Everything I have to say is at the bottom...
Italics are for thoughts, news, and flashbacks
Bolded is for Tailed Beasts...
Opening theme:
Shine Days by Girls Dead Monster
All anime references used belong to their original creators.
(Infirmirary) (Right after the last ep)
After Shizu left, BK-201 shifted uncomfortably on the bed. A sudden spasm of pain erupted in her body. She was definitely hurting, but she kept it to herself quietly, only taking deep breaths.
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I could help her...but due to the situation...I'm sorry, kid...They might sense me...keep fighting...Kurama continued to keep to himself silently in his own little world. Feeling frustrated from hiding instead of doing some action. He turned around behind him and growled. Hey You! Ya better help her! Remember you beast, I'm not the only that paired up with this kid. So instead of doing nothing, do SOMETHING you idiot!
Deep inside that girl...through a dark passageway, leading out to a large room with a barrier of iron bars and chains wrapped around it. Behind it, lies a vast pitch black area. A small red gleam sparked.
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"You ok?" asked an unknown childish voice. A figure climbed in from the window, another BK-clone...but not BK-626. His boy-style hair was strangely blonde and a hint of black in the center. He had on a T-shirt with another hood attached to it but not wearing it. He's also wearing shorts...though...there's an obvious reason why he had to wear short sleeved clothes. Around the ends of each of his arms are large, cylinder-like vambraces, ending with small mechanized hands. Around each of his ankles are weights to counter the off balance of the arms. "You don't look so good~ Betcha need help?"
"What...do you want?" BK-201 groaned, sitting up on the bed.
"Eh? Don't get up! I just want to help a fellow BK-Clone!"
BK-clone? She found out immediately? Must get rid of her then... She quickly regained herself to fight, extending her tail out, and pounced at him.
"Eek! Whattaya doing?" The figure didn't like to make a mess in the infirmary, so he fled out the window with BK-201 following him.
They both retreated on the rooftop.
"This is a good place...no cameras...no eyes..." BK-201 panted, still weary of the poison.
"Hey wait! I have medicine for you!" He turned around into her backpack and held out a vial of purple liquid. "See? It'll make you feel better!"
"I...had enough of seeing BK-clones..." she muttered as she charged up electricity around her body and quickly charged forward, her arms blackened as it hardens.
The other was pushed back as BK-201 slammed her hardened fist into his chest knocking whatever breath he had in him.
I gotta report this defected clone! I have to fight back, too. He smashed her fists together deploying and unfolding numerous amounts of swords into the air. Shizu-san! HELP ME! He silently wailed as he saw BK-201 walking forward with her hands outstretched and sharpened into claws.
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"And there you go, Shizuku" said the principal. "Now, you know the top priorities in this school. Remember to give that girl the slip. She will be doing out of school suspension for three days."
"Yea yea I get it. You don't have to put emphasis on everything. I just want to prepare the students for the worst situations that I hope they'll never be in."
"I hope that, too. But-"
Shizu's communicator (cell-phone) started ringing. "Oh, excuse me." she picked it up. "Hello?"
"Shizu-san! Help me!" a voice called out. She immediately recognized the caller.
"Ret?! Are you here now? What's going on?" She turned to the door. "I'm sorry sir but I must attend something very important!" She told the principal.
"There's a berserk clone where I am!"
Berserk clone? BK-626? "Where are you right now?"
"The rooftop! Hurry! I can't hold her off!"
"I'll be right there." Shizu rushed through the hallways and up the stairs. Please make it!
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1...2...10 swords...not bad... BK-201 dodged a sword that was hurled at her and caught it. She quickly blocked another sword with her arm and caught that one, too.
The remaining 8 swords remained at Ret's side levitating around him. "I'm sorry, BK-clone. I must put you down! Help will be coming soon. Hyah!" He forced the swords into her direction simultaneously one after another, but BK-201 already saw through the attack. As the blades came at her, she wielded the ones she caught as if they were dual blades. She swiftly clashed each one down, forcing them to be stuck in the ground. The last two blades were coming, but a sharp pain in her right chest rendered her almost unable to utilize her swords any longer. Instead, she dodged them to the side, coughing after a short spasm of pants.
