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Freedom

Tyson has picked us up in her convertible and I love the wind in my hair. Maybe I should convince my dad that he should buy me a convertible for when I go to college. I know that Dad and mom didn't send Teddy car over but rather were surprising his with a brand new sports car as their gift to his for all his success.

Tyson has organised for his friend, Brent to be my date. I haven't ever met him but alas I couldn't care even if he didn't turn up. I loved the freedom that I felt right now. We stopped at a pizza shop and got out. Eva and Tyson were already showing public displays of affection that was a little too much to bear.

Tyson led is in and introduced me to Brent. "Brent this is Phoebe"

"Hi", I responded and my gosh he was handsome. He had dark brown hair, swept back from his face. He had a pair of jeans and a red shirt on and very strong arms. His eyes were mesmerizing and I knew then that I had made the right decision tonight. He was way more interesting than a clown on a Paris street.

"I hear you are a sophomore. I am a junior at Seattle prep", Brent said starting conversation.

Tyson got us all pizza and we sat and laughed. It was going brilliantly. Then the music started, Tyson and Eva got up and started to dance.

"Do you want to dance?" Brent asked.

"OK, but I don't think I am going to be any good at it." I was blushing really bad at this point.

"It's a slow song you just put your arms around each other and move to the music."

I did as he said and it felt wonderful. I had never been so close to a guy ever, except when hugging my dad or grandfather. We danced for hours and then it was 1:30am and Eva and Decided that it was time to go. As I said good bye to Brent I was amazed as I leant in and kissed him... I mean I really kissed him. I had been longing to do so since I met him.

We sneaked back in to the pool house and couldn't believe how good tonight had been. I was surprised that I even managed it. I got undressed and back into my Pyjamas and then noticed Grandma, Grandpa and Armstrong outside. I checked my phone and I had missed several calls from dad and Ted so had Eva. There was an email waiting for me also.

To: Phoebe Grey

From: Christian Grey

Subject: FURIOUS!

Phoebe,

You have a lot of explaining to do young lady. It is 11pm your time and we are now boarding the jet and coming home. Where on earth are you! Will be there at 6am.

Dad

CEO of Grey enterprises PTY

Shit! We're had been caught out. Slowly Eva and I exited the pool house to a set of angry grandparents, Kate's parents and Armstrong. This was going to end badly.