A few more reviewers comments::
I love this story but... DAMN IT! THE CHAPTER WAS SO FUCKING SHORT!! It is amazing though, that you didn't add in any pervieness... is that a first? Despite the short chapter, i still liked it. And thank holy mother of god that Sasuke's starting to act more like the old him again. Hell would probably freeze over before I could imagine Sasuke in a suit and tie.
And this isn't a flame. I'm just like... half drunk, so this review is turning out all retarded. But seriously... I don't really get the chapter. Why were the anbu there? I'm confused. But I still love the story! Can you just like please explain it in the next chapter? My head kills! Why am i writing all of this crap on your review? no idea. And what was up with that guy/girl who wrote that review about asking for reviews? WHO ON FANFICTION WOULD NOT ASK FOR REVIEWS ON A STORY?!?! THAT SOUNDED LIKE A FUCK'N FLAME TO ME!! (sorry for swearing so much on your review...I don't usually swear this often.) But I just have one question... how old are you anyways?!?! I mean that would be seriously creepy if some like... 13 year-old guy was writing this and it would weird if it was some guy in his 30's or 40's because... it would just be weird. You're a perv. But so is Jiraiya... Jiraiya rox! He's so funny!! I'd better end this review... I can't feel my fingers... (damn heating!) UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!! Love the story! Oh... my friend is reading this with me and she told me to write this: Update soon or she'll rip out your heart and stab it.
(Yeah... I know she's violent. Okay... she's glaring at me now...) See ya!
Lets get a few things straight hun, I aint a perv, and I'm fourteen (XD's)
so your stoned with a friend and she threatens to mutilate me how sweet, review anyways.
what? where's...where did all the good stuff go? T.T Aww reading your story in the morning always gets me going but the yummy goodness wasn't there T.T oh wel please update soon
All the good stuff's still in my head.
ZOMG! OPM! Yeah! Go Urbandub! Whoo!...
Sponge Cola's Bitiw (letting go) FUFFIN ROX!!! OPM4EVA
omg they found Sasuke o.O uh oh Sasuke play toy is found what will sakura do? UPDATE gives you a energy boost XD :3
AURGHHHHHH!!! (turns to hulk) ENJOI STORIEEEE!!! MWAHAHAH!!
Can you please answer this question, If i posted my band's Originals on YOUTUBE would you rate it, please answer in a review!
Recapz, it seems the peepz dont apparently follow the twisty storyline.
So it starts with Sakura finding Sasuke after he ran away. He never killed the Akatsuki, but Sakura did, hence her using the headquarters. She bondaged Sasuke, using it as a coy reason to keep him with her. She then realizes that the tables are slowly getting turned. But then, Ino steps into the picture, aware of what Sakura is doing, tries to buy some time with Sasuke herself.
Ino is taking a risk and using a Anbu squad to check out the fortress, which is of course, against Sakura's command (shes hokage)
and it will make her lose her job.
Unfortunately, Ino took the risk and found out Sasuke was there, and she tries to arrest him. Sasuke breaks his vow of never hurting again, and breaks free. He attacks his former friends and is almost at a dead end when Sakura helps him escape, in which she was brought down by Ino.
Now its continued from there...
Sakura was forced into the Konoha detention facility of vips, which in short was a more solitude confinement jail for short.
Two weeks quickly stretched to two months and it quickly stretched to two years.
Two years of nothing...
Two years of emptiness...
Two years of hatred...
Two years...
Without him...
Sakura could have broken out of jail, with the help of her faithful Shinobis, but she waited in vain.
Never moving on, hoping just one day...
Sakura turned on her cot and tried to find a better position on the wooden beam they called a bed.
"Naruto your right," Sakura thought out loud, "I don't need him." Tears leaked out of her eyes, "I DON'T NEED HIM!!" She screamed letting it out of her system.
"Charmed," a voice said from the ceiling and fell on top of her, knocking her out.
Cold wind rustled past her ears when she noticed she was in the arms of someone.
Noticing what was going on she quickly struggles to break out.
"Calm down, its me."
"Sasuke-kun?"
"Yeah, now stop moving around so much, geez your annoying..."
"Screw you, teme!"
She was dumped hard on the forest ground as he quickly rushed behind a tree.
"What gives?!" Sakura asked, with a nerve pulse pounding on her head.
"This!" Sasuke said as he finished a complex array of hand signals and the ground crumbled apart, showing a staircase leading downward.
"Figures what you were doing for two years instead of rescueing me." Sakura sniffed, climbing down the stairs.
Sasuke sighed and followed her.
Inside was a small stream of water spurting from a wall into a shallow basin and a few homely pieces of furniture.
A rickety desk with a few personal items were stacked on it, and a small bookcase next to it. Also with a large hammock suspended between the two dirt walls.
"Sasuke-kun, explain." Sakura said, plopping herself on the hammock. Making him uncomfortable, she looked delicious after two years of not looking at each other, and he couldn't help the fact that he knew she was a virgin.
"Theres a lot to explain," he said, removing a thick leather mask from his head, letting sily black/blue locks spill out, "theres alot a person can do in two years."
"Hmph, give me the outline!" Sakura said obviously pissed.
"I didn't do much," he said removing his shirt, letting it slide down to the floor.
"Your a bitch, well, a person never changes."
"Yeah, shut up and go to bed." He crossed the room and technically spilled over her.
"Hey!"
"Whatever," he murmered sleepily on top of her.
"Not even a sorry for keeping locked up in jail for two years huh?"
"Yeah, yeah..."
She woke up sleepily and she felt gentle hands sliding along her pink locks. She was about to turn around and kick the shit out of him when his voice stopped her. He was using a tone of voice she never heard before, a gentle musical lilt in it that she was sure Sasuke didn't have.
"I don't know why I'm staying, I can might as well kill you now and get away with it. But, in the end, we all kill, get killed,
and die anyways." He sighed heavily. "We just enjoy what we can hold onto right now, and kill to hold onto it. We're just all fish trapped in the same fish bowl year after year. Maybe, just dying would be better." He snuggled his head into the small crook in her neck. "But, your wrong, people do change."
After making sure he was asleep, she turned around slowly and wrapped her arms lightly across his chest, burying her head in his now long locks.
She was falling into troubled sleep, when he turned around and sneakily pecked her on the lips.
"So want to continue from day twenty-four?" He asked slyly snuggling closer.
MWAHAHAHHAH I wont update until I hit 20 REIVIEWS MWAHAHAH, I want a break -.-!