"Lucky me! That poison crawling around in you must be slowing you down now. Though...it's strange that you're almost still standing right now." Ret smiled but it disappeared as BK-201 was out of sight. It was already too late to look around as a blade was held right at his throat. She had quickly turned the tides in just one move. "A...Ah..." All that childish gleam he had immediately turned into shivery fear, sweat beaded down his forehead.
"What was that? Slow? Clearly...(cough)...you are mistaken..." BK-201 said nonchalantly, still struggling to breathe but not as bad as before. She prepared to end his life quickly.
"P-please!..." Ret silently prayed.
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"BK-201, STOP! She's with me! Don't hurt her!"
BK-201 froze and tipped her head to the side as she saw Shizu. "Why?"
"He's my BK-clone!"
"He? BK-clones consists of females..." she said releasing Ret.
"Shizu-saaaaaan!" Ret cried out happily. He bounded over and embraced Shizu. "I really missed you! I was really scared! This nasty BK-clone was going to hurt me!"
"Ah well, Ret...This one is more like...a friend of mine. She just had an encounter with BK-626."
Ret: "Ah that bully! He's so mean!"
BK-201: "What is the meaning of this?"
Shizu: "Let me explain. Ret is BK-625. I named him that way. I know all BK-clones are girls, but I just wanted this one...to be like a boy."
"Why?" BK-201 asked questionably.
"It's just..." Shizu bit her lip and sighed. "Ret, I'm sorry. could you leave us be for a moment."
Ret nodded his head and jumped off the building.
"BK-201, have you ever had a family?"
"None..."
"I did...before I became one of the Seven Apostles." She said reminiscing her past. "I had a lovely husband...two children...A boy and a younger little girl...Of course my older brother was there...We all lived within the central in Sunagakure...I told you before that I used to work with Yuu's father."
She nodded.
"At that time, he reigned as the Lord Kazekage...That's his title. His name is Koutari Arashi. It's just as his name sounds. He was the great "storm" of the Land of Iron, Tetsu no Kuni. He utilizes wind nature and can create and command any kind of storm within his power. It was a great honor serving under him. My husband served as his body guard while I was his advisor. I also had to take care of my kids, but he was kind enough to help occasionally. Who knew he was actually good with children! However, he went missing for a year, leaving us a message to look over the city while he was gone. Even though many had doubts of him, he came back...but with a baby...That time, I finally realized what he had done. He committed a huge taboo...He went to the human world and had a baby with a human. Even now I still don't understand why or how he fell in love with a human...He could have been desperate to have a kid that was compatible with Shukaku...It was hard to have a kid like that since the compatibility comes from genetics...only by chance though. To make things worse, about many years prior to that, Shukaku defected from Sunagakure and was never found for around a decade. Nevertheless, the first kid he brought back was incompatible with Shukaku, so he left and did it again bringing home another kid. The result was the same. Let me tell you, BK-201. He sure banged enough women from our world, but none of them lived after birth or were compatible."
"That's the responsibility of the clans that holds a tailed beast, Shizu. To prevent any mishaps, the clan is like that to prevent multiple jinchurikis of the same beast to happen. Other nations from other land could have targeted the extra jinchurikis and used them to steal other clans' tailed beasts. It has happened before with Kokuo, the five tailed beast. There were twins that were both compatible to him, but Iwagakure refused to have one put down. Unfortunately, that was a mistake. During a war, Kumogakure managed to kidnap one of the twins that didn't have the beast in him. They used him to steal Kokuo from Iwagakure after they killed the jinchuuriki. They even forced the other twin to take in Kokuo inside him as a vessel. Such a hard time...until now. I have heard that Kokuo has been re-captured recently."
