Jim and I
I don't own Treasure Planet but I do know the name of the man who does own it and it is Mr. Robert Stevenson. By the way this will go like the movie except a few changes will be in it. I got the idea from another writer but it's not going to be the same.
Chapter 10: Sneaking Back on Ship, the Discovery, and the Treasure
Third Person's Point of View
Jim didn't catch anything as he went flying up into the air until he hit the crow's nest and had to grab onto the pirates flag. He gasps as he sees Scroop climbing up after him, Jim sees the gun floating up and tries to grab the gun, just to knock it further from his reach.
"Come on, come on, come on, NO" shouts Jim.
"Oh yes, do say hello to Mr. Arrow" speaks Scroop trying to cut the rope holding the flag to the ship.
Jim climbs down the flag to the pole that is holding it; Scroop sees this and climbs up to Jim wanting to kill him.
"Tell him yourself" yells Jim jumping out of the way, while kicking Scroop into the flag.
The rope finally rips apart, and as Scroop tears through the flag he is floating away from Jim.
"Ahhh" HE screams as he drifts away.
Marius' Point of View
"Back you go you naughty plug" says B.E.N. as I plug it back in, making the gravity come back on.
I unplug the laser cannons without B.E.N.'s help, hoping he has learned a lesson on letting people who know what they are doing do it. We head back up top to see if Jim got the map or not and to make sure he is alive.
Third Person's Point of View
As gravity comes back on, Jim gets slammed down into the crow's nest, sitting up he looks up at the stars until he hears a rattling sound. Morph comes out of the communications tube covered in soot; Jim looks at Morph as he coughs.
"Morph" says Jim as a voice is heard from below.
Marius' Point of View
"Laser cannons disabled Captain Jimmy sir, see that wasn't so tough" says B.E.N. as Jim leans over looking down on us.
"I tried Jim, I really did but B.E.N. here is a very hard headed robot. You ok Jim, cause I think we should go" I say as Jim climbs down from the Crow's nest.
"I'm fine, almost got killed but ok, let's go you two" sighs Jim breathing heavy.
We get back onto the small longboat, heading right back to the underground to get back into B.E.N.'s house.
"Jim I don't like this" I say as Jim gets down.
"Doc. Wake up I got the map" says Jim as a hand reaches out to grab the map.
It's Silver's great he got in because we left, I knew something was wrong.
"Fine work Jimbo, Mars, fine work indeed" says Silver.
I llok around until I spot Delbert and Amelia all tied up with Pirates all around us. They are closing in fast, I start to panic which by the way is something we don't need, and I shouldn't be doing, but I have a very bad feeling about this.
"Thanks for showing us the way in boy" says a pirate.
Jim looks at me and I nod my head, both of us try to make a run for it but they grab us before we could do a thing. Morph bites one but he whacks Morph on the ground and he goes into Jim's pocket.
I struggle even harder, so a pirate hits me in the gut, I fall to the ground holding my gut and someone elbow's me in the back of the head. I don't black out I just fall completely to the ground, I sit up wincing, this is not good for my old injures.
"What's this sorry stack of metal" says a pirate grabbing B.E.N. and putting a knife to his throat.
"Not the face" he says.
Silver walks up to us with the map in his hand, tossing it up and down. I can't take much more of this but I must remain calm for Jim's sake if not mine.
"You're just like me Jimbo, Mars, you hates to lose" says Silver in our faces.
Jim tries to get free again, as Silver laughs in our faces, he then tries to open the map, but he can't do it because he doesn't know how to open the map up. he looks at Jim and I as Jim shakes his head.
"Open it" Silver says giving it to Jim to open.
Jim looks at Silver with a hard glare; Silver takes out his gun and points it at me of all people.
"I'd get busy," Silver states.
Jim looks at Amelia and Delbert, Delbert is shaking his head yes at first but looks at Amelia who is shaking her head no to him. He looks at me for an answer because he can't make up his mind or maybe for another reason, I don't know.
"It is your choice whether you open it or not" I say looking away from him.
I hear Jim open up the sphere, the intelligent pixels show Treasure Planet and then starts blinking to where we need to go to get to the treasure.
"Of all the powers that be, would you look" says Silver.
"Tie them up and leave them with the other till we-what" says Silver as the trail disappears.
"You want the map, you're taking me and Marius too" says Jim looking calm.
