Night angel says no more cliffhangers 0 5 2 9 Night angel do you have a problem with my writing

Ok I was reading my reviews and I came across some new ones. First off to Mary Lita Kino, if you're still reading my fic, sorry that you don't like Dorothy and that you don't think she and Quatre should be together but I can't change it now, well I guess I could but I don't want to make up a new character and the other pilots already have the rest of the girls, sorrie, and the Quatre and Dorothy lovers out there will hate me but thanks anyways for the review.

Second this is to Night Angel. I juss saw all your reviews and you told me like 10 times not to put cliffhangers. It's not like I can change those stories since they were posted days before you read them and I also have a question. Do you just not like my story at all or do u just not like the cliffhangers?

And this is for all the readers, Do u or do u not want me to put cliffhangers? I want to know what my readers want and so I'm taking into consideration Night Angel's request. Please review and say if you still want me to end with cliffhangers or not. This one will be a cliffhanger and my next one will probably be whatever you guys pick.

Gomen. I know this was really long but I need u guys' opinions so on with the story o and standard disclaimers apply and all that stuff. O and I know I said that I would post everyday but Saturday I got this message all day saying there was this error and all day today. I just now got on and it's like 4 in the morning on Monday. Well just thot I'd explain to you and I know you probably expect me to have like 2 chap. ready but I only post one a day sorry because this mite seem selfish but it seems to me ppl get more reviews when they post one fic than when they post them all at the same time.

Relena woke up to the beeping of her clock and looked at it. "OH NO!" she yelled as she jumped out of bed. "I woke up late again." She hurriedly pulled on her clothes and did everything that you normally do in the morning. She rushed downstairs only to see the pilots and the girls sitting at breakfast except for Jess. "Hurry up Milliardo." She shouted to her brother while grabbing the keys out of a drawer and handing them to her. "I have meetings to go to." Everyone started laughing. "WHAT!" she said indignantly. Duo who had collapsed onto the table with laughter pulled off his watch and threw it to the outraged girl. Relena read the time on the watch and her eyes widened in surprise, when she saw that this clock read 7 when her clock upstairs read 8, but then they turned dark with fury. "DUO" she yelled and made to strangled him but he had already left the room still laughing. Relena collapsed tiredly into his empty chair and poured herself some coffee.

Quatre looked sympathetically at her. "We didn't know until Duo told us this morning." He said trying to defend himself and the others. "It was just a joke, Relena." Zechs said. Noin nudged him and looked at him threateningly. "And umm well Icanceledallyourappointementsfornextweek" he said in a rush but to Relena it seemed like he had distinctly said each word. "Honto?" she said happily. Noin nodded while Zechs pouted. "YES! Hey do you guys want to go to the mall?" she said pointedly looking at Hilde and the other girls. They saw the look she had and nodded. "Great, let's go in an hour." She said brightly and started to eat breakfast. An hour later the girls were on their way to the mall. "Why did you want to go to the mall so early?" Hilde whined. "Don't you remember our new mission." Relena replied. "OoOoO" said Hilde as it registered in her mind. "First off we need to name it something. How about operation girlfriend?" she asked the others. (I know corny name but I couldn't think of anything) "Great." Exclaimed Dorothy. "Ok let's start planning it" Relena said as they pulled into the parking lot of the mall."

Jess came down sleepily to breakfast while rubbing her eyes. "So what are we going to do today?" she asked pouring some cereal. "Well there is that little sparring match u owe us." Wufei said his eyes glinting. "Ok I guess." Jess said yawning. "Hey but that's not fair she's hurt." Quatre protested. "Exactly you're not fighting Quatre so it's to her advantage." Duo countered. "Let's meet in half an hour then." Wufei finished.

They met in the Peacecraft's new gym that was especially made for sparring. Zechs came to watch the match and ref it. This was going to prove to be an interesting match, he thought to himself. "No weapons." Heero stated adamantly not to comfortable with fighting his sister. "But Heero-" Wufei whined. "No." that ended the discussion. "Hey Heero why don't I take your place since you're likely to take it easy on her." Zechs said wanting to see how good Jess was. "Fine." Heero said in a monotone voice but was secretly relieved. The match commenced. "Hajime" shouted Heero.