"You certainly know the news. Yes, Kokuo and Saiken are both captured...not by me...by the other Apostles. They currently have the Jinchurikis imprisoned over in their territory. Back to the story. Me and my husband have advised him to stop going to the human world, but he wouldn't listen. I couldn't blame him because I knew that's the first time I have ever saw him in love for a woman. The third time he came back with another baby...a girl. About a month earlier, Shukaku was found but was already killed by the time we found it. However, we were caught with Konohagakure's Jinchuriki, Uzumaki Menma, along the way. We had to bring back Shukaku and revive it back at the central, so we had to fight him. Okay, fighting him alone would have been fine, but Menma unleashed Kurama on us from the get-go. None of our attacks fazed the two. Luckily, Arashi came with the sealing unit. He ordered the unit team to seal Shukaku within a storage and transport it back to be revived. The problem now was the giant fox blocking the way. But then again, Arashi is the Lord Kazekage. He wielded a large hammer with a ball chained to it and brought forth a monsoon to quell the unruly flames of Kurama. Him alone gave us time to get everyone out of the area before joining up with us at our nation's border. Back at the central underground, Shukaku was successfully revived but left unawakened. Arashi wanted it that way...his orders. He kept this hidden from public: He sealed Shukaku in that little girl's body. However, during that time Sunagakure was betrayed and invaded by another clan from a different nation, the Satsuriku Clan from Getsugakure. Around a hundred BK-clones attacked us...they were under that clan as well. It was one of the worst timings, too. My husband was out commanding our military with Kari, and I was evacuating the civilians underground...however, the sealing ritual must never be interrupted. It did unfortunately. A BK-clone assassinated Arashi. Only half of Shukaku was successfully sealed. The other half remained sealed in storage. The girl that had half of Shukaku sealed in her...went missing...until today..."
BK-201 nodded. "Yuu is that girl. I know, but you told me a lot of extras..."
"I know I'm sorry, but it's for you to understand what happened next. After the Satsuriku retreated, everyone mourned the death of the great Kazekage...but that was not the end of it. Dragon Slayer arrived from Getsugakure to deliver us a message. She made negotiation with me and my husband since were the only ones governing temporarily, but we refused her terms. She said that the Satsuriku Clan wanted to take over Sunagakure and its lands and as well as for us to join them as one of the Apostles...'for the better good'. We refused because we put our nation first before others. She didn't take no as an answer, and her BK-clone suddenly appeared behind my husband and...beheaded him..." She cringed. "I couldn't call for reinforcements...my husband could but not me...We were secluded outside the outskirts of the city, too...What could have I done back then? That wasn't the only thing I lost...Dragon Slayer summoned a large dragon while her BK-clone brought forth...my two...kids. She threatened me to agree to her terms or else my kids will die...I finally agreed immediately...but...but..." Shizu croaked, tears welling up in her eyes. "Right after that...She...h-her dragon...devoured them...She killed them! She killed my family!"
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"Welcome to the club, Shizu...You won't be needing those kids anymore~"
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"Shhhhh...Shizu...We are in school..."
"AND WHAT DO YOU KNOW?" she screamed at her, tears streaming down. "For someone that never had a family!"
BK-201 froze then sighed. "I can never compare myself to you...I lost many things in my life as well...I saw other BK-clones in my generation suffer and die in front of me...I survived...and was taken care of by a really good friend...She died too...killed in fact...All my friends died..." Though...it was all my fault...
"I-I'm sorry..." she sniffed. "I completely forgot about the Neblade Project."
"I know your feeling, Shizu..."
"Ret...and Io...were their names...BK-625 was the BK-clone assigned to me. I hated her at first...hated all the clones..."
"I can't blame you..."
"I know...but this one...BK-625...no matter what...attended to me during my first few weeks as an Apostle...She has a very kind heart, always checking on me...she listened to what I wanted to talk about...She reminded my of my son...Ret. He always wanted to be an inventor or something that just tinkers with machinery...BK-625 liked to play around with strange machine parts like him as well...She asked me one day about what I wanted her to do to make me happy... Just her being there felt like I was being with Ret like before...I did ask her a favor that day...I asked...if she could just act as if she was a boy and be called Ret...To my surprise, she happily agreed..."
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"Okay! I'll do that! From now on, you call me 'Ret', Shizu-san! I will always want to be with you!"
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"From that point on, I called her Ret and treated and loved her as if she was really my son...if only my daughter was here, too..."
"Shizu...this...isn't healthy..." BK-201 muttered, struggling to keep herself awake a little. "You can't replace a life with another..."
"I know...but please...for now...let it be like this...for me..."
"Fine..." She sighed heavily, rising up on her feet. "I'm going home early...I'm guessing that I'm suspended..."
