RipredIsAwesome: Wow, this is the quickest I've put up chapters in a while. Anyway, this is another short chapter, not 2000-3000 words, but only about 1900 words. I don't think I've changed too much important, but if you don't get the names Flying Fish are Feyeshs and Giant Chickens are Tickens. As for the narrator, one person has gotten it right so far! Finally, Fox's and Ness's story will be coming up within the next to chapters, but if someone could PM me the cannon events of Mother it would be very helpful so I can get the information accurate. Thanks!
Disclaimer: I wish I owned SSB or SSE. I also wish that I had an A in Alegebra right now, a whole lot of money, and a milkshake in my hand right now. Wishing on a star doesn't always help, no matter how many songs may say so.
Chapter 10
The Plain
When Pit and Mario landed on the ground (Pit fully filling the plumber in on everything he knew), they were on a large plain that allowed you to see for miles. The first thing they saw was the robot with green robes. It was holding a Subspace bomb.
"After it!" Pit shouted and they both ran after the mysterious robot in green clothing. Pit, so engrossed in the chase accidentally ran into a Subspace Creature, although this one was built more like the Spaak as you could not see the purple things leak out. It had a curious instrument (most likely a French horn) as a head and a normal body. The Horn instantly hit Pit with its head and started blowing impossibly hot air at them, although it didn't hurt, it just simply pushed them back. Pit figured this move was like Mario's F.L.U.D.D. He shot a fully charged arrow from his Bow and the Horn was killed, its purple things leaving and heading to create something else. After running a bit (Mario currently ahead) the angel and the plumber could see that the Horn's purple things (Pit now resolved to call them Subspace Particles because they created Subspace Creatures) made two Primids and another Horn. Pit shot one fully charged arrow at the Horn and Mario slid into the Primids, then got up and punched them. Their Subspace Particles created some more Primids, but they were also easily killed.
What did shock them was the Goldfish with nothing but a giant eye for a head and five long tentacles. Mario used his Super Jump Punch on one while Pit jumped up and swung his dual blades extremely fast. The one Pit took care of died and the Subspace Particles went everywhere. The one Mario had didn't die and shocked Mario with its tentacles. Pit decided to call them Flying Fish. Four more came into view. Pit quickly killed two of these while Mario killed the other.
Pit now was ahead, but came across a new threat. Big chicken suits. Three in fact. He swung his dual blade as fast as he could, but the Giant Chickens wouldn't die. Even worse, one of the Flying Fish's Subspace Particles had made a boomerang Primid that hit the angel with his boomerang, slightly injuring his wing. Now Pit wouldn't be able to fly as well. Mario quickly took hold of the situation, jumping in and using the F.L.U.D.D on the boomerang Primid as it was about to throw the boomerang. This pushed it back just far enough so it wouldn't hit Pit or Mario. Mario ran over to the boomerang Primid while Pit had the Giant Chickens. He shot two arrows at it, finally appearing to kill one Giant Chicken. Pit expected the Subspace Particles to leak out now, but rather, the casing on the Chicken fell and a small bird appeared. He now knew the weakness and was going to exploit it. Pit shot another arrow at the next Chicken and then used Angel Ring for an unseemly long time. The Giant Chickens both fell for the poorly set up trap and walked into the Angel Ring and eventually died. Mario was already ahead of Pit now, using F.L.U.D.D to break rocks that would normally need Rock Smash to be broken up.
Pit ran to try and catch up to Mario, but Mario was still ahead, just finishing up a death of a Horn. They ran into what they thought was a cave at first but turned out to be some old building. Pit saw a Giant Chicken and speedily killed it, now knowing what to do exactly. Mario and Pit (now right next to each other) ran ahead, desperately wishing to get out of the building. But what came next was unexpected. As they ran forward, the floor below them shook and a giant moving wall came straight at them. They both ran, not wanting to get hit by the wall. At first it was easy, the room seemed no more than an old hallway. But then they saw the giant holes in the floor to Palutana/God knows where. And there were spheres that appeared to be on fire – much like the ones in Skyworld except those were electric – in their way on the ground that was still there. Pit now ran ahead of Mario and barrel rolled the Fire Spheres, he could barley jump from his wing injury. Two Subspace Creatures that he had no name for simply ran away from them fell down into the holes. You could hear the Subspace Particles die from the top.
The wall fell away after a bit, but Pit was ahead now. He killed a Giant Chicken with some more rapid motion of his blades and killed a boomerang Primid by his arrows. As he fell onto some rocks from where it appeared the ceiling caved in, he saw the remains of that Primid turn into another Primid. This one was quickly killed by the time Mario came into the scene again. The Subspace Particles, with nowhere to go, quickly died. Pit and Mario meanwhile broke away at the caved in ceiling and quickly cleared a drop area. Mario fell right onto the boomerang Primid and killed it while Pit raced ahead, in the lead but not by much. He killed everything in his path, giving Mario more of a chance to catch up. The last thing encountered by the two before they exited the old building was a Horn, which was destroyed by Mario this time after some Fireballs.
