Daddy's Little Defect

by countingstarswishingiwasokay

Danny meets a girl at a hotel and though they start off on the wrong foot they eventually get along well. Not before long he discovers a dark secret she's been hiding. [minor swearing, McFlyOC, nonslash] R&R!

10. Chapter 10

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CHAPTER 10

"Dude, this party is awesome!" shouted Tom, swigging his beer as he sidled up to Danny.

"Yeah, can't believe how many people showed up, do you think she might have come in without me noticing?" he asked nervously, lifting back the curtains to try and spot any cars coming up the driveway.

"She'll be here, she's probably just got lost," Tom replied, high-fiving a random guy with long greasy hair and several piercings.

Danny smiled in thanks at Tom's attempt to comfort him, and left for the kitchen, pushing through the crowded house, shaking his head at Dougie crowd-surfing his way to the living room.

He pulled another Bud out the packed fridge, noticing how his hands were shaking as he cracked open the bottle. Feeling his phone vibrating in his jeans pocket he pulled it out with jittery fingers:
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Slumping into a kitchen chair, he downed the rest of his beer, checking his watch. Should he text her to see where she was, or would that seem too desperate?

"Jones, you and I still have a score to settle, remember?" Harry pounced on him, ruffling his hair roughly.

Danny harrumphed quietly, pushing his hair back into position, not quite ready to admit that it was only Dawn he wanted to win over now. How did this happen? Danny Jones, womaniser extraordinaire, becoming a one-woman man before he'd even pulled her? He grabbed a slice of pizza out of the box that was being passed around, stuffing it in his mouth and chewing thoughtfully – was she feeling the same way?

Over the din he heard the faint sound of the doorbell. Opening the door to the hallway, he was faced with herds of people taking up every available space. How was he going to get to the door?

"Harry, gimme a leg up," he yelled into the kitchen. Jumping onto a crowd of folk, he skilfully surfed over to the doorway, just in time to see the new guests arriving.

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