"Mmmhmm...yes...about a week actually...Sorry..."
"I'll take my leave then...BK-626 officially knows Koutari-kun..." She nodded and dashed on the roof of the buildings.
"She... really needs to becareful...running on buildings in bright light like that...so reckless..." Shizu smiled drying up her remaining tears.
"Hey Shizu-san! I forgot something!" Ret climbed over the top and landed next to her. "That BK-clone was poisoned, and she still didn't take the antidote! What should I do?"
"Ret...antidote? She just left. Though...I think she'll be fine without it. She seems like she only need some sleep. That's all."
"Ah! I thought so, too! Her body's doing a great job fighting it off!"
"So, how are you doing? What did Dr. Gibson do on you?"
"Ah! Old man Gibson helped get my soul in synch with my body. ZAHA made me this new mecha tech, too!" She held out the braces on her arms. "Check this! This is a sword dispenser! I can hold lots of bladed weapons in here. They fold up nicely until I bring lots of them out in battle. It's great for both close range and long range attacks. It's perfect with my magnetism ability! I can have a constant supply of something made of metal ready anytime, Yes!"
"That's good. Did you say thank you to Zaha?"
"Yep! He's a pretty nice guy...a bit stingy on the rules...but nice overall. Though...I'm curious." Ret tilted her head. "That BK-clone I just met...What's her serial ID? Why is she working alone rather with a master?"
"The BK-clone?" Shizu thought about it at first, thinking whether she should tell her about BK-201 or not. "Alright...but promise me one thing: keep this away from everybody else."
"Is it that much of a secret? Not the Supreme Leader? Not Zaha? Not even other BK-clones?"
"None of them! They can't know! Especially the higher ups! You have to promise me not to tell anyone!"
"Hmmm as long as it doesn't impede on us and our situation, okay! I promise! I'll make sure everything with you. So, who's she?"
Shizu took a deep breath as she processed her words to use. "She's BK-201...quite older than you-"
"What?! But she-" Shizu quickly shushed her.
"You're over-reacting. Let me explain. Yes, she's the clone with the missing files, but the others believe she's dead. We need to keep that way understand?"
"But...Shizu...Her generation was supposed to be erased...if not then expired...DECADES ago! How is she alive right now?"
"That...I was puzzled with that, too...She most likely has another source of life energy within her, slowing down her expiration...drastically, especially if she's still healthy to this day."
"Meh...I can't believe I got this stuff for nothing!" He complained holding out an antidote.
"Where did you even get that?" She asked carefully examining the contents. "It looks a bit old."
"Oh, I got this from an abandoned lab. It used to belong to a scientists that works with lots of poisons, and this vile is the cure to most of them. I figured I could nab one while I have the chance."
"What in the world made you go there?"
"Someone important told me to!"
Shizu sighed and hugged Ret close to her. "Just be careful, Ret...You're the one that's important to me. You know that because I love you."
"I love you too, Shizu-san!"
(Basketball practice)(Kohachi's POV)
Everybody was still a bit shaken up from the assembly today. Well, I didn't get to see it. The event was canceled by the time it got to the third years, so I wasn't able to see what happened there.
"Ok guys! That's enough! Let's end a bit early today. Great job everyone!"
Yea...because of that I just felt like cutting today's practice short. Though something's off about Yuu...She wasn't her usual happy self. I'm guessing there's something on her mind? She's just sitting by herself staring off into space.
"Oi! What's gotten into our little manager here?" I gave her a small slap on the back.
"Eep!" she jumped. It was a bit funny. "Don't do that, Kohachi-senpai!" she shrieked.
"What's wrong, Yuu?"
"Nothing..."
"Come on tell me. Is it something that happened today?"
Yuu shuffled her feet and sighed. "Yea...A lot happened though...Hanako was really mean and bossy...a stranger came during the assembly and beat up my friend-"
"Hanako? Hanako Nakamura?!"
"Y-yes. Why? You know her?"
Hanako Nakamura...I honestly didn't know that she was even in this school until now.