It didn't take long before they realized where all of the creatures' Shadow Particles had gone. There was a platform stuck in the earth crawling with it. Pit and Mario walked hesitantly onto it. Big mistake. As soon as they walked on, the Shadow Particles started forming into Subspace Creatures and the platform started moving, preventing them from leaving unless they wished to fall hundreds of feet off the ground. With Pit's injured wing, this was pretty doubtful.
The first Creatures created were two Spaaks, one boomerang Primid and two regular Primids. Pit jumped into the air (he could only do about two jumps in the air because of the wing) and gave one strong swing of his blades, killing both Spaaks on instant. Mario meanwhile, gave a fire burst to one Primid and slid into another. For the boomerang Primid, before Pit or the Primid could even act, Mario used Super Jump Punch and killed the Primid. Two more Primids formed from the Shadow Particles left behind. Pit took both of these as he dropped on the air. They both died instantly.
The next wave took a little longer for the Subspace Particles to assemble, but when they did, the stuff was more impressive. This time, it was still Primids, but these were blood red, making both Pit and Mario believe that they were fire related. Not wishing to find out at the same time, Mario killed two with a kick that slid on the ground but went all the way around. Pit killed one with Angel Ring and the other with his Bow. Four more Fire Primids came into view. Mario took the one nearest to the edge and used F.L.U.D.D on it, causing it to fall and plummet to a horrible death. Pit swung his dual blades as fast as he could and killed another Fire Primid while Mario head butt the third one. The fourth one however, spat out a weak flame at Pit. It hit his wing.
"Dang it!" Pit exclaimed. "Just what I need on a wing, an injury and a burn." He didn't say much else though, and shot an arrow at that Primid, killing it.
There was still more. This time, a Fire Primid, boomerang Primid, normal Primid, two Wheeled Eyes and a Horn all came into view. Mario (on the lowest part of the platform) used Fireballs to kill the Wheeled Eyes. This worked surprisingly well except for the first one that opened up and hit him with a blast of fire before Mario punched it and killed it. Pit had the Primids. The boomerang and normal Primids were very easy; he simply swung his dual blades twice and killed them. As for the Fire Primid, Pit charged an arrow in Palutana's Bow and killed it from a distance. After what one had done to his wing, the angel certainly didn't want to be near another one. Mario had already taken care of the Horn with his Super Jump Punch once more. From the Particles of these, another boomerang Primid, Fire Primid and Wheeled Eye rose. Mario took care of the boomerang Primid and Wheeled Eye easily while Pit destroyed the Fire Primid with another arrow.
The final transformation of these Subspace Particles came when the platform reached the ground. The first thing that came was one Spaak, two Fire Primids, one Horn and one normal Primid. Mario, knowing that Pit's wing was burned, used his Super Jump Punch on the Spaak while Pit shot an arrow at the Horn. Both died. Pit next went right below the regular Primid and shot a fully charged arrow at it. It also died. Finally, one Fire Primid died from Mario's sliding kick, but the other shot a lot of fire at Mario. About as much as a Fire Flower could hold, which shocked them both. Pit, helping him out, shot another arrow and killed the Primid. Two more Spaaks, one more regular Primid and two more Fire Primids came out of that round of killing. Pit shot two arrows at the Spaaks – both dying – and Mario gave a fire burst to the regular Primid – killing it. Now for the Fire Primids. One shot a weak flame at Pit, but this time, Pit got under his shield and it reflected right back to the Primid. Although it didn't do any damage. Pit grimaced.
They aren't harmed at all by fire attacks, he realized grimly. Mario noticed this too and immediately slid into both the Fire Primids, although they did not die. Pit used Angel Ring on them and the two Primids finally died. Now Mario and Pit simply had a robot in green to deal with. They ran off the platform and finally caught up with it. Mario ran up first, using his Super Jump Punch, but didn't make it up. Pit ran up next to Mario – using his head as a footstool to make up for his injured wings – but his wings gave out at the last second, causing the angel to plummet to the ground. The robot looked back at them, mocking, before turning back to its course. Mario moaned a bit.
"Mama Mia," he said, looking up where the robot was. "We a-must a-catch that a-robot. I'm a-sure it's the a-cause of all of a-this trouble." Pit looked up also, soon standing up.
"I'm not so sure," he replied. "It seems like something Goddess Palutana would tell me." Mario slowly got up, as if he was going to damage something, until they heard a strangely familiar scream.
"Is a-that…?" Mario asked, his voice trailing off.
"I don't know, it could be…." Pit responded until the realization hit both of them on who it was.
"Zelda!!" they shouted together and ran at full speed at the direction of the sound.
RipredIsAwesome: Okay, the F.L.U.D.D thing to break the rocks is a stretch, but come on, if you look at it in a Pokemon perspective, yes water can easily destroy rock. Easily. Anyway, remember that I have a contest with my brother for the most review so please review so I can look at what I've written, review and work on the next chapter. Thank you and have a nice day :-)(-: