who you have created in your fic Kat is sexy fierce and even bitchy some times whiny obviously she's a Petrova I get that she could be cute(and she is but again you make her seem childish but Kat isn't childish she is flirty and michevious), and at some point you have hit the jackpot when writing her but the thing where she is all friendly with Davina does not work. I would like to add that I loved the part where you made Kat cry when Klaus freed her that was awesome and so genuine but again the part when she said 'umm thanks i guess and laughed' was kinda awful.. "
Okay, so this is neither a IC or OOC fic. It is a little of both. Don't forget that this is nothing like canon TVD or TO, but all the characters are as close to their show counterparts as I can get them. Kat is sexy and fierce, but she is also human which might have changed her perspective on things. Like how she handles her emotions. Vampires may have 'heightened emotions' but humans have very rarely any control over them. Like Katherine, I am a 17 year old teenage girl, so I try to write the scenes as if I were changed from a powerful and strong vampire to a human. Because, from Kat's POV she's no longer the powerful 500 year old she was before summer started and that would probably give her an emotional rollercoaster where she will act like her vampire self one minute, and a childish human the next. Katherine is both of those things right now, the woman she remembers being and the child she never actually got to be but is now. Hope that explains it.
"Oh and 'Lijah is the last person who would roll his eyes at Davina (he is always respectful and he tends to keep it that way always), the only one he would be playful with is Kat. And Davina wasn't really the giggling type and I believe she liked Marcel. And some other things also that make your characters OC. Sorry If this looks like I'm trying to be mean, I am not at all trying to make you feel bad at least you have the corage to publish your work that i lack. (I must have a lot of tipos but its 1am in europe and I'm tired lol) Much love to you and I hope this maybe helps you make the story better? And I will keep on reading :)"
I'm not really sure when Elijah rolled his eyes at Davina, but I know what I do with Elijah's character is to show the fact that he has many sides to him that different people get to see. I'm sure even he would slip and show a playful side to someone he isn't playful with, if that makes sense. Davina is a 16 year old girl, no matter what you've gone through at the age, you will giggle in front of people that evoke that action. And I have stated before, I love Marcel. I love Marcel and Davina's relationship. Marcel is the only ooc person because I've made him the bad guy.
Thanks so much for that review, I hope I explained everything clearly. When I write, I plan it all out so there is a reason for everything I do. It's not because of laziness or bad writing, I write each character and plot-point with a purpose.
Artemis - I'm really glad you like the pairings. Kalijah is my favourite, too. Yeah, I gave vampire Katherine feelings because she's not emotionless, she just doesn't let herself look weak in the eyes of others. I've decided that Nadia won't be in this story, sorry. I had a plan for her but now I don't. As for Hayley, I hate her too but she serves a purpose in this fic. Don't worry, I'm sure you'll like it.
Wyiliekylie - Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story.
Regards,
Livvy
