Ash's Betrayal
Chapter 10
Co-Writer GreyKing46
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As the four still stood at the entrance of the Cerulean Gym, Red was worried on how much this past was coming back to him
In Alto Mare, Dawn was having a look around for souvenirs, but she was also trying to get to the Frontier Coliseum.
Unfortunately she was a bit of a girly girl and gets distracted by stuff she liked.
"Ooh...This'll be nice to send back to mum." She smiled picking up an Alto Mare engraving.
It was a circular medallion with two bird-like dragons engraved on it in a yin-yang style
"Cool...Excuse me. These please." Dawn spoke as she brought the engraving and a few other bits and bobs.
Once the sale was done she left, looking around smiling
"Now then...It shouldn't be hard to find a large coliseum..." She spoke to herself
She walked around, looking to try and find someone
"Um, excuse me...Excuse me..." Dawn tried to get directions but was being ignored. "Darn it..."
She sighed, rubbing her forehead
"Darn it all...Well...I guess I can just wait a while..." Dawn sighed as she headed over to a cafe.
She spotted a glasses wearing girl having tea, her Camerupt happily eating next to her
"Huh? A trainer?" She asked herself "Excuse me."
"Hmm? Yes?" The glasses girl looked up
"Hi, I'm Dawn...And I'm just wondering if you know where the Battle Frontier Coliseum is."
"Yea. I just lost over there." She smiled "I'm Agatha."
"Oh I'm sorry. But can you give me directions?" Dawn asked kindly
"Sure." Agatha nodded and gave Dawn the directions
"Thank you. Enjoy your coffee." Dawn answered
"Good luck!" Agatha called as the girl ran off
Dawn ran straight towards the Coliseum, seeing it crawl through the horizon and she saw the Apricorn and Berry trees surrounding it. "Whoa...It...It's amazing..." She gasped
She wondered who the owner of this facility was as she took in the amazing looking building
"It looks like a stadium for everyone..." She gasped as she walked around and saw that people were in different sections of the non-battle parts of the coliseum: souvenirs, food courts, a Pokémon Centre. "Wow..."
This place was... Well... it was like both a battle area and a big public shopping area
"I guess they have to pay the rent somehow..." Dawn thought as she searched around.
She soon reached a door, entering through to see the place itself
She whistled seeing the sheer size of the Pokémon Grounds, the stands and the actual stadium was impressive.
But then... She saw the guy in the middle of the field
"No...It...It CAN'T be...!" Dawn gasped seeing the figure.
"Dawn? Dawn, is that you?" The figure asked seeing her.
"ASH?!" Dawn gasped seeing him and she felt flustered seeing him
And then... She took off running down towards him, jumping into his arms and hugging him as they were both knocked over from her tackle hug
"Gah! D-Dawn!" Ash spoke in shock seeing her.
"I can't believe it! It's YOU!" Dawn smiled
I... Err... Yea. Hey Dawn." He chuckled, smiling
"You've grown! I can't believe it." Dawn smiled
"Yeah...You too." Ash blushed
She was still small chested but she wasn't near flat anymore and he felt her breasts pressing against his chest
"How've you been?" He asked
"Great! I've been invited to the Pokémon World Championship's Contest division!" She grinned "So has May!"
"Wait, really? That's great." Ash answered getting up. "I didn't even know that was a thing!" He added, the two not letting go of each other
"Yeah, it's a thing." Dawn blushed "So um...Y-You've done well for yourself." She added
"Yea. I got all this." Ash smiled
"Well, congrats." She smiled
"So um...Want to see my team? See what you've missed?" He asked
"Sure." She nodded. And even then they didn't let go, neither realising they were still holding each other
In the other room, Ash showed Dawn his Pokémon who were training and enjoying themselves out of their PokeBalls.
