Hello, readers. If there is any.
I would like to apologize for the supposed "epic climax" of this story. To put it in American terms, it was a piece of shit. Sorry. I would like to thank KuroiTori-sama for pointing that out.
Now, I know I'm making this sound like I committed adultery or shot the president or something. It's not that horrible a crime, it's my story and I can do what I want with it, but I feel like it, and you guys, deserve better.
So I am going to work on a rewrite. Perhaps of the last chapter, perhaps of the whole last section of the book, but I'm going to fix the deteriorating quality Subconscious has shown.
The secrets of the climax, however, were given up in that first draft. That's a shame, but it can't be reversed.
So expect a few revamped chapters in the future. Maybe not the near future, because Condemned has occupied all of my attention, but somewhere along the timeline. It'll be slow.
I would also like to take advantage of this opportunity to state that Hemophobia is still alive. I haven't started writing, or even thought of a plot, but it's there!
So yeah. Some newer, better projects first. Then revamp. Keep in mind that this started off as my 3rd fanfiction EVER. Apocalypse was my 2nd. The first was so crappy I never posted it.
Expect more! I won't let it die!
-ComposerDragon