MajorCartooniac: I'm sorry you don't like my story, plot, character or writing. Regardless, I'm still thankful you took the time to write such long detailed reviews. I would, however, like to clear some things up.

There actually are grinylows in the lake – remember the triwizard tournament? They weren't just put there specifically for that.

The reason for Sirius becoming angry in chapter four was because he didn't want her risking her life for him. It was mainly to show how much he cared about Evanna – more than his own life.

Also, about the fact that someone would have traced Godric's bloodline, that's not entirely true. Did anyone know it was Tom Riddle when he opened the chamber of secrets?

Dumbledore did say that Voldy would either force her to join or kill her. As Evanna states it is "in some ways worse than death."

Hermione wore muggle clothes around the castle and into hogsmeade.

I also did say that this will not result in Lily and James dying blah blah blah – I'm better at weddings, this is not a cannon story. Therefore, Peter is not really needed.

That's it – but I still appreciate your review. Although, the story line being "uninteresting" and you finding fault with everything isn't really constructive criticism as I can't really change that now. Anyway, thanks.

The morning of the Slytherin/Gryffindor quidditch match dawned, cold and wet. Evanna was uncharacteristically quiet at breakfast, and James and Sirius appeared to have lost their appetites – something that happened once every blue moon. "You need to eat something." Lily stated, looking at the three in disapproval.

They mumbled apologies and hastily shovelled a few mouthfuls of food into their mouths before excusing themselves to get ready for the match. Remus stood up shortly after "We should probably make our way down, too." He suggested.

Evanna and Elizabeth Jones – one of the chasers – met the boys in their changing room to discuss their play.

"Sirius, Jake" James addressed the two beaters "Remember, your main priority is not to hit the slytherins whenever you can. Sirius and Jake groaned in disappointment.

James grinned "As much fun as that would be, your priority is to make sure the seeker, Evanna, is safe."

James then turned to Evanna "Evie," he said sternly "Stay away from the game. We don't want you to get injured, so just look for the snitch. And for god's sake don't do any dangerous dives."

Evanna merely chuckled, gave a mock salute and ruffled James' hair fondly.

"Bell" James looked at Johnathan Bell, before grinning "Save some goals." This statement was followed with laughter and John gave him a nod and a smile.

"Jones and Hooch… shoot as many bloody goals as you can." This was followed by cheering and hoots of approval.

Walking out onto the enormous quidditch pitch always took Evanna's breath away. As usual, the stands were completely full, with the majority of the school holding gold and scarlet Gryffindor banners.

"And…. For Gryffindor we have team captain Potter, Black, Jones, Gray, Bell, Hooch and seeker Snow" Eddie Jordan announced. "Nice girl, she is. Nice to look at too. I remember one of my mates were dared to kiss her… he was in the hospital wing for-"

"Thank you, Mr Jordan" McGonagall's voice cut across him, sternly. Evanna chuckled quietly at the memory, it had happened in fourth year.

"Captains… shake hands." The referee's voice said. James and Oscar Flint took hands, both crushing the others as hard as they could, before letting go and glaring at each other. As the sound of the whistle, all fourteen players rose into the air. The game had begun.

Immediately, despite the harsh conditions, Evanna began to search for the snitch. Her keen eyes scanned the sky, peering through the rain for that small flash of gold.

"And Potter has the quaffle, he's speeding towards the posts… Gryffindor score! 10-0 to Gryffindor!" Eddie's voice cheered loudly. Evanna allowed herself to catch James' eye and grin quickly, before resuming her search for the golden snitch.

"Now Slytherin are in possession…they're heading towards the post….lovely bludger hit by Black! That looked like it hurt, not that they didn't deserve it…"

"Jordan" McGonagall warned him.

"Sorry, Professor" came the half-hearted reply.

"Gryffindor in possession again! Jones has the quaffle and….ohh! That must have hurt! Jones is rammed into the ground by Flint! That loathsome, cheating little-"

"JORDAN!"

"Sorry, Professor" Eddie repeated, not looking the least bit sorry.

Gryffindor were awarded a penalty, taken by James, who scored, raising the score to 20-0. Half an hour in and the snitch was still nowhere to be seen, partially due to the pouring rain. The score was 160-140, with Gryffindor leading by 20 points.

From her vantage point high above, Evanna had a clear view of the whole field. Her blood ran cold. One of the Slytherin beaters was carefully aiming a bludger, and hit it as hard as he could. Straight at Sirius' head. Evanna screamed his name, but it went unheard over the roar of the crowd and the wind. She felt a burning sensation behind her eyes, as all she could do was watch as the bludger came straight at the back of Sirius' head. When it was just a meter away, the bludger stopped abruptly and curved in a wide arc, veering away from his head.

