Brian and Meg
I would like to thank Jack Russell for suggesting Meg convince publishers to let Brian continue to submit his writing and I know from his review I did bring up Lindsey, I was following advice from Ginkyofu13 to include the unnamed sister. Anyway I know Stewie is going to find out so I am going to go with option B because Jack has made it clear that is how and where this should go. If there are any suggestions on where to go then send me a suggestion, I will read it, go over it with my muse. So review, follow and favorite because the muse likes it that way.
The Griffin House
'How does she do it' Brian thought as he read Meg's article about 'Karma being a bitch'. He and Meg were going to have the house to themselves, while the others were out shopping. He put down the writer's magazine, feeling down because he couldn't submit any of his writing because he always got a 'I thought we banned you until you could make your writing better' on his laptop. He went upstairs and he noticed Meg's room door was open; he walked right in thinking he would find out Meg's writing so he could get inspiration for his writing and what he found was a will 'what's this' he thought. He read it 'oh my god she will run Thompson's publishing company, money, estate and everything' he thought and then "what you doing Brian" he heard Meg's tone. "Meg this has what you have been keeping" he said. "Yes and don't tell Peter, Lois, Chris and Stewie because dad said those four are not to touch any of it" Meg said keeping her annoyance in check. "I won't under one condition" Brian said "name it" Meg said.
"I need you to teach me to be a better writer Meg, I know you get so many accept ions and wins. I don't know what I am doing wrong. Please I need advice from someone who is going to go to Yale after you graduate" Brian said. Meg thought for a moment 'well he hardly joined in on torturing me and he is sincere' she thought and then, "how to be a better writer, alright we have a deal then but first thing is first I am going to send emails out to the publishing companies we have sent our writing to and convince them to give you another chance" Meg said. Within fifteen minutes Meg was able to convince all of the companies to give Brian another chance "all right they agreed and they did send you feedback on how to improve your writing works and I noticed you jump around too much, misspellings occur too often and how to get the reader's attention" was what the feedback said.
"Thank you Meg and I know you have done well with writing and how you have been able to amply your articles with deal and research" Brian said. "Yes if you are going to go into a topic such as how corrupt Adam West is you need to study how his popularity has been going down, you need to read from previous newspapers' and online articles, don't forget to cite them unless you want to get in trouble for plagiarizing" Meg said. "Thank you Meg this is even more helpful then when Peter gave me advice on what to research" Brian said.
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"What should I write about" Brian said aloud "write about how Meg sucks" Peter said, obviously drunk "Peter how much have you had" Brian asked. "I don't know" he replied, "Peter I am not writing about Meg and for the last time Meg does not suck, she has gotten several scholarships', articles she has written about have been published and she has me beat at being a writer" Brian argued and before Peter could argue Brian picked up his laptop and left the room.
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"I think you should research on what you know about what you are interested in, get research from both sides" Meg said going over Brian's past articles. "You see you only point out what you know and those opinions you have are only one side, you need to have both sides of what you are researching or you are going to have what you are writing in the rejection bin" Meg said. "I see so I should get both sides, such as how you pointed out good karma and bad karma" Brian said.
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"Add this line about how karma, good and bad can run people's lives and done" Meg said. Brian was watching her type and submit "so Meg what did you write about" Brian asked having a sip of coffee "karma and how good and bad can affect our way of life" Meg replied. "I see well I look forward to reading about it" Brian said. "I can tell you what it is about, when do something good then you can wait for something good to happen if you do something bad then the deed will come back and bite you" Meg said. "I see well I see bad karma affecting Peter and Lois because of how they had treated you" Brian said "You mean the weird things that have been going on when they insult me" Meg said "yes that is what I think as bad karma already" Brian said.
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So far their time alone with each other was something Brian liked, Meg giving him advice on how to be a better writer and he decided to research why Adam West was the most corrupt mayor Quahog ever had. "I am going to research on how West has wasted tax dollars, set parking tickets at an unreasonable price and other damages he has done to this community" Brian declare. "Very good but you need to research and back up what you are saying I don't want a repeat of Luck Perry, I had to ensure Peter can't get into my writing documents" Meg said.
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Meg had her password to login set 'there now he won't sabotage my writing ever again' Meg thought as she logged out and then left her door 'inviting people in'. Meg decided to watch and wait and see if Peter will try to ruin her writing as he did when she first got into the journalism at her school. Sure enough Peter did sneak in "now let's see what she has been typing" he said aloud not realizing Meg had a camera set to record everything and decided to see what will happen. When he tried to enter a password 'access denied' appeared and SNAP the laptop snapped onto his fingers. "OW Meg's laptop is possessed" Peter cried and he ran out of the room screaming. When Meg viewed the footage she saw how funny it was and later on out it on YouTube.
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With Meg's advice Brian got to work on his writing, he and Meg didn't treat each other like rival but as fellow writers. Although he promised not to tell the Griffin's about what her late father left her but she did tell him what Stan had said in a letter, Peter stole the engagement ring he had made for Lois and in the end Lois broke his heart. It wasn't long until the rest of the Griffin's returned from shopping but Stewie was thinking 'come on fat man insult Meg I want to see you levitate and go smashing into the glass' Stewie thought but Peter didn't say a word to her fearing what would happen. "I am going to see if I can get my article about Mayor West published and Meg you gave me great advice thank you" Brian said "Brian before you go I need to say that if you want better results always take the feedback you receive seriously otherwise those reading it will not get a good impression such as Lois applying for that job and having her past found out" Meg said.
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"Let's give Lois Griffin a background check and see if she is the right one after all" the superintendent said after Lois applied for a cooking class teaching job. "Well it says on her application she has no felonies and misdemeanors, however it say here she has several criminal complaints of child abuse, neglect, a porn star and has had a history of shoplifting, With all of these I am afraid as promising as she is we cannot hire her" said superintendent Dr. Gale. "Call Lois Griffin and tell her she lied on her application, we know about her past and we cannot hire her" Gale said.
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Two weeks later
The newspapers came "oh my God Brian your article is on the front page" Meg called showing it to Brian. "Really" Brian said and Meg then answered her phone "really so your dad is going to look into West's activities and Brian's article really got his attention well that's good. Right I will be sure to tell Brian about this, thank you for telling me Tobias" Meg said. She turned to Brian as he read his work "that was Tobias he said his dad read your article and he is going to launch an investigation against West. So I guess that is the best feedback you ever got" Meg said to Brian. "Meg I want to thank you, you gave me great advice and I am reading my feedback and so far people like looking on both sides" Brian said. "See you have to read it and then what you are writing about will get people to point you in the direction you need to go in.
The rest of the Griffin's knew Meg and Brian had the house to themselves two weeks before "so Meg gave you advice Brian, what did you do" Stewie asked "she knew I was banned and offered to help on how I can improve myself as a writer" Brian said. "Did she and did she cause you to catch on fire, freeze you or" Stewie said "Stewie you can't prove Meg caused the weird things didn't you read her essay about Karma" Brian asked. Stewie stopped there knowing he had no proof, 'I will find out but if she tried to use her powers to cause me to lose my memories then I could make a deal with her to get rid of that red headed tramp' Stewie thought.