But those that knew Dawn ran over and hugged her the second they saw her
"Oof! Hey guys." She smiled as she broke the hug with Ash as she hugged his Pokémon
"Rai-Rai." Raichu spoke as she levitated to Dawn
"P... Pikachu?!" Dawn gasped
"Not anymore." Raichu and Ash answered
"Whoa! Y-You can talk?! How?" Dawn asked
"I'm part Psychic now." Raichu answered
Dawn blinked... And a Pokémon let themselves out of Dawn's PokeBall
"Lopunny!" It called out
"Buneary?" Raichu asked
"Pun-Pun?" Lopunny asked seeing Raichu
/Pokémon translator on/
"Pikachu? Is...Is it really you?" She asked
"Yeah. It's me. I've evolved." Raichu answered
"You...You're so..." Lopunny blushed "Cute."
"Cute? Really?" Raichu smiled
"You've evolved to." Raichu added, looking the bunny up and down
"Yeah...I err...I'm still learning to like this form." She blushed "Can we talk somewhere private?"
Raichu nodded, kissing her cheek before she flew off on her tail
"Hmm!" Lopunny blushed as she followed Raichu
/Pokémon translator off/
"Looks like Raichu's gotten your Lopunny blushing." Ash chuckled
"Is...That bad?" Ash asked in concern
"I... Don't think so." Dawn blushed 'They do say Pokémon's feelings... Reflect their trainers.' she thought
"Would you like to have something to eat?" Ash offered
"Please."
"Well then. I know a good seat." Ash smiled modestly
*With Raichu and Lopunny*
/Pokémon Translator on/
"Raichu...What's going on? You're not the same as what you were..." Lopunny asked
"Because I evolved." Raichu reminded
"I-I know...But...You're much more confident." Lopunny answered. "It's like...You're much more "you"."
"I... Did meet my father." Raichu blushed
"You met your dad? Really?" Lopunny asked
"Yeah...He's really strong." Raichu answered "He's the reason I decided to evolve. I realised I was as strong as I could become so I knew I had to evolve now."
"Wow...Well...You look cute as a Raichu." Lopunny answered
Raichu smiled and kissed her lovingly, wrapping her tail around Lopunny... And then noticing the necklace around Lopunny's neck with the large brown and cream coloured Mega Stone
"Lopunny...Where did you get this?" Raichu asked
"Hmm?" Lopunny asked
"This jewel...Where did you get this?" Raichu asked again
"Someone sent it to Dawn roughly a year ago. She thinks it's beautiful and looked great on me and I agree!" Lopunny grinned "It goes great with cheerleader outfit!"
"I always liked you in that outfit..." Raichu answered kissing her again
"Good. Because Dawn carries it around." Lopunny purred
"Really...? Cause...I'd love to see you in it..." Raichu answered kissing Lopunny
"She made it bigger to match my... Larger size."
"You look perfect to me..." Raichu answered "Also... Espion agreed to join us officially." Raichu smiled, kissing her again happily
"She has...Well...Can we...?" Lopunny asked, breathing heavily and wanting to make love with Raichu
"Finally." Raichu nodded with a smile, her tail sneaking between Lopunny's legs
"I love you..." Lopunny purred
"I love you too..." Raichu answered as they both got some privacy.
*With Ash and Dawn /Pokémon Translator off/*
The two blinking as the heard a moan of "PUN!"
"... Looks like they're having fun." Ash chuckled
"Yeah...I...I err...Ash...It's been a while...Just over a year." Dawn answered
"Yea... I've mostly gotten over it." Ash nodded, looking down sadly before trying to change the subject "You know, you look strange without a skirt. Not bad just... A strange different. And I'll be honest, I prefer you WITH the skirt but you still look good!" Ash rambled, worrying about insulting her
"Yeah...I...I tried to change up my wardrobe...But...It DOES feel different without the skirt." Dawn blushed "And...you preferred me with the skirt?"
"I... Yea." Ash nodded with a blush, looking away awkwardly
"Well...I bought a skirt from the shops here...I can model it for you." Dawn offered and blushed
"I... Sure?" He blinked in shock, blushing
"Okay. Great. Do you have a changing room?" She asked
"Yeah...Err...In the back." Ash answered
She nodded and ran into the back
"I... Do I like her?" he muttered
*With Dawn*
She panted lightly as she gripped her heart and was about to change her trousers with the skirt she purchased
She was so nervous and happy!
"Okay...Okay...Calm down...Calm down...You can do this...It's just like a Performance...Only I'm the one here." Dawn spoke as she got dressed for Ash.