Jess looked warily at the pilots that were circling her. She assessed her situation carefully. All the people there she had fought with before so could assess who was better. She thought to herself, I haven't seen Zechs fight so I don't know his skills or his moves yet but Duo would probably be the easiest to take out first. (sorry to Duo fans but I think that out of them all he would be the easiest to take down I'm not a Duo basher) With that thought in mind she quickly attacked Duo with a hook-shot with her left hand followed by an uppercut underneath his chin with her right. Duo, taken by surprise, was unable to block the blows and fell backwards. Jess immediately kicked him and flipped him onto his back and hit a spot on his neck that she knew would knock him unconscious. (I learned that on the back of your neck there's like this spot that if you hit you become unconscious) With Duo out of the way she could now concentrate on her other 3 opponents. The pilots looked surprised about how fast she took Duo out. Jess made a timeout sign with her hands and went over to the weapon rack. She grabbed four sparring staffs (sorry I forgot what those staffs or whatever are called u know like the sticks they use to fight with) and tossed three of them over to her 3 opponents. They looked surprised but grabbed their weapons. "Hey" Heero shouted. "Sorry Oniichan but what fun is sparring without weapons." Heero grumbled something about ungrateful sisters and how this was a big mistake.

Wufei grinned at the fact that they got to use weapons. He attacked Jess by striking downwards with his staff and Jess quickly lifted up her staff to block the blow but then Wufei used the other end of his weapon to hit her in the stomach. Jess gasped from the blow and staggered back. "Nice hit." She weezed. "Thank you" he replied and moved to attack again. This time he tried a straight hit to her stomach but she knocked his staff downwards using her own one and dodged when the other end of his staff came flying at her face. Jess used her free hand to grab the end that had came at her face and quickly disarmed Wufei while kicking him square in the stomach.

"Give me back my staff woman." He commanded as he clutched his stomach from the blow. "No" she replied as she rotated her injured arm to work it out a little and then turned to Trowa and Zechs holding both weapons in her hands. "Let's rush at her together", they said to each other at the same time. They each nodded and both rushed toward Jess. She hit Trowa on the head with the stick in her right hand but that left Zechs open with a spot to hit her. He shoved the butt of his rod into her open side causing her to let go of one of her weapons. Wufei grabbed it and faced Jess. The fight lasted for about two hours. Everyone was black and blue with bruises and were exhausted.

"Let's call this quits you guys." Zechs said. "No we're not done yet." Exclaimed Wufei, breathing heavily and trying to get up from his sprawled position on the ground, which was because of one of Jess's earlier blows. Something hit him on the side of his head and he fell back to the ground unconscious. "Any one have any objections?" Jess asked innocently reaching towards her rod that was now on the ground near Wufei. "No" chorused Trowa, Zechs, and Duo who had gained consciousness a few minutes ago. They looked a bit frightened at Jess's accuracy even when she was exhausted. Zech's sighed and got up. He picked up her rod and threw it to her. She caught it and used it to help herself up off the ground where she was laying.

Heero walked over and went to help Jess. Everyone put up their weapons and left except for Wufei who was still out cold. Heero supported Jess back to her room where she collapsed tiredly onto the bed. He smiled to himself, knowing no one was around to see him, and thought as he looked at her sleeping form while covering her with a blanket, I can really get used to this big brother stuff. It's nice to have a family even if there's only one other member. She looks like an angel sleeping like this. Anyone who sees her would never guess she was a pilot. He abruptly stiffened. He hadn't really thought about it before but what if she was hurt during a mission or even killed. Frowning slightly he put his unemotional face back on and eliminated is frown and then went to check on how the others were doing.

