REVIEW! If not this piece of writing that is TECHNICALY called a chapter, then the last one, the awesome fight scene! Come on, you know you wanna!
I AM FEELING VERY RANDOM TODAY. MAYBE ITS BECAUSE I FRIED MY BRAINS AND WORKED AND WORKED AND WORKED AND WORKED ON THE FIGHT SCENE DURING MY FREE TIME, DURING LUNCH.
Nudge whispers to Angel: She scares me
Angel whispers to Nudge: Me too
Nudge: Maybe its because of her writing assignment in class.
Me: WHAT? YOU MEAN THE ONE THAT ME, IGGY, AND FANG SUGGESTED TO THE TEACHER, ABOUT WRITING A CHAPTER STORY WHICH WILL TURN OUT INTO A NOVELISH THING AT THE END OF THE YEAR, AND THAT YOU SHOULD DO IT IN GROUPS, AND I ABSOLUTELY COMPLETELY LOVE IT BECAUSE SHE ACTUALLY USED OUR IDEA? YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! HAHAHAHA!
Nudge and Angel slooooowly inch out of the room.
Me:WHAT! DO I SCARE YOU? YOU SHOULD BE SCARED! I'M STRESSED AND HAPPY AND HAVE A JUMBO OPEN BAG OF PUFFY CHEETOS BESIDE ME!
Angel: Maaaax! She stole the bag of Jumbo Cheetos and nows she's gone crazy again!
Max: What! You actually managed to find them! I thought Fang hid them!
Me: HE DID! I FOUND THEM! MUAHAHAHA! I SNIFFED THEM OUT! HEHEHEHEHEHE!
Fang: ...
Max: ...
Nudge: ...
Angel: Max! Save us!
Iggy: Uhoh...she got the Cheetos again?
Me:YES! ALL MINE, MY PRECIOUS GLORIOUS CHEETOS! HEHEHEHE!MUAHAHAHA!HAHAHAHAHA!
Iggy: ... Save us.
Gazzy walks into the room.
Gazzy: Hey, whats up guys? (just had an unfortunate occurence)
Me: GAS...MASK! (falls to the floor choking)
Max, Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy and Angel quickly fly above the green cloud. Gazzy swoops down and grabs the Cheetos.
Angel: Yay! Thanks Gazzy.
Me: HELP ME! AAAGH...
Max: ...
Fang: ...
Iggy: ...
Nudge: ...
Gazzy: ...
Angel: ...
All: NO!
Me: MY CHEETOS...(chokes)
Now for...RANDOM WORDS!
CHEESEBURGER!
POLKA DOTS!
BLUBBER!
ELOQUENT!
EPPIFANY!
BLUP!
hehehehe...
In case your wondering, I really do have a jumbo bag of Cheetos beside me, and they are really good...but no flock :( Even an angry flock would be okay.
Okay, I'm fine now, just went completely cazy there for a moment.
Ok, what is up with this. I have 687 hits, and 29 reviews. I want to hit 50 reviews by Chapter 15. Pwetty pwease?
Keep Flying...(suddenly bursts out laughing for no reason)
Phew.
Okay.
Now I'm really fine.
XD
-MaxRide101-
Okay, it's now the next day at school, and I'm working on Chapter 10 for you guys. YOU BETTER THANK ME! (hunches over and glares at people) Just kidding, I love writing this story. Anyways, I'll get it done today or tomorrow. I'll probably be getting my computer back soon too, so that'll help a lot. Oooh, random quote from my random flock at school!
"THERE'S NO EEEEEEEEE!!" My addition to the quote: "OF COURSE THERE'S NO EEEEEE, IT'S BUSY PLOTTING TO DESTROY THE WORLD!"
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Don't ask.
Keep Flying
MaxRide101
Max POV
I was running like H-E-double hockeysticks through the woods. My feet were aching and sore, my lungs were burning, my throat was pretty much raw from gasping air, and to top it all off, I had called for help from FANG. I was going to personally kill myself if I got out of this alive.
Anyways, I was running when suddenly my feet weren't touching the ground anymore, and I was moving WAY faster than normal. What the h? Was this a new skill or something?
"Hey," came Fang's amused voice above me. Oh. Oops. I looked up at him and grinned foolishly, but stopped when my dangling legs hit a tree branch. (A/n he was holding her by hooking his arms through hers) I started mentally cursing like a sailor inside my head, careful to put up blocks for Angel, then yelled at Fang. "Ouch, dang it! Will you freaking lift my legs up?!" In response, he threw me up in the air, then caught me in his arms as I came back down. I glared at him, and he smirked.
Glancing behind us, I saw Flyboys breaking the tree canopy, and coming straight towards us, and they were gaining on us. My extra weight was slowing Fang down quite a bit. I said over the wind, "Down into the trees! They'll destroy themselves!" He nodded solemnly and dipped into the trees.
I sucked in a breath when I saw trees popping in our way, way faster than it seemed when I was flying alone. I kept my face carefully blank and tried not to scream as Fang almost hit a thick, wide tree, only dodging out of the way at the last second. He was less agile than usual, I noted, wincing as he ripped out a couple of feathers in between trees.
Fang POV
Max weighed a freaking ton! I hissed in a breath as I again misjudged how quickly I could turn and ripped out a couple of feathers. I glanced over my shoulder, and saw that I was outpacing the Flyboys.
10 minutes later, I was panting, but Flyboy-free. They had turned and gone back to the Itex building. I slowed, then turned to check at Max, and was surprised to see her actually freaked out. Her face didn't show it of course, it was blank, but I could tell all the same. She looked up at me and said calmly, "Let's just go find the others." I nodded and did a quick U-turn, heading back the way we had come.
Right into a tree.
I tried to turn quickly, but with Max, I couldn't. I threw her, yelping, up into the branches of the tree a moment before I hit, then tried to backpedal to reduce the impact.
I slammed into the knotted, hard surface of the tree trunk at about 40 mph. I fell, semi-conscious, through the branches, my wings out behind me, being pummeled and strained. I dimly heard Max screaming my name above me, then eveything was yanked into sharp, painful focus as a thorny branch embedded itself in my left wing. I gave a supressed scream of pin, then started scabbling furiosly along the tree trunk, looking for branches. My left wing hung uselessly behind me, and I was keeping it as still as I could. Gritting my teeth, I grabbed the next branch that went whizzing by me and hung on, my nails digging into the bark.
Oww! I muttered a curse under my breath as my shoulder was dislocated, but managed to hang on.
Half blinded by pain, and with blood running into my eyes, I still managed to haul myself up onto a sturdy, wide tree branch. Gritting my teeth, I desperately tried to stay awake, to push back the darkness eating at the edges of my vision. It was a one-sided battle though, and I was soon overwhelmed and fell mostly-unconscious, slung across the branch. I was dimly aware of Max scrabbling down the tree and landing beside me on the branch, waving at the sky and yelling for Iggy and Nudge.
I also thought I saw Max crying, but that couldn't be right. Why would she cry for me?
I knew the answer when...(HEHEHE! should Max kiss him? Review and tell me what you think! I'm so evil, but if I don't get 3-5 reviews from SEPARATE PEOPLE saying that yes, I want them to kiss, then I won't do it! MUAHAHA!)
A/n Hehehe, I know this seemed short, but I'll do a really long next chapter. There's 719 words though...Also, should I make I pretty much covered all the randomness at the beginning of the chapter soooo...
Keep Flying
MaxRide101