Big hand for xocsinylvrMesserMonroe for helping me out!!!! THANK YOU!!! I just changed a few things.


Ring ring ring.....

Stella picked up the phone and put it on loud speaker.

"Hello." She anwered as she motioned for Adam to trace the phone.

"Hello pretty bitch,how are you, and have you got what I wanted?" A cold voice sneered.

"'t call me bitch, and 2, if you dare lay a finger on Mac, then you will die a very painful death."

"Ohhh....someones in love." The voice laughed.

"Shut up you son of a bitch."

"Temper little lady, i'm the only one that doesn't care if my hostages die or not."

Stella was too angry to talk.

Stella ended the call after Adam had the addess. They talked about what to , they had a battle plan layed out. They would take half a dozen SWAT members with them. No too many, not to few, and easy to hide to. Lindsay and Angell would go in from the front and the rest of them would attack from the back. (Pretty dumb right? P.S this is my idea. ) After the call was traced, they went to the place.

When they got there:

BIG MISTAKE! Mitch already had a heads up and knew what the plan dragged out Danny, puting his gun at his head. Montana! She is alive thought Danny.

"SHOW YOURSELF OR THIS SONOFABITCH DIES." He screamed.

The SWAT team came out one by one, only of of them thought that they had to fight and started shooting. Mitch's men pulled out their guns and started fireing wildly. Mac shot a look at Danny, telling him to chill.

"STOP!!" Mitch commanded, shoving his gun harder into Danny's head. "Right, now you will put your guns down."

Flack wasn't sure if he should do it. He raised his gun an inch. Mitch shot him. He was wearing a vest, but the bullets were homemade, so they were stronger that the usual ones.

" You know it isn't too late to back out now." Lindsay said ,angry that Flack had been shot. Danny's eyes widened.

" Lindsay! How nice! Now I can have my revenge." Mitch snared, madness in his eyes. Then he shot her, twice, once in the chest, and once in the stomach. Danny struggeled to get free to help Lindsay. Mitch only tightened his grip, so Danny bit him, Mitch let go of him. Danny ran to free Mac in record time, then he raced to Lindsay, pulling him out of harms way. Mitch was scared now, but he didn't let it show.

"Doesn't matter now, all I came here was for revenge, and here it is." He tried to shoot Jess in the heart, but missed and got here in the arm. Then he pulled the gun on himself. Mitch was no more.

The EMs came in like swarms of bees and helped the wounded.


Flack and Angell:

"Bugger off." Jessica shouted to the poor EMs who wanted to remove the bullet.

"Miss, you need...." An EM said.

"I SAID PISS OFF! " She screamed. The EM backed off. Angell rushed to Flacks side.

"Come on baby, don't leave me here." She cried as the EMs loaded him on the ambulance.


Lindsay and Danny:

"Flat line! Bring out the paddles!" The call could be heard from miles away.

"DANM IT LINDSAY! WAKE UP!!!" Danny screamed.

The moniters started beeping again.

"Shes stable now. Lets roll" One of the EMs ordered.