"It... It's time to show off! Show Ash I'm all he needs!" She told herself, not realising about Ash's harem "Well... If he wants to let May in I'd be happy to let her in as well."
As she got into her new skirt she gave a quick spin to see herself in it. It was mainly an ethereal blue but it had the motif of two bird-like dragon Pokémon circling around it.
She smiled, giving the skirt one last brush down before heading out
'I hope he likes this.' She smiled as she walked out to see Ash still waiting for her
"Hey Ash." She called with a smile
"Hey Daw... Wow..." Ash smiled, turning around, and then going slack-jawed
"I take it...You like me in my skirt?" Dawn teased lightly
"Yeah...You...You look amazing." he answered "You've always had great legs but WOW."
"Thanks..." Dawn blushed happily
Ash nodded, Dawn walking towards him
"Um...Ash...I've been thinking about something." Dawn spoke
What is it?" Ash asked
"Um...A-About back at Viridian City." She answered thinking back to when she kissed him
"What about it?" Ash asked. So much happened that day he had forgotten about the kisses from Dawn and May
"Well...I was wondering..." She got in closer and sat on his lap.
"About?" Ash nodded, feeling so comfortable around Dawn he didn't notice how intimate this position was
"Well...About...How I feel for you." Dawn blushed
"And... That is?" Ash asked. Neither noticed Ash wrapping his arms around her waist, Dawn wrapping hers around his neck/shoulders
"I...I like you...Like...REALLY like you." Dawn whispered and kissed him
Ash was on shock for less than a second before he kissed her back lovingly, pulling her close
"Hmm..." Both Ash and Dawn hummed feeling their lips connect, until Ash broke it.
"Wow...I...I guess, we're together now..." Ash smiled lightly
Dawn just grinned and nodded, crying happily as she kissed him again
"Hmm..." Ash moaned lightly "But...But there's something you need to know..."
"What is it?" Dawn asked "If you're thinking of bringing May into this...I don't mind." she smiled
Ash froze at that, blushing, before he shook his head to snap himself out of it "I... No... N... No, not that. Well... Kinda. You see I'm already in an 'open relationship'." He explained
"Really? So...I'm not your first?" She asked with a small pout.
"No...No you're not but...It doesn't mean I don't care any less." Ash answered
"Besides. I'd be happy to be YOUR first." He lightly teased
"Hmm...I'd like that Ash...So...Who ELSE is in this little "Harem"?" She asked kindly
"Well, including you: Philena, Sabrina, Anabel, Bianca and Latias..." Ash answered "So...six."
"Who are most of the... Latias?! As in the Legendary POKEMON?!" Dawn started to ask and then gasped
"...Yes." Ash answered awkwardly. "It was a while ago...Misty, Brock and I were here before and...She developed feelings for me. Along with Bianca."
"I... Who?" Dawn asked, not knowing who most of the other girls where
"Okay...Lovers in order...Philena: Professor Ivy of the Orange Islands. Sabrina: Gym Leader of Saffron City. Anabel: fellow Frontier Brain. And Bianca is a local girl." Ash listed off
"I... Okay." Dawn nodded, looking away
"Dawn...Don't be sad...Sure, there're some amazing titled girls but...YOU have been travelling with me. You're special to me." Ash turned her head slowly so their eyes connected
Dawn began to cry again, kissing him
'Dawn...' he thought 'You'll always be special to me...' he thought
Aside from the scene were Bianca and Latias in her Bianca-form. "Looks like we've got another girl in the family."
Latias nodded, smiling
*In Cerulean City*
"Would you like something to eat or drink?" Misty asked
"Please." Delia smiled, Red clearly nervous and awkward
"Mr Ketchum, what's the matter?" May asked the nervous Red.
"I...It's like...Seeing a vivid déjà vu." Red answered
"I know...She looks exactly like her." Delia smiled
"What?" Misty asked as she came back "Looked like who?"
"Um...Y-Your mother. You look the spitting image of her." Red answered
"I do? Cool." Misty nodded, sitting down and passing around the drinks "You two knew my mother? Why didn't you mention this Mrs Ketchum?"
