Hey everyone I'm back and finally I'm going to upload this story but first a few of my responses to reviewers that reviewed on my other stories.
Our Three Little Miracles
FoxDemon1023: Yeah I know that birds are kinda gross looking once they hatch. It's just that there's a picture of Carla, Bia and Tiago on the Rio Wiki that shows them right after they hatch and it shows them with feathers so I thought I would just follow that picture.
Rio: Forgive me
FoxDemon1023 and Jeff117: Yeah I'm sorry I didn't put Fallout as complete. I was going to but I guess I forgot, so sorry about that.
Rio Judger: Just because a story doesn't stick to the movie doesn't mean it's going to suck or be bad and while I truly appreciate your honesty about my story, it kinda annoys me that you criticize other author's stories when you don't have any of your own. Plus this is fanFICTION, a place to spread your creative ideas around within reason, so just because a story doesn't "stick to the movie" or makes a character OOC (Out Of Character) does not always automatically make it a "bad" story. Also no author's stories here is "good" or "bad" (Unless they are copied from another author)they are are written to satisfy all of the different kinds of genres people like. Also everyone or mostly everyone works hard to think of ideas and and take time out of their lives to type them out so it's kinda a hard hit to your self-esteem and self-confidence as an author when another member who has no stories tell you it's bad or it sucks. That being said I know you were just viewing your honest opinion and I thank you for that and I know that you are trying point out any author you feel is disrespectful to other authors but you need to look at story from the author's point of view and how much they work on it. People need to stray away from the main storyline or else they boring. So yeah I'm sorry if I'm being rude to you I just thought you should read this and see what I think of your views for Rio stories. Hope you understand.
PS: At least tell me why the story is .
There we go. I did it, but I've typed too much. Enough blathering, here is what you came to see the new chapter. Enjoy.
Roberto woke to see the sunlight stinging his eyes. He got up and realized that he had slept in. He couldn't believe it, it was the first time he had since he was a hatchling. He quickly got up and got ready knowing that Eduardo was going to give him a hard time for showing up late. As he prepared to leave he heard Blu and Jewel talking.
"Blu you don't need the toothbrush. I told you we don't have teeth."
"I know I was going to use to shine my beak before I see your father. You know to look my best."
"Okay one your beak is clean enough and besides it'll just get dirty once you start training and second you always look your best at least in my eyes."
"Okay you win I'll stop. Anyways see you later Jewel."
"Bye Blu."
Roberto couldn't help but feel envious. He thought about Blu and Jewel along with their six kids. He then thought about having his own mate and kids. He could just imagine coming home and having little macaws flock out of the various rooms and greet him along with a beautiful mate as well.
Almost every male bird in the tribe envied the suave and handsome Roberto. He was a girl macaw magnet, had the skill and personality of a loving mate, and had a singing voice so sweet it could resurrect dead plants and flowers, but he had a secret underneath his Fabio exterior other than his relationship with humans. He was in fact quite a lonely bird. His family had left to go explore Brazil and he of course longed for a mate like Jewel. He knew that she was Blu's and he heard that he even saved her life.
Roberto knew he couldn't compete against that especially since the thought of danger especially human related danger made his feather spike out and caused him to grab the nearest thing and blather out random things.
Of course there were dozens of birds who would kill to be his mate but none of them felt like the right mate.
"And Blu was jealous of me." He thought to himself as he flew off to meet Eduardo and Blu. Thankfully Sapphire was with him so he didn't get yelled at too much. He then watch as Blu tried to make it across the ring of caimans trying not to get eaten.
"Remind me Eddie, how is this supposed to help Blu?"Sapphire asked as she watched Blu. He had definitely made progress from when he started but there was no way he could be worse.
"It improves coordination and helps in case he ever can't fly and is surrounded by predators" Eduardo answered as Blu continued to flail around trying to avoid meeting a early end.
After 8 hours of intense, tortuous training, Blu was finally able rest and started snacking on some Brazil nuts. He had gotten used to the nuts and soon he learned how to crack them open with his beak. As he was eating, Jewel and Roberto joined him.
"So how did training go?" Jewel asked as she nuzzled her beak with Blu's. Blu could have sworn he saw Roberto's eye twitch when he nuzzled Jewel.
"Great but can I ask you a question or two?" Blu asked.
"Sure." Jewel said.
"Do you have any siblings?" Blu asked.
"Why are you asking me this?" Jewel asked.
"Well after meeting your mom I thought that I might as well learn the rest of your family."
"Well to answer your question, I did have two sister but I haven't seen them in a long time." Jewel responded
"Well what about you Roberto?" Blu asked.
"Well my parents and my three sister are on a trip flying around Brazil and I lost my brother a long time ago."
"Well what happened to him?" Blu asked.
"It's not something I really like to talk about." Roberto responded.
"Oh. I'm sorry." Blu said feeling ashamed for bring up such a sensitive topic.
"So um Jewel how long have you and Roberto known each other?" Blu asked.
"We've known each other every since I hatched." Jewel said.
"So he's your best friend?" Blu asked then noticed Jewel's head drop a bit.
"I'm sorry Blu I have to go home before Roma and Tiago burn it down." Jewel said before flying back to Roberto's tree.
"What's wrong with Jewel?" Blu asked.
"It's about her best friend." Roberto said, "When they were still chicks, she lost her best friend and now it's a sensitive spot for her."
"Oh um right." Blu said as he felt even worse for making Jewel sad.
"Um Roberto um do you still have feelings for Jewel?" Blu asked.
"What no. Why do you ask." Roberto asked.
"Well you seemed to be pretty sensitive to me and Jewel pressing beaks." Blu said.
"Oh well you see. Watching you and Jewel together with your kids makes me kinda wish for my own family you know. I guess I'm a little envious of you Blu and I guess I just to see what having a family is like.
"Well don't worry you'll find that special someone." Blu said reassuring Roberto.
"Thanks Blu." Roberto said as the two flew back to Roberto's tree.
"One more thing." Blu said, "Why are you always so helpful and nice to me no matter what?"
"I don't know." Roberto said, "Something in my heart keeps telling my too."
The two arrived just as Jewel had managed to put Grecia, Achez, Roma, Carla, Bia, and Tiago to sleep.
As the two were about to go to sleep, Blu decided to apologize.
"Hey Jewel. Look I'm sorry for bring up your best friend." Blu said.
"It's alright Blu." Jewel said. as some tears flowed down her cheek, "It's just that I miss my friend a lot."
"Blu looked Jewel in the eye. Even when she was crying she still looked like the incarnation of beauty.
"Don't worry about it. Let's go to sleep I'm sure you'll feel better after a good night sleep.
"Okay. Goodnight Blu"
"Goodnight Jewel"
So what did you think. Also should I
Jewel's sisters
Roberto's family
Jewel's best friend (The one that she lost)
of the above
Please leave a review with what you want to happen in this story. Thanks in advance and see you all later.