Evanna breathed a sigh of relief before realisation dawned on her. She had done it again. She had used magic, without meaning to, without a wand. She mentally cursed herself, the lessons with Dumbledore had been helping! She needed to get this under control.

As Evanna was lost in thought, a green blur shot past her. It was the Slytherin seeker, and he had spotted the snitch. Evanna sped after him and she, too, spotted the flash of gold against the grey sky. She accelerated until they were both neck and neck. The snitch changed course and shot straight down, heading for the ground. The two seekers dived, both of their hands outstretched. As they came close to the ground, the Slytherin seeker pulled up. Evanna, however, kept going. At the last second, she sprung off her broom, her hand outstretched. She rolled as she hit the ground, before jumping up and waving her fist wildly. This allowed the crowd to catch a glimpse of the golden ball in her hand.

"Snow caught the snitch. Gryffindor win!"

The rest of the team landed around her, cheering loudly and crushing Evanna in hugs. The stands were overrun with people dressed in Gryffindor scarfs and holding scarlet and gold banners.

"Party in the common room!" James yelled, grinning. "Everybody got to your dorms and change, then we celebrate.

"Stay away from me!" Evanna warned, backing up into a corner.

Alice pouted "Aww, come on Evie! Just a little bit?" she asked, brandishing her make up kit.

"Keep that stuff away from me!"

"Fine… I didn't want to do this." Alice sighed "Evanna Snow, if you don't let me do your face, I'll tell the whole of Gryffindor house what happened round my house 2 summers ago."

Evanna paled visibly, before sitting in the chair by the mirror and allowing Alice to work on her. Forty five minutes later, the girls were already. Evanna wore her sea-blue dress, with her hair styled so that the front was pinned back and the rest fell in messy blonde curls down her back. There was a hint of silver eyeshadow above her blue eyes, which were framed with long, black lashes. She had liquid eyeliner above her eyes, flicking out into a perfect curve, and a hint of light pink lipstick on her full lips.

They girls all squealed once Alice was finished with Evanna, before comparing their looks. The four really did look like best friends, with their blue, green, pink and red dresses. Then, taking a deep breath, the four descended the stairs to the party.

They were greeted with loud, fast paced music and bright disco lights. The chairs and tables had been placed around the edges and a large dance floor had been conjured up in the middle of the room. Alice and Izzy went off to find Frank and Remus whilst Lily, spotting James and pancking, stated that she needed the toilet and all but ran out of the room. Evanna sighed and made her way over to James. Lily needed to tell James how she felt tonight. And she needed to tell Sirius.

"Hey, Angel." James greeted her "You look great!"

Evanna smiled "Thanks, Jamie. You too."

"You wanna dance?" James questioned.

"Sure."

After a couple of songs, both were exhausted from their up-beat dancing and collapsed into chairs. James announced that he would get drinks, and make his way towards the refreshment table. Sirius flopped into the seat next to Evanna.

"You look amazing, Eva!" Sirius commented. This was, in fact, an understatement, as Sirius could hardly breath.

Evanna tried to hide her blush. "Thanks, Pads" she smiled.

A slow song came over the speakers. Now's your chance, Sirius thought.

"Do you want to dance, Angel?"

Evanna was surprised, to say the least, but extremely pleased. "I'd love to!" she replied.

After making their way to the dance floor, Sirius placed both hands on Evanna's waist and she wrapped her arms around his neck, leaning her head on his shoulder.

Sirius spotted Lily and James slow dancing a few feet away and chuckled slightly. Evanna pulled away slightly to see what he was looking at and, when she spotted them, she laughed.

"I always knew those two would be a good couple." She stated, turning her head back to Sirius. His grey eyes were transfixing, and Evanna couldn't help but stare into them.

"Sirius I-" she began, hesitantly, not breaking eye contact. Say it! A voice in her head screamed at her. Otherwise you'll never know. But Evanna couldn't, she couldn't lose him.

"I'm so glad Lily finally realised her feelings!" she finished, unconvincingly.

Sirius frowned slightly, he could have sworn that wasn't what she was going to say, but let it go. He decided to enjoy the moment, enjoy the feeling of her being in his arms and her light breath against his neck.

Neither of them ever wanted this night to end.

Yep, you probably hate me. No confessions in this chapter :(

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Rose xo