This may be my last upload THIS WEEK. Don't worry, I won't stop uploading forever. This is gonna be a very busy week for me. However, there's probably be some uploads for weekend.

Chatter NEIN

No, chatter, everyone!

Teh Evil Tigger

What's Tigger doing here?

and holY

SHE'S NOT EVIL!
I SAID NO FLAMES! YOUR JUST JELOS

Jelous on your story? This is what happens when parents tell their kids that whatever they do is great and everyone who hates it is jelous.

YOUR GOING 2 HEL LJESS IS OYUR SAVER

"Ohno its HolyLeaf!"yelled FireStra he ranned away.

Yo, Firestar, calm down

SandStrom wnet aftre him.

StarGlaem locked

I'm pretty sure everyone knows how I feel about this.

up. HolyLeaf was stnding their and their was anodder chat with hr.

"OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!"

"we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he ran at HollyLeaf.

How the hell are you going to fight?

StarGlema washed as HolyLefa locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot.

Hollyleaf would not kill her brother!

"YOU KILDED MY FTHER! she yelled and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw gut out of the way and StarPaw attaked TiggerSar.

"U killed TigerStra!" uelled FiresStar he locked

Take deep breaths...

happy. "You are speshil!"

Of course she is. She's a Mary Sue.

StarGleam was sooo happy, she didng notse as HollyLea grabbed Firestar and took him way.
At least he'll be out of this story.

...

TAKE ME, HOLLYLEAF! GET ME OUT OF HERE!
"OH NO" yelled StarKit. "WE HAVE TO SAVE HIM!
He's better of that way... Wait, is that line completly without grammar mistakes?

*reads the line*

IT IS!
a cilf hunger1!111! see im a god riter

Yeah, and I suppose I'm good at physics.

i no what thta id thx f4r the good revweiws JzzPaw && everon else WHOSE NIT A FALMER

So, only Jazzpaw, then.

Wow, this chapter is so short, I'm probably going to do another one today. I did this in like, 10 minuets.