Relena and the other girls came home later and they were surprised to find that the house was quiet. They peeked into everyone's rooms and were surprised to see that everyone was sleeping. They quietly went down to the kitchen. "I wonder why they're so exhausted?" wondered Sally. "We'll see later. But how about we surprise them with a dinner." Exclaimed Catherine as she began pulling out pots and pans and stuff like that. "Ok." The girls chorused and started helping.

About an hour later the boys and Jess heard a loud noise blasting throughout the house. They all bolted out of bed and ran to see what had happened. There stood Hilde, grinning foolishly, with a trombone. She led them into the kitchen and there awaited a huge meal for them. There was a salad and pasta for them courtesy of Noin and Catherine. Relena and Sally had made some cream of mushroom soup and Hilde had baked a yummy looking apple pie complete with ice cream. "Yum" yelled everyone and immediately started digging in. Sally took in the bruises on everyone and especially Jess. Her eyes narrowed. "What happened?!" she instructed more than asked. The pilots choked and looked guiltily up at the girls. Relena and the others observed the cuts and bruises on Duo, Trowa, Zechs, Jess, and Wufei and something clicked in her mind.

"You didn't really take her up on the 5 on 1 sparring match did you?" she yelled outraged. "Weeeelll ummm kinda sorta" Mumbled Duo. "What do u mean kinda sorta! Look at all these bruises right here." She yelled holding up Jess's arm. "It's not their fault. I accepted their challenge." Jess said trying to protect the little group from the girls' wrath. "It's ok Jess." Relena said soothingly to Jess while turning to her. "We'll take care of them." She turned and glared at the boys and the other girls did the same. The pilots all gulped visibly.

Sally shooed all the boys away from their almost full plates and basically kicked them out of the room. "What about us?" Duo whined. "We're injured too. Do u know how hard that girl hits during a fight?" Hilde gave him a glare and raised her hand with a frying pan in it threateningly. He immediately started backing out of the room. The other boys followed him. Sally grabbed her first aid kit and lifted up Jess's shirt to take a look at her bruises. She pressed the discolored spots gently and Jess winced. "You have maybe 2 broken ribs and I don't even want to know how many bruises." Sally stated as she finished checking her over. The other girls hovered over her worriedly. "It's ok really." Jess assured them. Sally got some bandages and wrapped them tightly around Jess's abdomen. "The ribs should heal in somewhere between a week and a couple weeks." Sally stated. (I don't know how long it takes I just guessing) She sent Catherine out to call the boys. "Don't be to hard on them." Jess said pleadingly at the girls. The other girls nodded. "But it doesn't mean we won't punish them a little." Hilde answered. The boys walked in shame-facedly.

Sally sighed and checked over their wounds. "Wufei you have I think 3 broken ribs and that bump on your head should be taken care of. Zechs you got off pretty easily just 1 broken rib and not nearly as many bruises as Wufei or Jess." Sally announced. "Trowa, it seems Jess took it easy on you. You don't seem to have broken anything and you're a little better off than the others." Sally grinned while throwing a knowing glance over to the other girls who started laughing. "What's so funny?" asked the boys and Jess who were confused. "Nothing." Dorothy said suddenly assuming a straight face, the other girls followed her lead. "Now to talk about today's fighting. We are all very disappointed in you boys. Fighting 4 on 1 and especially 4 boys on 1 girl." The pilots suddenly looked very interested in the floor tiles. "Due to Jess's insistence we have decided to take it easy on you." Hilde chimed in and the pilots sighed in relief. "But," she continued, "the punishment for you guys will only be that you each have to grant us 3 wishes. It won't be anything beyond what you can do." "NANI?" shouted all the pilots. "Would you like another punishment?" Relena asked her eyes glinting and rested on the kitchen knives on the counter. "No" came the boys' meek reply.

Jess walked out the next morning feeling refreshed and wanting to practice with her gundam. She had deliberately avoided the girls and Heero knowing that they would try to stop her because of her injuries. When she got to the hangar her mouth formed an o in surprise.

Ok so what do u think n e ways if you didn't read what I wrote at the top please read it and then review. Well that's all ja ne