"It just didn't seem like a good idea without Richard here is all." Delia smiled sadly
"Good idea?" Misty frowned
"Yeah...There's...There's history, between...Me, Blue and your mother; Misty." Red admitted
"What is it?" She asked with a frown
"Um...May can you give us a minute?" Red asked
"Anything you want to say in front of Misty, you can say in front of me." May answered "Misty's my friend."
"I... Well..." Red stuttered
"You can tell her." Delia soothed, holding his hand
Red sighed and nodded before he spoke again "Misty... I'm your father."
The look of Misty and May was complete shock. They didn't expect this. "Y-You're...What?" Misty gulped
"I'm your father." Red repeated
"It was years ago...And...It's a long story." Delia answered holding Red's arm gently.
"W... What happened was... Your mother's husband died. When we were younger I was... Well... She and I kind of had a thing...well not really us having a thing more of her having a crush on me." Red explained
"Her husband died and we, being friends, comforted her." Delia confined
"We drunk a bit and... Well..." Red rolled his hand
"Old emotions came up and the three of us got a bit carried away and..." Delia continued
"I think you know the rest." Red finished, sighing
Misty's eyes welled up...She thought her father was...The same as her sister's. But...It made sense with most of her life. Why her sisters were mean to her growing up, until they grew out of that meanness. Why her kiss with Ash was so...wrong. But... But now...She had her father. Her biological one...He was alive...And he was sitting RIGHT there!
She more or less jumped at him, holding him close and crying
"D-Daddy..." She whispered as she stained his clothes with her tears.
"Shh-shh-shh...It's okay...It's alright. I'm sorry I wasn't here..." He whispered to her. "It's okay Misty... It's okay."
"So...Misty and Ash are...Half-Siblings?" May tried to register this.
"Yes." Delia nodded
"I... Wow..." May blinked
"I...S-Sorry." Misty backed up, tears still going down her face, but with a smile
"It's fine Misty Dear." Red smiled
"Does Ash know?" May couldn't help but ask
"Um..." Red hummed and inverted his lips.
"Red...You DID tell our son about his sister...Right?" Delia asked
"...It's been a long year." Red admitted
Everyone was silent and face-palmed
"Look, I'll tell him when we're all together. Promise." He answered
Delia sighed...
And then Misty suddenly gasped, her hands covering her mouth
"What's the matter?" Delia asked
"I... Kissed Ash..." She muttered, blushing and burying her face in her hands
"...Did you like it?" Delia asked
"Huh?!" May asked
"It's a serious question." Delia answered
"N-No...I...It was like kissing my sisters. Nice but...Not nice, nice." Misty answered
"So like kissing your family. I get it." Red nodded
Misty nodded, feeling a bit sick
"If you feel sick, I'll get you a bucket." Red spoke kindly
"... Thank you." She nodded
That was when Misty's sisters walked in
"Misty...What's going on here?" Daisy asked
"Hey May." Lily added
"Hello Mrs Ketchum." Violet finished
"Hi girls." Delia answered
"Hello." Red nodded
"Wait...You...You look familiar..." Daisy spoke, squinting her eyes at Red.
"Isn't he Ash?" Violet asked
"No...Ash doesn't have that defined age around him." Lily answered
"Hey..." Red defended "I'm Ash's father."
"I see where Ash for his looks from." Daisy grinned
"Excuse me." Delia defended
"What? We're, like, just saying the truth." Violet shrugged
"Sorry...It's just the way you said it." Delia answered
Although she knew the bimbo's were serious
"Right...Hey Misty...How about a Pokémon Battle? Show me what you got." Red offered
"Sure... Dad." Misty smiled happily
Lily, Violet and Daisy looked at the two in shock "Err...S-Sorry Mr Ketchum. Our little sister is-" Daisy tried to defend her sister...but was going to challenge her mentality
"No need to apologise...She IS my daughter." Red smiled
"WHAT?!"
"I'm Misty's father..." Red smiled proudly and hugged his daughter.
...
CRASH!
The three fainted
"...New record." Red quipped
"For what?" Delia asked
"Three faints in one go." Red chuckled
May groaned, her head going to her hands
*Back in Alto Mare*
"So...We've got another member to our little love nest?" Philena asked over the screen phone.
