Victor 0606: Thanks. I'm trying to make it better and better.

I HAVE TWO QUESTIONS FOR YOU GUYS

Would you rather me be more descriptive and not rush things like I have been, or continue doing it the way I am? I think I should slow down a bit, and be more descriptive, that and short chapters have always been my flaws, oh and I need to re-read too.

Second question:

I'm thinking about making another fanfic, what should it be about? I'll probably focus on this one mostly, but just so I have something to write when I want to change it up a bit. It'll definitely be Dragon Ball/Dragon Ball/Dragon Ball GT. I stopped watching Super so I won't spoil it for myself while it is still coming out in English.

Well, please review, and thanks for reading. The next chapter(s) will be out this weekend probably. Well, have a nice day. I'm about to watch some college football, and also, yes I am a guy, I do realize most people who write these are girls, lol.