I am extremely sorry if the ending I made for this story was disappointing or deserves to be thrown in the trash. These are something's that were mentioned:
Punctuation (I was rushing, sorry)
The fact that Mimi called Sheen Uncle Sheen (Well, I call my mom's best friend "Aunt Silvia" so I don't see any problem, I would call my mom's closest friends/or dads/ aunt or uncle because I've known them since birth and it's all out of love)
The misspelling of "psychiatrist" (RUSHED)
The fact that Cindy and Jimmy beat them with a pistol ( See, Jimmy is a genius so he brings his hypercube and all these guns are in there so, yeah, he beats them. I know I should have put this in there)
To tell you guys the truth this was rushed because I wanted to finish this story quickly cuz I start an overnight camp soon and I'm not sure how to connect my laptop to a cabin. Again, so extremely sorry. I like constructive criticism but not put downs. Um, well yeah that's the truth. Thanks to anybody who read!
Bye!
Amy