"I... Yea. Sorry Philena." Ash chuckled nervously, blushing
"I always KNEW you were an amazing person, Ash." Philena answered "But when you come over...I'm gonna have to punish you..." She teased
"... What?" Ash gulped
"Bye Ash..." Philena winked as she hung up
Ash was silent, staring at the TV in a bit of fear
'...I'm in trouble.' He thought in worry
"Ash, you okay?" Dawn asked, hugging him from behind
"I've just been warned in a sexual manner by Philena." Ash answered
"... Shouldn't that be good?" She asked
"You don't know Philena..." Ash shuddered
Dawn pouted cutely before she kissed him "Better?"
"Better." Ash answered
Dawn smiled, their partners walking over. Well Raichu surfed on her tail but still
"You two okay?" Dawn asked
"Rai-Rai." Raichu answered
"Pun..." Lopunny blushed
And then the two kissed both of Dawn's and then both of Ash's cheeks
"... I should have seen this coming." Dawn sighed
"Well...Yeah. So...Why don't you show me some of the skills you've learned since last time?" Ash asked
"Sure... And you don't get what they did, do you?" She giggled
"Of course I did...Raichu and Lopunny mated." Ash answered coolly.
"No, I mean when they kissed OUR cheeks." Dawn grinned
"Err...No." Ash answered, admittedly...lost on the reason.
"... Raichu loves you." Dawn facepalmed
"Ha...?" Ash asked in shock
"Come on Ash. There are two real options with you and Raichu being so close, especially since she's a girl. She is either going to be a sister or she loves you." Dawn shrugged
"I...I've...Never really thought about it..." Ash admitted
"Rai." Raichu blushed
"I'm sorry Raichu...I didn't know." He apologised and hugged her
Raichu blushed but hugged him
"Pun-Pun..." Lopunny smiled
"I guess you're right..." Dawn added
"Rai-Rai?" Raichu asked, sending a single link to Ash
"Okay..." He answered kissing her on the cheek
Raichu smiled before kissing his lips
'I...I wonder...?' Raichu thought before she projected herself as a human woman. She had long light brown hair with yellow tips at the end. She was slightly tanned skinned, like she was kissed by the sun, she had C-Cup breasts and the shining blue eyes she had as her Pokémon form. But one important thing was...She was naked.
Ash blinked and was frozen
"Err..." Dawn and Lopunny blushed seeing this human Raichu before Ash
"R-Raichu...?" Ash asked
"Yes Ash?" She asked for it a smile
"You...Um...You're..." Ash blushed trying to get the words out of his mouth
"Yes...?" She purred
"Naked." He answered
"So? I'm always naked."
"Well yeah...but...People find it uncomfortable if there's a naked girl in a public area...Can you...Maybe...Put some clothes on?" Ash asked
Raichu just pouted
"Raichu...Don't pout." Ash frowned
"Hmm." Raichu still pouted and looked away
Ash groaned, finding it too cute
"Pwease Ash...Don' make Rai-Rai wear clothes." Raichu acted cute
"..." Ash blushed, but also wanted to face palm and he was also captivated and... His brains as going a mile a minute
"Wow...Raichu's REALLY cute, when she wants to be." Dawn blushed
"Pun...Pun..." Lopunny blushed, feeling happy seeing her lover act like this
She hugged herself, giggling happily
"...Okay. You don't have to wear clothes...In PRIVATE. Public, you have to be in your Pokemon form until you can manifest clothes." Ash answered
"Yay!" Raichu cheered, hugging him
'Raichu's boobs...' Ash blushed, feeling the manifestation's bosom on his chest.
And then she kissed him
'Dang it Raichu...Why did you have to be so cute?' He thought
He hesitated for a second before kissing back
"Hmm." Raichu hummed happily, feeling Ash's acceptance of this.
She broke the kiss and smiled lovingly, licking her lips
"...You enjoyed that a LITTLE too much didn't you?" He asked
"Maybe, Pika-pi." Raichu purred
"...You're too damn cute." He sweat dropped
To be continued
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