"Well, how should I explain this? We used to be best friends...in a way...We did sports together...Kendo was it? She was my kouhai...and I was her senpai. Believe it or not, we used to be the best duo players back then, but that was before the first year in middle school started. We...had our disagreements...at that time, I have decided to play basketball as a profession and stop kendo. Hanako was furious. She yelled at me for throwing away a great opportunity. She really looked up to me; however, I still quit kendo. Right before I left the Dojo, she stomped right up to me and shouted,
"I'll never consider you my senpai again! I'll never quit and I'll surpass you! Just you wait! You will be the one that gets left behind!"
Later, I learned that she moved to Osaka, and I haven't heard from her ever since."
"I guess that's why she acts so hostile towards the basketball team..."
"She's what?"
"She told one of our members to quit this club...that new girl..."
"Ah her with the injury? She didn't actually leave right? We actually need her as a member...though she's not here today..."
"She got suspended...so we won't be able to see her for a while...Are you going to talk to Hanako?"
I though about it...It has been years, but I really don't want t see her right now...not yet anyways.
"No, I'll let her be for now...You should be going home as well."
After Yuu went home, I still thought about Hanako. For all I know, she has some sort of superior issues...but I can't exactly blame her. It was partially my fault that she is the way she is, but it is also how she climbed high to be junior champion as well.
Otherworld- Strength's POV
"Hey! Black Gold Saw! Your two minions are fighting each other again!" I'm in Black Gold Saw's domain. I just decided to help her out with her little hooded army, but there were some quarrels...especially Vulcan and that purple one.
"Hey! Stop fighting! There is no match right now!" she scolded, but I am a bit concerned of the purple one. When I first saw her, she was really quiet and docile and even got along with Vulcan; however, now she has gotten more...aggressive. That's sort of...normal. It just means her human-counterpart is feeling emotional struggle. Of course I can feel Yuu, too, but I can manage and take in whatever pain she accumulates...for now I guess...
"RAHHHHHHH!" The purple eyed hooded figure turned towards Black Gold Saw and struck at her with a pole she had created earlier. Black Gold Saw already got this under control. She easily snatched the pole right out of her grip.
"You need to get in control of yourself! Take in the rush slowly." she advised her quickly.
"Ah...I think...Hah..." the little one responded, hefting out each word after her breaths. "I'm...I'ma..."
"What is it? Come on say it!"
"I'm...Ma...ta...gi...Matagi..." she whispered.
"Matagi..." That really isn't a bad name! "Congrats!"
Black Gold Saw came over to me with Vulcan. "Hey Strength, can you take care of Vulcan here? Just make sure that she's not bored or something. You can teach her a bit, too."
"Me? Teach HER how to FIGHT? I don't know about you, but I'm pretty sure that Dead Master is way more capable of doing this."
"Geez, I never said you had to teach her to fight. I just need you to look over her. I have to do something with the other minions. There's a slight disturbance in this world that definitely doesn't belong here. If you want to go to Dead Master's domain, I can send you two there."
"Sure, Vulcan and I can definitely find something to do there."
Black Gold Saw nodded and opened up a portal for us.
"So Strength" Vulcan chirped "What do you think of...Matagi?"
"Her? It's really too soon to say. I mean...think about it. She just learned her name, but she still hasn't been awakened or even connected with her human-counterpart."
"Oh! True. True. Ya know...This is pretty amusing!"
I stopped and looked at her. "What makes you say that?"
"Well...Isn't Arata, my human-counterpart, like a senpai to yours? And here, you're like a senpai to me!"
"I just realized that! Pretty deep thinking there."
"Yea...but I sometimes wonder what Arata is doing right now. I hope her relationship with Taku is going well."
"Hmm...I'm pretty sure that they're still getting along well. It's hard since we're disconnected from our human-counterparts. Anyway, let's get inside. Dead Master is probably reading again."
In a hotel , Kyoto. (BK-626 POV)
Ah fuck it...Why I am I fucking walking all the way here with these stupid gangs. The Blue Squares can't do shit! Just look at them! Well, there's us with our pathetic lead that one girl is located in this fucking country! Have they not realized how big Japan really is? Godammit! I finally found the girl though...but I really don't care that much about the mission. I just want to find out who I really am and what I'm supposed to fucking do! I might as well give these humans a slight lead~
I crawled up to a window of their so called "person in charge". I think his name is Mikado Ryū-something...