"We'll take them all" says Silver.
We all get into the small longboat and follow the trail all over the planet, ending in an area with very tall plants in the way. Silver gets out taking me with him, keeping my wrist in a tight hold in his mechanic hand.
Jim gets out as Amelia and Delbert stay in the longboat, keeping them somewhat safe, B.E.N. gets out as well with a few more pirates.
"It's ok Morph" says Jim patting Morph on the head cause it's afraid.
"Jimmy I don't know, but I'm starting to see my life pass in front of my eyes, at least I think it is my life. WAS I EVER DANCING WITH AN ANDROID NAMED LUPE" B.E.N. speaks.
"B.E.N. shhh" Jim says.
"Sorry" says B.E.N. quietly.
"This isn't over yet" says Jim coming up to me and Silver.
"We're getting closer lads, I smell treasure a waiting" says Silver switching hands with me, so he can make a sword.
Silver also grabs the front of Jim, pulling him closer to us, as he cuts his way through the tall stuff only for us to see a huge cliff in front of us.
"Where is it?" asks Silver.
"I see nothing, one great big sticking hunk of nothing" says Onus.
Silver lets go of Jim but he keeps his hold on me.
"Let me go" I say as I struggle to get away.
"NO, what's going on Jimbo?" asks Silver to Jim.
"I don't know I can't get it open" says Jim trying to get it to open up.
A pirate shoves Jim to the ground, Jim starts to look at the ground with interest.
"I suggest you get that gizmo going again and fast" says Silver.
Jim shoves the sphere into the round hole, while the pirates suggest throwing us both off the cliff but the ground lights up. a huge green things pops up in front of us as the small ball of green pops up from the ground in front of Jim.
"Ah have mercy" says Silver.
"The Lagoon Nebula" states Jim.
"But that's half way across the Galaxy" speaks Silver.
Jim starts to press buttons while talking about it. "A big door, opening, and closing. Let's see Kinapis, Montressor Space Port. So that's how Flint did it. He used this portal to roam the universe steeling treasure" says Jim.
Silver lets go of me as he pushes Jim out of the way. "But where'd he stash it all, where's that blasted treasure" growls Silver.
"Treasure, treasure it buried in the" B.E.N. starts trying to remember.
"Buried in the centroid of the mechanism, what if the whole Planet is the mechanism, and the treasure is buried in the center of this planet" I say.
All the pirates go nuts trying to get to the middle of the planet.
"And how in blue blazes are we supposed to get there?" asks Silver still pushing on planets.
"Just open the right door" answers Jim as he pushes on Treasure Planet.
The door opens and Jim and I go through first but Silver grabs our shoulders and pushes us away as he steps into the place. We all end up going in, as we walk to the edge and look out.
"The loot of a thousand worlds" says Silver.
All the pirates go out and into the treasure.
"This is all seemly very similar" starts B.E.N. trying to figure it out.
Jim and I spot a ship, looking toward Silver to see him occupied.
"I can't remember why" continues B.E.N.
"B.E.N. come on, we're getting out of here" Jim says as he follows me to the small ship.
Jim and I climb onto the ship, helping B.E.N. up as well.
"Do you know what's strange Jimmy, Marius, I can't tell ya how frustrating this is to me, cause there's something just it's nagging at the back of my mind ahhh" continues B.E.N.
"Captain Flint" Jim and I say at the same time.
"In the flesh, well sorta except for skin, or organs, or anything that resembles flesh that's not their" speaks B.E.N. as we get a closer look at the corpse.
"And yet it's so odd you know I remember there was something horrible that Flint didn't want anyone else to know. But I just, can't remember what it was" speaks B.E.N. again as I take something from Flint's hand and I hand it to Jim.
"Oh a mind is a terrible thing to lose" finishes B.E.N.
"B.E.N., I think we just found your mind, hold still" says Jim going up to B.E.N.
"Jimmy your hands are very, very cold" says B.E.N. as his mind reconnects with his body. "Wow hello, you know Jimmy. I was just thinking, I was just think--. It's all flooding back, all my memories right up until Flint pulled my memory circuit, so I could never tell anybody about his booby trap" starts B.E.N. looking at us both.
Well, now it is time to escape from an exploding Planet, run away folks but read the chapter first then run away. Review For me please, I love reading reviews even if they are flames. I laugh at flames
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