There he is...with his group of idiots. I just want to kill'em all...meh...not now...maybe a simple toss of a toxic smoke bomb...nah...gotta control what I want and what I have to do...geez...
"Hey boys!" I barged in and wow they were totally surprised...probably because of this awesome hockey mask I'm wearing. I stole it earlier from a sports store at a mall over at Ikebukuro. Kekeke! They immediately reach for their guns until one stopped them.
"It's one of those BK-clones! They are supposed to help us." said Mikado.
"The fuck yea I am. Let me get this straight. The girl you're looking for is...at" Oh shit...I didn't even stop to look at the school name...Dam..." Ah...just...darn I didn;t find out the name, but I at least know where you might encounter her. Go to this street. She walks. That's all I know, bitches!" Annnd with that I just left them. It's up to them to use their small brains. I don't care either way...the answers I'm looking for...should be at the old abandoned Laboratory in one of the small illegal areas in Getsugakure...
Home (POV off)
"Hey kid, You alright, eh? That poison was a really strong one."
BK-201 plopped herself on the couch. "I'm fine. I have my own antidote...I can fight this myself." she murmured.
"Just saying cuzz...I should have been there...luckily someone else did it already..." He uploaded himself up on the laptop. "You're fortunate enough that they can't detect its chakra unlike my situation, eh? Its life chakra naturally mixes with your own. No wonder you're compatible with-"
"I know Kurama...You don't need to point that out." She cut in. "I just...want to sleep..."
"Yea go ahead."He opened up a to-do list on the desktop. "Remember, we still have to replace the engine, fix a few things here and there, and that barrier..."
Things just got harder after just one day...
Shizu's sad past revealed (part of it)...parts of Hazama exposed(as events and characters)...Yuu's location found out...BK-626 still on the loose...Hanako is being an ass...Matagi learning her name...all part of the story.
The Black Reaper is nowhere to be found...in public.
BK-201 and Kurama are now feeling a shift of difficulty in their "mission."
Who knows what will happen next?
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I got this! I feel like I'm on a roll! Winter break finally started~~~Also...Happy Holidays!
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Thank you all for your comments and reviews. They really help me build up on what I have to do for the next eps. This is why I like reviews. I will always read them~
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(just in case for those that haven't read this part from the last ep)
Q/A from people outside this I got:
Q:What's your dev art?
A:I can't type it here. its on my bio...(ninjabuddyyin deviantart )
Here's a big one:
Q: Why isn't this in the crossover section? (in fanfiction net)
A: That is a very good question. The crossover only has two animes in their...category thing. My fan-fic is a build-up of multiple animes, mangas, and possibly games. In most cases, I'm mostly using characters from those animes...like Durarara! but I leave out a huge chunk of events from THAT anime, but keep in the characters and the basics, hence the Blue Squares and Yellow Scarves. Headless Rider? Spoilers...Now as for Naruto...If I HAD to make this a crossover, I would make it a Naruto and BRS one since this happens waaaaay after the events of the Naruto series...I might change the ending for Naruto to fit...Come on...I'm not the only one that was disappointed in the last chapter of the manga...Seriously!
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Anime/manga refs used so far:
~Black Rock Shooter TV
~Naruto
~Durarara!
~BRS the GAME
~BRS Innocent Soul
Remember, I'm definitely including characters, but not exactly their plots as well. I might tweak them or changed them accordingly to the point that the fit BRS and other anime refs.
more later...
Ending theme: Osu!Stream Theme by Nekodex (especially near or after 50 seconds of it) Reason for this: It just matches...
Lil O dictionary: Japanese to English
Sunagakure- Hidden Sand Village- (ironically the sand part isn't exactly true in this story)
Konohagakure- Hidden Leaf Village (Also changed)
Getsugakure- village hidden under the moon (also changed)
These places aren't villages anymore. As centuries past, the strong villages became powerful, urbanized cities.
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REVIEW OR COMMENT OR QUESTIONS!...I live on these reviews...especially because this is my first fan-fic...It shows tells me of what sort of writing I need to aim for. Check out my deviant art! It will have character data and some scenes drawn out from this. Link is on my bio. Like I said, might rewrite this chapter if I need to, but I be sure to point it out on the next chapter. kk Later!